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Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by ogboni76(m): 3:47pm On Sep 17, 2016
still waiting for my own tag oo sister and pls save her...don't kill tomi just yet......#teamtomi
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bibijay123(op): 3:55pm On Sep 17, 2016
* Continues*

Dedicated to Iykekelvins, Aitee1, Queenoma,theorbiters, Olabantu, Thandobaby,Ogboni76,



Tosin


Kelvin had been in his room for days. He was in such a sorry state after the Iil incident which occured some days ago. His beards were over grown and the only thing he had appetite for was the bottles. He had emptied all the bottles in his bar, his mother had gone to look for him when she didn't hear from him only to find him laying in his own vomit. She called for an ambulance which took him to the hospital and he was admitted but on opening his eyes he had demanded to be discharged at once and he had gone right back to the bottles. For some crazy reasons i decided to ring Tomi' s cell but it was declared not available. Although she had a low self esteem and she lacked confidence she was a hard worker and she was honest. How i wish things had turned out differently for her and Kelvin.

I tried to draw him out but he wouldn't even open the door and only God knows what havoc he was wrecking on himself and his liver behind that closed door. His mother too had also gone up again to see if she could at least convince him to open the door.

" I still can't believe that she is gone" Victoria sobbed. " Why does Linda wreck havoc wherever she goes? why is she so heartless?"

" Vicky there was an accident and your sister wasn't the one behind the wheels of that bus."

" She is not my sister! i am actually glad now that she is not my blood!"

" Victoria don't " i cautioned her.


" What are you saying Child?" My mother asked. " She is your sister and it wasn't her fault."


Kelvin' s mother walked into the room and sat down pensively.


" Tosin who was this girl....the one that died" She asked ." Who was she to my son?"


" She was Kelvin' s woman and he loved her" i replied.


" How is Linda involved in this?" she demanded.


" I don't know but she must have said some nasty words to her to make her leave here so abruptly on that fateful day. Hell! This is all so fucking crazy! Tomi doesn't deserve to die that way!"

" Tosin watch your language" My mother admonished.


" I am sorry"


" The bus went up in flames before your eyes and nobody survived?" Mrs Adediwura asked with palpable concern, her eyes were misty. " No one deserves such gruesome death. Even animals are not roasted while they still have breath in them".


" She was such a good natured and kind hearted person.She wouldn't even hurt a fly." Victoria said.


" Does anyone know where her people live? have they been notified?" Mrs Adediwura asked.

" Onyinye and Dantata should know where they live." Victoria replied.


" I will see to it that she is given a proper burial" Mrs Adediwura said, wiping away tears." Linda will never become my son' s bride as long as i am still alive." She promised. " Have you been to the morgue? and has her body been identified? "


" I went to the mortuary yesterday with Dantata. They were all...........they were badly charred. " i replied. not realizing the effect my word would have on the women present. They all burst into tears and i regretted my thoughtlessness. Mrs Adediwura, Kelvin' s mother, left the room to and my mother followed her. I got up from where i sat and sat close to Vicky. I pulled her into my arms gently while she sobbed her heart out.

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We all went to the morgue the next day and we were surprised to be informed that all the bodies had been claimed by their families except that of the useless driver. We decided to go see Tomi' s family and lend them our support. We drove down to Ojota where Dantata said they lived and for almost thirty minutes we have been knocking but no one has answered the door yet.


" Are you sure this is where they live?" My mother asked.



Dantata pounded on the closed door several before replying.


" Yes ma. I have been here thrice"


" Where could they have gone to?" Mrs Ade asked.


" I think we should ask the people in the next house" Victoria said.


Two little boys ran into the compound rolling tyres with their hands.They were laughing at the top of their voices about something. I felt a heavy pang in my heart. The young boys reminded me of my brother and i when we were still boys. We used to watch each other' s back, we used to play and climb trees in our yard. We skimmed our knees several times on our adventures and delusional missions to save the world. That was before my paternal grandmother came back from the states and pitted us against each other. I forced back the image of Sola as a young child and whistled to the boys. They came charging towards us in a playful race.

