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Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bibijay123(f): 2:20pm On Sep 12, 2016 |
Chapter nine Dedicated to brytawon, sheba222, suregalluv Tomi I just got off the phone with my parents. Mom was telling me about an upcoming wedding in their church while dad grumbled about me not coming to see them often. Someone knocked on the door. I said a hurried good bye to them and hung up. I unlocked the door and Kelvin pulled me into his muscled arms claiming my lips in a hot searing kiss. We kissed for a long while, he pulled me closer to himself, shutting the door with his other hand. I could have stopped him but i needed to be one with him as much as he needed me too. Our clothes went in several directions, somehow we landed on my bed. He knew where to stroke to drive me wild. Our love making was so intense and magical. I felt like a puddle of warm water. Something i had never felt before, we laid beside each other on the damp bed. Our heart beat was a rhythmic tune to our ears. We were both sated, but an invisible fear hovered over our heads. " What happened kelvin?" " My father want me to marry Linda and Linda' s life is also in danger" i stiffened beside him. " Who want to harm her?" " Its a long story honey. One so complicated. My father has also barred me from stepping foot into the company i slaved for!" he panted. " A company which i worked hard to make an international brand" I reached for his head pulling it against my bosom. " What will you do now?" " I will fight him! I won't accept it! he's doing all this because i refused to bend to his whims ". " He is your father Kelvin. What did your mom say?" " She's on his side of course." " You should listen to your father. Linda isn't entirely a wicked person, she has her own good sides too. " He pulled his head away from my chest. " You are advising me to marry her? have you no feelings for me at all?" he asked in bewilderment. " Tomi I just made love to you! you should at least be a little jealous! " " Sex. It was just sex" i said in a cool voice. " Nothing special " How could i let him throw something he had worked so hard for away? He pulled on his trouser. " I thought i was more than a dick to ride on to you. What was i even thinking? you are all bloody the same!" he spat out. " Please close the door on your way out". He sauntered out without a word. I wanted to shout out his name, i wanted to tell him it was for his own good and mine too. I wanted to run after him and drag him back to the bed, beside me, where he belonged. But in the end i buried my face into my pillow crying my heart out. TBC 52 Likes 17 Shares |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Twinkle004(f): 2:38pm On Sep 12, 2016 |
This is getting more interesting but it look as if Linda is lying sha. Anyways d truth wil eventually be known Bibi u are 2 much..love u |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by iykekelvins(m): 2:43pm On Sep 12, 2016 |
I feel so sorry for Tomi, she has gone thru a lot |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Crusherdaniels(m): 2:59pm On Sep 12, 2016 |
wheew ... thanks for dedicating this episode to me ... I'm grateful .... you won't believe I read this episode with 2% battery life |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Nobody: 2:59pm On Sep 12, 2016 |
I admire Tomi...Only a strong woman would hurt herself to protect the future of the one she loves. Aunt Bibi well done Oh. 2 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Crusherdaniels(m): 3:05pm On Sep 12, 2016 |
Twinkle004: I love her pass |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Brytawon(m): 3:08pm On Sep 12, 2016 |
bibijay123: Not acknowledging such honour will make me an ungrateful aSShole. I must confess that I'm really having a great time here. Thank you once more! 1 Like |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by TheSociopath(m): 3:23pm On Sep 12, 2016 |
Peachyp, please coman read. The story is incredibly interesting |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by TheSociopath(m): 3:24pm On Sep 12, 2016 |
bibijay123: Bibi, you're too kind. Have you any flaws at all? Thank you |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by TheSociopath(m): 3:30pm On Sep 12, 2016 |
The problem with people is that they read these updates, digest them, enjoy them, yearn for more but they don't deem it fit to like and share every update just to encourage this prolific writer and increase her fan base. It saddens me because in random estimate, at least more than 500 registered users have been reading this story but it barely has one or two updates that passed the 30 likes mark. What a shame! Now if you know you're guilty of this, change! 8 Likes 3 Shares |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by johnwizey: 3:46pm On Sep 12, 2016 |
I love Tomi's spirit, she appears strong outside but very weak inside. I think maggie has a hand in Linda's mom death, i only feel for Victoria. Nice one bibi and tanx for the dedication |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Twinkle004(f): 3:59pm On Sep 12, 2016 |
Crusherdaniels:Jealousy jealousy |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Crusherdaniels(m): 4:05pm On Sep 12, 2016 |
Twinkle004:. yes let it be ... |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Crusherdaniels(m): 4:06pm On Sep 12, 2016 |
Twinkle004:. yes let it be ... 1 Like |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by jacy67(f): 4:23pm On Sep 12, 2016 |
Tomi na wa for you o! she would have expressed her feelings for Kelvin before telling him off. |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Sparkles003(f): 4:29pm On Sep 12, 2016 |
TheSociopath:Guilty. BB your stories are superb well done.thanks I love the way you post updates back to back please never ever change that.cos it makes reading your stories special. |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by TheSociopath(m): 4:40pm On Sep 12, 2016 |
Sparkles003: You're gonna change? |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by NikitaNike(f): 5:09pm On Sep 12, 2016 |
Jay542:thanks alot jay. Don't worry, I will start comenting from today hence. bibijay123:thanks alot. Ur story is so captivating. |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by NikitaNike(f): 5:09pm On Sep 12, 2016 |
Jay542:thanks alot jay. Don't worry, I will start comenting from today hence. bibijay123:thanks alot. Ur story is so captivating. Welldone. 2 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by eROCK247(m): 6:13pm On Sep 12, 2016 |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by sheba222(f): 6:51pm On Sep 12, 2016 |
Dedicated to brytawon, sheba222, suregalluv am honour.more greese to u. |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by yorhmienerd(m): 7:43pm On Sep 12, 2016 |
bibijay123:[size=90pt]AMEN!!![/size] |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by yorhmienerd(m): 7:53pm On Sep 12, 2016 |
bibijay123:Thanks for the dedication bibi baby *big hug* 1 Like |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by yorhmienerd(m): 7:58pm On Sep 12, 2016 |
jacy67:I wonder which kind of girl she be sef |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by PeachyP(f): 8:25pm On Sep 12, 2016 |
Wow Bibi, the story is superb and so unpredictable. |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Pinkfeet: 8:58pm On Sep 12, 2016 |
Very interesting |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bakeuhappy: 9:37pm On Sep 12, 2016 |
Hi bibi, I really want to say a big thank you for the beautiful stories you have put up for reading. Everyday I get free updates n I'm grateful. Wishing you more ink to your pen and more inspiration to write new stories. I Love your work Bibi Nana Gaglo |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Nobody: 9:39pm On Sep 12, 2016 |
Thanks For The Earlier Mention... This Is So Facinating, The Story Leaves Me Puzzle With Imaginary questions of what might happen next... This Is A Masterpiece Of A Great Mind... Keep It Up Miss Biblijay You're Nothing But The Best..... 1 Like |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Jay542(m): 10:01pm On Sep 12, 2016 |
[quote author=NikitaNike post=49300071] thanks alot jay. Don't worry, I will start comenting from today hence. Lol. You just have to dear |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by crazygod(m): 10:58pm On Sep 12, 2016 |
Bibijay 3 gbosas for u |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by shubby2010(m): 11:34pm On Sep 12, 2016 |
Finaly, am here. Thank you so much for this masterpiece. This Tomi is a coward. How could she watch Linda take two guy from her without giving up any resistance? |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Jay542(m): 11:53pm On Sep 12, 2016 |
I tot Tomi was a virgin |
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