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Broken, Not Shattered... A Short Story. / Shattered Dream (episode 1) / Unveiling The Truth(shattered Heart) - By Olarhtunji (2) (3) (4)
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Re: Shattered Glass by HerexG(m): 1:39pm On May 24, 2015 |
Cherlene:So how re u spending your Sunday Cherlene |
Re: Shattered Glass by Queening(f): 2:14pm On May 24, 2015 |
Mznelly you started a new story and you could not mention me *smh* |
Re: Shattered Glass by Nobody: 2:30pm On May 24, 2015 |
Following. 1 Like |
Re: Shattered Glass by Rilwayne001: 5:09pm On May 24, 2015 |
MzNelly:Mznelly, you unfollowed me? |
Re: Shattered Glass by BowDown: 5:21pm On May 24, 2015 |
Queening: I'm sorry. I'm so sorry. Pardon me. *courtesies |
Re: Shattered Glass by BowDown: 5:21pm On May 24, 2015 |
Rilwayne001: You're derailing my thread. 3 Likes |
Re: Shattered Glass by Rilwayne001: 5:28pm On May 24, 2015 |
BowDown:Who are you? |
Re: Shattered Glass by BowDown: 5:32pm On May 24, 2015 |
Rilwayne001: Who do you think? |
Re: Shattered Glass by Rilwayne001: 5:38pm On May 24, 2015 |
BowDown: Mznelly the second .... Anyway, I'm unfollowing your real moniker straight away. NB: CHANGE that Pics on your profile, its looks awful Thank me later |
Re: Shattered Glass by BowDown: 5:40pm On May 24, 2015 |
Rilwayne001: Good riddance! 1 Like |
Re: Shattered Glass by Nobody: 5:40pm On May 24, 2015 |
^^ cry cry baby! |
Re: Shattered Glass by Rilwayne001: 5:45pm On May 24, 2015 |
BowDown:OYO Na yoke I dey yoke |
Re: Shattered Glass by Rilwayne001: 5:48pm On May 24, 2015 |
BowDown:OYO Na yoke I dey yoke |
Re: Shattered Glass by BowDown: 5:49pm On May 24, 2015 |
Re: Shattered Glass by Rilwayne001: 5:54pm On May 24, 2015 |
BowDown:Go and follow me back |
Re: Shattered Glass by midasbliss(f): 6:21pm On May 24, 2015 |
Love The First Write Up, It Kinda Caught My Interest |
Re: Shattered Glass by Cherlene(f): 6:31pm On May 24, 2015 |
HerexG: After church I cooked, and SLEPT a bit. How has your Sunday been? Cherlene |
Re: Shattered Glass by kelechiMarie(f): 7:16pm On May 24, 2015 |
Re: Shattered Glass by Neduzze5(m): 7:28pm On May 24, 2015 |
Well written and wonderfully constructed! Your pidgin is perfect. Sounds like Delta, Benin or Port Harcourt pidgin. Kudos. Now following this. Greyworld, come read story ooh!! |
Re: Shattered Glass by Nobody: 7:36pm On May 24, 2015 |
Neduzze5:its port-Harcourt ..right Mznelly? |
Re: Shattered Glass by BowDown: 8:11pm On May 24, 2015 |
kelechiMarie: Lol, what's wrong? Neduzze5: Aw, thanks. I'm a Port Harcourt babe. But, the characters-Biebi and Vosa are Deltans. Darkrebel666: Yeah . midasbliss: That's the point. Thanks. |
Re: Shattered Glass by Neduzze5(m): 8:15pm On May 24, 2015 |
BowDown: Okay... More ink to ya pen. Any updates for us this night? |
Re: Shattered Glass by BowDown: 8:25pm On May 24, 2015 |
Re: Shattered Glass by Neduzze5(m): 8:38pm On May 24, 2015 |
BowDown: Jackson! Jacksonnnnn! Where you keep ma glasses? Tori don show and ah go need use am soon!! 1 Like |
Re: Shattered Glass by Greyworld: 9:10pm On May 24, 2015 |
Oga Neduzze5 Am in.......... |
Re: Shattered Glass by Neduzze5(m): 9:35pm On May 24, 2015 |
Greyworld: Welcome... It's really interesting |
Re: Shattered Glass by sinizia: 9:50pm On May 24, 2015 |
Darkrebel666:Just replied you. |
Re: Shattered Glass by BowDown: 10:38pm On May 24, 2015 |
