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Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by macpetrus(m): 6:19pm On Apr 03, 2015
╋╋αややy ϐÍƦƮ╋╋ԃαƴ toykathy wLLNP... Enjoy ur Day
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by ThaRuthlxx7: 6:40pm On Apr 03, 2015
No update yet. Going get tough
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by toykathy(f): 6:51pm On Apr 03, 2015
macpetrus:
╋╋αややy ϐÍƦƮ╋╋ԃαƴ toykathy wLLNP... Enjoy ur Day
thz Mac, God bless.
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by FuroGintle(m): 10:52pm On Apr 03, 2015
I have always bin a secret follower all dis while, bt i think its tym 2 kum out nd make d thread an interestin 1 to follow......i hope am welcomed 2 d family....kip it up oga D9ty7
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by rantex1: 10:59pm On Apr 03, 2015
oga deee you have not been updating as before hope no problem?
nigeria now have change we need change too update o
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by D9ty7(op):
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Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by stuff46(m): 3:28pm On Apr 04, 2015
Go Tina, you have done it and keep doing it.


Nice update DEE
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by bigwig97(m): 3:59pm On Apr 04, 2015
thumbs up dee....
thumbs up tina
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by toykathy(f): 4:30pm On Apr 04, 2015
thz for d update Dee, more grease to ur elbow sir.



D9ty7:
--continuation--
"Where exactly was the man's point of extraction?" Tina asked as soon as the private investigator had left the Manager's office.
"The ventilation room." One of the non commissioned on the private investigator's team agents replied.
"The ventilation room?" Tina asked.
"Yes." He replied.
"Come with me." She said to the guy who hurriedly followed her out of the office, as well as two other N.A.T.U agents and the manager who was scared to sit alone in his office.
"You guys should have checked whatever he was up to in the ventilation room. You never can tell." She explained as the half walked, half ran to the top floor where the ventilation room was situated.
"But, sir, how sure are you that the man entered the ventilation room?" She asked.
"The surveillance camera." The guy replied.
"And you couldn't take action?" Tina asked. This time, they were ascending the stairs unto the fifth floor.
"I was waiting for the boss. And just when I wanted to tell him, he recieved that call from Kate." The guy explained.
Tina felt discouraged that minute, because it looked as if her decision to ensure that the PI and his team worked with her and do some undercover jobs was a very bad idea. From the look of things, the PI was the boss, every decision pass through him, no one moves until he tells you to move. She knew the level of recording success in a team or group such as this, depends on the level of expertise of the leader of the team.
"Where is the key?" Christina asked once they were at the very large door enclosing the ventilation room.
"The key.?... The key..." The manager drawled as he fumbled with his pocket. "The door is not locked." He blurted after a minute of futile search.
Tina tried the door handle, but nothing happened.
"But the door is always left opened." The manager said.
"Get the key because the door is locked now." Tina said raising her voice at the fidgety plump manager.
"Let me call the maintenance." He said, removing his mobile phone. " They'll be here before you know it."
And in less than a minute later, the elevator could be heard at the other side and four uniformed men with an inscription 'MAINTENANCE' walked up to them.
"We need to get this door unlocked." Tina said before the manager could find the right words to use.
And just as if they knew it was an emergency, the men set to work and in seconds, they used a blast device on the door which gate an exploding sound before it clicked open.
Tina led her team as well as the maintenance team with the mananger into the ventilation control room where several fan blades were arranged and a big cup board like device stood in front of the fan blades. Such that, as the blades moved in their usual clockwise motion, the cupboard kept flashing green.
"What does this do?" Tina asked as she approached the cupboard which had a DANGER sign written on it.
"The blades power the mulitipurpose air processor which it turn distributes oxygen into the various air conditions in the building." One of the maintenance crew explained.
"Be careful there." The manager warned and Tina had to stop.
Then her eyes spotted a big ballon which every second kept expanding. The ballon was placed on one of the blades, such that, as the blades moved, the ballon moved with it.
"What's that?" She asked alarmed.
Everyone moved closer to have a look, but none of them had an of whatever it was.
"I think its a gas." one of the non commissioned officers replied and all eyes turned to him. "It keeps expanding until it reached its limit and will explode, which means as the blades powered the giant distributor, the distributor in turn process the gas with the oxygen and send them out for the people to breathe in. I don't know how dangerous it is, but I believe it can't be something good. Considering the kind of person who put it there." He continued.
"What do we do now? Remove it?" The manager asked fearfully.
"We need to stop the blade moving first, then, we'll remove it and dispose it." One of the maintenance men said.
"Get to work immediately." The frightened manager screamed.
"Meanwhile, we need to evacuate everyone in this building." Tina said making for the door.
"Evacuate over five hundred people? How possible?" The manager asked.
"Just watch me. Guys, lets do this." With this, Tina left for the fourth floor, while the others headed for the third, second and first floor respectively.

