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The Ashes Of Love / Analysing Dialogue In Red Ashes By Chumzypinky / Hearts In Ashes (2) (3) (4)
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Re: Red Ashes by swankmee(f): 9:30am On Dec 21, 2016 |
Chumzypinky: Lol... Caught in d act. Jolade is sooooooo annoying... Why would she kip throwing herself at a guy who doesn't care about her, she just dey fall my hand... I feel like slapping sense into her...... *ohh it's fiction |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 9:44am On Dec 21, 2016 |
Kajsa08 Hadassah43 Helz234 view n comment |
Re: Red Ashes by kajsa08: 10:15am On Dec 21, 2016 |
Chumzypinky: thanks for d mention babe, wow! still grinning after reading d update.... i hereby declare Nathan d latest "baby daddy"... but then again, jolade could be down with the flu. *wink*. |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 10:18am On Dec 21, 2016 |
kajsa08: Rememba she ws also raped *winks* 1 Like |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 10:19am On Dec 21, 2016 |
Lolly02 me is saw u 1 Like |
Re: Red Ashes by kajsa08: 10:30am On Dec 21, 2016 |
Chumzypinky: aah! av even forgotten sha. i read sometime ago in a survey that most first children are not for d husband d lady gets married to, its mostly from lovers n (supposedly in jolade's case) from rape......... but i trust jolade n mummy dearest to dash d pikin to nathan. *kisskiss* lovely story. |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 10:45am On Dec 21, 2016 |
CHUKS. Sometimes i look at the picture of both Chioma and Mabel and i just laugh. My youthful days had been really fun and fulfilling. I had enjoyed it to the fullest. I had sampled almost every type of women on planet earth. The fat, the endowed, the skinny, the beautiful, the ugly, the shapeless. You name it. Everywhere i went, Chuka was on the ladies' lips. Sometimes, i wish for my son to enjoy the attention i got from those ladies as well. It was really fun and exhilarating. I had three kids, yes, apart from Kainene. Three kids whom Chioma has no knowledge like that and i wanted it that way. Yes, maybe i was a changed man. Maybe i had lost interesting in those little sexy whores everywhere around the country. But sex wasnt something i was tired of. I didnt know what other people thought about sex but to me, it was the best thing in the world. It made me forget my worries. I usually felt my sorrows drown whenever i just pound away with the girl writhing underneath me. Do you know the reason why i couldnt put up with Chioma for too long? Not that i didnt love her, i did love her. But then, i couldnt live with a woman who couldnt satisfy my sexual desires. Sex with Chioma was a chore. She would never remain at a place. Just when it was about to penetrate, she goes up. And when you're finally in, ready for the to and fro movement, she suddenly announces how thirsty she is. And then i climb down to give her water. And then after dropping the glass cup, she starts with her crocodile tears. 'it will never be well with my stepfather!! He raped me, he took away my virginity' she would usually cry. Helloooo, is she the only one who had been raped? Why was she carrying this thing on her head? I found it both annoying and irritating. But as her husband, i try to pretend it was okay, but it wasnt. She was selfish, she didnt care about my needs and what have you. And after that incident, the next time she allows me climb her is till maybe four months later. The day we finally get to do the to and fro movement, all she does is slap me, pinch me and rain abuses on her stepfather. The curses she laid on her stepfather was her moans. Sometimes i wondered if she ever enjoyed it. Wasnt it foolish? I mean, whoever lays curses on a dead man, one who died about ten years before our marriage? Wasnt it stupidity? As a good husband, i tried to cope, but for how long? I could practically count the number of times we had sex in a year. Sometimes, six times, or even four, depends. It was frustrating i tell you. I wouldnt wish for my enemy to be on that position. Seeing my wife's sexy ass everyday but not been able to touch it was war. Cheating was bad, but why wouldnt it become useful when my wife doesnt satisfy me. Sometimes, even the harmless of kiss could bring out tears from Chioma. She had a scar on her upper lip and she had said her stepdad of blessed memory was the one who gave her that scar. And then, sometimes, when i just place a simple kiss on her lips, it made her moody. At a time, i became confused. I just didnt know what to do to make her happy. I didnt know whether holding her shoulders or her palms was a bad idea. It was annoying i tell you. Have you ever been in a situation whereby even hugging your wife becomes a chore? Think about it. Imagine it. To all the married men around, just imagine it. Not being able to hold your wives hand, hug her, kiss her, pull her close to you, wrap your hands around her waist, make sweet sensual love to her. But she's your wife. Especially, when you're someone who had a sex filled youthful days. On an occassion, when i had had a simple misunderstanding with Chioma, she had told me that i was no different from her stepfather, and that all i wanted from her was sex and nothing more. And then when she found out i slept with one of her colleagues, she asked me a funny question. 