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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Nobody: 11:34am On Mar 12, 2018
cbella:

Lolzz....!! Do they all happen to be packed at one location angry
I beg give me Google map.




they are everywhere! even on nairaland.
as for the Google map, I just sent you an email, I hope you will reply?

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Nobody: 11:34am On Mar 12, 2018
cbella:

Lolzz....!! Do they all happen to be packed at one location angry
I beg give me Google map.




they are everywhere! even on nairaland.
as for the Google map, I just sent you an email, I hope you will reply?

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Jasminelove(f): 4:37pm On Mar 12, 2018
vickyluvspices:
hmmm...owambe tings...happy 4 daddyafam amd mummyejiofor...abeg rachealfst put me in charge of d food d turkeys 2 be precise am sure jasminelove will handle d rest...as for beatrice am sure d thunder dat will visit her is still warming up in heaven.welldone ma.
sure i will do a wonderful job so just prepare your money and my bank account will be waiting and am thinking of the colours for the day, ideals pls to make the occasion colourful
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Nobody: 5:04pm On Mar 12, 2018
Jasminelove:
sure i will do a wonderful job so just prepare your money and my bank account will be waiting and am thinking of the colours for the day, ideals pls to make the occasion colourful

I suggest powder blue and wine grin
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by hadduni(f): 7:50pm On Mar 12, 2018
Ayoomolabake:

I suggest powder blue and wine grin
that wine makes the combo akward...Grey and red
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Nobody: 8:03pm On Mar 12, 2018
hadduni:

that wine makes the combo akward...Grey and red


It depends on how it's worn. I thought it awkward too when it was chosen for an event I attended recently but it turned out nice. (A blue lace material and wine head gear).
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by StellamarisIII(f): 8:18pm On Mar 12, 2018
Ayoomolabake:



It depends on how it's worn. I thought it awkward too when it was chosen for an event I attended recently but it turned out nice. (A blue lace material and wine head gear).


wat about peach and lemon, would they be rice and nkwobi
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Nobody: 8:39pm On Mar 12, 2018
StellamarisIII:


wat about peach and lemon, would they be rice and nkwobi

I hope so... I want Ofe Nsala or Oha too smiley
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Nobody: 8:39pm On Mar 12, 2018
StellamarisIII:


wat about peach and lemon, would they be rice and nkwobi
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Jasminelove(f): 11:04pm On Mar 12, 2018
Ayoomolabake:



I hope so... I want Ofe Nsala or Oha too smiley
this is a very big event so am very sure there will be plently of chop chop that day but i don't know who is in charge of that department am in the department of wat we will wear dat day that why asking for ideals of colour. Thanks for the ideals so far. More ideals pls

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(f): 11:33am On Mar 13, 2018
Dedication:
StellamarisIII, oyinella, bigfancee, Jasminelove, veenessha, Bhanky23, Stillnigga, princessadeola, hadunni, unpredictedtone, olaolutreasure, Ka52y, skubido




BEATRICE
I made up mind to do as mama said. I set out on the journey to Amukara village.
The place was not easy to locate, but I finally found the place after hours of seeking to locate the place. I entered into the hut and met the baba sitted, I greeted him and he offered me a stool to sit.
"Nnoo Dalu (welcome)Why are you here my daughter?” Great dibia asked.
I told him my predicament and my reason for seeking him.
"I want revenge, I want to kill her daughter but my hands are tied, I can do no such thing. But mama told me I don't have to kill them before I have my revenge"
"Hmm....so apart from killing them what else do you have in mind" he asked.
"I want to place a curse on her daughter" I replied.
"What kind of curse do you want us to place on her?"
"I want her to be a single parent for the rest of her life. The worst thing that can happen to Amara is for her daughter to experience the same dilemma she went through. I want her impregnated and no man claiming the paternity of the child nor marry her"
"Ok, let's see" He said some incantations for some minutes. Then he frowned.
"Great Dibia! What is it, what is wrong" I asked immediately I discovered that something isn't right.
"We can't touch the girl" He revealed.
"Great Dibia, we can't touch a small girl. Is she a witch or an ogbanje? Do you know the person who referred me here. Do you know how many hours it took me to get here and now all you could tell me is that we can't touch her. I didn't ask you to kill her, I only ask you to inflict a curse on her. So what's the big deal in that” I said with rage.
"Woman! Shut your mouth before I shut it permanently for you. I doubt if you know the person that is standing before you. I am Great Dibia! Who do you think you are that you rant before me? No wonder you never had a man to call your own. It's obvious it's this bad character of yours that mess up your life" He said scornfully.

I realized I went overboard too, so I apologized.
"I'm sorry great Dibia, it's just that.... that....