--to be continued--
HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY TO TOYKATHY. YOU HAVE THIS DEDICATED TO YOU.
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by D9ty7(op): 9:41pm On Apr 04, 2015
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Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Shebarh(f): 10:09pm On Apr 04, 2015
dee chop plenty kisss
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by macpetrus(m): 11:42pm On Apr 04, 2015
Nice One!!!!
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Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Onemansquad(m): 8:44am On Apr 05, 2015
Viewing this topic: handie(m), fhunkhy(f), D9ty7(m)

oga handie is dat u shocked shocked
awfa u don lve prison grin
welcum bk bro
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Orlolahdey(f): 8:52am On Apr 05, 2015
Tanx for d early Mon Mon food..God bless
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by handie(m): 9:29am On Apr 05, 2015
Onemansquad:
Viewing this topic: handie(m), fhunkhy(f), D9ty7(m)

oga handie is dat u shocked shocked
awfa u don lve prison grin
welcum bk bro
Thank you my guy. But why you snoop me out na? I been wan sneak read comot o
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by D9ty7(op): 9:32am On Apr 05, 2015
handie:
Thank you my guy. But why you snoop me out na? I been wan sneak read comot o
Hahahahaha.... Na so God go dey catch all of una one by one
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by moseph(f): 10:42am On Apr 05, 2015
Each update makes me love this story more.
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Shebarh(f): 12:32pm On Apr 05, 2015
did dey juss kidnap chris?
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Shebarh(f): 12:32pm On Apr 05, 2015
did dey juss kidnap chris? shocked
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by princesssusan(f): 1:15pm On Apr 05, 2015
Yeee kidnapers o
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Uthman51(m): 1:27pm On Apr 05, 2015
Hope Tina will b able to save her sons life....

HAPPY EASTER SUNDAY TO YOU ALL
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by bigwig97(m): 2:15pm On Apr 05, 2015
Hope that's not chris's end. Ride On Dee
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Nobody: 2:20pm On Apr 05, 2015
love u Tina
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by macpetrus(m): 6:45pm On Apr 05, 2015
Ah....
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by D9ty7(op): 7:49pm On Apr 05, 2015
Even though the comments here are not encouraging, I will keep updating and right now, as LogoDWhiz suggested, I have loads of update saved on my phone, I will just drop them in twos as we go on.
Btw, where is Olanireti?
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by barackodam: 9:55pm On Apr 05, 2015
D9ty7:
Even though the comments here are not encouraging, I will keep updating and right now, as LogoDhiz suggested, I have loads of update saved on my phone, I will just drop them in twos as we go on.
Btw, where is Olanieti?
oga abeg, write this story with compassion abeg, let it not be like All In A Circle, that we were just saying "ehya" about.

biko
Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by Lilyomi(f): 6:56am On Apr 06, 2015
U ppl shd pray o because if Chris is kidnapped by those ppl sent eh, I will kidnap or adultnap huh Anyone...... I wl do dat to D9ty7. grin
So da security man at da sch sef assisted? This thin can happen o.
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Re: 1985.... 1987.... 2014--[a Crime Story] by bigwig97(m): 7:59am On Apr 06, 2015
I Guess the name she saw is Mark Anthony Ashimolowo.
Ride On, D9ty7
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