Beautiful work of art! Learnt a lot from this piece. The Lord is your fountain of knowledge ma, keep doing His good works.

thanks a lot @rachaelfst, this was not just a story but a ministration. I hope youths will take heed and flee from all forms of sexual immorality as in the end not everyone will be as lucky as Oba. more grace and greater heights sis.

Thanks ma'am for this wonderful story. I appreciate your time and effort in writing this story may God reward you.

Such a nice inspiring story. Thanks OP

GOD BLESS YOU RACHEALFST... GOD BLESS YOU.

Premarital sex can truncate the plans of God for one's life. Thanks for this beautiful piece. More wisdom

This is am a great work ma'am. More ink to your pen

Learnt a lot... God bless you

It will be very unfair not to commend the author and this wonderful piece of art...
More inspiration to u dear... Anxiously waiting for another great work from u.
Thanks a lot

Awwwww......God bless and bless and bless you

Wow! Happy things turn around for the better
miss rachealfst when is tne next one dropping cuz i can't wait to be spellbound by your narrations of the story .....
may God grant you more wisdom and may your library of inspiration never runs dry
thanks for the wonderful message tou passed across with this story tou deserve an #accolade [color=#000099][/color][font=Lucida Sans Unicode][/font][right][/right]

Thanks for the beautiful story lines, with a lot of lesson learnt.

I gbadu ur skills

wow!!!!
you are such a good writer.....more wisdom n knowledge..... thanks for the update.. you are simply the best

Thanks ..

God crown your effort with success

Great story..thumbs up dear....vry educational. ...a wake up call

chaii,,see story! sorry 4 nt commenting since,,#NIGERIA_YOUTHS_ARE_LAZY

Thumbs up Mama .lesson learnt

Hmmm

Wow!
This is fantabulous. Very interesting and eyes opener, I've learnt some lessons. Thanks and God bless. More auction.

rachealfst:
This is not an update on Broken Hedge. This is my own story.
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Who did it?
Jesus!
Oh my God!
Wow!

waoh he is. the way maker, always making ways where there seems to be no way.

indeed oluwatoyin( he alone is worthy of our praise)
so happy for you sis.

shouts of testimonies, joy wont cease from your mouth.




you won't imagine i just discovered this wonderful a story. thanks to nairaland for putting it on d front page today.

y didn't remember to alert me wen u started d story. now i have missed a lot. but will catch up soon.


wonderful story sis.u never disappoint us

Thank you ma'am for this beautiful write up. May God continue to be with you.

This story is cool but u never completed the stories for once .


CRYSTAL

I looked myself up in the mirror while putting finishing touches to my light make up. I turned around to check out myself one more time when I was done and deep inside me I say thank you to my maker who wonderfully made a tall, slim, fair, set and beautiful woman out of me. Like my friends use to tease God actually took his time when creating me.

I checked my Casio Ladies digital wrist watch. I have 10minutes left to leave the house. I hurriedly put on my Christian Dior sling back heels. I use my finger to move the elastic sling to the back of my ankle. I did same for the second foot. All suit up and ready for work, I wore Calvin Klein's forbidden Euphoria perfume and left my room. Then I bumped into my Mum”

“Watch out young woman!”

“Sorry….Good morning mum”

“Otutuoma (Good Morning)my darling. Hmm.. looking good as always”

“Thanks mum” I said flashing my white dentition.

“Set for work?”

“Yes mum. You?”

“Today is teacher’s day, I won’t be leaving the house until 10am we have a small get together in school”

“Happy teacher’s day Mummy. You are the best teacher in the whole wide world” I hugged her. I’m not flattering her, that’s the truth and all her students adores her.

“Thank you my darling”

“And thanks for everything you taught me mum. Academically, morally, mentally socially, spiritually and all”

“I’m glad you never throw them into thrash nwa(child). Look at you, you’ve grown into a fine and independent woman”

“All thanks to you Mum. Now, I need to run”

“I made scrambled eggs and toast” She informed.

“For me! is it because today is teacher’s day? What happens to your ‘you don’t cook, you don’t eat rule'

“Let’s say I’m celebrating teacher’s day” She smiled.

“Oh! I’ll pack it, thanks. Bye Mum, see you in the evening” I said and gave her a side hug.

"Ka e mesia (good bye)" she replied.

I took my car keys and left the house. I turned on the ignition of my Toyota avensis and zoomed out. As the clinical data manager of one of the the top ten pharmaceutical company in the world, I had a major role to play in the company. Chemochezzy Pharm is a household name in Nigeria and all over the world, owned by a foreigner.

Fortunately for me, I got the job based on merit, no connection, nothing. I was promoted 10 months after I joined the company with a six digit basic salary and jumbo allowances. I was passionate with my job. With my second class upper I never thought I could get the job when graduates with first class also applied for the job. Although, I already had my masters degree before I got the job. Fortunately for me at the interview stage, I won the hearts of the Interviewers.

My job was so demanding that I hardly had time to run personal business like some of my friends. I went through trainings, I just concluded a program that got me certified by the Clinical data management. I'm currently running another professional course. The competition here in the company is very high. So you have to roll up your sleeves and get your hands dirty, I mean work hard. You have to keep up with standard certification if you want to stay afloat, have the top post and be relevant in the pharmaceutical industry at large. I willing to do all this because I love what I do, I love my job. I have big dreams. I want to be a consultant so I plan on starting my PhD soon. There are heights I want to achieve.

In few years time I see my self as the minister for health at state level and more. Like I said I have a big dreams and I have to add value to myself, so I need all the necessary qualifications in case opportunity presents itself in the future.

