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Re: Number 225 Katakata Street by dupsai(f): 7:50pm On Dec 11, 2018
Thanks for keeping your words oga Centino, you are too much.

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Re: Number 225 Katakata Street by OlufemiWhit(m): 8:38pm On Dec 11, 2018
Centino you're the best.....thanks for the update....we no mind mid week update oooo

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Re: Number 225 Katakata Street by EkopSparoAyara(m): 10:48pm On Dec 11, 2018
Agbonyibo and his squad....Formidable...
Kingsley has finally come around...Agbonyibo,well done....
Ndifreke,I hope it's not what am thinking??.... Be careful....

So,what happened to Irikefe in front of Nurse Josephine room when Evae showed up wearing a Thong??

BRAVO CENTINO...

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Re: Number 225 Katakata Street by OluwabuqqyYOLO(m): 10:59pm On Dec 11, 2018
moseph:
very funny update
Moseph, you are cute.
Re: Number 225 Katakata Street by moseph(f): 12:14am On Dec 12, 2018
OluwabuqqyYOLO:
Moseph, you are cute.
Thanks
Re: Number 225 Katakata Street by connkg(m): 2:28am On Dec 12, 2018
@Centino
I think the two women went to meet Mama Willy Willy. Do check to correct.
Minor typos elsewhere still had meaning, but error above was confusing.
Great story, you OK? Something changed awhile ago. Characters dipped somehow....

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Re: Number 225 Katakata Street by SunFlow(m): 4:08am On Dec 12, 2018
Centino my Oga... I remember how we started 2 years ago right from the first chapter of this story.

You have proven your wits timelessly.. God bless you

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Re: Number 225 Katakata Street by chizko4me(m): 7:25am On Dec 12, 2018
Centino you want make i vex abi?
Open standing Breast, yet Castro and Irekefe are not anywhere close to witness it.
I no like am oh. Were is Castro self?

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Re: Number 225 Katakata Street by Centino: 8:40am On Dec 12, 2018
Xavier5:


Mr Centino, bia bia bia, come come come, how come you know so much about witchcraft. You sure say you no be one of them?

#Xavier.

grin grin grin
Re: Number 225 Katakata Street by Centino: 8:41am On Dec 12, 2018
ManBeast:
This Agbonyibo nah confam brainy man, see as he confuse dem elders with him daughter standing Breast, even the almighty Mr Kingsley wasn't left alone.



Oga Centino make I confuse you with this standing nyansh. cheesy grin cheesy

Chai badt guy! No spoil me and Kaycee9242 o grin
Re: Number 225 Katakata Street by Centino: 8:42am On Dec 12, 2018
eyesofpearls:
What a way to unwind after a long day! Thanks man! You’re the best! You came through!
I just dey laugh anyhow!
You too much!

kiss kiss kiss
Re: Number 225 Katakata Street by Centino: 8:43am On Dec 12, 2018
EkopSparoAyara:


So,what happened to Irikefe in front of Nurse Josephine room when Evae showed up wearing a Thong??


Looks like you missed "Charity Begins At Home." Go to page 127.
Re: Number 225 Katakata Street by Centino: 8:44am On Dec 12, 2018
SunFlow:
Centino my Oga... I remember how we started 2 years ago right from the first chapter of this story.

You have proven your wits timelessly.. God bless you

Thanks man. You're one of my favs you know...
Re: Number 225 Katakata Street by rukidanty: 8:46am On Dec 12, 2018
moseph:
Thanks
the name moseph attracted me to comment on your post..are u pinima n pamelas elder sister in ph?
well nice update from centino
Re: Number 225 Katakata Street by Centino: 8:59am On Dec 12, 2018
chizko4me:
Centino you want make i vex abi?
Open standing Breast, yet Castro and Irekefe are not anywhere close to witness it.
I no like am oh. Were is Castro self?

Na true o cheesy

We'll see about that wink
Re: Number 225 Katakata Street by Rollins777(m): 9:00am On Dec 12, 2018
Confusion break eee bone,double Wahala for dead body, ��
Re: Number 225 Katakata Street by Centino: 9:37am On Dec 12, 2018
connkg:
@Centino
I think the two women went to meet Mama Willy Willy. Do check to correct.
Minor typos elsewhere still had meaning, but error above was confusing.
Great story, you OK? Something changed awhile ago. Characters dipped somehow....

I don't quite get you man. Pls be specific. I'm open to criticism and suggestions because I write mostly off the cuff. For this project to work I have had to silence my inner editor which can be a nightmare for a writer because of the lure of perfection. I reread just once, and when it's time to update I look at the last line and continue.

I read all comments and take suggestions. 3 come to mind that influenced the course of this story significantly. When I was contemplating moving from the 1st to 3rd person narration, sheycrown suggested Ndifreke got a job. I thought about it and sent him to the wharf and started telling from other POVs. Another time Youngzubi asked about Akunna and that resonated with me. Soon after he returned as the champ grin. Then there was a major error with papa Efe's reaction when Akunna knocked the light out of Efe and EkopSparoAyara pointed it out and I made the change. Same dude recently asked about Sister Esther and that was at the back of my mind as I wrote the last episode.

