jane you mess up big time, shadii take heart bro.

Shawen99:
jane you mess up big time, shadii take heart bro.

so what's should Jane do now to bring back shedrack?

next update next week

Why na. Bros abeg I don dey wait since

carloz685:
Why na. Bros abeg I don dey wait since

oya I go fasten up my writing maybe on Sunday I go update.

Hislordship12:
oya I go fasten up my writing maybe on Sunday I go update.

.thanks man

Hislordship12:
so what's should Jane do now to bring back shedrack?

since shedrack mum new they weir dating then jane should ask her to talk to shadrack on her behalf

Shawen99:
since shedrack mum new they weir dating then jane should ask her to talk to shadrack on her behalf

awwwwwwwn that's so nice.
but read up the new update and you'll be surprised

Chapter 27
[Get out]

Still on Jane's point of view.

“What the hell is wrong with you?" I yelled at Rick. “Did you not just hear me say I HAVE A BOYFRIEND? he's already mad at me for hanging out with you!" I looked out my window into Shedrack's. I caught his gaze. he stared at me with watery eyes and then shut his blinds.

Okay did shedrack not just see that I pushed Rick off of me? Why is she so mad? God I literally just proved I don't like Rick by doing that.

“And I'm much better than your boyfriend."

"You are not! Seriously what's up with you today?"

“I'm handsome, smarter, funner, I could treat you better, I wouldn't get jealous, and well I obviously have better eyes than shedrack." he laughed.

“Shedrack is the most perfect human being I've ever seen and I could stare shedrack eyes all day, thank you very much!"

“At least my dad loves me enough to actually be home."

"Okay that's it, get the hELL out of my house." I pointed to the door.

“I can't leave without a kiss." Before I could yell at her again she slammed me against the wall. Rick was the same height as me. he moved my hair back.

“Stop." I tried to walk away.

“I don't think so." he laughed and tried to kiss me again. I pushed him off of me as hard as I could and he fell to the wooden floor. I quickly grabbed scissors from my desk.

“GET THE HELL OUT." he slowly stood up.

“I'll be back." he threatened and walked out. I lowered the scissors and slid down the wall. I took a deep breathe and looked back out my window. Shedrack's blinds were out of the way and I saw him looking at me again. he frowned and faded from the window.

Why is he frowning when I obviously don't like Rick? I'm not cheating on him. I mean Rick clearly has some issues but that's not my fault. Jeez. Boys are so complicated.

I sighed as I got up and ran outside. I knocked on her blue door almost ten times before his mom opened it.

“he doesn't want to talk to you right now."

“Please please please let me in. I am so sorry." Shedrack's mom seemed a little upset but she moved aside, letting me in anyway. I instantly ran up the steps and knocked on shedrack's door.

“Shedii?" he didn't answer. “Emory please let me in. I just want to explain." I heard him sniffle. “I'm coming in." I opened his door and walked in.

he was sitting on the floor looking at himself in the mirror. I found a tear falling down his cheek. I stared at him for thirty seconds. It was very quiet.

“Why didn't you believe me?" he softly asked me. Maybe he did have a valid reason to be mad at me. I wouldn't want him hanging out with someone who liked him. Things happen.

"Shedii, I'm so so so sorry. I don't know why." I sat down next to him and wiped the tear away.

“I'm not accepting your apology. Go be with Rick." he said without moving his glance from the mirror.

“shedrack as you can clearly see, I don't like him. I pushed him away."

“You probably saw me watching so you needed to pretend."

“shedrack I'm serious. You're my everything."

“If I was your everything, maybe you would've thought to ask me where I went after camp. Or if I was alive. I could've been kidnapped dammit! You didn't know where I was but you didn't care. You just wanted to hang out with Rick. You care about him more than me."

"That's not true. If I wanted him, I wouldn't be here right now trying to fix my mistake with the most amazing boy in the world." I wiped another tear away from his cheek.

“Just leave me alone."

