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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by kaytolee(m): 4:34am On Mar 01, 2018
oba make you no waste time ooo
thanks for the updàte more ink to ur pen ijn....

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Deckline(m): 7:27am On Mar 01, 2018
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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Deckline(m): 7:27am On Mar 01, 2018
marychommy:
where is dat my good friend dat Said dat Crystal will die of jealousy pls come ooooo and read an see for urself. Dat serves Beatrice right. more ink to ur pen
Lol... I said it but I must say i'm quite impressed sha.but Who cares?! To hell with Crystal and her keke napep crushier.
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by skubido(m): 7:38am On Mar 01, 2018
Sist tanks a lot for the Dedication. Am very very Grateful. Jah bless ur hand work, nd e will continue to strengthen u dMore.. Still dey ur back. Ride on ma..



RESPECT

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Jtcool25: 8:49am On Mar 01, 2018
I love this story keep firing
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by wonderfulchild: 8:49am On Mar 01, 2018
Deckline:

Lol... I said it but I must say i'm quite impressed sha.but Who cares?! To hell with Crystal and her keke napep crushier.

You,take time there ooooo. Leave my Crystal alone. Is it your * crushier*?. Lol

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Deckline(m): 8:57am On Mar 01, 2018
wonderfulchild:


You,take time there ooooo. Leave my Crystal alone. Is it your * crushier*?. Lol
hahaha... Sorry o. Make una no stone me
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by olatex25(m): 9:05am On Mar 01, 2018
karma as finally catch up with dis witch "Beatrice ".. she haven't seen anything yet, unless she back out...

but

wetin dey worry dis oba na, make e do d needful and woo crystal jare, no dulling..

meanwhile, daddy Afam and Amara are somewhere flexing together also, no time....

reachelfst u are owing me 12pounds for dis beautiful set piece.. oya chop kisses � �

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by skubido(m): 9:59am On Mar 01, 2018
Tanks a lot 4d update. More of God oo. Remain bless

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Pinkfeet: 11:57am On Mar 01, 2018
more ink to ur pen .
thanks for the update

Beatrice end has started , karma don start job .
oba weting dey do you now !!!
you need woo this girl fast .

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by yvesboss(m): 12:02pm On Mar 01, 2018
Thanks for the mention rachaelfst ... thanks for the update as well.

Still following bumper to bumper

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by bimberry1307(f): 2:10pm On Mar 01, 2018
[quote author=rachealfst post=65457741]Dedication:
hebraheem20, Whocarex, Gody05, Leesah, bimberry1307, skubido, purples25, odunmba Ipolefaith, Chibaby1976, yvesboss, onosj, Eddyella.

thanks for the mention ma'am.
crystal should not break oba's heart o.

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Gody05(m): 3:03pm On Mar 01, 2018
rachealfst:
Dedication:
hebraheem20, Whocarex, Gody05, Leesah, bimberry1307, skubido, purples25, odunmba Ipolefaith, Chibaby1976, yvesboss, onosj, Eddyella.


Thanks for the mention ma'am and am enjoying your story wella, may God continue to uplift you height to height IJN

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Gody05(m): 3:03pm On Mar 01, 2018
rachealfst:
Dedication:
hebraheem20, Whocarex, Gody05, Leesah, bimberry1307, skubido, purples25, odunmba Ipolefaith, Chibaby1976, yvesboss, onosj, Eddyella.


Thanks for the mention ma'am and am enjoying your story wella, may God continue to uplift you from height to height IJN

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Gody05(m): 3:08pm On Mar 01, 2018
If I am a movie producer, I would choose Irish west of The flash as Crystal and Desmond Elliot as Soma, who is with me on that??
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Jane1234f(f): 4:14pm On Mar 01, 2018
Ride on

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by hebraheem20(m): 6:44pm On Mar 01, 2018
Thanks for the dedication. Jah bless

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by PrincessMM(f): 8:15pm On Mar 01, 2018
Whao! Ghost Mode Deactivated

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Nobody: 9:48pm On Mar 01, 2018
Happy new month to everyone, wishing you guys all the best.

Back to the story.
Now I see vividly why GOD couldn't give Lucifer a second chance; Daddy Afam's ex wife needs deliverance, can't she just accept her wrong doings and move on?