" Hello guys. Do you know where Mr and Mrs Adebola lives?"

They exchanged looks.

" We don't know them " one of them answered.

" He means the people residing here" Dantata explained. " In this compound "

" Oh okay! Mummy Tomi and Daddy Tomi!" they both chorused.

" Yes" Victoria said, in a bid to urge them to reply faster.

" They went for a burial"

" Burial? Where?" Mrs Ade asked them.

" My mummy said they went for a burial. Johnson you know aunty Tomi that gives us sweet and that round thing?" He asked his partner. " She's the one that died."

" It is robo joor! Not round thing. I know nau. The burial is in Ibadan even my mother followed them." Young Johnson replied.

" Thank you very much" Mrs Ade said, slipping them each a thousand naira.

They jumped up happily, thanked her profusely before racing out of the yard.

Dantata slipped his hand round Victoria ' s shoulder pulling her firmly to his side.That singular act had my blood raising and i walked angrily out of the compound.



Happy weekend guys!


Tbc
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Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Jay542(m): 3:59pm On Sep 17, 2016
ogboni76:
still waiting for my own tag oo sister and pls save her...don't kill tomi just yet......#teamtomi
Which 1 be '#teamtomi'grin Una no go kill person oo cheesy cheesy
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Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bummybummy(f): 4:05pm On Sep 17, 2016
dnt tell me dat it z ova 4 tomi jst lyk dat, i kno u wont do dat 2 her
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by lumzybo: 4:06pm On Sep 17, 2016
Haba!!! So many unanswered questions.

Smtin in me tells me Tomi isn't dead. huh
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Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Opeoluwa99(f): 4:18pm On Sep 17, 2016
No no no that's not my eyitomi
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Tbrak: 4:23pm On Sep 17, 2016
me too dey jealous mention my name too in ur next episode, tomi must nt die like dat o abeg tell me is a dream.
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Queenoma(f): 4:23pm On Sep 17, 2016
Thanks bibi..... Pls wake me from this nightmare, i dnt want to believe tomi is dead.
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Fidelismaria: 4:31pm On Sep 17, 2016
bibijay123:
Chapter Eleven


Dedicated to Swann, unmask, Fidelismaria, Tamedwolf90, purity22,



A loud banging sound woke me up. I blinked hard trying to recollect where i was, i felt something hard pressing into my lower back, i wiggled my bottom trying to get away from whatever it was but it only seemed to grow bigger.My head was pounding fiercely and there was a bitter taste in my mouth.

" Hey Sleeping beauty good morning " he murmured into my ear.


" My head" i moaned." Good morning ".


" Hangover" he replied tersely.

The loud banging sound came again and i felt him stiffen beside me. He got up, pulled on
a jean and polo.

" What is that noise?" I asked, throwing back the covers.


" I don't know. I will go investigate " he said before strolling out of the room.

I found my dress and dorned it, I padded down the stairs and stopped midway. Onyinye and Linda were in the living room.

" How could you do that to me Kelvin? you left me stranded when you knew i didn't go with my car!" Linda shouted.

" Where is the shameless slut you brought back here with you?" Onyinye demanded. " Where is she?"

" Oh you again?" Linda shouted, on sighting me." Kelvin you have no idea who you brought home with you! this was the same girl that stole Aunt Maggie' s ring!"

" You mean the ring you planted in my box?" i asked.

" Linda if your shadow here was born and raised in the gutter shouldn't you know better?" Kelvin asked. " what do you want Linda? why are you acting like we had a deal or a relationship going on?"

" Even if you don't love me Kelvin you owe me some respect as your fiancée! "

" You still haven't answered my question and i owe you nothing Linda. Don't you have anything better to do or a better way to spend your weekend? please leave my house"

Linda' s gaze burned through me like a laser light. She started in my direction, but Kelvin drew her back.

