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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 6:08pm On Oct 31, 2016 |
Pranaya: lol glad u deactivated from ghost mode. You are welcome here 4 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Nobody: 6:18pm On Oct 31, 2016 |
WOW BIBI |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by maggilove(f): 6:46pm On Oct 31, 2016 |
Must Somebody die in all bibi's stories? |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by veekid(m): 7:17pm On Oct 31, 2016 |
maggilove: Killing people in Bibi's stories were inevitable; infact every killing was a hit back to back... from Allen Avenue to Twine and now Almost perfect Fück that shīt ........ baba iyaaayan; iyalaya anybody #na_joke o |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by costal(m): 8:04pm On Oct 31, 2016 |
Madam dis ur story sweet oo c as nepa take light for my area I one die blc I been no charge ma phone..abeg na u sure pass oo shey u neva marry I been one aply so that u go de nag me plenty tori..... na joke. oo |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by crazygod(m): 8:08pm On Oct 31, 2016 |
Poster above me. Better queue o. Cos we plenty wey wan marry Bibi. #intelligent&beautiful. #teambibi #proudlybibilet 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 8:19pm On Oct 31, 2016 |
maggilove: lol I simply follow d plot o bhet nobody died in when tears bring yes. by the way do you know Toni khan? he's my role model. 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by dominique(f): 8:24pm On Oct 31, 2016 |
veekid: You left out 'The devil has the money'. In fact more than half of the characters died in that story. But the one wey pain person pass is the one that died in this story. Bibi abeg find a way to bring Nonye back to life bikonu. 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 8:30pm On Oct 31, 2016 |
dominique: lol chai life is not a bed of roses nah... 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by dominique(f): 9:09pm On Oct 31, 2016 |
bibijay123: But bad things should not happen to good people nah |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 9:28pm On Oct 31, 2016 |
dominique:i feel that way too 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Nobody: 9:49pm On Oct 31, 2016 |
caught up at last. Hope funmi won't change when she gets to Ghana. Nice work big sis! |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by yorhmienerd(m): 9:50pm On Oct 31, 2016 |
Why is everyone talking like Nonye is dead. Bibi might try to bring her back (I hope so). But Bibi you wicked small o. Why Nonye? Why? If it is their mother, we would say she don old and need some warming down there, why Nonye? Bring another update before I para 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bummybummy(f): 10:03pm On Oct 31, 2016 |
Bibi plz dnt let Nonye die oo cos she z too small 2 die for her brother sins. Nyc story Cc |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by maggilove(f): 3:22am On Nov 01, 2016 |
bibijay123:Bibijay123, veekid's ex wifey an sotozo's new love(naso d tin dey start, u dey beg for kunu from sotozo when veekid can give u ice-cream). Back to my comment, do u want to scatter my brain? Silvia died in When tears bring yes juh, I had to read back to confirmy doubt. I read Night of the creaking Bed and other stories by Toni Kan in school and I fell in love with with writings. 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by veekid(m): 5:17am On Nov 01, 2016 |
maggilove: If I catch Sotozo right now
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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 9:44am On Nov 01, 2016 |
maggilove: lol d kunu is good, you shld have some too 2 Likes |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by cinderellashoes(f): 12:12pm On Nov 01, 2016 |
Hi all, this is Bibi. The story continues n ends with this account. |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Ezinwa25(f): 12:56pm On Nov 01, 2016 |
Bibi no mention my name..... Nevertheless,I still carry nyash for you... in fact,my two legs don join.... You're too much Bibi..... 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by cinderellashoes(f): 1:19pm On Nov 01, 2016 |
Ezinwa25:no vex ooo |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by cinderellashoes(f): 2:39pm On Nov 01, 2016 |
Dedicated to divepen1, Leriebloom, Lleigh, horlorladey, fikfaknuel, * Continues* Dupe Uche had been somber since the death of his younger sister. He was often lost in thought and his handsome face was always marred by worry lines. Some days, he would pull me into his arms while we lay on his bed in silence, just listening to each other' s heart beat without saying a word. Some times he would lay his head on my bosoms while my hands gently caressed his head, wishing i could take away his pains, wishing i could wipe away the sorrows in his heart and refill it with happiness. His mother too was shut away in a world of her own, she was always in her room, she wouldn't talk to anyone. I tried to find out the cause of Nonye' s death but i let it go when i realized that they might never be able to talk about it until they were both completely healed. Chinasa, the other twin girl was left on her own so i took her under my wings. For some strange reasons known to him alone, Uche asked me not to ever let Chinasa out of my sight when she comes to see me. I was locking up my shop for the day when he walked up to us. He looked tired and dusty, i knew he had gone to some construction sites to carry concrete and blocks. Since his mother had