____________________Toyin Taiwo
"I know you want revenge, I understand your grief and I know how pained you are for loosing your sons but you have to be patient at this point"
"I apologize again great Dibia" I said with a bow.
"It's alright. As I was saying before, The girl is untouchable, there are some people like that who can't be harmed especially when there source of protection is their mother"
"Ah! So Amara is a witch! I knew it, she couldn't have taken Afam from me ordinarily. I know she has a stronger power"
"Woman! There you go again. Will you let me land or I'll throw you out of this place"
"I'm sorry great Dibia" I said and he hissed.
"Who told you she's a witch"
"If she's not a witch, what is her source of power then" I asked inquisitively.
"Hmm! If they tell you to serve God you will say God is not as fast as charms. That is why impatient people like you run to people like us"
"Great Dibia, you believe in God?"
"I believe in God, we are only here for lazy people like you who can't pray and wait on God. This God you run from actually knows how to protect those who serve him and also answer their prayers when they call on him.
This woman you are talking about is always on her knees. Praying and interceding for her daughter. That is why the girl is untouchable, God has made a hedge around her" he explained.
"So what do we do now? I was told you are nothing compared to other herbalists around here"
"Oh! So you know that" he said proudly. "We can inflict the curse on her but the curse can only strike on one condition”

I felt a bit relieved but I recalled he mentioned a condition.
"What condition?"
"She can only be curse, if she have sex. I mean pre-marital sex" he informed.
I laughed out loud. The dibia was just watching me strangely.

____________________Toyin Taiwo
"Great Dibia, this is 21st century, have you seen any youth in this generation that doesn't fornicate! This is even simply than I thought. Just inflict the curse and let's get this over with" I said confidently.

Now it was Dibia's turned to laugh as he laughed scornfully. I watched him as he laugh out loud, I was a bit scared though.
"You think I haven't checked for that, I already have the girls bio data revealed to me. For your information, the girl doesn't have sex presently. She is pure! Ukwa!”
"Eziokwu! I'm finished. My enemy will finally rejoice and laugh at me. Is she a Reverend sister! In this day and age!"
"There's is one solution left!"
"Really. Thank you Dibia, daalu. I trust you. I know you are capable" I said praising him.
"I will inflict the curse"
"Perfect!" I said with smile written all over my face.
"But it won't be effective till she have sex. Once she does, gbam! The curse shall stand"
"How long will that be?"
"Is a matter of hope now. Let's just hope she make the greatest mistake of her life that will make her dig her own grave"
"She will make the mistake, the head of my sons we push her to make that mistake"
"Ise......" The dibia added.
The Dibia went into an inner room to perform the necessary ritual after which he inflicted the curse.
“Ego ole?” (how much?) I asked the dibia for the amount for the service he rendered and He named his price.
I paid the dibia the money the amount he demanded for his services. I added extra. He was happy and he told me to always keep in touch with him, he said there are some things he needs to tell me once the effect of the curse kick off and I promise to do so.
“Ekele diligi” (Thank you) I took a bow and left the place.
I drove out of the village after some hours drive, I got back into the City. I decided to stop by at a store to get some things before going home.

____________________Toyin Taiwo
I parked my car and crossed to the other side of the road as the store was on the opposite side. I went in and bought the things I needed to buy and left the store. I made to cross the very busy road back to where I parked my car. I made sure I was on the look out before crossing. As I got to the center of the road all I know is that something hit me and the next thing I was lying on the tarred road.

I was knocked down by a vehicle and I saw myself in the pool of my own blood.
"Is this how my life will end?" I thought as I felt life leaving me gradually. In my next life I'll make sure I do things right. I saw my sons, I wanted to hug them but they begged me to go back.
"Please help me" I said as I closed my eyes weakly.

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by joromi36(f): 11:38am On Mar 13, 2018
Good for her wicked Beatrice!..... this is how all my enemies will perish.

more strength ma'am Rachel

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Nobody: 11:48am On Mar 13, 2018
Thanks for the update.

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by ayotomiwa01(f): 12:53pm On Mar 13, 2018
This is d end of mother witch,it serves her right
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by skubido(m): 1:27pm On Mar 13, 2018
[quote author=skubido post=65737761]





As for Beatrice, mo na leave her make she no change oo. Wetin go kill her don already dey her doorstep. Na to enter remain






if u like dey preach evryday. Evrysecus, pple way go enter hell go still enter


it is Good to serve GOD nd have a good mother. Dat can intercede 4u anytime any day.
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by skubido(m): 1:30pm On Mar 13, 2018
skubido:
Gbam.. Nice reunion

if not for dis menopause tinz nao crystal for dey xpect twins nao





As for Beatrice, mo na leave her make she no change oo. Wetin go kill her dey her don already dey her doorstep. Na to enter remain