" Don't you have any shame at all Tomi?"She asked.


" You are a fine one to speak! Please deal with the person you came here to see" i retorted.

" Oh so now pigs think they can fly" Onyinye screamed.

" You should leave when you are through with your rants" Kelvin said.

" Kelvin you think you know her but you don't! What has she done to you? how could you bring yourself so low to the status of this low life?" Linda asked.


" Your barks no longer mean anything to me Linda! You planted that ring in my box! I overheard you and your hand bag talking last night. How could you be so cruel?"


The duo were stunned and they traded looks, for once they were rendered speechless.

" I knew it" Kelvin said. " And to think that i beloved that trash story about your dad! "

She took a step closer to him." Don't listen to her! What would she say before? She's only a criminal! ".

" What did i ever do to you? Why Linda?" I asked her." I want to know. I caught you sleeping with my boyfriend and i broke up with him. I worked diligently to earn every cent you paid me at the end of the month, you fired me for no just reason and as if all that wasn't enough you framed me up!"

" Tomi i have known you since high school so i know how evil minded you are. You are a thief and liar! how could she plant something in your box, what would she gain by doing that?" Onyinye retorted. " You think you know it all?" She scoffed.

" Yea she actually thinks that she knows it all" Linda replied, clapping her hands in mockery. " Kelvin why don't you tell her?"

" You have had enough fun. Its time you left" Kelvin said correling both of them towards the door.

" Tell me what?"


" Oh he didn't tell you? Why Kelvin? Afraid her young heart won't be able to take it?" Onyinye taunted.

" He's just using you! He's a player and a master at what he does! If not what would he be doing with someone like you?" Linda laughed viciously. " He will soon throw you out like a piece of dirt when he's had his fun with you! "

" Kelvin loves me you can both go to hell"


They both laughed animatedly.

" You think you are the first to have him, don't you? or perhaps you think that you know who he truly is! " Linda asked. " ask him who Jane and jacy are! he bleeped two sisters at the same time"

" I also had a taste of him too so don't start feeling fly" Onyinye announced.

" I know the sex is good because we have all had a taste of it but is it really worth the pain you will go through when you realize that you have been had? How many times has he tossed a girl he was through with to his friend Tosin?" Linda said dramatically.

" Tosin? Tosin Williams?"

" Oh she has started riding him too!" Onyinye laughed.

" Don't say we didn't warn you little one. He has left a string of broken hearts all over this country, trust me you are not special." Linda said before walking out through the door.

I was stunned, something in his expression proved that for once the girls were being truthful. I hurried up the stairs back into the bedroom. I picked up my bag beside the bed, i heard the door swish open and he walked in.

" Hey....what are you doing? don't tell me you are actually going to let them win "



" What sort of game are you playing with me Kelvin?"


" Tomi you know how Linda is......"



" Kelvin did you or did you not sleep with either of them? "


" Tomi we all have our past and mine wasn't lived in sainthood but believe me all that was in the past."


" Did you ever shared a girl with your friend?"


" Babe all that happened before i even met you!"


" Did you know that i was working for your friend?"


" I recommended you to him" he replied exasperatedly. " Its nothing like what Linda implied, i was merely looking out for you."


" I don't want to do this anymore! I am fed up of this drama. I want out of whatever it is we have."

" Tomi with you its different! you awakened feelings which i never knew i had inside of me. You changed something in me".


" Please no more lies"

I brushed past him out of the room. I wouldn't let him see me weak, i wouldn't let anyone make me feel worthless. Never again!
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Kelvin

" Tomi!" i called after her.

I could hear her the sound of her feet running down the stairs. She was hysterical and i couldn't let her go home all by herself. How could i just tell her out of the blues that i bleeped Onyinye at a party on a dare! I despised myself for it the following day. We were at a party and the booze was flowing freely, almost all the guys at that party had seen her panties and i was issued a challenge which i couldn't back down from. The whole nasty stuff had taken less than an hour and i had slipped her panties into my trouser as a proof.