I don't know why, we are anxious to see Oba and Crystal dating, fear not! Crystal already knows the right man is Oba. What we should be worried for is if she's coming to say her good night with a kiss that will take them to heaven without ladder. But I trust Oba he's always careful not jeopardize his closeness with crystal's family.


But what could Daddy Afam and Crystal's mum discussing?

Rachaelfst you're doing a good job.

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(f): 1:15pm On Mar 02, 2018
Dedication:
vickyluvspices, marychommy, Pearl05, Jane1234f, PrincessMM, unpredictedtone, Pinkfeet, wonderfulchild, kaytolee, wizsolzy, Jtcool25, afolabiwunmi.




BEATRICE
"Accident ooo. My sons.....

"What hospital ma, we need to take you there. You can't drive in this condition" one of them said.

I was taken to the hospital and I got the greatest shock of my life when I got to the emergency room. The three of them were laid side by side and a police officer was standing next to one of the beds.

"I'm their mother, what's going here" I shouted.
A doctor and two nurses hurriedly held me.

"You have to be strong madam. Is there any family members with you?" The doctor asked.

"I came with my staff ooo. Talk to me what's going on. I went from one bed to the other touching my children's body.

The doctor came to my side. "Well, madam. The accident was really fatal and your children were in a very bad shape. According to the police officer who was present at the scene" he said pointing to the police officer. "Two of them were already dead on arrival while we tried our best to revive the third but I'm sorry we lost him too"

I was just looking at the doctor. I was trying to process everything he just said. I don't want to believe what he's saying is that all the children I have are dead.
"Madam" The doctor shook me to reality.

"Ewoooooo..... I'm dead ooooo. Three children, all dead in a day. Eh eh......" My staff came to my aid and held me down. Right in front of me, the bodies of my sons was packed to be taken to the morgue.

"The bodies are going to be transferred to the morgue now and you need to sign some papers ma" said the nurse holding a pen and forms in her hand.

"She can't do that now, she's not in a right frame of mind" one of my staff said.

"Will you sign on her behalf?" The nurse asked.

"Yes, I will" he said and signed the papers.

"I'm dead already, somebody should just get a gun and shoot me ooooo. I want to go and join them" I wailed the more and I was ushered out of the emergency room by my staff.

______________Toyin Taiwo
I was taken home. But before going home I told them to take me to the scene of the accident. The car was a write off. According to the police officers, my three sons were coming from the club early in the morning in a drunken state. 'The car summersaulted six times ' says one of the eye witnesses.

Bad news spread like wild fire, it was all over media. The house was filled up with family, friends, neighbors who came to sympathized.
____________________Toyin Taiwo




AFAM
I was in a meeting with the construction company's engineers to discuss the engineering part of the ongoing project when several incoming calls flooded my phone. To my surprise, Beatrice too called.
"What's going on back home?" I asked myself. I decided to excuse myself to call back.

I put a call through to Beatrice. She has never called since she left Lagos. I also got Miss calls from my uncle's and some family friends but I decided to call her first.
"Hello" I said when the call connected but I was greeted with wailings.
"Your sons are dead ooooo. Afam.... You and your white witch have succeeded in killing my sons" She wailed.
"What! Dead! How?" I asked and the line went off. It's obvious she hang up on me.

I had to call back one of my uncle's that called earlier. I want to believe she's just playing pranks on me.
After placing the call, I realized that Beatrice wasn't playing pranks on me. My three sons are actually dead. I sat on a chair besides me and dump the phone on the table in front of me. I wanted to move, I couldn't, I wanted to call but I can't even talk. And I was at the meeting with my new PA. He came to look for me and saw me in my state, he got to know what happened and drove me back to my house. The meeting obviously couldn't commence.

I got back home, called Amara who was shocked at the news. Especially when she heard the cause their death.
"Afam tell me it's not true. Imagine Crystal and I still pray for them last night, believing God to touch their hearts" she said bitterly.
"I guessed it's late now"
"I'm so sorry for your loss. Please be strong Afam. When are you leaving?"
“Anytime from now. My PA is on it"
"You can't go alone, let me come with you" she offered.