“shedii, don't you get it? I only want to be with you. If I had to choose between you and anyone else in the world, I would choose you. Even over Bill gate. Maybe." he half smiled. “I'm so sorry I didn't realize it before. You had a right to be jealous but I didn't listen. I'm sorry. This won't ever happen again. This is one of the worst mistakes of my life."

he shook his head still while looking at the mirror.

“I was wrong. I realize that now. I wish I realized it earlier." This time he shook his head up and down. "Does that mean you forgive me? And we can go watch a movie?"

Shedrack smiled and turned his glance from the mirror. I sighed in relief. She forgives me, thank God. I didn't think he would for a moment. he leaned over close to my face. Right in the perfect moment to kiss him, he stopped me. he then whispered something to me.

“Get. Out."

TBC.

is shedrack right to be angry?

Hislordship12:
is shedrack right to be angry?

100% right to be angry with you

shedrack is over reacting, she did prove that she is not dating rick by coming to apologize for her mistakes. shedii please accept her apology before you regret not doing so.

Shawen99:
shedrack is over reacting, she did prove that she is not dating rick by coming to apologize for her mistakes. shedii please accept her apology before you regret not doing so.

awwwwwwwn.
thanks for commenting

rukidanty:
100% right to be angry with you

rukidanty:
100% right to be angry with you

please have mercy on me

Nice Write Up, Keep It Going. More Grease To Ur Elbow.. Chop Kiss

Shedi should forgive her na, atleast she didn't only apologised but remorseful too!

Ekunsticated:
Nice Write Up, Keep It Going. More Grease To Ur Elbow.. Chop Kiss

thanks dear

izaray:
Shedi should forgive her na, atleast she didn't only apologised but remorseful too!

dearie I pray so too

Chapter 28
[Forgiveness]

BACK TO SHEDRACK'S POINT OF VIEW.

"Shedrack please. Please don't make me leave. I'll literally do anything to make you forgive me." Jane looked distraught. Maybe at this point I was over reacting. She obviously feels terrible. But I'm still upset. 'You didn't let me finish. Get out and get me a dog."

“What?" Dogs are the best thing on the planet.

"I love dogs. I want a dog."

“Are you saying that if I leave right now and come back with a dog, you'll forgive me?"

“I'll think about it." I smiled at her. She smirked and sprinted out of my house.

“Hey mom!" I called her. "We're getting a dog!" She matched in my room.

“You are taking care of it. Not me." She walked back out. I took a breathe and jumped onto my bed. I checked my phone and it was only 10 am.

I think I fell back asleep thinking about Jane and trying to convince myself to let it go. Something small jumped on me and I opened my eyes.

"OH MY GOD YOU ACTUALLY GOT ME A DOG." I screamed at Jane. There was a little tiny dog licking my arm. She was black and white and had one blue eye and one brown eye. Her little paws were exploring my bed.

“Do you forgive me?" She asked quietly. I looked up at Jane and she was holding a rose and an ‘I'm sorry' card. I smiled bigger than I thought possible.

“What breed is she?" I asked, stalling her question.

“Part Border Collie, Australian Shepherd, and Labrador mix. Within a year and a half she'll be as big as us. Well as big as you. You're short."

“Shush yourself I'm tall enough." The little puppy walked back over to me. "Oh my god. Oh my god." I looked up at Jane again. “Okay I love you." She laughed in relief and laid down next to me. “So, can we keep her?"

"Yes. Yes we can."

"I can't believe you actually got me a dog." I took the roses and her card,". And how'd you convince whoever was driving you, since you can't drive for your life, to let you have her in their car?" We laughed.

“Well I love you. And I gave the Uber driver a tip."

“Seriously one day an Uber driver is going to kidnap you."

“Not if I have you to teach me how to drive."

I pet the dog that was now barking at us with excitement.

“Hi there little pup." I said in a baby voice. I grabbed Jane's card and opened it.

"Shedrack, I'm so sorry. I should've listened to you. I was so wrong. Please forgive me. I'll let you name the dog. But I love you. And I've never loved anyone else as much as I love you. If I ever do something stupid again, you have the right to slap me. But I promise I won't do something like this ever. You mean the world to me. You're my light.
-Jane"

I sighed.
“I forgive you."

