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| Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by TheBlessedMAN: 10:26pm On Aug 06, 2016 |
Anyway, Keep it up... Ur work make sense die... I dedicate my whle Mb 4 u.... Use it as u lyk... |
| Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by ROYH(m): 12:46am On Aug 07, 2016 |
Only To Be Back After Two Days And Two Updates I Saw... WELL, U TRY MY dear SPQ Buh Hope It Wont Be ABANDON Sha |
| Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by TheBlessedMAN: 6:52am On Aug 07, 2016 |
ROYH:abandon wetin? Wen no b say she shop sturborn grass..... I trust her die |
| Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by PrinceOFprince(m): 6:57am On Aug 07, 2016 |
Hey Liz, gud worK so Far..... Thumbs up... With the way yhu've Remixed and Rewrite everything? Its a Wow Job... It seems far better than in the Ancient script..... I envy u... |
| Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by PrinceOFprince(m): 7:00am On Aug 07, 2016 |
ROYH:chill buddy, she's never abandon things be4... Even if she did, she's got a naughty bro, that will steal her script and continue d work....... |
| Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by PrinceOFprince(m): 7:03am On Aug 07, 2016 |
SmartestPopQUEEN:why Sis? |
| Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by PrinceOFprince(m): 7:05am On Aug 07, 2016 |
SmartestPopQUEEN:hmmmm... Still can't belive Rukki is Gone... May her Asian soul Rest in Peace.... |
| Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by SmartestPopQUEEN(op): 7:14am On Aug 07, 2016 |
SPDAZZY: .... Remember the rejuvenating Yellow light? I don't fink so. |
| Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by SmartestPopQUEEN(op): 8:56am On Aug 07, 2016 |
[size=30pt] Contd..[/size] [b]Then I feel Tina’s knuckles, and Loveth gasps, as the blonde starts fingering my sister’s colon. A hand shoves me down hard, and Loveth looks at me with a wild hunger in her eyes. Her hips thrust with a renewed intensity, but she never breaks her lust filled gaze with me. ‘Cum for me, little brother,’ I see her words super-imposed across my vision. ‘I need to feel you shooting deep inside me. Cum and make me cum while one of your girlfriend’s fingers my a*ss.’ Her fingernails start to dig into my chest, while her cunny demand’s my seed, but I’m still worried about getting her pregnant. “I’m on the pill, now,” she says aloud, then, ‘Cum in my tight hole now! I’m cumming!’ This time, as her inner muscles grip and pull my rod, and Loveth shakes and shudders above me, I loose my ejaculate deep into her womb. I’ve held off my own pleasure for so long, that when it finally hits, it’s like a mountain diving into an ocean of utter bliss. Wave after wave of ecstatic ecstasy flows from my head, down to my abdomen, and pure flame, jets from my loins into my perverted Loveth. I don’t know how long I lay there, shooting, or even how much I leave in her, but as I reopen my eyes, I notice the yellow light is already on me, and my still hard member is firmly seated within Varand. When did that happen? The alien’s back is to me, but her hips are rocking back and forth, while Tina stands in front of her, hands on the back of Varand’s head. From the look of bliss on Tina’s face, Varand really knows how to use her two tongues. Glancing around, I see Loveth off to the side, scooping my cum from within her, and sucking her fingers clean. Stephanie and Vage are making out, rubbing their bodies against each other. Varand’s alien canal grips my pr*ck hard, and I moan as her tingling juices sluice out of her. Leaning up, I slip my hands under her arms, and lean back. I grip a br**st in each hand, and move my hips against her, truly enjoying the sensations her juices make as they trickle down my Bazooka. I see Tina glaring at me for taking away her source of pleasure, and just to be contrary, I stick my tongue out at her. Her glare deepens, and then turns to a smile. I watch warily, still forking the moaning alien, as Tina walks over to Loveth, then Stephanie and Vage. A moment later, Vage gets up, and walks over to the other women. All five of them start rubbing against each other, slipping fingers into holes, tongues into other locations, and basically becoming one mass of moaning female bodies. Tina is on her hands and knees, sucking out what little is left of my semen from Stephanie. She takes just a long enough break to turn to me, and stick out her tongue, before turning back to her moaning meal. Laughing at a well played ploy, I notice her give a nice little shake to her behind, and know the invitation is there. I’ve already enjoyed her pussee numerous times today, and I’m not going to pass up a shot at her tight a*ss. My bazooka is still tingling from Varand’s slick fluids, and I poke my head into her puckered an*us. She grunts for a second, and then shoves back hard, taking my whole length into her colon. I can only imagine what Varand’s juices are doing for her. Thus goes the night, for quite a few hours. At some point, I think it was Stephanie, the gravity in our room is turned off, adding a whole new level to our enjoyment. * * * The sun is just rising, as Vage’s ship hovers on the edge of the atmosphere. I avail myself of the interesting, alien cleansing utilities. I step into a tube, and just like in some of the Jetson’s episodes, I suddenly find myself clean and feeling slightly