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[quote author=miss.terious]Clemzy, first of all, thanks for reading my "story" if you can call it that & I'm glad it was spell binding enough for you to read it to the end. Everything I wrote here is just for fun, I wasn't planning to attract this much attention. I wrote it because I'm a 200L student who is currently stuck at home because of ASUU. Anyways, I'm done with hating now. I'm checking your story now [/quote]you deserve kisses honey

Okay scratch that, didn't read new posts before i posted that ^


Thanks honey for reading my story as a guest, but this is the part in a thread where i grab popcorn and coke!!!


bring it on clem and co!!!

IzyLuv: Madam princesa... U are just evrywhere.

Wen shld we except another story from you nah?

am everywhere? jeez I need to go undercover



My dear, story dey my head oh, but no time for me, just hold on for me abeg.

Oga Rock, I for give you permission to dance into the sunset, but you don start season two, so no sunset dancing for you


weldone dude.

I wrote this few days ago, when my road was terribly fraught with anger, hopelessness and unbelief. But today? Oh well *shrugs*



I stare into oblivion
wishing for an end to this boredom
The future they so speak about,
wishing it'd kiss me already on my feet!

'This too shall soon pass'
He says and hold my hands
My feeble heart clenched at his parting word
But now i feel its tearing pieces.
All hopes tumbling in different forms -
breaking like scattered pieces of the sand

My feet are now weary and hurt
gushing red water from where they pierce my soul -
These sands of angry thorns
Torn out from the bloom of my budding hope.

I shall yet remain on this fall
wishing the sands grow out as knives -
cutting my mind
Piercing my toes
cutting my life
Erasing my notes
Drowning this wasted existence I seem to call life
Leading me to the light of men's aftermath


Where's the supernatural? I finally ask.
This hope we build against every odds?
These words we speak on growling knees?
He who pours himself into our weaker bones?
Where's the supernatural!
Where's the supernatural! I scream!


Then...
A still small voice renders my soul
stills the troubles of my broken hope
'I am here' it silently speaks
'Am the tiny whisper in a raging storm,
I hear ur rant, i see your heart.'

but now...
Am still battling with unbelief.

A story well told, educative, entertaining and didactic. Weldone underage.


Now you have my permission to dance into the sunset

Nuges11: Wow...I see a lot has been going on in my absence. *takes back row seat*

I see Princessa chilling in front. Ishilove, I can see you're really enjoying your bowl of palm wine......I hail una o. Kslib I sight you too, and e'erbody.

Now Royver....exactly what planet are you from? I've always known you're not from around here and you just confirmed that with this story. A brilliant story I must say. I just love the way you play around with words.

To the million-dollar question; How was the invisible guard able to choke Chuks? I'm as curious as madam Ishilove is.

welcome sir


Am also curious as to when you'd thrill us with a story of urs...

And don't think I've forgotten the card you owe me, plus am not coming to Abule Muwonleru!

^indeed



In another development, have you two mods checked out this story?

www.nairaland.com/1422802/woman-he-wished-he-never

Frontpage worthy i tell you. Its technically 4 page gone, but in 'juice' its 8 page worth.

the writer updates like once a week but they nevertheless lengthy.

I hereby endorse it and would be happy if my endorsement is looked into, thank you.

Apologies you both...


When some guyz it is...

lol @ high heels,

me i love them high stilletoes, hope your spinal cord doesn't still hurt?

Ishilove: Aren't you guys tired of all these puerile and sexually themed love stories?

lol...they are guyz, that's what they do best.

When a guy picks up a pen to write, my stereotype mind goes....

Don't blame me

you know, the use of just a word...taciturn

[quote author=Mynd_44]What a coincidence.....perhaps that guy who has been eyeing you sent a mail at the same time
[/quote]common don't deny it, i saw your signature all over it

I just saw the notification now! Is it a love note proclaiming your undying love for me


#runs to check#

why do i feel like you're kiddin me?



#off to check nevertheless#

Deiok: Madam abeg take it easy on her ooh, so that she will not regret asking for criticism. I know you are a good critic.

nah, am not here to rant, am here to enjoy the 'hate' drama and tantrums

[quote author=Mynd_44]That's the thing, I can't forget it...oya whisper it to me via PM [/quote]what am I gonna do about you huh? Its just not fair.

[quote author=Mynd_44]heart what? Whose heart did I break?[/quote]forget i said it

[quote author=miss.terious]I know the updates are really short so I could update 3 or 4 chapters per day. And constructive criticism is very very welcome. [/quote]bia young lady, did you say constructive criticism are welcomed? Indeed! I've just three words for you...


Bring it on!!!


btw you say you're 17 and you have this much hate? By 30 you'd have an encyclopedia

[quote author=Mynd_44]Hi segzi [/quote]myndi, this heartbreaker, you want us to act another drama again?

faithgokz: Van..sis Texa..princesa...divepen... We are on front page ooooo. Van kum n finish this story!

imagine! Don't mind that mofo Van, one day i shall surely snap his neck. Leaving this omalicha story to rot!

^ boring Sunday

timpaker:
I didn't say i think deep before I type oooo don't misquote me ooooo. Da Allah. Ya'kuri mana.
And I don't have a trademark ooooo.

oooooooooo i yaff heard, take it easy Jo


btw are you hausa?

Iko, would you stop already with the onomatopoeiac representation of the sounds in ur story?

First it was the siren wails you actually wrote down! Something like 'pa pum pa pum pa pum'

Okay, that wasn't it exactly right?, but you did represent the siren wail in words.

And now, the 'pow' representing a hit!

Maybe next would be 'pim Pim' representing the honk of a car?

When this is not 'Captain America cartoon'

Oh well, when i see them, i always smile and think it silly.


And that's my 2cent

Daisy isn't attracted to bad guys, Jide was the love of her life, her teenage crush that became more.


She wanted to help save him like mama suggested, and maybe get him for herself before anyone else did.

Love make us do silly things.

^maybe All her overdramatic tendencies was actually to convince Daisy more to go Marry Jide and maybe save him, remember she and Daisy are like mother and daughter and she had want no one else for her son, lets just say she was pre determined to get her favorite grandson settled with her favorite friend.

Grace wasn't in the family picture ever before the marriage, mama never knew her and Jide's father didn't even like her. Then, there was Jide who didn't pop the marriage question before Daisy was thrusted at him.

Grace was the bad loser in the whole game of love, so what more can I say, life itself is complicated.

chinedumo: If her highness won't be so pissed, The playboy i am refering to is life before marriage.

From chapter 7


i am yet to see the bad activities that jide was involved in that daisy helped him cure.

A start could be his temper.

for one, Mama was only acting on the words relayed to her by her son, she could have blown the description out of proportion just to get Daisy to agree to the marriage. Remember she's over dramatic?

And Like I said, It was just a week of careless adventure that had nailed Jide so, it might not totally be his everyday behaviour. He had a girlfriend, flirted when was required, didn't hang out much, he wasn't really a playboy. Maybe in his university days, but definitely not now/then.

And his temper, i think that was cured, or atleast mellowed down with the way he started acting of late...

Anything else?