And Bibijay123 keeps doing herself proud. Ride on girl!

This is chapter 1.
Still waiting for 2 bcuz the stories has just began

Eid-el-kabir merriment took me to another planet yesterday; no time to check time.
Just read the whole updates. Wifey is doing a great job that's what you're best at

Keep it up bae

And finally we made it to front page, bibi u rockssss

Its been interesting but am waiting to see how the OP is going to end this.

greatside:
And finally we made it to front page, bibi u rockssss

lol thank u

veekid:
Eid-el-kabir merriment took me to another planet yesterday; no time to check time.
Just read the whole updates. Wifey is doing a great job that's what you're best at

Keep it up bae

how was ur celebration husby? hope u ad fun

bibijay123:



how was ur celebration husby? hope u ad fun

Yes wifey; more than fun ...... it's a pity you ain't around

Tomi's life is a mess. I mean she left Richie because of this silly Linda and now she is giving up on a good guy again, with the same Linda in the mix, not fair.

Still here m'Lady

josephmbonu:
This is chapter 1.
Still waiting for 2 bcuz the stories has just began

Hear! Hear!

Brytawon:


Not acknowledging such honour will make me an ungrateful aSShole. I must confess that I'm really having a great time here. Thank you once more!

you are welcome

TheSociopath:

Bibi, you're too kind. Have you any flaws at all? Thank you

yes darling loads of it

TheSociopath:
The problem with people is that they read these updates, digest them, enjoy them, yearn for more but they don't deem it fit to like and share every update just to encourage this prolific writer and increase her fan base. It saddens me because in random estimate, at least more than 500 registered users have been reading this story but it barely has one or two updates that passed the 30 likes mark. What a shame! Now if you know you're guilty of this, change!

Thank you

This holiday is not a waste after all; I have taken the time to read this and I must honestly confess, it is breathtaking and really something out of the world!
Good job ma'am and do keep it up.

Talius:
And Bibijay123 keeps doing herself proud. Ride on girl!

Thank you boss!

Jay542:
I tot Tomi was a virgin

same here.

bibijay123:



yes darling loads of it

Evidently, they are not evident

TheSociopath:
Evidently, they are not evident

.you got a mail

Bibijay123 m waiting oooh

Bibijay123 was Tomi not a virgin?

Jay542:
Bibijay123 was Tomi not a virgin?

No sir she wasn't. U r confused because she said Yes wen her father asked her, of course wat would she say before?

Tomi really has a heart..
Really After all that Linda did to her
So I got an update dedicated to me? Yass Bibi
Thanks a lot

What a wonderful story, keep it up. 👍 Uve earned yourself another follower. Hope this story takes u places cos u deserve it.

Wow, all I can say is wow......weldone bibi

Madam Bibijay123, ur loyal fans r waiting o!

A captiating write up, full of stunning new twists and revelations. Cant wait for the rest of it.Thumps up!!

* Continues*
Tosin

I walked out of the only home i knew for twenty five years. How could my own brother betray me? how could a father turn against his own son? i wandered the streets like a mad man with no direction in mind. A part of my heart had died that night. I walked meaninglessly for a long while and i found myself in front of the Adediwura household. How my feet had taken that path, i couldn't say. I pressed the doorbell and the gate was opened by Musa, the gate man. Maybe he perceived the mood i was in, he closed the gate without a word and i went into the house.

" Whats up Man. What happened?" Kelvin asked on sighting me.

" I need a hot bath" was the only reply i could come up with.

He led me to the guest room and i took a hot bath. He lend me a jean and polo, a steamy hot meal was waiting for me on the dinning table. He watched me eat in silent without any asking any question.
" Where are your folks?" I asked just to break the silence in the room.

" My parents went to visit my siblings in the UK" he replied.

I nodded.

" Can i go out with your car for some couple of hours?" I asked, pushing back my half eaten meal.

" Sure " he said. He picked up the key from the sofa and threw it at me.

" Thanks" i said, catching it mid air.

