Someone pls help review my profile above ��

N2B2:


Please, bro, remove that video as soon as possible.

- What were you doing with your lips?
- Why did it take you so long to define copywriting?
- Who told you that copywriting is "selling products, marketing... with the power of words?"
- It was never a good idea to include "You know what I'm saying" and "I'm here for you guys."

Just remove the video; it flies in the face of the professionalism and expertise you're trying to portray.

Never try to wing it when you're shooting an important video. Prepare a good script first, and then practice, practice, practice! Finally, choose a good location to film. Ensure you set your phone down correctly so that the video doesn't shake.

Besides, I looked through your portfolio, and your copies are wordy, aggressive (the first one), erroneous, and unconvincing. A good copywriter must be convincing and persuasive and not sound like a snake oil salesperson.

Here is how you ended your overview:



See what I mean by aggressive? No one in their right minds would hire someone that writes like they'd be difficult to deal with.

Your overview says nothing about your experience, skill-set, or tools of the trade. Omissions like these are typical of newbies trying to get into the big leagues after only watching a few videos.

I hope my review has been of help. Good luck.



Where's the link to your profile?

Oh sorry, I thought I included it. Here is it below.


https://www.upwork.com/freelancers/~01502acdd5e623c330

Please, guys, help review my profile. I have been on this Upwork thing for a while now but haven't had any job.

Please, help me out!

Relocate with your family that's if you are married. But if you are single, I don't see any reason why you have to create a thread for this because I will speedily accept the offer.

The offer was too small that they had to return it. Who returns a $20000, especially being a Nigeria in this Buhari-infested economy?

Why not apply first

THeGamerBTL:
I also picked up web development using HTML and CSS during this ASUU strike .

Here are some of my recent works .

Via what platform?

Some blacks are wicked and inhuman. Why would you as a business owner/CEO wait until the middle of the following month before paying the salaries of the previous month? How do you expect the worker to survive especially when that is his only source of income.

So, no N-tech here? Me I haven't seen the verification location on my dashboard.

The right thing to do.

Humans are very difficult to handle and control. Why would even wait for someone to forcefully ask you to get your PVC before you will get it? For something that has a defining effect on your everyday living.

Demigod22:
OP, get a career, everyone can not make it through motivational speaker career. If you depends on this ulcer will just kill you.

Did the Op tell you he's hungry??

Water tanks. This was when Nigeria was actually working back in the 1880s, not now that the government can't even provide basic needs like water let alone infrastructures.

Omo Agege is a goal

erai30:
He wants to be the governor of Delta State when his own community doesn't have light, after being in government for several years. Managed to put street light because he wants everyone to think he is working..... ONLY GOD GO HELP US PUNISH ALL THESE POLITICAL THIEVES.

I am telling you.

The Urhobos didn't rename warri to wado city what they want to achieve is to rename the whole Urhobo towns as Wado city and not Warri.

Islam is a terrorist religion and the opposite of peace. Argue with your keyboard.

Some persons are already saying it's bullshit/fetish they forget this is Africa and it's different from the Western world. It's called "Utakpa" and it's real.

What they actually meant is to avoid the Catholic Church. Yet, it's the Catholic Church that gave us the Bible we are all using today.

Morenike12345:
Free shipping usually take 75days....
Dia is probability that it won't reach that time and also it might pass that time...I ordered airpod free shipping...it took close to 3months due to some logistics delay Sha...but it will surely come.
And anywhere u are in the country it will reach you...u will get ur goods in post office in ur state.

Wawu. 75 days, that's scary. Thanks for stopping by.

Now that I got your attention. I want to ask a few questions to guide me through ordering an item on the platform.

1. How long will free shipping take to arrive in Nigeria?

2. Will the item get to reach me in my state? (Not Lagos but down Southern State)

These are my concerns, please if you've successfully ordered an item on the platform, especially with free shipping you should pls respond to these questions above.

Lalami3232:
Some of una no go ever wiseup with our daily preachings and sensitization for this awesome forum? What do you expect when you dey date a 9ja girl? Even most married women toto no dey stay one place, talkless of a mere girlfriend. My brother, treat a Nigerian girl like a swimming pool and have peace. For swimming pool eeh, you no dey care who dey swim with you, who don swim before you, and who go even swim after you. If you can get the "swimming pools philosophy", then you don overcome heartbreak. 99% of 9ja babes aren't worth it bro. Ask yourself this simple question, "aside this my babe toto, wetin I dey benefit from her again? "
When you answer that question, you don liberate yourself from boreholes aka non virgins. I rather cry over bet9ja website wey den never rectify than to worry over a 9ja babe. Laslas eeh, most of una go wise with time. One question wey I dey ask myself ever time be say "the way we dey give una sense reach for nairaland, most of una still dey mumu. How una for be without nairaland? "


I don talk am before and I go talk am again, "the average 9ja babe no suppose stay labor room pass 2mins maximum because the borehole wey den carry nowadays is shocking"

Your post is funny and same real. Abeg where person fit get caucasian bae like this for naija. Man son of man still foreign babe out

Be like I know the docker face oh. I dey very sure say I doe sight that face b4

Negotiating with terrorists will give them the leeway to perpetuate more heinous crimes. Buhari and his ineptitudes are beyond this world.

Lamentations of good evening.

Fahdiga:
Who wan enter Russia before

All of una dey ask who wan enter Russia who wan enter Russia. People nor dy enter Russia before the invasion? Like say if dem give una free visa una nor go enter.

A woman after selling her product but later returned home with that same product is a prostitute.

NDSMELODY:
yes I have done the capturing about four weeks ago but someone said they called her sister through phone for physical verification and I don't know if it is true that they can someone through phone because I missed a call from two numbers early last month

Sorry to ask you went to do it at the cyber cafe right? Because I am not sure it's something that could be done via phone.

NDSMELODY:
Pls what's the next thing to do after bio metric fingerprint has been captured
?

Have you done the biometric fingerprint?

Cock and bull bullshit. Seun being paying peeps to write none existent bullshit.

So, every location in Delta is automatically Warri abi? Naval based is located in Effurun and not Warri. Poor journalism.