Sveen:
HI lady, I feel your post is offensive, much to my chagrin. However I'm not about to hurl insults or belittle anyone, but then you have to understand that it is only natural for a good literary work like this to attract criticism. Even pamelb knows this!

Writers like larry.sun, she.writes and a hosts of other usually post their story here for correction and criticism before publishing. Critics is part of literature and it improves a writer, no one is perfect and I'm sure everyone here will most certainly have something to say about this story, a favorite character and a hated one. That is what makes literature interesting, the different point of views and the arguments.

I only criticised the story, I don't know why some people are taking it personal. If anyone must do that it should be OP.

PamelB:
no writer will willingly starve her readers of update. Understanding is what matters in a forum like this. A lot of things on my head. Uncle was buried yesterday, I'm trying to balance a lot of things but since you're not in my shoes, you won't understand.
Anyways, u can still unfollow, come bk next month and continue from page 81.
U were among d pple I respected here but who sigh, it's ur opinion.


Good night house. I gaz sleep now coz I've got thanksgiving mass to attend tomorrow. Sorry, it's today already.
Happy New week

Kimkardashain:
now dis is my opinion.
mike and claire will cum bk 2geda again, phil will end up with chantal, amara will get served. ebere will meet her mr wrongest ryt
PamelB hun, chop kiss

stronghope1:
wonderful write up. Am actually not a church person but why would every literature you read contain sex, porn, and many other things that will definitely not improve our lives. I guess that's not the only way to get people's attention. let's channel our energy towards something more productive pls. Wonderful writing once again but the sex scene is annoying. Wish we can do without it. personal opinion

stronghope1:
wonderful write up. Am actually not a church person but why would every literature you read contain sex, porn, and many other things that will definitely not improve our lives. I guess that's not the only way to get people's attention. let's channel our energy towards something more productive pls. Wonderful writing once again but the sex scene is annoying. Wish we can do without it. personal opinion

Kimkardashain:
now dis is my opinion.
mike and claire will cum bk 2geda again, phil will end up with chantal, amara will get served. ebere will meet her mr wrongest ryt
PamelB hun, chop kiss

PamelB:
I'm sorry dear. I know I made that mistake at the beginning of the story but someone talked about it and I stopped. Secondly, I try to be versatile so as to accommodate everyone with what they enjoy in a story. Still, I'm sorry if it offended your faith somehow.

I'm sick guys.
But I'll update later in the evening.
Tanx for keeping d thread alive.

PamelB:
I'm sorry dear. I know I made that mistake at the beginning of the story but someone talked about it and I stopped. Secondly, I try to be versatile so as to accommodate everyone with what they enjoy in a story. Still, I'm sorry if it offended your faith somehow.

I'm sick guys.
But I'll update later in the evening.
Tanx for keeping d thread alive.

PamelB:


"Crying won't help you. What were you thinking? That someone who cheated on his wife with the kid sister will ever change if he gets married to that same kid sister? He'll see you as cheap and worthless Amara. Didn't you see the way your Michael was with me just a day after his divorce? I did all that in front of you to show you that you've dug your own grave. He'll never respect you Amara, society will never respect you and even the baby in your womb will never respect you for taking your own sister's husband."