refreshed. “Oh, Sh*t,” Stephanie pouts. “What fun is that, if you can’t fool around in there?” We both look at my limp and lifeless Bazooka, and burst out laughing. I’m going to need a week to recover from last night, much less the rest of yesterday! While Stephanie gets clean, I go in to spend some time with my kids. I realize how busy I’ve been, and regret the time I could have been learning about this new species. I’ve been so busy though, and I know nothing of being a father. “They are strong,” Vage’s voice says behind me, and I turn to look at her. It’s rare when she chooses to speak my language. “They’ll live?” I ask, suddenly not sure I want to hear the answer. She looks to them for awhile, and I know she is formulating her response. “Whatever you did for them, made them very strong.” The way she says that seems odd, and I look to the six forms again. Have they already grown? I sense for their life, and just as had happened on the day they’d been born, I can sense it strong and vibrant. Their ‘life’ switch is fully on, and I almost get the impression that it’s straining to move even more, but how can you be more alive, than. . . well, alive? “Do they have any names, yet?” I ask Vage, wondering why it never occurred to me to ask before. T.b.c [/b] |
| Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by TheBlessedMAN: 12:10pm On Aug 07, 2016 |
PrinceOFprince:envy? Thats noted! |
| Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by TheBlessedMAN: 12:11pm On Aug 07, 2016 |
PrinceOFprince:seconded |
| Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by TheBlessedMAN: 12:12pm On Aug 07, 2016 |
PrinceOFprince:hmmmm..... Seconded |
| Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by TheBlessedMAN: 12:18pm On Aug 07, 2016 |
SmartestPopQUEEN:i dey try reason how those alien pussee go be around my nozzle.,.i envy Nick o! Shai... Pussee evrywia... Just dey fork anytin forkable....... Enjoyment thinz! |
| Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by missuniverse(f): 1:30pm On Aug 07, 2016*. Modified: 1:52am On Aug 08, 2016 |
Happy Sunday Those children of unmarried parents, I pity dem shaa |
| Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by ROYH(m): 4:06pm On Aug 07, 2016 |
TheBlessedMAN:lolz, True Talk... Even If She Did, PrinceOFPrince Can Do The Work (STEAL SCRIPT) .... . . . . . . . . So Do Not Try To Excape From Us And Continue D Story GenGentically... |
| Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by Fidelismaria: 5:08pm On Aug 07, 2016 |
So were was rukki in all dis action. |
| Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by SmartestPopQUEEN(op): 10:00pm On Aug 07, 2016 |
missuniverse:yhu mean?.... |
| Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by SmartestPopQUEEN(op): 10:03pm On Aug 07, 2016 |
ROYH: .... Nooo... Not atall..... I will never abandon this work... Relax.,. THEBLESSEDMAN |
| Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by SmartestPopQUEEN(op): 10:04pm On Aug 07, 2016 |
ROYH: .... Nooo... Not atall..... I will never abandon this work... Relax.,. THEBLESSEDMAN.. |
| Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by SmartestPopQUEEN(op): 10:05pm On Aug 07, 2016 |
Fidelismaria:yhu will find out soon.... |
| Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by missuniverse(f): 1:54am On Aug 08, 2016 |
SmartestPopQUEEN:Emma and Ella |
| Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by Nobody: 6:22am On Aug 08, 2016 |
SmartestPopQUEEN:Your English is very poor. One of the basic skills one must learn and/or jave before attempting to write any story or whatsoever is proper command in English language. |
| Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by TheBlessedMAN: 6:42am On Aug 08, 2016 |
Drew0:abeg, who be this nursery school english teacher wey write 'JAVE' instead of 'Have' wey kum get liver dey lecture my Queen? Abeg go to school o.. Lo kawe di e si....... SpQ ride on Jor... |
| Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by TheBlessedMAN: 6:44am On Aug 08, 2016 |
Abeg Queenie, no let one person stop u frm doing ur work o... Pls dear, ride on.... |
| Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by Presh900(m): 7:18am On Aug 08, 2016 |
so this storyy made FP wow!!! congrats queenLiz |
| Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by Tgold1(m): 7:27am On Aug 08, 2016 |
FP @Last........ Congrat My SmartestPopQueen..... Lizzy Lizzy, na you o |
| Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by lumzybo: 8:08am On Aug 08, 2016 |
@ smartestpopqueen, I just saw ur work now. Thanks to the mod that pushed it to FP. The joy I felt was cut short when I saw REMOVED on the first post. This was suppose to gimme the needed boost and morale to navigate thru the over 30pages post. @op, what do we do? As I can't be reading and not be able to follow each post from the story. From an intending fan. Stay blessed. |
| Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by TheBlessedMAN: 11:26am On Aug 08, 2016*. Modified: 3:27pm On Aug 11, 2016 |
[size=40pt]Wow![/size] Atlast.... We made it to the very Front page... This calls for celebration..... Very great... I hereby call on all the readerz frm Genesis.... Oladim001, spikedawson, T.gold, ellagold,3scayp3, botaflica, Rohy, nogodye, and kingphillip etc.... Lets meet at Vages residence, by noon at night to enjoy unlimited Alien Pvssy's....... Queen, u ar also invited..... Am happy right now... 4 u my dear... |
| Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by Botaflica(m): 4:06pm On Aug 08, 2016 |
Names of the kids should be... loading
Queen, Thumbs up |
| Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by Martinsvp1(m): 4:06pm On Aug 08, 2016 |
SmartestPopQUEEN:. You are indeed a good writer,these story of yours made my weekend...still reading with keen interest...keep it up |
| Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by SmartestPopQUEEN(op): 5:56pm On Aug 08, 2016 |
Still can't believe, I made it through to the FP.... All thanks to yhu my Wonderful readerz...... I wouldn't have done it without yhu guyz..... Thanks... [size=30pt] Contd..[/size] [b]‘We don’t give names to our youngs, until they mature,’ Vage tells me, this time using the Wangers. I only nod, as though that makes perfect sense. Stephanie walks in, and sees me over the kids, and a soft smile spreads across her face. I think now is a good time to tell her how I feel, but an odd sound plays out, and it takes me a second to recognize the melody from Smallville 'save me' tune. Stephanie pulls out her cell, and answers it. “We have cell phone coverage up here?” I ask. ‘Rukki,’ is the only response I get, and it kind of makes sense. Somehow the genius has tied this vessel into Earth’s cellular network. My girlfriend hangs up, and looks sheepishly at us. “That was Stacy. She was wondering what I’ve been up to the last few days. Oh, and she was glad to hear that you were okay, Nick.” She looks at her feet, and I suspect what she is hesitant about. “You want to go see her.” I state rather than question. “What? No, there is too much to do up here,” she tells me, but I see through it. “Well, I for one, think it’d be a good idea for us all to see our families before those bast*rd ßokoharms arrive.” The look Stephanie gives me could have melted the Antarctic with its loving warmth. She doesn’t want to be the one to abandon the work up here. Loveth and I are the last to be dropped off, and we’re surprised to see our father’s car in the driveway. We give each other a significant look, before I send out my awareness and find our father’s switches. “Why do you think he’s here?” Loveth asks me. “To get his a*ss kicked again,” I reply a bit more confidently than I feel. I’m not worried about being able to handle my old man, but Alice isn’t aware of what I’d done to him, and I don’t want that coming out. Loveth walks right in without knocking, and I follow on her heels, expecting to hear shouting, or fighting. Instead, we find our parents sitting at the kitchen table, chatting amiably. Dad sees us first, and I watch as his face drains of color. This doesn’t go unnoticed by our mother, and when she turns to face us, I gasp. She looks twenty years younger, and while she’d never been anything approaching a slouch, she could almost give Loveth a run for her money. For that matter, Alice now looks more like my older sister, almost a twin to Loveth, than she does a mother. “Nick, Loveth,” she says excitedly as she spots us, “I wasn’t expecting you here! Nick, shouldn’t you be in school?” She’s talking fast, and her cheeks are slightly flushed. I also notice that she’s studiously not looking at dad. “I had a day off,” I lie easily, still trying to figure out what is going on. “And why aren’t you at work, Loveth?” Mom asks, almost stepping on the end of my sentence. “Gee, mom,” Loveth says solicitously, “if I didn’t know better, I’d almost think you didn’t want us here.” Alice’s eyes grow large, and her mouth moves soundlessly for a moment. Oddly, it’s dad that comes to her rescue. “Is that how you talk to your mother, young lady?” His mouth is set hard, as if he’s angry, but it’s spoiled by the look of fear in his eyes. “The real question, dad,” I pipe up, “is why are you here?” The older man flinches at my words and takes a step back, then hardens his shoulders and glares at me. “Perhaps I should mention our last meeting?” I can see he thinks he struck a point, but when I smile back, his look of triumph turns to one of uncertainty. “You mean when we found you with your secretary and told you to never come back?” Loveth replies, and this time it’s mom that gets angry. “Now listen,” she starts toward us, “he came and apologized for his behavior. I’ve decided to give him another chance.” “Oh, he did, did he?” I ask, raising my eyebrow, and looking back to the man in question. I remember the switch I’d made in Lydia Scott to make him/her tell only the truth. I take a step towards my dad, using that movement to allow my hand to brush against the backside of my sister’s hand, and simultaneously make the ‘honesty’ switch in my old man. “I’d like to hear him say it to all of us. I love you mom, but you’re not the only one he hurt.” I remember all the days of living in fear under his roof, and doing what I could to stay out of his way. If he can truly say he’s sorry, then maybe I’ll be willing to listen. Loveth easily noticed what I’d done, and I see her smile maliciously. She has more reason to despise him, than I do. Because the older Mr Smith have never molested me. T.b.c... [/b] |
| Re: HERO (A Violence, Mind Control And Sex Story) a story by Queenliz by TheBlessedMAN: 6:09pm On Aug 08, 2016 |
Smartestpopqueen... Pls dnt endeavour to keep it coming gently and steadily... Am enjoying every bit of it..... U are a Genius like Rukki.... |
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