I drove to the hospital my mother was admitted. I was glad to be informed that she was responding to treatment and the doctor assured me that she should be discharged in few days time.

" Tosin" she whispered. " Thank you for coming son"

" How are you feeling now?"

" I feel better"

'' You will be fine Mom "

" How is your brother, Sola? "

I clenched my jaw in anger. " Have you eaten Mom?"

" Yes my dear"

" You should rest now "


" Thank you " she whispered again.


I stayed with her until evening and i went back. Kelvin was watching Wrestling when i walked in. I sat down on one of the settee.

" Want to talk about it?" He asked kindly.

" No"

" Today is Friday, i say we hit the club." He said. " Rock some big booty girls"


" Sound good" i replied half heartedly.

We ate dinner and by 10.30pm we headed off to a club in the hood. We entered the smoky lit up place. Girls were grinding on the dance floor, a waitress winked seductively at us as she walked by. We walked into the VIP section, Kelvin' s eyes were on the girls dancing.

" Tos this is the right place to be! check out that girl!" He exclaimed pointing at one of the girls. He signalled to the bar girl, he ordered some ciroc and henessy.

I ignored him and sat down. The pretty ebony skinned bar girl brought our drinks with ice. I watched kelvin pick up some cubes of ice which he dropped into the front of her top.she giggled before playfully hitting his hand away.

" Hey see who just walked in" Kelvin said. " Your bro"

I looked up and my eyes met his dark mocking eyes. He had some group of boys behind him. He started in our direction and stopped in front of us.

" What's up" Kelvin stretched his hands out but dropped it when he realized the atmosphere was suddenly tensed.

" I see your friend was kind enough to lend you some old cloth" Sola mocked. " How does it feel crashing down to the bottom of the pit?" He jeered.

" What's going on?" Kelvin asked glancing from me to my brother. " Sola knock it off"

" Shut up daddy' s pet."

Kelvin signalled to the bar girl. He handed her the bills and turned to me.
" Tos let's get out of here"

I stood up and we brushed past Sola and his gang. We walked to the car park in silence.

" Running away?" Sola called after us. " Tosin you want to know what i was doing earlier today?" He shouted. " I was fucking your girl!"

My steps faltered and i felt my hands knot into a tight fist.

" Ignore him" Kelvin said, unlocking the car.

Three of the boys with sola was standing in front of the car.

" You want to see some evidence?"
Sola was standing in front of me now. He brought out his phone, swiped the screen with his thumb. He flashed the gory picture of my naked girlfriend before my eyes. He swiped it again. There was another one of her on her knees, blowing him. I knocked the phone off his hand, it fell to the ground with a loud thud. Kelvin walked around to the other side of his car.

" Its enough! Sola whatever it is we should settle it amicably. But no matter what might have gone wrong you shouldn't have messed with your bro' s girl"

" Boy go grow some balls first before you talk to me" He taunted." Still licking your father' s a$$?"


Kelvin shoved him so hard he fell like a piece of paper to the ground. The boys drew closer to us menacingly. One of them threw a log of wood at Kelvin' s head. He ducked right in time and it smashed through one of the glasses of his car. A guy was busy fucking his girl or slut in the darkest part of the car lot not minding the ruckus going on.

" Deal with them boys! I want to hear the sound of bones breaking! " Sola commanded.

The next few minutes was bloody. Hands connected with jaws, tooths flew in every direction. The Tae_kwan_do lessons we were forced to attend as a child really came in handy. Before the bouncers could reach us three of the boys was on the ground, their noses and mouths bloodied. Kelvin and i sustained some bruises and earned ourselves black eyes but nothing major was broken. Their commander, Sola had long since fled when it became obvious that his boys were losing.


TBC

Now It's The Upbeat Of The Story...Im Lovin' The Tempo Buildin'

So our lovely story is making FrontPage for the second time, totally well deserved. In fact every update should be making FP sef lol. More ink to your pen Bibi, don't keep us waiting for too long o.

Bibi is bae, waiting for the next update.

Great work Bibi.