HAPPY SUNDAY TO YOU ALL






i talk ham. E don enter nau...
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by skubido(m): 1:39pm On Mar 13, 2018
[quote author=rachealfst post=65795622]Dedication:
StellamarisIII, oyinella, bigfancee, Jasminelove, veenessha, Bhanky23, Stillnigga, princessadeola, hadunni, unpredictedtone, olaolutreasure, Ka52y, skubido





tanks a lot 4d update nd 4d Dedication ma. Am very very Greatful. Jah bless ma.
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Jasminelove(f): 2:01pm On Mar 13, 2018
Mama Rachaelfst thank you so much for the dedication. Pls beatice don't survive dat accident pls just go and meet your sons cos i don't want anything to delay the marriages dat are coming up oo.... More grace and mb to you mama
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by onosj(f): 2:43pm On Mar 13, 2018
even all those yeye herbalists know say dem b small boy 4 were Baba God dey....more mb 2 ur data.
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Peculariconcept(m): 3:32pm On Mar 13, 2018
I've been a reader of all kinds of books. Drama, Prose, Poetry just name it. from great authors and publishers.
I must give you kudos for a great job.
T.T, very soon you shall be celebrated among noble writers around the world. Just keep it up.

For all those who derive joy in causing havoc/destroying other people. Be sure that you end will be even worst.
cheesy wink smiley

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by veenessha(f): 3:56pm On Mar 13, 2018
Aunt Taiwo thanks for the update and dedication. Beatrice ka re ooo.

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by cyndy1000(f): 4:28pm On Mar 13, 2018
Am greatly touched it really pays to serve the Lord. We might be praying thinking God isn't fighting our battle but we can't really see unforseen battles He had fought already . I bless your name O God! Truly it's hard to find someone like Amara, Crystal n Oba in our society.


Thanks Rachelfst may your grace continue to increase.

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by StellamarisIII(f): 5:56pm On Mar 13, 2018
thanks for the mention am glued to my phone all the way

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by queenitee(f): 6:37pm On Mar 13, 2018
Eeyah

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Deckline(m): 6:52pm On Mar 13, 2018
Interesting

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by tillaman(m): 7:16pm On Mar 13, 2018
Hmmmmmm, this is deep, I love the way u are adding the lgbo language, makes it look real, More blessings maaam

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by vickyluvspices(f): 7:34pm On Mar 13, 2018
Jasminelove:
sure i will do a wonderful job so just prepare your money and my bank account will be waiting and am thinking of the colours for the day, ideals pls to make the occasion colourful
Nigerians!and money...no wahala u will get d money from d wedding instigator...non other than rachealfst ofcourse
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Pinkfeet: 8:14pm On Mar 13, 2018
thanks for the update
laugh out loud !!!!! see the end of wicked person

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Jaytoy(f): 8:42pm On Mar 13, 2018
Hmmmm. I need to come out of my shell. I've been a ghost reader and can't take it any more. This is called WAAAAWWWWWUUU. More MB to ur phone madam TY. God bless you for this amazing tantalizer story.

Beabeabeatrice..... No wake up ooo. In fact you just can't wakeup cos the baba Dibia has done it. Do you think he went in to give u charm to destroy my darling Crystal? Ooooowww sorry to burst ur bubbles the charm was meant for you. For you to die and rot in hell. Foolish stupid shide.

Abeg bia na who dey sell Ankara for aso ebi? Abeg u get lace and gele? Weave gele ooooo. I no want Suco ooooo. If u get I want 10bundles that is 150yards with 20gele. I must to distribute. In fact make we buy aso ebi for burial things na say we see the end of our enemy. kiss

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Jasminelove(f): 9:06pm On Mar 13, 2018
Jaytoy:
Hmmmm. I need to come out of my shell. I've been a ghost reader and can't take it any more. This is called WAAAAWWWWWUUU. More MB to ur phone madam TY. God bless you for this amazing tantalizer story.

Beabeabeatrice..... No wake up ooo. In fact you just can't wakeup cos the baba Dibia has done it. Do you think he went in to give u charm to destroy my darling Crystal? Ooooowww sorry to burst ur bubbles the charm was meant for you. For you to die and rot in hell. Foolish stupid shide.

Abeg bia na who dey sell Ankara for aso ebi? Abeg u get lace and gele? Weave gele ooooo. I no want Suco ooooo. If u get I want 10bundles that is 150yards with 20gele. I must to distribute. In fact make we buy aso ebi for burial things na say we see the end of our enemy. kiss
babe you funny no be small lol....... Well when you are ready just let me know so dat we will discuss prices
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(f): 9:11pm On Mar 13, 2018
Peculariconcept:
I've been a reader of all kinds of books. Drama, Prose, Poetry just name it. from great authors and publishers.
I must give you kudos for a great job.
T.T, very soon you shall be celebrated among noble writers around the world. Just keep it up.

cheesy wink smiley
Amen to your prayers, Thanks so much. God bless you.
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(f): 9:13pm On Mar 13, 2018
tillaman:
Hmmmmmm, this is deep, I love the way u are adding the lgbo language, makes it look real, More blessings maaam
Amen!!! Thanks.

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