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i hope new update is coming

Stranac:
you are here

Op you are truly too much

OP more grace to your pen. my best episode so far

alexistaiwo:

tomoro?

iListen:
Wow! Just Wow!

The matter tire me.

Stranac:
tomoro?

What's happening tomorrow?

Op I don catch you again viewing

op you're good. that's all I got to say

OP, i will not be surprised if your story happened in the dream... at the end of your story, you will say something like waking up from sleep

thumbs up bro...

Mike should remain there, at least Amaka, Sandra Ruth are not there to worry about,
but I know Mike will soon see the gay commissioner's son he killed.

sirLeeem:
i hope new update is coming

Can you imagine I couldn't watch my zeeworld episodes last night,
Was awake all night reading as if I had exams this morning.
Still waiting for new episode

dear op.
you have succeeded in your plot to pin us down with this Story. please come and wrap up everything.
yours sincerely
faithful readers.

this story pass super Story

Excellent last episode.

lilyheaven:
Mike should remain there, at least Amaka, Sandra Ruth are not there to worry about,
but I know Mike will soon see the gay commissioner's son he killed.

that will atleast be intresting may be another fight will spring up or that will send the bleepboy back to earth...and u OP kwantinu ehn u hia? keep doing what u know best more eInk to ur ePen!

I
OP, after reading this your ghost episode, i have started suspecting a guy in my neighborhood, i only runs into him late at night once in a while and he never tell me his house number.........

" before we go I want to ask the boy something". Buga said and bent down to face the little boy. " can you remember your daddys face?

The boy looked at me, i nodded my head to him. He seem to be searching in his head for it, then said in frustration.

" I can't! I don't know why I can't "

I bent beside him and said.

" if you really want to see your dad, try harder. You just have to try "

He searched tightening his face, then suddenly his face was becoming lighter. Buga held my hand and said.

" it's time " .

Just then we saw ourselves in a cemetery where the boys father was talking with few friends. The boy seeing his father shouted running to him.

" daddy! Daddy am here"

The little boy fell on the otherside and the father hardly noticed his presence. He looked surprised, stood up and went close to his father crying. " daddy am here " but the man kept talking with his friends.

" this is the part I hate" the fat man said, turning away.

I quietly went to the boy and tried to let him know he is dead, but couldn't form out words. Suddenly Buga showed up beside me and said to the boy.

" let's go, you have seen your dad and he can't see you because you're dead ".

I looked at Buga in anger, but he started walking away. I quickly carried the crying boy and followed him.

" why do you have to say that to the boy? " I yelled.

" that's because in this side of the world, no one is a kid" Buga said.

Just then he dodged behind a car and dragged me with him.

" what's that?! " I backed.

" bazimzz! " he whispered.

We looked from behind the car and saw four giants like the ones we saw at the other side. They seem to be vigilantly searching for something.

" who are they looking for ?" I asked feeling my legs shaking.

I never knew ghost could get scared as well.

" the likes of us" Buga said, then turn to me , " do you know what happens if the gets us? "

I nodded and said " prohell "

" yeah, avoid them! "

We remained hiding, looking keenly at the giants. Then suddenly someone shouted " grifti! " behind us. We turned abruptly, it was a giant standing beside us.

" run! " the fat man said and disappeared.

I carried the little boy and ran while the giants chased after me screaming. " grifti! " in a roaring voice.

His one step is ten times mine. I knew I couldn't outrun him so I closed my eyes and quickly imagined a place, the only place that came to mind was the market I first appeared and I was suddenly there.

I quickly ran into a compound and entered the house. A man laid down on the bed smoking listening to a loud music from an home Theatre. I left the room to another room, there I and the boy rested till it was dark.

" I want to see my daddy?" the boy kept saying and crying.

There was nothing I could do for him, I had exhausted all explanations yet he kept crying.

A toddler cript into the room and was looking at the little boy . The toddler laughed and cript closer to the boy who just looked at the baby as though he was surprised the baby could see him. A lady entered the room, picked up the toddler who was pointing at the little boy, but she didn't take note of anything . Another younger girl a teenager rushed in, shut the door and began talking with her boyfriend whispering peering cautiously at the door.

" hello Mickey.... The result was positive! ....my daddy is going to kill me.... What am I going to do?!... ..I told you to use protection.... You are a liar!! ...am dead..... "

As I listened to the girl with keen interest, I heard my name faintly as though someone was calling me from a distance. I tried to listen very attentively to the voice, it sounded familiar. I stood up walked outside of the house to the compound, the voice seem to be crying and calling my name. The emotion and the love in the voice was too strong, I listened more attentively now, it appeared to be two female voices, mum and Ruth's. I suddenly felt like crying. I looked up to the sky and saw their faces, mum sitting and Ruth standing beside her. I felt like touching mums face but it disappeared. I sat on the ground weeping.

After a while I went back to the room and the boy was missing. I searched throughout the house but couldn't find him. I ran out of the house into the street calling.

" little boy!".

" aren't you joining the walk? " a voice said.

I quickly turned and saw an elderly woman who concentrated looking into the thin air and drawing something with her hands in the air. I ran to her and asked after the boy.

" nobody is a kid here. Please l am going to join them in the walk " she said still searching for something in the air.

