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Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by veekid(m): 2:39pm On Oct 13, 2016 |
I think I'm gon sue Bibi for doing this to me ...... how can someone would be as wicked as this? Sobs God will surely vindicate me Sobs sobs sobs |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bibijay123(f): 2:48pm On Oct 13, 2016 |
Chapter nineteen Tomi The D.P.O wiped sweats from his brow, sighing heavily.I was sure the poor man was already fed up with the whole drama and sensation we brought to his station in the last couple of days. “My son is not himself” She said, wiping tears from her cheeks with her handkerchief.” He shouldn’t be locked up, he might hurt himself”. “Your son murdered a man and he tried to hurt three innocent women and a little girl” The D.P.O said,“ Your husband was a very good friend of mine and i tried to warn you of the possibility that your son, Richie, could also have what killed his father but you shunned me.” “I took him out of the country. I tried to get help for him” She replied. She turned to me. “That was why i was so cold to you the day he brought you to the house; i was afraid he would go into one of his spells and hurt you and so i wasn't pleased with your relationship with him.. i wanted to keep you out of harm’s way but i didn’t know how to tell you without revealing our secret.” I swallowed hard. “Sickness is not something to be ashamed of. If you had told me about Richie’s………condition i would have known how to deal with him and i wouldn’t do anything to trigger it”. “I felt relaxed when he told me everything was going on fine and i asked him to invite you over. When i saw you i couldn’t….. i couldn’t bring myself to tell you he was suicidal and that he could also get so violent at times. Please i don’t want to lose my son” She cried to the D.P.O “How long have you known that your son had bipolar affective disorder?” Linda asked. “Since when he was fourteen. His father also suffered from it and i had my hands full with him so i didn’t detect it on time and when i realized it i was busy trying to get help for his father, i couldn’t get help for Richie on time .When he was 20, he intentionally drove his car into an electric pole and it was just………a miracle that he survived the crash. I kept him on close watch and i got medical help for him. He seemed alright for a while and he returned back to his studies oversea. One morning, i got a call that he had shut himself in his room, crying, for a whole week. I had to move abroad for his sake and we were getting along fine.” She replied. “The best thing to do is to sign him into a mental institution with quality medical attention and he would be under Surveillance 24/7” Kelvin said. “That is a good idea. He has refused to eat, he stares into space all day and he doesn’t speak when spoken to. I will have a doctor check him to confirm his mental state and declare him mentally unstable before we move him to a state mental institution.” The D.P.O stated wearily. “I brought some of his medications” Richie’s mother said. “They are here, some Benzodiazepines and antimanic agents.” She brought out a white carrier bag filled with medications and placed them on the D.P.O’s desk. “I have decided to drop the charges against him” i said, Kelvin squeezed my hand gently in a supportive manner. “Well that aside, he killed a man so he also has a case with the Federal Government and he is still a danger to the society at large. He has to be locked up” The D.P.O replied,” But as he is mentally unstable he would get a lenient jail term, i am sure”. “We will help you in every way we can” Linda said, to Richie’s mother. “Thank you” the older woman said sadly. Tbc 23 Likes 8 Shares |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bibijay123(f): 2:52pm On Oct 13, 2016 |
room089: village? i don't know oooo,i will edit that part wen i am making it into an e-book. You have been so helpful, thank u 1 Like |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bibijay123(f): 2:53pm On Oct 13, 2016 |
veekid:ha! Edakun emabinu 1 Like |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by veekid(m): 2:58pm On Oct 13, 2016 |
bibijay123:@least I deserve an explanation frm you for your actions |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Tunechi1(m): 3:09pm On Oct 13, 2016 |
veekid:don't mind dem, if we do our own nau dey will be shoutin all men are the same |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Fidelismaria: 3:19pm On Oct 13, 2016 |
frankcris: yea am referring to him to make a point guess y dint understand my comment |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Roseygold(f): 7:00pm On Oct 13, 2016 |
Hmmm nawa for this Riche problem i feel for him 1 Like |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by yorhmienerd(m): 7:07pm On Oct 13, 2016 |
veekid:Bros wetin na? You're a man, story crying |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by dammypat(f): 7:46pm On Oct 13, 2016 |