“Thank you thank you thank you!" She was so excited. She kissed me and I felt the sparks again. The wonderful feeling of exploding fireworks in my stomach. The dog barked a cute tiny bark at us again and we broke apart.

"So what should we name her?" Jane asked me.

"Maggie. It fits her I think."

“Do you like the name Maggie?" Jane asked the little puppy. She immediately climbed up Jane and licked her.

“I think she likes her name. So are we going to do anything about that demon?"
“Rick?" She asked and I sarcastically gasped.

“Don't say the devil's name in this house!" We both started laughing at my use of “devil."

“I think he'll get whatever's coming to him. What about you Maggie? What do you think?" Maggie moved from licking Jane's arm and came to sit in between us.

“She is the most adorable thing I've ever seen."

"Just wait until she pees on your bed."

“Shut up Jane you're ruining my mood." We laughed loudly and I pet the tiny puppy that was named Maggie.

TBC.

nice wan.

op tanks for the update, na only God no whr u for dey come

wow wow nice

thanks friends love you you guys all new update coming next week

Weldon ooo

Wow!! There is love in the air again

Op thanks for the update

izaray:
Wow!! They is love in the air again
Op thanks for the update

yea thanks

izaray:
Wow!! They is love in the air again
Op thanks for the update

yea thanks

skubido:
Weldon ooo

thanks boss

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thanks guys

Hislordship12:
thanks guys

Op we are waiting for updates o

CHAPTER 29
[he's back]

“Maggie don't you eat my shoes!" Jane yelled as she was trying to put her shoes on.

“Maybe dogs eat shoes because that's what we put on when we're leaving and they don't want us to leave." I suggested. Jane dropped what she was holding and just stared at me.

“But that's so sad." She frowned and pet Maggie again. “I'll be right back I just need to go tell my mom I'm staying over tonight." She assured the little puppy.

I opened my front door while Jane continued trying to get Maggie away from her shoes. I almost jumped when I saw Rick on my doorstep.

“What the hell are you doing here?" I yelled.

“I just came to tell you that Jane doesn't love you. She's so over you. You're so annoying! She's been in love with me since she first saw me I bet. You're trash. She wants a boy who can actually be loved. And your hair looks like a pile of poop. Anyway she's with me now. Probably because my body is way hotter than yours." he told me smiling like a demon. DID HE JUST INSULT MY HAIR OH HELL NO. Jane had got her shoes on and came to the door.

“You are a lying demon Rick!" Jane said.

“Oh good you're here! Tell Shedrack about us!" Rick stood there so proud of himself. What is wrong with him? All of a sudden Jane's hand collided with Rick's cheek. I stood there in shock, Rick did the same but soon resorted to laughter. "Ha! Oh that's just something we do all the time now!" he looked at me with an evil smile and rose his hand, about slap Jane back.

Before his hand reached Janw's face I quickly grabbed a hold of his arm. Even if he was taller than me, I could intimidate him. “Don't. You. EVER. Touch. Her. Seriously leave my house before I call the police." I let go of his arm with force.

Rick backed up slowly down my front yard. Before he completely walked away he blew Jane a kiss. Jane quickly slammed the front door.

“Wait can you actually call the police if someone attempts to slap you after you slapped them?" She asked me.

“I have no idea." I laughed.

“Either way, that was hot."

“What was?"

“What you just did. Hotness chart level one hundred. he probably won't bug us for at least another week."

“Um," I chuckled and Jane pulled me into a kiss. I wrapped my arms around her and she moved her hands down my back.

Wow I missed her these past few days. She's an amazing kisser. And amazing in general.
***

“Does my hair really look like crap? Do I even have an okay body?" I asked Jane as we laid on my bed. She instantly sat up.

“Your hair is the color of hot chocolate. And your body is like an hourglass. You're a god.

“Thanks Jane." She leaned over to kiss me but I stopped her. “Can you go get some ice cream from downstairs for me pretty please?" I asked softly. She sighed and got up.

“I'd do everything and anything to you." She said

“Don't you mean for me?"

“Wait did I just say that out loud...?" She asked.

"Yes. Yes you did." I laughed at her.

TBC.