" Tomi Please wait!"


I caught up with her at the bottom of the stairs.


" I am not ready for this sort of drama! "


" Tomi i am in love with you!" I blurted out. " I know this is all messy but we can sort it out"


" Just let me be!"


She darted out of the room like a deer which had caught sight of a hunter. I let out several expletives and ran back the stairs for my car keys. I ran down the stairs once again, Tosin stood with a frown on his face.


" What's going on?" He asked worriedly." Linda' s car almost ran me off the road and on getting here i saw or i thought i saw Tomi running down the street"


" I am going after her" i called out, running out.


He tailed after me without a word and i drove out of the compound. I caught up with her just as a bus pulled up and she got into it. I followed the bus expecting it to make a stop so i would pull her down and talk some senses into her.


" Kelvin slow down! I have not written my will yet! " He shouted, clutching his chest.



I slowed down the car in frustration." Sorry" i muttered.



I followed the bus and got stuck in a little street traffic. The traffic was moving nicely and the bus was still in my sight. It should make a stop at the next bus stop already i thought frustratingly. I followed the bus onto the highway.



" My God what is that crazy driver doing?" Tosin shouted in fear.



Truly the crazy driver was trying to takeover a fuel tanker. It seems the tanker driver was resisting the overtake. The driver relented and the tanker driver got through. The driver tried to overtake a private car once again, it swerved and hit the pavement causing a traffic light to crash down heavily on it and the bus went up in flames. I got down and started running towards the inferno. People were running helter skelter, some motorists fled down from their cars, some people were already trying to put out the fire with buckets of sands. I forced my way through the onlookers, i kept screaming out her name and i was close to the burning bus when i felt a hard hand on my shoulder.


" Kelvin are you mad?" Tosin pulled me back.


" Tomi..... My Tomi is in there" i shouted. " Call the fire services!"



The crowd was pouring sand and soapy water on the bus. I suddenly remembered the fire extinguisher in the trunk of my car. I stood few feets from the burning bus and trained it on it until the empty can remained in my hand. A distant siren could be heard now, i had thought it was the fire fighters but it was the police men.



" Kelvin step back!" Tosin drew me aside as one of the glasses exploded and flew in several directions.


The policemen were now pushing onlookers backwards
.

" Come, Come" Tosin Pulled on my hand. " Its over"


" Tosin am i dreaming?" i asked.


Tbc




O MY GOD PLS TELL ME ITS NOT TRUE TELL ME SHE IS NOT DEAD THANKS BIBIJAY FOR D MENTION ND DEDICATION AM FEELING LYK A STAR RITE NOW
mmm
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Nobody: 4:32pm On Sep 17, 2016
ah ah bibi...warrisdis naw... but i know sha that Tomi is not dead, infact the body is not hers. Mistaken identity sad sad
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Nobody: 4:32pm On Sep 17, 2016
Mtcheeeew. The boys misunderstood, they are small boys after all. huh

I'm sure when Kevin's family gets to Ibadan, they'll learn a different story. cry

m'Lady embarassed my liking and sharing is a norm, I don't really like.
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by NikitaNike(f): 4:44pm On Sep 17, 2016
RIP TOMI. WILL HEAR FROM U IN THE NEXT EPISODE
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by iykekelvins(m): 4:50pm On Sep 17, 2016
bibijay123:
* Continues*

Dedicated to Iykekelvins,
[color=#099999]Aww, thanks bibi. You're awesome kiss

I seriously don't want to believe Tomi is dead. Rara, I won't take it..[/color]
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by veekid(m): 5:12pm On Sep 17, 2016
Mute mode........ buh why now?
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by JMK9600(f): 5:13pm On Sep 17, 2016
I have decided to deactivate my ghost mode. Bibi darling, the weekend is not good. Tomi dead ke? I can't believe that. Been a fan since page 3 and I have read Allen Avenue and the devil got money. You are such a great writer. God bless you darling. But Tomi must not die o.
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by purity22(f): 5:21pm On Sep 17, 2016
bibijay123:
you won't trick me again with this " I won't eat oo" i updated so that you can eat. lol * Tongue out* hope u hve eaten now?
Eyeah....... You don catch me now lolzz