This has become our story and inputs are welcome. If the characters dip, lemme know what you think may not be working. You know that I still write even when I'm happy, sad, hungry, hurt, broken hearted, fearful. It's a commitment I've made. The "come and update" crew don't want to know so I have to Crack on everything not withstanding. Good thing is that there are times when I'm very motivated and it's also noticeable in the output.

When the day comes when I have to sit down and work on this for a publisher or something, trust me you're gonna like the final product smiley

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Re: Number 225 Katakata Street by WAACUT(m): 9:53am On Dec 12, 2018
I use to support Togo anytime.. They are playing match but people think am supporting Nigeria.. This one off me.... Centino baba.. Today is Wednesday oooooo

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Re: Number 225 Katakata Street by Kaycee9242(m): 10:18am On Dec 12, 2018
Centino:


Chai badt guy! No spoil me and Kaycee9242 o grin

Lol Centino tell him oooo!!! He wants to deflower us by all means but we pass him

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Re: Number 225 Katakata Street by Nobody: 1:46pm On Dec 12, 2018
Fazemood:
Okay, What is the lesson of today??

The lesson of today is...

Women, always pray for us men, because there are many open breasts roaming everywhere nowadays. Free viewing centres without registration.

So pray hard daughters of Zion grin
grincheesy

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Re: Number 225 Katakata Street by Nobody: 2:26pm On Dec 12, 2018
Centino you too much jare grin

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Re: Number 225 Katakata Street by senrino(m): 3:32pm On Dec 12, 2018
Thanks for the update boss...


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Re: Number 225 Katakata Street by connkg(m): 3:57pm On Dec 12, 2018
@Centino
I meant to ask if the sentence shouldn't read "Mama Willy Willy had just finished sweeping her frontage...", where the two other women went to consult in desperation.

Nice story, didn't mean to nitpick.
I can't direct the story by stating my biases, but I liked thinking Maya was on the upswing and maturing (else Agbon-fine boy is already working?), use of plain language by a 'spiritual' proverb-speaker who defused sexual tension before (abi Agbon-fine boy is already working again?). I can't readily remember any more now, but that was what I meant. Dont change anything you think about, please. I'm learning.
I have no doubt I'll like the final product. I already like it midstream...

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Re: Number 225 Katakata Street by Centino: 4:26pm On Dec 12, 2018
connkg:
@Centino
I meant to ask if the sentence shouldn't read "Mama Willy Willy had just finished sweeping her frontage...",


Spot on man. Fixed.

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Re: Number 225 Katakata Street by Timantech(m): 4:39pm On Dec 12, 2018
Centino you go swear say no be true life story be this well I intend shooting something with this great work bro

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Re: Number 225 Katakata Street by Pheezie(m): 6:09pm On Dec 12, 2018
Centino.
As Oyinbo use to say,"This Is A Fucking Cool Story" I too gbadun you.
But guy lemme re-warn you oo incase you din't get my previous comments,
Don't let anything happen to Irikefe,Chisco,Castro and Papa Efe ooooooh unless you wan make i find you and kill you.

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Re: Number 225 Katakata Street by queenitee(f): 6:42pm On Dec 12, 2018
Adesina12:


What kind of comment is this queenitee? shocked
grin grin forgive me

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Re: Number 225 Katakata Street by Adesina12: 8:06pm On Dec 12, 2018
queenitee:

grin grin forgive me

Issorite!!!
O ya stand up for BIG hug grin
Sweet popcorn for u dear

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Re: Number 225 Katakata Street by Adesina12: 8:06pm On Dec 12, 2018
queenitee:

grin grin forgive me

Issorite!!!
O ya stand up for BIG hug dear grin
Sweet popcorn for u dear

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Re: Number 225 Katakata Street by 2Lynx(m): 10:00pm On Dec 12, 2018
[quote author=Centino post=73747901]“SEE BOBBII!”








“You know, Togo is one of the most important countries in Africa.”

“That is very true,” Josiah said.

“I used to follow the National team of Togo whenever they play football. People think I support Nigeria but it is actually Togo that I support. I know all their players not just Emmanuel Adebayo. I was very happy when they made Steven Keshi their coach.” Lukman said.

“And I know that they have beautiful animals. The dogs and donkeys from Togo behave differently from the ones from Nigeria,” Josiah said.

“That must be why Mr Agbonyibo is in the animal business,” Lukman said. “Is it so Mr Agbonyibo?”




A swear this part weak me ��� as their brain format. what abt mama akunna where she dey

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Re: Number 225 Katakata Street by benpuzzy(m): 10:44pm On Dec 12, 2018
Thanks for the update @Centino...............

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Re: Number 225 Katakata Street by mimilight: 12:03am On Dec 13, 2018
use to support Togo anytime.. They are playing match but
people think am supporting Nigeria..
This one got me thinking of Akpabio's "my heart was with you in 2015 election, I even voted for you" statement to buhari.

first time commenting. Nice story

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