'what do they give you that i dont give you? Is it sex you lack or what?' It was a very funny question that i hadnt been able to restrain myself from laughing out loud while she wept. It was reflex, i mean, she practically starved me of sex all the time and all she could ask was what do they give you that i dont? Like seriously? Was i piece of wood? I hadnt noticed it earlier but my love for her began to wane and i found everything about her annoying. To the extent that immediately after Kainene's birth, we werent intimate for a year and six months! And when i say intimate, it wasnt just about sex. There was no holding hands, no huggin, no kiss, no peck. No sharing of room! Not that we were quarelling. But i found her boring and annoying to the extent that the mere sight of her made me nauseous. Besides, i found satisfaction somewhere else - Mabel. TBC 5 Likes 3 Shares |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 11:02am On Dec 21, 2016 |
Angelliza |
Re: Red Ashes by Nmaglit: 11:18am On Dec 21, 2016 |
Not that am supporting chuks for wat he did to chioma bt wat does she expect a man will always b a man |
Re: Red Ashes by teel123(f): 11:20am On Dec 21, 2016 |
Chuka i dnt blame you. Men setting are program of SEX n dat must be satisyd. Great work |
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 11:36am On Dec 21, 2016 |
Chumzypinky: Please dear, try and arrange this episode well, couldn't even read it. E dy pain for eye |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 12:11pm On Dec 21, 2016 |
Prettyhurts:i dnt undastand, hw e take dey pain 4 eye?? |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 12:11pm On Dec 21, 2016 |
Nmaglit:abi? Men wil always b dogs |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 12:33pm On Dec 21, 2016 |
Evri1 Nathan's POV comes up next, who wnts 2 read Nathan's POV? I've purposedly delayed it |
Re: Red Ashes by angelliza(f): 12:35pm On Dec 21, 2016 |
Nice one when are we expecting another update |
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 12:40pm On Dec 21, 2016 |
Chumzypinky:Dunno if is my phone,but you should try and arrange it
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Re: Red Ashes by ayoxelee(m): 2:02pm On Dec 21, 2016 |
Chumzypinky:of course we all wanna read, who knows, just like Chucks Nathan may nt b completely at fault n he may not b as bad as d story portrays him. |
Re: Red Ashes by ayoxelee(m): 2:07pm On Dec 21, 2016 |
kajsa08: Chumzypinky: Nathan shd rather b d father of her child if she is pregnant cox d pregnancy bn a product of rape will so hurt her n she has suffered enof, mayb she shd kuku go abort it |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 2:42pm On Dec 21, 2016 |
Prettyhurts:is dat hw it is in ur fone? In my fone, d paragraphs ar nt shown n it makes it look like my work is jampacked, so dats y i space it, bt here in my fone, its jampacked |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 2:43pm On Dec 21, 2016 |
PrettyMizQdot Twinkiet |
Re: Red Ashes by gtin(m): 2:56pm On Dec 21, 2016 |
I dnt blame Chuka anymore for cheating on Chioma, it must hv been very fustrasting for him |
Re: Red Ashes by Creeza(m): 3:06pm On Dec 21, 2016 |
Lol...Chuks u try o. Even marry the kyn woman. I NO FIT O. Baesky drop Nathan Point of view nah.. I WANT TO read my type of guy view . |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 3:12pm On Dec 21, 2016 |
Creeza:because of u i'm nt dropn his point of view, i jst changed my mind, i'm sori |
Re: Red Ashes by Creeza(m): 3:15pm On Dec 21, 2016 |
Chumzypinky:shuu!! CHOP AM NAH u epp me? Becx of what u said, Im going ghost mode. PreetyMizQdot. Longest time!! |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 3:56pm On Dec 21, 2016 |
Creeza:because of u i'm nt postin an update again!!! |
Re: Red Ashes by Creeza(m): 4:32pm On Dec 21, 2016 |
Na u sabi o.. I have bigger problems than you..but come and continue what you started o... Nairalanders hardly forget, dnt leave a bad impression |
Re: Red Ashes by triplemmm3(f): 4:42pm On Dec 21, 2016 |
Nice story @writer keep it up, the sky is your starting point. |
Re: Red Ashes by PrettyMizQdot(f): 4:47pm On Dec 21, 2016 |
@ Chumzypinky, tenks 4 mentnin me at quarter-final... anyways i found d tread on mah own. Nd am bgrudginly sayin uv bin entertainin me so far. . . @ Creeza, abi o.. aw av u bin? . . @ gtin, frustratin 4 im indeed! ..bt ar bestfrnd? nd also manipulatin Mabel? ..even as she get fault too. . @ Op, u berra upd8.. bt abeg dont talk abt d@ shame 2 womanhood cald Jolade again (she's pissin me off). Nd pls, pls nd pls i don wanna c Nathan near my Kainene.. he's a monster 4 rapin d@ sory character (Lade). |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 5:12pm On Dec 21, 2016 |
triplemmm3:Tanz 4 ur prayas honey |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 5:13pm On Dec 21, 2016 |
PrettyMizQdot:Tankz Honey bt wat does OP mean?? |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 5:14pm On Dec 21, 2016 |
Sodiq42 i c u viewin |
Re: Red Ashes by Nmaglit: 5:27pm On Dec 21, 2016 |
Chumzypinky: Op not all men my future husband is exceptional bt wen it comes to sex men don't joke with it. My opinion tho |
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