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Re: The Auction by Nkeiruka2015(f): 6:00pm On Jul 21, 2017 |
Thumps up Lleigh, you are a great writer. I believe the woman who has Lola now is the same woman that bought Linda, but let me keep my fingers crossed. |
Re: The Auction by Nobody: 6:01pm On Jul 21, 2017 |
Lleigh:adesina12 come let me give a lesson dear. 1. Authors have a tendency of scattering your favorite character's life. 2. Then deny it. Infact, they normally pretend like "what are you on about " 3. They can even blame the weather for it. All in all.....never trust them. 2 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: The Auction by astute28: 7:14pm On Jul 21, 2017 |
LIIEGH U ARE A GENIUS BEFORE READING IS NOT MY HOBBY BUT NOW AUNTY LIIEGH U TURN READING TO MY HOBBY WAO U ARE GOOD INDEED ..HOW I GO TAKE GIVE U THIS POPCORN NW |
Re: The Auction by Oyindawealth(f): 7:45pm On Jul 21, 2017 |
Liegh u're good!!! Weldone! I enjoyed dis updates...thanks for d mentions....Just like Oliver twist I want more!!! |
Re: The Auction by marychommy(f): 5:46am On Jul 22, 2017 |
what happens wen Lola mets Linda? waiting for d next update 1 Like |
Re: The Auction by Lleigh(f): 10:10am On Jul 22, 2017 |
Nkeiruka2015: thank you Nkeiruka2015....yes let us wait and see... Thank you for reading and commenting much appreciated. |
Re: The Auction by Lleigh(f): 10:11am On Jul 22, 2017 |
jagugu88li: jagugu88li I can blame the weather for all kinds of things especially when it rains 1 Like |
Re: The Auction by Lleigh(f): 10:12am On Jul 22, 2017 |
astute28: thank you astute28 for such a great endorsement. virtual popcorn always accepted. 1 Like |
Re: The Auction by Lleigh(f): 10:13am On Jul 22, 2017 |
Oyindawealth: Oyindawealth I beg o. update will come soon thank you for commenting as always |
Re: The Auction by Lleigh(f): 10:14am On Jul 22, 2017 |
marychommy: now that marychommy is the big N64m popcorn question. where is Adesina12 and the popcorn self... |
Re: The Auction by bummybummy(f): 10:46am On Jul 22, 2017 |
Weldone Leigh. don't wanna understand again oo, who z Lola and is she linked with Linda |
Re: The Auction by iamharkinwaley: 12:02pm On Jul 22, 2017 |
Hmmm poor Lola Lleigh nothing should do her o,am serious. Nice update Thanks |
Re: The Auction by Creeza(m): 12:48pm On Jul 22, 2017 |
Nathblessing: Started from the bottom now we here. Queen of descriptions I've always called her. Aint seen anyone badder than her. So now you know why we all here care. I hope you noticed the lyrics up there. Abeg don't mind me o. Lemme read before I drop something reasonable. I wonder if I've been eating too much maize lately, I feel like my brain has been usurped by a logical coup d'etat of stupidity and nonsense. |
Re: The Auction by Creeza(m): 1:34pm On Jul 22, 2017 |
jagugu88li: |
Re: The Auction by Creeza(m): 1:37pm On Jul 22, 2017 |
I don't want to think I'm correct but here I am again, with my crazy thoughts Babies, Baby, Toddler , small tata . Don't know if I got the line correct but here It goes " I tried to call on my mum to save me. But the words would not break free...." And from your comment " he was at a age where spiritual eye is still sharp ..." I don't know who his _uncle_ was so I won't dive there blindfolded by my instincts , but from lleigh's narrative , the baby looked more like linda's father when he was younger..." In dramatica and many movies , when spiritual or supernatural beings takes control of the physical. Say maybe a human body or even when the " force of the supernatural " TENDs to " show a character " something that WOULD have been or HAS already occurred, the best way to go about this , is using something they are familiar with. In our dear linda's case : Her father. Another wonderful example is Barry allen ( the flash ) and the speedforce - oh! Dear I loved that series- and many others . So my dear dominique and Jagugu88li. This is just my take as a writer- I'm not a storyteller yet, but someday, I will- and most times the goal is : to put the reader in a very twisting and....... Let me not spoil the mystery with my nonsense writeup, but be rest assured there is a or was a twist somewhere to sweep us off our feet nd probably we missed it. Or the intentions was to drive us farther from the real picture and hold us in the question zone. This said , the writer of the story knows better. oya lleigh continue . Biko . I don't know what to write again before my brain explode. This is mind blowing , honestly. 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: The Auction by Creeza(m): 2:03pm On Jul 22, 2017 |
