United In Betrayal - Literature (5) - Nairaland
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| Re: United In Betrayal by gtin(m): 7:41am On Apr 29, 2017 |
We ar on FP keep it coming |
| Re: United In Betrayal by Austinoiz(m): 8:01am On Apr 29, 2017 |
PamelB:This piece is quite awesome and captivating...kudos Op |
| Re: United In Betrayal by Sammypope4all(m): 8:54am On Apr 29, 2017 |
Austinoiz:And you have to quote the whole piece ?E b like say ur name Na Micheal ?? Nice story though. Dude, u good. |
| Re: United In Betrayal by Austinoiz(m): 9:08am On Apr 29, 2017 |
khalifahsparkles:The devil cant use the devil nah... ![]() |
| Re: United In Betrayal by LilySopi(f): 9:12am On Apr 29, 2017 |
Am not surprised that this interesting piece hit front page... Nice story u got there. Itx my first time of reading your story. I know u have other stories pls mention dem to me so i can read it. Thanks |
| Re: United In Betrayal by Austinoiz(m): 9:51am On Apr 29, 2017 |
Sammypope4all:Hehehehe, bros I just say make I quote like u |
| Re: United In Betrayal by ADNAR(f): 10:24am On Apr 29, 2017 |
wehdonMa |
| Re: United In Betrayal by MummySilver: 10:51am On Apr 29, 2017 |
Interesting |
| Re: United In Betrayal by kingjomezy(m): 11:01am On Apr 29, 2017 |
nice one... that Micheal no get conscience... I love when the table turns on guys like him |
| Re: United In Betrayal by oluangelkay(f): 11:10am On Apr 29, 2017 |
Really got me glued to my phine, Micheal is an ass hole, |
| Re: United In Betrayal by oluangelkay(f): 11:11am On Apr 29, 2017 |
Really got me glued to my phone
, Micheal is an ass hole, more update please |
| Re: United In Betrayal by afolwalex20(m): 11:22am On Apr 29, 2017 |
keflesa:dude stop derailing with those fake tickets... if u r so sure of ur games, u won't be selling them. broke mofos!!! BTW: nice story pamelb ![]() |
| Re: United In Betrayal by PamelB(op): 1:05pm On Apr 29, 2017 |
Chai. Una tooooooo much. If I start quoting you all, I won't get the thumb to type again. And we even made it to front page. You guys are one in a million. Amara walked upstairs to her brother in law. They had to talk. She needed answers and he must provide them. She made the last turn and bumped into Kelvin who was going downstairs. "Hello. Don't tell me that with this beautiful face, God forgot to make the eyes clear. Where are you rushing up to?" Amara didn't know if to blush or just answer the question. Her sister's words kept coming to her head. Yes, Kelvin is truly handsome and well to do too. But she has a boyfriend. Her future would be secured with Kelvin but she didn't know him well enough. "Hello?" Kelvin said, snapping her out of her thoughts. "Uhm .........." "Don't you think we need to talk? Come. Let's go into town and get to know ourselves better." "Let me change into something appropriate then. Give me fifteen minutes." Kelvin smiled. Fifteen minutes. "Okay then." They both dispersed. The messenger had forgotten the message of the gods. Who would deliver them now? The next morning got everyone dressed up and ready to leave the house. Gertrude had announced breakfast and they were soon gathered at the dinning, ready to devour their meals. As was the tradition in the Njama house, whoever prepared the meal would announce what she made before leaving the table, Gertrude called out the dishes on the table. "There's plantain porridge with smoked fish, fried plantain and tomato sauce with beef. There's also freshly made mango juice to help your digestion. Enjoy your breakfast please." She concluded and left the dinning area. Amara served each person according to what they wanted. Claire went for the plantain porridge, savouring the taste of the meal not minding or even noticing the angry stares Micheal threw her way. "Hmmm. This girls know what they're doing in the kitchen. They're good." Kelvin complimented "You can say that again. Little wonder their pay is much too. The agency that got them for me are known in this state and beyond." Claire added mouthful. Micheal, are you enjoying the meal?" Amara asked out of the blues Micheal looked at her and they both locked stares. He was surprised cause ever since his wife's miscarriage, this was the first time she would talk to him with little emotion and respect "Yes. Uhm, it's not bad after all." He answered, going back to his plantain and tomato sauce. "So you see, there's always a first tine Mike." Kelvin added. They finished their meal in silence and got ready to leave. Micheal would go with Kelvin while Amara and Claire would leave together. "Bye honey, Gertrude packed your lunch box." Claire said, giving her husband a peck "Baby, I still don't agree with ....." "Let's go man. Leave the woman alone. She needs all the rest she can get now. Let's