Biebi took a breath. "I'm good, I'm okay. My name is Biebi and I'm that drunk's girlfriend." She smiled victoriously and walked into his ward. "Dee! Dee baby!" Biebi rushed over to him, ignoring his confused expression. "You don't remember me? You really don't remember me?" She paused to think hard and trickle tears from her eyes. "You can't remember me? Dafe? Baby, you've forgotten me so soon?" The Doctor walked up to her, befuddled. "Ma'am, um....what's going on here? What...what are you to him?" "I'm....his girlfriend." "Um...his girlfriend? Well, 5 minutes ago, you were complaining about him owing you money." "Well..." Biebi scratched her head, thinking of a convincing lie. "Well....Odafe is my very notorious boyfriend. I gave him some money to come down here and start a business but he squandered it on drinks and women. I mean, it's normal that I'm a little upset and want my money back. But, well, he's still my baby."And she grinned brilliantly. The Doctor folded his hands, contending on whether to believe or her not. "Miss, I hope you're not taking advantage of the situation." "Sir, really, what do I have to gain from this?" "And his parents?" "Dead." She answered promptly. "Okay. I'll send in the bill." He left. Biebi settled on the bed beside Odafe. "So...I'm your boyfriend?" Biebi forced a smile. "Yes, that is correct." "My name is Odafe?" "Yes , it's Odafe." Biebi answered, suppressing her irritation. "What does it mean?" "Um...can we fastforward to the part where you kinda owe me money and I need it back?" "Bib, is it? Help me out here, okay? I don't understand a thing. Please help me out here...you're my girlfriend....?" "1. It's Biebi. As in, Obiebi. 2. I need my money, like as soon as possible, so we can't broach that topic for too long. 3. You're Odafe, my boyfriend, orphaned and irresponsible. What's so difficult too understand?" Odafe sighed, taking in all the info. "What does Obiebi and Odafe mean?" "Well, they are Deltan names. Obiebi means 'black beauty', as you can see-" She gestured proudly at her face. "Your name, on the other hand means, a rich individual." And she grinned.' "You're a weird girlfriend." "Coming from someone who owes me up to a million, I'll let that slide." Odafe reached for his back pocket and handed a card to Biebi. "This throbbing headache won't let me read that. Tell me what it says." Biei visibly rolled her eyes. "Urgh..." She grabbed the card and went through it. "Oh my God!" Biebi gasped, seeing the name printed on the card. Mr. AbiDoye Yemi. C.E.O of Bristowe Chambers. "What's wrong?" You're fvcking rich,that's what, Biebi thought, excited. "Give me a minute, baby. I love you." She smiled, gave him a peck and walked out. "Vosa, I need you to transfer 20k into my account." Biebi spoke into the dial. "I go pay you back, triple sef. Just transfer am make I pay this hospital bill , so I go take my money bag go house. Babes I don hammerrrrrrr!" 7 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Shattered Glass by Greyworld: 10:42pm On May 24, 2015 |
Dis one wen bow down don follow so hope say madam nelly dey aware........ Oloshi wan scam dat bros, gud work op kip it up. |
Re: Shattered Glass by BowDown: 10:42pm On May 24, 2015 |
Greyworld: Thanks |
Re: Shattered Glass by Nobody: 1:33pm On May 25, 2015 |
Nelly scribbles quite nice. I'm flummoxed as to what occured with the collaboration, ma. |
Re: Shattered Glass by Nobody: 2:13pm On May 25, 2015 |
thronekid: Fatalveli stopped writing. He had some girls to chase. |
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