It was obvious to the agent, by the heavy breathing on the other end of the phone, that the owner of the voice was getting excited with what was being relayed via the internet. The agent wasn’t surprised when he heard the voice say ‘Lola get over here and come and sVck me off.’ He had a good idea as to who was perform that particular job, FROM what he had been told she was getting very (good at it.) #lola the lollipop licker meets #Do the Linda Took that from page 41.. Its all clear right now.. |
Re: The Auction by eROCK247(m): 4:35pm On Jul 22, 2017 |
Read 54 pages in one day... Wow! But seriously, if this is just a figment of ur imagination, it is incredibly sick. I'm sorry, it's a beautiful work of art with breathtaking details and suspense but still... How do u make that up in ur head |
Re: The Auction by Lleigh(f): 5:22pm On Jul 22, 2017 |
eROCK247: A lot of the things in this story are actually on this forum. eROCK247 this week alone quite a few babies have been dumped days old and left to die. A woman tried to sell her child for a bag of rice. A houseboy being shackled in a cage with goats. A woman has just married her dog. There are loads of threads about girls and sugar daddies and the lengths they go to A man got arrested having S£x with an animal.. A father sleeping with his daughter from the age of 8 Children being kidnapped for money rituals A woman was paid £1,000 to sleep with a monkey..... Dubai porta parties....it's all on here. Human trafficking, it's horrible what happens. Children are kidnapped to order. The list continues.... unfortunately it is the reality of the world we are living in at the moment. But I appreciate you reading my work, I hope you are not offended. Lleigh 6 Likes 4 Shares |
Re: The Auction by eROCK247(m): 6:51pm On Jul 22, 2017 |
Lleigh: I could never be offended even if I wanted to. You are a very skilled writer and going through your story I could actually see scenes you were painting. You left me hungry for the next episode. I just found myself another good writer on NL. I'd definitely pay for this story in hardcover. Kudos ma'am 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: The Auction by Lleigh(f): 8:51pm On Jul 22, 2017 |
eROCK247: eROCK247 thank you. And thank you for reading it and taking the time to comment. The next episode is coming soon. I have to go to the darkroom 1 Like |
Re: The Auction by Ayoshewa12(f): 9:26pm On Jul 22, 2017 |
Thanks for mention.
Nice update ma'am,keep em coming |
Re: The Auction by Oyindawealth(f): 10:11pm On Jul 22, 2017 |
Lleigh:you're welcome sweetie.... Waiting patiently.... |
Re: The Auction by Oyindawealth(f): 10:17pm On Jul 22, 2017 |
Lleigh:all dis u've listed are really happening....... It's so sad.. #the bitter truth# 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: The Auction by Sonamjs: 11:09pm On Jul 22, 2017 |
Oyindawealth: It is well said lleigh and oyindawealth 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: The Auction by JohnGainsville(m): 11:11am On Jul 23, 2017 |
Nice story Ma'am Lleigh. Is this story some how connected to your other story "River" because how Linda's little boy was killed was also how the little boy in the River was killed for the same Ritual purpose. More, well permit me to say Weird inspirations to you. Ride on 2 Likes 1 Share |
Re: The Auction by Lleigh(f): 5:18pm On Jul 23, 2017 |
JohnGainsville: Thank you JohnGainsville. There is a connection 1 Like |
Re: The Auction by Oyindawealth(f): 8:42pm On Jul 23, 2017 |
Lleigh:lol.... So it's d weather dat give u inspiration... U're so unpredictable!!! #just kidding# |
Re: The Auction by Oyindawealth(f): 10:42pm On Jul 23, 2017 |
Creeza:dat's very thoughtful of u... Btw I've known dat since... Creeza:dat's very thoughtful of u... Btw I've known dat since... |
Re: The Auction by Cherrybliz: 12:28pm On Jul 24, 2017 |
I have a ghost reader but I just have to comment for the first time.. This is really nice, u are quite good I must confess. Keep it up and keep it coming! |
Re: The Auction by jalo1(m): 7:42pm On Jul 24, 2017 |
Lleigh:na dark room u dey since on d 22nd abi 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: The Auction by Lleigh(f): 8:33pm On Jul 24, 2017 |
jalo1: the weather is not helping. Will update by Wednesday jalo1 sorry for the delay... I beg 1 Like |
Re: The Auction by Lleigh(f): 10:41pm On Jul 24, 2017 |
Cherrybliz: Hi Cherrybliz thank you for coming out of ghost mode Thank you |
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