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Unfinished Business (21+ - A Story Of Betrayal, Sex And Infidelity) / The Enemy Within - A Tale Of Love, Lust And Betrayal / DAYO'S ANGEL( Love, Lust And Betrayal) (2) (3) (4)
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Re: United In Betrayal by Domgreat0212(m): 8:02am On Aug 25, 2017 |
Pamelb, you're such a great writer that I've finally decided to commend your work, although I'm a ghost reader. More ink to you pen! [color=#990000][/color][img][/img]
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Re: United In Betrayal by jupitre(m): 9:19am On Aug 25, 2017 |
Karma is here at last...Karma always has its way of catching up on people...
Now someone will say Kelvin is a bad friend oo.. 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: United In Betrayal by Skimpledawg(m): 10:36am On Aug 25, 2017 |
This story should finish soon... |
Re: United In Betrayal by LilySopi(f): 11:04am On Aug 25, 2017 |
Sveen: Noted.. Sorry if u think my comment is offensive. Those who make long comments in essense analyzing the whole story should know that they are not the only ones reading. The long comments re not really necessary. They can state their opinion as simple as it may be. Tell me, how can soomeone's comment be as long as an update? Itx annoying, simple. 1 Like |
Re: United In Betrayal by Chumzypinky(f): 11:08am On Aug 25, 2017 |
But no vex, who send Chantel all this one wey she dey do so?? |
Re: United In Betrayal by wizsolzy(m): 11:15am On Aug 25, 2017 |
Those if u quoting a whole update nd writing long comments..I don't know if you want to start ur own trend here. 2 Likes
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Re: United In Betrayal by nerd51(f): 11:17am On Aug 25, 2017 |
PamelB:Hi, aunt PamelB. Really sorry for your loss. I pray God grant you the fortitude to bear it. Just hold your head high up, cheers 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: United In Betrayal by bimberry1307(f): 11:24am On Aug 25, 2017 |
Wow! Chantel, oya chop kiss. muahhhhhhhh. Thanks, PamelB for the update. 1 Like 2 Shares |
Re: United In Betrayal by Rasmodox101(m): 12:53pm On Aug 25, 2017 |
Well, Afta All Is Said And Done! KARMA Has Been And Is Still A Bitchy Bitch And Worse!! Breathtaking Story, Miss Pamel! 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: United In Betrayal by stronghope1: 12:54pm On Aug 25, 2017 |
wonderful write up. Am actually not a church person but why would every literature you read contain sex, porn, and many other things that will definitely not improve our lives. I guess that's not the only way to get people's attention. let's channel our energy towards something more productive pls. Wonderful writing once again but the sex scene is annoying. Wish we can do without it. personal opinion 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: United In Betrayal by Nkysuccess(f): 12:54pm On Aug 25, 2017 |
Chantal is acting as the sister that Amara ought to be. Amara is indeed shameless. Wonderful update PamelB 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: United In Betrayal by IamLukas(m): 1:23pm On Aug 25, 2017 |
...It keeps getting better with every update. Nice job Pamelb 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: United In Betrayal by Kimkardashain(f): 1:49pm On Aug 25, 2017 |
now dis is my opinion. mike and claire will cum bk 2geda again, phil will end up with chantal, amara will get served. ebere will meet her mr wrongest ryt PamelB hun, chop kiss 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: United In Betrayal by LilySopi(f): 2:18pm On Aug 25, 2017 |
Kimkardashain: It will hurt me to the marrow if Mike and Claire end up together.. Common Mike cheated on Claire with her own sister which is the worst of it all. Letx watch and see what Ma'am PamelB has for us 3 Likes 1 Share |
Re: United In Betrayal by onometee(f): 4:05pm On Aug 25, 2017 |
stronghope1: Auntie abi uncle where did you see porn in the story? Na wa o.... So are you trying to tell me that you don't watch movies with sex scenes? Which kind holy holy be this one? Abeg nobody forced you to read the story.. Stop downgrading somebody's work 3 Likes |
Re: United In Betrayal by PamelB(f): 4:44pm On Aug 25, 2017 |
stronghope1:I'm sorry dear. I know I made that mistake at the beginning of the story but someone talked about it and I stopped. Secondly, I try to be versatile so as to accommodate everyone with what they enjoy in a story. Still, I'm sorry if it offended your faith somehow. I'm sick guys. But I'll update later in the evening. Tanx for keeping d thread alive. 2 Likes |
Re: United In Betrayal by Toyin223(f): 5:29pm On Aug 25, 2017 |
Kimkardashain:HMMMMM Sister DONT let me Come To Ur House Nd Beat U Ah Can U MarryEd Dis Type Of Man Again |
Re: United In Betrayal by Gynah33(f): 5:31pm On Aug 25, 2017 |
[/sup][sup].it. Is like a movie I really enjoy your story pamelb pls make it into a book ........ And don't let it end soon lol !!! More power to your elbow |
Re: United In Betrayal by jayeoba92: 5:43pm On Aug 25, 2017 |
PamelB:it is well with you Ma. take care of yourself! |
Re: United In Betrayal by onometee(f): 6:14pm On Aug 25, 2017 |
Panel B get well soon |
Re: United In Betrayal by LilySopi(f): 6:27pm On Aug 25, 2017 |
Wish u speedy recovery d'r |
Re: United In Betrayal by FortunateB(f): 7:20pm On Aug 25, 2017 |
Wish you God's speed in your recovery |
Re: United In Betrayal by xdos(m): 7:34pm On Aug 25, 2017 |
Get well B! |
Re: United In Betrayal by eROCK247(m): 9:04pm On Aug 25, 2017 |
PamelB: Sick? Pls treat urslf properly o! Speedy recovery 1 Like |
Re: United In Betrayal by eROCK247(m): 9:12pm On Aug 25, 2017 |
PamelB: |
Re: United In Betrayal by funnyfun: 9:21pm On Aug 25, 2017 |
I'm sick guys.
But I'll update later in the evening. Pele PamelB. Get well soon. |
Re: United In Betrayal by funnyfun: 9:24pm On Aug 25, 2017 |
I'm sick guys.
But I'll update later in the evening.
Tanx for keeping d thread alive.[/quote] Sorry and take care. Xpcting update soonest. |
Re: United In Betrayal by ekwuemeuzo(m): 10:36pm On Aug 25, 2017 |
quick recovery |
Re: United In Betrayal by dupsai(f): 7:33am On Aug 26, 2017 |
PamelB, please take care of yourself and get well soon. The Lord is your strength. 1 Like |
Re: United In Betrayal by aikman2k(m): 7:44am On Aug 26, 2017 |
[quote author=stronghope1 post=59813531]wonderful write up. Am actually not a church person but why would every literature you read contain sex, porn, and many other things that will definitely not improve our lives. I guess that's not the only way to get people's attention. let's channel our energy towards something more productive pls. Wonderful writing once again but the sex scene is annoying. Wish we can do without it. personal opinion The sex scenes made the story mature, I must say stopping it made it lost it's texture and looks like every other story we can read anywhere. It's the choice of the writer, if you don't like the content, please do the needful try another story and don't try to change the writers story... My idea though |
Re: United In Betrayal by kezmanribety(m): 10:10am On Aug 26, 2017 |
Micheal was just so hurt. It not good to be an orphan! No matter how good you have it, you will still need your parents and real family at one point or the other. What a nice and interesting story! Say no to domestic violence. 1 Like |
Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 12:17pm On Aug 26, 2017 |
Initially i didn't trust chantel but it seems that she wants to prove me wrong by being the sister that Amara never was to claire. 1 Like 2 Shares |
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