go" Micheal pecked his wife on the forehead and walked out while Kelvin followed. "Shall we leave now?" Amara asked. "Yea. But I'll still have to come back to inspect the girls. The rest of my things are in my room already. I just asked them to clean the room and arrange my things in there." "But sister, why are you moving out of your matrimonial room? Did you find......." "The doctor asked me to quit some things for now. I wouldn't want to tempt my husband you know." Claire answered with a smile She picked up her purse and car key "Let's go." Amara sighed and stood up. She can't tell her sister what she found out. It would break her the more They left the house, with Claire teasing Amara about Kelvin. "Can't wait to meet this mistress of yours." Kelvin said as they stepped out of the elevator. "Respect please. Mistress is too raw a word." Micheal replied. "I wonder what this lady looks like. You're defending her already huh?" He brushed past Sarah, not knowing she was the one they were talking about. He muttered a sorry without looking back and made his entrance into Micheal's office. Micheal had seen the way Kelvin had brushed past his hearthrob. He needed to introduce them but before he could finish admiring Sarah, he was already inside his office. "Who's that?" Sarah asked "Hey. Not even a good morning huh?" "I'm sorry love but the way he walked, as if he owned this place." "Oh! It's in his nature cause he was born with a silver spoon. Anyways, he's my best friend Kelvin. Come with me, I've told him a lot about you and he can't wait to meet you." "Oh! Okay. Go on ahead. I'll join you two in a minute." "Alright bae." He looked around and when he didn't see anyone, he stole a kiss from her and walked to his office. Oh wow! His best friend is more handsome, and with what he just said, must be more richer. I need to get him to notice me. Is he married? Oh my God. He has to notice me. She looked herself over. She was clad in a denim jean, white singlet and a denim jacket. She was wearing a blue snicker and light make up. She went to her table, picked her handbag and ran to the restroom. He just has to notice her!!!! |
| Re: United In Betrayal by Chumzypinky(f): 1:19pm On Apr 29, 2017*. Modified: 4:43pm On Apr 29, 2017 |
Kelvin ws rite afterall. Sarah is a street gal |
| Re: United In Betrayal by EvaJael(f): 1:19pm On Apr 29, 2017 |
Shameless thing misrepresenting womanhood. Thumbs up bae |
| Re: United In Betrayal by nihinlolawa24(f): 1:37pm On Apr 29, 2017 |
Pamelb well done. Sarah will make things easy for Kelvin. fucking for money wen u Ave a rewarding job. really misrepresenting women |
| Re: United In Betrayal by rosalieene(f): 2:15pm On Apr 29, 2017 |
Sarah is just one unrepentant olosho who has nothing to offer but her body. Nemesis will surely catch up with her! Nice one pamelB |
| Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 2:36pm On Apr 29, 2017 |
I Know This Lady Called Sarah Is From The Lineage Of Prostitute, |
| Re: United In Betrayal by Feyikemi12(f): 3:47pm On Apr 29, 2017 |
hmm I love where this is going
ride on pamelb |
| Re: United In Betrayal by LilySopi(f): 4:35pm On Apr 29, 2017 |
Chumzypinky:Pls elaborate... What did Claire do? |
| Re: United In Betrayal by Alennsar(f): 4:51pm On Apr 29, 2017 |
LilySopi:she mean Sarah |
| Re: United In Betrayal by Stevenbright(m): 5:15pm On Apr 29, 2017 |
PamelB:Your writing is good and unique. |
| Re: United In Betrayal by crislyn(f): 5:32pm On Apr 29, 2017 |
God save us from the likes of Michael.. Amen. A very interesting story Pamelb. |
| Re: United In Betrayal by JMK9600(f): 5:47pm On Apr 29, 2017 |
Madam PamelB is back again. God bless your pen and your brain. Back to the matter, Michael is a big fool to throw away such a decent wife. I just pray Claire finds true happiness cos she deserves it. More ink to your pen madam |
| Re: United In Betrayal by LilySopi(f): 5:49pm On Apr 29, 2017 |
| Re: United In Betrayal by BlissfulJeff(m): 6:26pm On Apr 29, 2017 |
PamelB weldone my dear,i must say u re doin a really nice job here.pls update us more |
| Re: United In Betrayal by Jasmine4(f): 8:42pm On Apr 29, 2017 |
Following you back and front...abeg kwantinue ma. |
| Re: United In Betrayal by gmec23(m): 9:15pm On Apr 29, 2017 |
Had to come outta stealth mode... this is a writing masterpiece... bae u are super... onto d matter every one is cursing Michael, yea fine, he is simply very stupid, but from d recent actions of Claire, I think she knows she is also to blame I mean after marriage, she now became a bag of rice( fat & heavy) , less romantic even b4 having a baby. And how could she not know dat those were signs of pregnancy.... keep 'em coming pamel B u re 2 much |
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