I looked at her curiously as she seriously kept searching .

" what are you looking for? " I asked.

" the door. It's supposed to be somewhere here. That's where I came from".

Suddenly I heard a loud bell. The woman then shouted.

" oh my god! I can't find it anymore. Please can I share yours? But I don't have anymore coin on me". She begged with desperation.

" I am new here and have spent more than people that have spent years here. If I continue like this I'll go broke. Why don't you use the coin you wanted to use for your door on mine?. "

" that's because you don't pay to and fro on a same door, except you want to make use of another. Please half dead. If I don't go back I'll be locked up in prohell. I suffered so much in my life time I don't want to suffer here again please help me"

I felt pity for her, dipped my hand in my pocket and gave her a coin, she thanked me and followed me to the market place where I first appeared . I stretched my hands and began looking for the door. Suddenly I felt something like wind on my hands.

" I think I have found it" I said to the woman who was standing behind me.

" please let me go first " she said moving in front of me.

I gave way for her to see how it's done. She threw the coin inside the place I felt the wind, and it became evident and opened wide. She pushed her hand inside and disappeared. I followed her method and saw myself at the other side with the two giants standing adjacent each other. They took no notice of us as we rushed to join the walk.

We trekked for a very long time this time, I looked for the elderly woman but she was no where to be found. So I kept walking.

So many half dead were gradually becoming invisible like the rest. And as soon as they turned invisible they began wailing. It was very heartbreaking watching them cry. I too was scared because I didn't know if I would return.

I suddenly sighted a light in front. Before it was a very large ocean , the biggest I had ever seen. Somany giants stood around it collecting coins before allowing people pass through in a canoe, and others without coin where sent on another route, which looked like walking round the ocean, which may take ages to attain. My kind were asked to enter a small room. Many came out, many didn't.

It got to my turn, a giant ushered me in. As soon as I was in, the room changed . It was a room beautified with all kinds of beautiful things I can't really describe. Every furniture were made from some kind of material that shone so bright. The place was bigger than it looked from outside. The bodies of the ghost there looked very bright and their faces glowed like the sun. Their bodies illuminated the whole place. They stood adjacent each other making a pathway inbetween them. That's where anyone who comes in must pass through leading to a mighty chair, the biggest I had ever seen. It glittered like diamond. A ghost sat on it. He shone so bright I couldn't see him. The distance from him to us was like ten poles. Still his light was blinding.

" Mike! " the ghost on the chair called.

His voice was like a thunder the same time calm and gentle, i just can't put it in the right words.

I walked closer, shielding my eyes with my hands from the bright light he emitted.

" lets see your coin " he said.

I emptied all the coin on me in a golden bowl in front the mighty chair but ten poles away. One of the ghost standing came and counted it, took all and weighed it on a golden scale beside the bowl. It weighed little. He looked at the ghost in the mighty chair and said.

" he is weightless "

" you will be taken to prohell so you can quickly become a real ghost. After that, you will join your colleagues on their journey ". The ghost on the chair said.

A giant immediately started walking inbetween the standing ghost to me. All I could think about was my mum, the reality of never seeing her again. I knelt down abruptly begging in tears, but the giant took me up like a piece of paper, carrying me to an exit that looked dark from the opening. Then suddenly, I remembered I had another coin ( the fire incident ) I kept in a different pocket . I quickly shouted.

" I have another coin! I have another coin! "

" stop! " the ghost on the chair ordered.

The giant brought me back and dropped me right where he carried me from. I quickly took out the coin with a shaky hand and handed it to the ghost who first weighed it. It scale recorded 70kg. The ghost looked at the one on chair and said.

" 70kg"

" your good deed has saved you. Now go back and wait until your body responds to treatment " the ghost on the chair said.
They handed me back other coins and kept that of the fire incident.

Strange things are bound and stranger things are bound to come...... Ghost mode deactivated!... Thumps up.

chaiii
u too much .
what a story !
keep it rolling

this is why its advisable to do good all the time .


"my beloved brethren , lets not be weary in doing good. for your labour of love is not in vain in the Lord . " (1 Corinthians 15:58)

@op forget this ghost thing go straight to the main gist.sandra will jail all of them

Op so you get mind continue this ghost episode, it quite interesting sha cos I know it gonna turn out positive, boss no dey die for movie nah abi...I still like the suspense despite your ghost mood, thumbs up!!!

Very interesting read.
Aitee1, Long time no chat! How are you doing ufan?

Barezzi:
Very interesting read.
Aitee1 long time no chat! How are you doing ufan?

I'm good, you?

breath taking episodes

Hmm.

topherchris819 is viewing

Mike Mike, you are such a good guy judging from the way you have been helping people,
your goodness will see you through just that you have to calm down and settle yourself to have a good family.

hope the little boy was able to find the door

SmellingAnus:
OP, i will not be surprised if your story happened in the dream... at the end of your story, you will say something like waking up from sleep

thumbs up bro...

if that happens eh


This whole thing na fkup

igwec3:
@op forget this ghost thing go straight to the main gist.sandra will jail all of them

I tire ooo

The suspense is too deep, I can even hear my heart pound

Op,you just gave me a food for thought, what will it be like if we are all dead.let think about how we are dealing with others.