locked herself away in her room and they had to survive, i couldn't blame him for resorting to that. " Good evening bro Uche," Nasa said. " How are you?" He replied, " what's up Dupe?" " We are fine, how are you too?" i replied. " Still alive, can't complain " he said. " I want to see you in private, Chinasa wait here" We moved some distance away from the young girl. I reached out to wipe away some specks of dirt on his lean cheek. I felt tears crept into my eyes and i blinked my eyes to stop it from dropping. " Don't " he said. " Don't do what?" I asked. " Please don't feel sorry for me," he said," I can't stand it" " I am sorry. " I said quietly. " I got a call from Dominique today, a congratulatory call." I jumped up happily and hugged him." Wow, that's a good news!' " Yes." He replied. "Apparently they were testing my patience the last time they kept me waiting." A certain look stole into his eyes and he sighed heavily. " What happened? you don't seem happy" " I have to move my family from this area as soon as possible. I have been able to raise some money. " he said, " I sold off some things but it is not enough to get us a new apartment. Can you lend me a hundred thousand naira?" " I don't have up to that amount. I have only fifty," I said, " what's the need to move? is there anything you are not telling me?" He sighed." Yes, but i can't talk about it. The wound is still too fresh in my heart, maybe some ..." " Shhh" i said, " You don't have to if you don't want to talk about it. I will transfer the fifty to you and i will try my best to get the remaining fifty for you. Where do you want to move to?" " Ikorodu," he replied. " That's far!" I exclaimed. " The farther away from here, the better for I and my family." "When will you start at Dominique Petroleum?" " Tomorrow," he said." Let me walk you home." " Congrats dear." He shrugged." Nasa! Let's go" The young girl walked to us and we walked down the street, heading towards my house. Uche's hand sought out mine and i gave it a gentle squeeze. I realized with a start that today was sort of like our anniversary. A big smile registered on my lips. " Uche," " Yes" " Today is our sixth month of being together, so happy anniversary dear " He grinned in spite of the sadness he carried in his heart. He squeezed my hand in return and mouthed " I love you," " I love you too" i mouthed back. ****** I walked into the sitting room and paused in surprise. Funmi was watching a TV drama, she jumped up on seeing me. " What a surprise!" I said, " why didn't you come to the shop instead? " " I don't have enough fare to come to the shop." She said, " You won't believe what i am about to tell you" " You won't believe what i am about to tell you too" i replied. " I have gotten a new job! No interview, no aptitude test, no stress! Just like that!" She said excitedly, " accommodation and feeding is provided, pay is 95k when converted to naira" " Wow!" I screamed, " no way! Wait! converted? you mean the job is outside Nigeria?" " Yes. Mrs. Afolabi' s daughter_ in law offered me a job as her daughter's tutor. She will also pay for my flight to Ghana. " She replied excitedly, " what's your news?" " Dominique Petroleum called Uche today. He's been hired!" I said, laughing. She threw her arms around me, giving me a hug. We placed our hands on each other's hips, dancing round in circles as we often did during our happy moments. TBC 20 Likes 11 Shares |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Horlorlardaey: 3:01pm On Nov 01, 2016 |
bibijay now cinderellashoes issokay lemme kip watching in 12D 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Horlorlardaey: 3:07pm On Nov 01, 2016 |
and that dominique later employ uche y nah ok to replace loss of sister abi?? bibijay oh sorry cinderella weldone 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by cinderellashoes(f): 3:08pm On Nov 01, 2016 |
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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by cinderellashoes(f): 3:10pm On Nov 01, 2016 |
Horlorlardaey:lol it was obvious they were testing him nau...thank you* big smile* |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by DaddySLY(m): 3:13pm On Nov 01, 2016 |
cinderellashoes:Yes.. lemme get my reading glasses.... 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by DaddySLY(m): 3:26pm On Nov 01, 2016 |
blood of zacharia !! i get serious catching up to do o... abeg who dey give spoilers for there... oya FEM! lemme read first .. 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Nmaglit: 3:44pm On Nov 01, 2016 |
Patience is the key to success congrat to uche. Nice bibijay 1 Like |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by dominique(f): 4:21pm On Nov 01, 2016 |
What a bittersweet update cinderellashoes: Sorry about your ban. I sent you a mail to the one registered with bibijay123, have you seen it. |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Twizzy30(m): 4:24pm On Nov 01, 2016 |
Bibi so uche is bringing his family to my area. OK, but I have a feeling funmi will later snatch that tade from bella. What d u have to say maam? |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by SPDAZZY(f): 4:45pm On Nov 01, 2016 |
I knew those Dominique people were trying his patience. Congrats Uche and Funmi. You two should not forget dupe |
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by SPDAZZY(f): 4:57pm On Nov 01, 2016 |
I knew those Dominique people were trying his patience. Congrats Uche and Funmi. You two should not forget Dupe 1 Like |
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