You did a very great piece bibi, more ink to your golden pen n more inspiration, the story was well plotted, go and over take chiamanda adichie, i love love your work 1 Like |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bibijay123(f): 8:01pm On Oct 13, 2016 |
dammypat: Thank you ma,aam 1 Like |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bibijay123(f): 8:02pm On Oct 13, 2016 |
dammypat: Thank you ma'am 2 Likes |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bibijay123(f): 8:10pm On Oct 13, 2016 |
veekid: Lovely. Oga Ade 1 Like |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by veekid(m): 8:36pm On Oct 13, 2016 |
bibijay123:may I know what you want my name for? |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bibijay123(f): 8:51pm On Oct 13, 2016 |
veekid:For moi baby boy dat i want to born 3 Likes |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by veekid(m): 8:54pm On Oct 13, 2016 |
bibijay123: I'll see that as a bribe to your initial cheating actions; just to keep me quiet 1 Like |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Toluwaferan(f): 9:43pm On Oct 13, 2016 |
Well done Bibi 1 Like |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by HORLADSTAR(m): 10:07pm On Oct 13, 2016 |
U are a great writer BIBI,more grease to ur elbow/ thump up[quote][/quote][color=#990000][/color] 1 Like |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Nobody: 1:25am On Oct 14, 2016 |
i finally have to comment, been following the story on a low all this while . its an excellent thriller though i think the suspense and ermmm spice has kinda died down, maybe its cause the story is drawing to an end, well lets see how it turns out. i rate the story well done sis i'm arrahia mehn bibijay123 1 Like 2 Shares |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Kajiang02(m): 5:55am On Oct 14, 2016 |
Welldone ma'am.
Yes you do write well. it's funny I just started reading few days back.
Do well to make mentions and tags, at least to friends, followers etc.
Nice story you got there. I'll send you a message. |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bobbydreofficial(m): 7:23am On Oct 14, 2016 |
Nice story. Keep it up Waiting for the next update 1 Like |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by kinah(f): 7:28am On Oct 14, 2016 |
how did Kelvin's mom no dat Tomi Is pregnant? dat part is missing. cos I no dat it was wen they were abt to get a ring dat Tomi told K dat she is pregnant. keep up the good job. 1 Like |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by mamindy(f): 10:28am On Oct 14, 2016 |
whaaaat!!! I got a dedication on my first time here wow, am feeling on top of the world and am blowing my trumpet. bibi only you know how to make your fans happy. Thanks for the update, waiting for more. Finally Thanks For The Dedication. 1 Like |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by niffyluv(f): 11:11am On Oct 14, 2016 |
great story dear great story dear |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by vandops10(m): 11:13am On Oct 14, 2016 |
veekid:How re u sure na u get the boy #justsaying |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by Fox14(f): 11:43am On Oct 14, 2016 |
[quote author=bibijay123 post=50166434] 1 Linda was Tomi's senior, secondly you can not know all the people you went to the same secondary sch with especially if u are not the type that socialize. Dear Bibijay123, I do not agree with the above . Tomi was Linda's PERSONAL assistant right? so theres no way she would not have known that they went to the same secondary school, regardless of the year, because at some point she must have seen Linda's CV , school cert. or have ran some errands that required this information. i work as a personal assistant and i know all the schools my boss attended dating right back to 1975. So as a former personal assistant , Tomi should know . BTW, You are a Beautiful writer, your stories are captivating, i dont even watch season films anymore. God bless you. 2 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bibijay123(f): 12:52pm On Oct 14, 2016 |
[quote author=Fox14 post=50190749][/quote] what if it wasn't on her cv? anyway its noted. Thanks 1 Like |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by collinometricx: 12:52pm On Oct 14, 2016 |
this story is turninq mhi into another tin |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bibijay123(f): 12:53pm On Oct 14, 2016 |
vandops10: chai 1 Like |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bibijay123(f): 12:56pm On Oct 14, 2016 |
kinah: No. She told him when they were leaving the police station. Kelvin wld ve told his mom and loved ones since it was a good news and there was no need to write out that part. 1 Like |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bibijay123(f): 12:57pm On Oct 14, 2016 |
mamindy: Yea you should you are welcome 1 Like |
Re: Twine (A Drama Series) by bibijay123(f): 12:59pm On Oct 14, 2016 |
1 Like 2 Shares |
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