Maravel:
Keep it coming You are doing well Tracyberry Kudus

thanks i appreciate ur comments

nice write up.. I appreciate your good writing skills and I hope we will see more updates frequently and hope you will complete this nice piece of work...

rukidanty:
nice write up.. I appreciate your good writing skills and I hope we will see more updates frequently and hope you will complete this nice piece of work...

thanks and i will

E be like say only Tracy waka come the university . one trouble after the other.

tracyberry:
On thursday when she had gotten better and was cleaning her room when her phone rang when she checked who it is...

On thursday, she was healthier and got down to cleaning her dusty room while her phone rang. She checked who the caller was...

Tracy don enter ham oooo


OP Weldon oooo.

tracyberry:
Ella: Please kidnap (mention) Bluehaven (me) in this your car.

Nice story you've gat here... Keep it balling hard. *winks* Don't forget to mention me in your updates o.

welldone iam impressed.

tracyberry:


When i said criticism was allowed, i never meant what you typed above, if i made a mistake with my sentence contruction tell me don't judge me

Cool response...

tracyberry:

thanks and i will

are we hoping for any updates this night? please oo

rukidanty:
are we hoping for any updates this night? please oo

yes i will update soon

Bluehaven:
Nice story you've gat here... Keep it balling hard. *winks* Don't forget to mention me in your updates o.

thanks and i will

Bluehaven:


On thursday, she was healthier and got down to cleaning her dusty room while her phone rang. She checked who the caller was...

thanks for correction

Continuation

Ella: although all the girls face weren't familar i could remember their faces if i see them again

Betty: i did recognise one, she is my course mate (mass com) her name is vera, i was shocked when i saw her among the girls because she hardly talks to anyone in my dept, but i have heard rumor of people she killed

Amaka: can you pls stop talking, ur scaring us and making tracy uncomfortable but we re so glad nothing happened to you

Tracy was touched by her word but felt suspicious cause right from the day one when she started living with them she wasn't friendly neither did she give any room for chit chat, there was once a time she had an argument with betty and told her.

*remembrance*
Tracy: (loud voice) i don't like you or wanna have anything to do with you, being in this room with you girls wasn't my choice, so stay the Bleep out of my life or anything that has to do with me or else i would make you spend the night in a hospital bed and i will gladly pay the bill.

they didn't fight but tracy knew her words had increase the hatred the girls had for her but she caredless.

Continuation

*Back to the present*

Tracy felt happy and sad at the time, she was happy because for once she felt like they cared for her but felt sad because of what she has done in the past and also the trouble coming her way but for once in her life she forgot about everyone she cared about and decided to meet the girls, hiding and running wasn't an option for her and those were the things especially when girls were involved, she had never feared or ran away from a fight that.included her fellow girl.

Tracy: so you guys were really worried about me

Betty: don't include me, i didn't care nor worry about you
Ella: you can lie for africa, she cried when she heard that you were kidnapped by some thugs who hid their face behind a mask, but now i remembered can you pls tell us what happened and how you escaped. (All this while tracy was talking to her rommies the crowd of girls gathered round them and quietly listened)

Tracy (laughs) well it wasn't a thug that kidnapped me or should i call it a cute thug

Amaka : it seems they gave her a love potion ( they all laughed)

tracyberry:

yes i will update soon

thanks for the update

Continuation

Bluehaven update don land ni

Tracy: actually i pranked by my course mate max and according to him he did so.cause i avoided speaking to him but pls nobody should ask me why.

the girls in the crowd couldn't help but question her
Girl 1: wait a sec, are you talking about hot max asin the one in law dept
Tracy: (in a confused but funny looks she answered the girl) Yea
Girl 2: O.M.G ur so lucky

Tracy looked at the girls as if they were going crazy although she knew max was super cute but didn't know girls could talk about him as if he is a celebrity so she decided to question them.

Tracy: what's so special about him ( immediately she said those words all the girls turned and looked her like she was going crazy including her room mates before a girl in the room broke the silence after five.secs of starring at her)

Girl 1: are you for real or ur saying this to act like ur not crushing on him
Girl 2: no offence but do you have a browsing phone
Tracy: yes i do
Girl 2: and yet you ask what's special about him, that guy is perfect he is cute, intelligent and his father owns the biggest oil company in Nigeria while his mom is among african's best fashion designers.

ride on.. I am waiting and love the story so much.. more grace to your pen

rukidanty:
thanks for the update

no, thank you for reading, i appreciate the fact you demand for more even when there re a lots of error.