Thanks for the dedication mention,
Babes, weldone more greez to your elbow grin grin
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Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by biddieluvzyaho(f): 5:30pm On Sep 17, 2016
Haaaa!babes,better wake her up o....what kinda wahala is this na?how she go die nau? angry
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by jayied(m): 5:38pm On Sep 17, 2016
*Sad face* Tomi is dead. Rip Tomi
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Emzy90(m): 5:43pm On Sep 17, 2016
bibi y did u let tomi diehuh
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by crazygod(m): 5:44pm On Sep 17, 2016
cry I can't believe I'm actually sobbing here even though its fiction....... I no read again. Bibijay123 congrats. U jst spoilt my Saturday. angry
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Aitee1: 5:46pm On Sep 17, 2016
Bibijay123 my woman crush love you no homo I'm so honoured with the mention, thanks a million I appreciate


About the update remember the actor doesn't die in a movie grin

Anyways all the corpse were charred so it definitely a mix up cos my tomi can't die like that sad


Nice job sweedy and more ink to your Biro!
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Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by arosunshine(m): 5:50pm On Sep 17, 2016
Bibi u must nt kill tomi
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Nmaglit: 6:03pm On Sep 17, 2016
Tomi is not dead I believe because she is the one telling the story like she is the main character and remember the beginging where it all started with her talking to her diary. Nice work bibijay
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by lumzybo: 6:07pm On Sep 17, 2016
Fidelismaria:
mmm
Haba! U av committed an abomination....

U quoted the whole episode just to type "mmm" huh
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Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by ogboni76(m): 6:12pm On Sep 17, 2016
Jay542:
Which 1 be '#teamtomi'grin Una no go kill person oo cheesy cheesy
It's a way to make the writer twist the story and keep tomi alive.. #riptomi
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Olabantu(m): 6:14pm On Sep 17, 2016
Thanks for the update and dedication.... Hoping for more
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Jay542(m): 6:18pm On Sep 17, 2016
ogboni76:
It's a way to make the writer twist the story and keep tomi alive.. #riptomi
I dig man. It's just funny that any small thing Naija go use the hashtag.
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Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Jay542(m): 6:28pm On Sep 17, 2016
swann:
ah ah bibi...warrisdis naw... but i know sha that Tomi is not dead, infact the body is not hers. Mistaken identity sad sad
Don't be scared. Tomi is the main character. She can't die. I guess sha. smiley
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Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Matrycx(m): 6:42pm On Sep 17, 2016
bibi y? Y? Y?
Y must u kill her, is nt fair o, u beta wake her shapperly b4 i call bummy 4 u o,
Rili enjoyin ur stories, kip it up ma, d lord is ur strenght
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Fidelismaria: 6:44pm On Sep 17, 2016
lumzybo:
Haba! U av committed an abomination....

U quoted the whole episode just to type "mmm" huh
am sowie
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by yorhmienerd(m): 6:46pm On Sep 17, 2016
Had to serve three days in Nairaland kirikiri tanks to mymy44

Everybody!!! 1 Minute silence to the dead; *sobs* We love you Tomi but God love you more *sooobs* We can still have a new Lazarus sha oo.

Bibi you are mouthed *in falz voice* KIZZIES
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Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by ogboni76(m): 7:00pm On Sep 17, 2016
[quote author=bibijay123 post=49443224]* Continues*

Dedicated to Iykekelvins, Aitee1, Queenoma,theorbiters, Olabantu, Thandobaby,Ogboni76,


FINALY I GOT MY MENTION.......thanks BIBI

and guess what! what if they got to Ibadan and it wasn't tomi they were burying? what if tomi wasn't in that bus all along? hmmmm.... my brain dey twitch here...
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