My mum had two large stores in the house, she gave me one of the stores while she used the other to run her supermarket. I just opened a very big pharmaceutical store which is really thriving well but it is solely run by mum, because I don't have the time. Since I have enough money, My mum we never allow me leave alone till I get married and the truth is that if she allow me, I can’t leave her too. We only have each other. I decided to invest with my money. I also bought shares in the company.

I have a meeting that morning by 9:00am. I drove into my personal parking space. It was labeled CDM (Clinical data manager) I walked into the company using the Head of departments elevator. I stepped into the elevator tagged HODs only.

Click.. I was already on the 5th floor which lead directly to my office. My secretary stood up immediately she sighted me and walked up to me. She helped me with my hand bag and laptop bag.
“Good morning ma”

“Good morning Silver”
I stepped into my office settled down and prayed briefly. I checked the time I still have less than an hour to brush over my presentation. I had done my homework well and can’t afford to fumble. The CEO and the board of directors which consists of whites are all going to be present at the meeting. I had to give my best.
My secretary was still standing in front of me. “Anything?”

“Your schedule ma.. ”

“Cancel all my schedule for the day” I cut in. You of all people know how long the executives meeting takes. Only God knows when I’ll come back into this office today.

“I understand ma”

“Once you notice it’s getting late and I’m not yet back, just go home so it won’t be like the last time”

“ I’ll wait for you ma”

“If it’s fine with you” I said and dismissed her.

Let me use this spare time to introduce myself. My name is Crystal Monachisom Ejiofor. I’m 27 years old. Ejiofor is my mum’s maiden name. I answer my maternal grandfather’s name. I’m the only child of my mother. Well if you are wondering about my father, he doesn’t exist at least to me. He abandoned my Mum 28 years ago after putting her in the family way. It was later my mum discovered he had a family, a wife and a kid. She played and fooled my mother. He denied ever knowing my mum and denied my paternity. She took up the responsibility. Thank God she has a stable job. She teaches in a federal government secondary school and never married till date.
At 26 she was already a single mother who gave up her bright future for me. I never met him in person my I mum only she’s e pictures. He tried, he’s handsome no wonder he was able to sweep my mum off her feet. My mum is beautiful and fair even at age 53. I took after her, the only difference is that I’m tall while she’s average height and I’m very sure I took after that apologetic father of mine. Men still made advances at her even at her age. From the landlords in our estate, her school principal even some divorcee and widower in the church. They all wanted her for a wife.
The knocked on my door brought me back to the present. It was my secretary, she brought in a cup of coffee.



_______________Toyin Taiwo
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OMG! finally it ended as tragic-comedy, some might not be this lucky but what matters most after the reunion is the Love without blemish.

@Toyinfst
Thanks so much for channelling your distinguished stories into alligning the continuous moral insanity, robbing off destinies in our socity.

Atleast, let it be on history to remembered that "BROKEN HEDGE" was the first story I read to the end, back to back, with no atom of regret.

Funny enough! My name was among the names of the characters (and the particular character didn't disappoint, thank GOD!. LOL.)

Almost everyone have been wishing you Blessing from GOD، but prayer is may all the blesssing professed on you and your family never hestate to manifest in JESUS' NAME.

To all fans of "Broken hedge": You're all blessed also!, but please don't forget to stop over for the next story.

Unpredictedone
RECHEALFST's minister of information (Pls no one should mistake me for Lai mohammed's son ooo)

unpredictedone:
OMG! finally it ended as tragic-comedy, some might not be this lucky but what matters most after the reunion is the Love without blemish.

@Toyinfst
Thanks so much for channelling your distinguished stories into alligning the continuous moral insanity, robbing off destinies in our socity.

Atleast, let it be on history to remembered that "BROKEN HEDGE" was the first story I read to the end, back to back, with no atom of regret.

Funny enough! My name was among the names of the characters (and the particular character didn't disappoint, thank GOD!. LOL.)

Almost everyone have been wishing you Blessing from GOD، but prayer is may all the blesssing professed on you and your family never hestate to manifest in JESUS' NAME.

To all fans of "Broken hedge": You're all blessed also!, but please don't forget to stop over for the next story.

Unpredictedone
RECHEALFST's minister of information (Pls no one should mistake me for Lai mohammed's son ooo)

Thanks you so much. Amen to all your prayers. God bless you my minister of information (lol)

HAPPY belated birthday to olatex25. I'm so sorry I missed your birthday. Wishing you long life and prosperity. Greater heights in Jesus name.

@rachaelfst nice story I happened to see this story on fp on Sunday night and with just a click I was wowed. Though I missed lots of updates even the concluding part cos it seems you have removed them. Luckily for me, am the kind of person that reads the end of a story before starting it, which is why i was able to know the end before the beginning (omo alpha&omega). I really love your work and appreciate what you are doing here.Though Anike is one story I didn't get to finish.

Am not a follower of the literature session of NL but I would really love if you could mention me on your next work. The comments here are so hilarious, made me wish I was here from the beginning, though I don't like suspense kwa. Thanks much for an interesting read. More ink to ur pen.

rachealfst:
HAPPY belated birthday to olatex25. I'm so sorry I missed your birthday. Wishing you long life and prosperity. Greater heights in Jesus name.

Amin.... thanks sis

All the way, the story finally came to an end.. kudos to u miss, wishing u all d best dear ... lesson well learnt

yeah......even though I read as a ghostreader but hmmmmmm.......lessons learnt, I enjoyed every bit of it, more grease 2 your elbow, more wisdom, more blessings, #grace is all that is needed

may GOD bless the writer of this story........it is educative.....we don't only learn in school....we also learn from every aspect of life.....FACT

Hmmmmmnnn.... Aunty mi weldone, thanks 4 dis masterpiece, may God continue to increase ynu in all ramification and may the source of your wisdom never dry.