Continuation

Betty: yeah the guy IS perfect
Tracy just starred all the girls as they praised micheal but she quickly remembered the fort coming moot court competition and told the girls to leave.

Tracy: Girl i thank you all for gathering here to support me ( or gossip about me she said it in her mind), i wish we could talk all day but the day is gone and it 8:23pm, i gotta rest pls excuse us

Ella: but tracy (before she could finish her statement tracy signed her to keep quiet)

the girls left and tracy jumped on her bed,she lay down and slept like she was given a sleeping potion, she didn't bother bathing or changing her clothes she had plans of burning the mid-night candle so she needed to sleep early.

*****
Tracy was in the company of Vera-d-terror and girls smoking and dancing when nikky came and pointed a gun at tracy.

Nikky: i told you there will be blood when we meet

suddenly blood was flowing slowly towards tracy's direction and when she looked up, vera was on her right hand side while max stood at her left hand side, they both held her hand when suddenly tracy woke up and found out it was a dream.

tracyberry:

Tracy just starred all the girls as they praised Bluehaven, but she quickly remembered...

Nice updates you're making tracy...keep it up, but don't forget that you really need to meet up writing standard.
For now, you are still a novice in the writer's world. And you can only get to be a professional after so many levels like that of the 2go Social Network/Media.
*winks*

wow ok ooo i wish i can just wake up nd see myself outa naija

XFlame:
wow ok ooo i wish i can just wake up nd see myself outa naija

hmmmmmm oya sleep na

tracyberry:


thanks for correction

don't tell me u will go with her crappy correction? person wey dey correct u sef didnt get d tenses right. "while her phone rang"?

dejavuh0007:

don't tell me u will go with her crappy correction? person wey dey correct u sef didnt get d tenses right. "while her phone rang"?

ok

Nice story keep it coming

I like the story line. pls make the updates longer not like bible verse.

I'm something is gonna happen....... I'm suspecting initiation here

Continuation

Tracy woke up sweating and gasp for air like a girl running a maraton race, she sat on her bed thinking what the dream could be all about, she didn't bother praying, tracy is a girl who believe only in the existence of God she isn't a dedicated christian.
Tracy checked the time and saw it was 3:10am and she.wasn't feeling anymore so she brought her books and phone to read, she use her phone to research for something she couldn't understand and read for 2hrs before going back to sleep.

******
Tracy was woken by ella by 8:20am

Ella: babe wake up
Tracy: huh what
Ella: it 8:20, aren't you going for lecture today (immediately ella said the time tracy jumped out of the bed cursing herself for sleeping without setting an alarm)

Tracy jumped out of bed to fetch water only to meet a long que which signified her lateness has been written by the devil, she felt like crying but lucky for her ella had water so she gave her out of pity.
Ella left for class while Tracy quickly brushed her teeth and bathe before she realised she hasn't ironed her she white and there was no light or time so she wore it like that and rushed class.

Continuation

She got to hall only see everyone starring at her as if she came out of the garbage, max saw her and put on a smile to relax and calm her but she only smiled when she saw wasn't yet in class so she quickly went and sat beside max while the following conversation took place.

Max: morning sunshine

Tracy: that's not funny

Max: am not trying to be funny just being nice, anyway i hope you burned the mid-night candle to get some upstair (laughs, tracy looked at him and he quickly realise she wasn't smiling so he became serious)

Tracy:well i read my books for two hours and made some research which made the.topic easier to understand.

Max: that's good you do know we need to present ourselves before he can select the ones gong to represent us but i hope you will be selected.
The lecturer walks in, he apologises for being tardy and quickly got down to business, he told them to come and present their assignment.

thanks for the updates and though it was short but interesting

Continuation

The lecturer had selected 20 students and gave then an.assignment which they were to present before him so he could select the best students represent Unilag in the international moot court competition and he gave them an assignment,the topic was about the british colonial rule, it was more like a history assignment whereby the student have or defend or oppose the colonialist with their points but they weren't grouped so they had to present their assignment one by one after which the professor will pick the best candidates.
They all went one at a time and presented their points, tracy choosed to go last while max was the fifth person, tracy was quiet impressed when max presented his and opposed the evil deeds of the british stating from lord lugard to lyttleton system of rule so tracy decided to use his points against him and tracy was the only girl who acted as a defender to the british rule.