______________Toyin Taiwo
"Amara you know that's not a good idea. Beatrice will not take the sight of you lightly and the last thing we want is her drama"
"You are right. Just keep me posted. May the Lord console you and Beatrice"
"Amen, thanks"
"Take care and be careful around Beatrice. May God protect you"
"Amen. I need to go now"
"Ok. I'll call your daughter and inform her"
"Please do, thanks. Bye"

I called Oba too and inform him. He volunteered to follow me to Enugu. I called my PA to make provisions for him too.
By 8pm that very day, we got to Enugu.

____________________Toyin Taiwo




BEATRICE
I watched him as he entered with two young men. I recognized one of them. I saw him at the station though I don't know the relationship he has with Afam. I also noticed he's close to Afam's daughter from the way they conversed at the station.

Afam greeted the sympathizers he met in the sitting room. His kinsmen and mine were also on seat. He came and sat beside me. He patted my back.
"Beatrice I'm really sorry for the death of our children"
I slapped off his hand. "Do not lay those filthy hands on me" I said through a clenched teeth. I stood up and left the sitting room. He followed me quietly to my room.
"Beatrice, this are my sons we are talking about here"
"Huh! Your sons! Please cut me some slack as if you care one bit about them" I scoffed.
"I feed them cloth, educate them and we both know how that end. The only thing is that you never allow me raise them my own way. You raise them your own way, you spoilt them rotten and you're still sitting there blaming me!"
"You know what? I don't need you here, so get out!"
"Beatrice!"
"What We know who is actually mourning here. You still have a child. I'm the childless one here. For the last time, get out! And I mean now" I said with the
last energy in me and he left my room.

The next day the bodies we're taken from morgue and made to rest at the cemetery. That day was the worst day off my life. I was beyond controlling. I cried, wailed and wailed all day.

Afam provided everything needed for the burial. After the burial he assigned some family members to stay with me for some time. He gave them money for the upkeep of the house. The jobless women accepted his offer.

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Sojikhing: 2:29pm On Mar 02, 2018
karma what goes around comes around

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Pearl05(f): 3:56pm On Mar 02, 2018
Ewooooooooooo chim


It's too much nau madam rachaelfst. 3 children at once dead? Haba it's too much nau . Beatrice should beg God to take her life. One should have survived nau to take over the father's name. Or you should have kill Beatrice and not the poor children. cry


Thank you for the dedication sweetie.

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by afolabiwunmi: 4:03pm On Mar 02, 2018
Thanks for the dedication ma'am more wisdom,more knowledge,more understanding and more anointing ma,you will not not weary IJN. As per the Beatrice is good to be doing good, I pray to all those reading this that we shall not cry over our children IJN.

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by kaytolee(m): 4:51pm On Mar 02, 2018
Thanks for the dedication...

kai 3 at onces.....


hmmm is good to do good ooo...Beatrice sorry for the great lost...now crystal is the only child.....

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by tillaman(m): 4:51pm On Mar 02, 2018
Thanks for the update Madame, feels like am seeing a home video, You are too much maam!

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by skubido(m): 5:01pm On Mar 02, 2018
If u don dey hear say...


There's fire on the mountain... No wait ooo.. Dey smell trouble...


God dey sha

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by olatex25(m): 5:03pm On Mar 02, 2018
wat a pity, karma as finally catch up with dis witch "Beatrice "... wat a pity...

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Adesina12: 5:06pm On Mar 02, 2018
Jobless women accepted the offer to stay with jobless Beatrice
Nawaooooo at last the link chain has broken
She has been let loose now ....let's see what will be the aftermath
Toyin Taiwo sweet popcorn for you dearieee

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by dupsai(f): 6:23pm On Mar 02, 2018
Haba! Rachealfst, this punishment was too much now. The children just got killed for the mistake of their mother, you could have allowed Beatrice to die instead. Please don't let Beatrice avenge the death of her sons on Crystal and her mother. All the same, thanks for the update,

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by peejaylemmy(f): 6:56pm On Mar 02, 2018
Thanks for the update Rachealfst............@Beatrice d punishment of losing 3grown up kids @once is just too much,anywayz karma is a Biatch.

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