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LiteratureRe: Damaged Butterfly by SaviTar(op): 12:32pm On Jul 16, 2017
ekwuemendinso:
@op, sorry but there is a FUNDAMENTAL error in your chapter one. And that did put me off from reading the rest of the work.

u started that: the grown ups of Aisha's 12 siblings were 'sent for' cattle rearing. while in preceding lines, u then stated that the 12 of Aisha's siblings were sent to school aside her (Aisha).


that's too poor and pathetic.
let me clarify something here....

Aisha has 12 siblings but not of the same mother...so they dont really give a damn about her.

They were into cattle rearing when the story started.

N.B: THEY WENT TO SCHOOL BEFORE DIVING INTO CATTLE REARING.

But Aisha was home schooled unlike her siblings....by the time the time story kicked off,she had already completed her home schooling.....i had to shed light in educational background of Aisha before diving into the real story....and to do that,i had to make reference to her siblings education as well because it's different from that of Aisha.

Some Northerners dont value girl child education and Alhaji Abubakar is guilty of that.
That is why he had Aisha home schooled unlike her male siblings....to Alhaji,marriage and child bearing should be objective of Aisha's life but Obinna was able to open her eyes to see womanhood from a whole new perspective......remember the story is set in 1980's NOT modern time.

Gender inequality in family setting prevailed at that time in the north.

Some girls were trained to become mere house wives unlike boys who had good education and were allowed to choose their path in life.

Feminism and gender equality was not popular in 1980's.

There is nothing confusing here...
I may have made some grammatical errors but there is nothing like fundamental error.
LiteratureRe: Damaged Butterfly by SaviTar(op): 7:40am On Jul 16, 2017
shocked shocked
...and finally...
My story made front page.
cool
sit tight and relax...
Updates coming up today
LiteratureRe: Damaged Butterfly by SaviTar(op): 9:57pm On Jul 15, 2017
queenitee:
Mister, who are you?
a little tip....it's the same sneaky guy monitoring Aisha at the end of chapter twenty-seven. wink
LiteratureRe: Damaged Butterfly by SaviTar(op): 10:59pm On Jul 14, 2017
DAMAGED BUTTERFLY
CHAPTER TWENTY-NINE
The contents of the wine glass landed on the man's white shirt.
The wine had smeared his shirt with a red stain.It was disgusting to him.Aisha was dumbfounded,shecould sense the tention growing in the room.Bina had left the kitchen and she stood,mouth agape with suprise written on her face.An awkward silence descended and enveloped the restraunt.Othercustomers had stopped eating as they stared at the man with red wine on his white shirt.

The angry man glared at Aisha with fiery eyes.His heartbeat could be heard in the interlude.

"Are you crazy?!" he bellowed at Aisha.

His voice was deep and it made Aisha tremble with fear.

"I'm sorry sir,i'm really sorry" Aisha apologized but angry man was having none of it.

He examined his stained shirt and turned his gaze on Aisha.

"Just look at what you did to my shirt." he said.

"I'm sorry..erm...it...was...erm..a mistake" Aisha stammered with a voice laden with fear.
Some of the customers that patronised the restraunt were unruly and insecure.Some of them were smokers who drank too much and some were rude people who didn't want to be disturbed.
Aisha had tried her best to treat each customer well but then this happened.This was the first time she was having a problem with a customer.

Madam Oby heard the noise from her room and stroded into the large hall.

"Aisha what is it?" she asked but she got no reply.
Madam Oby gazed at the enraged customer and at the red stain on his white shirt.She put two and two together and realized what transpired.

"Aisha,how can you be so careless?" she asked.

"It was a mistake.I dont understand how it happened.I lost my balance and..."

Madam Oby cut her short.
She turned her gaze to the man with eyes filled with apologies.

"Please sir,forgive my worker.She didn't mean to do this to you.It was an accident,a mistake." Madam Oby said.

The man was silent.His anger had dissipated.He looked at the stain on his shirt and muttered inconprehensible words.

"Please...erm..give me a moment,let me see if i can get another shirt for you" Madam Oby said but the man simply waved his hand.

"It's okay.I was just leaving" he muttered.He fumbled in his pocket and fished out a 50 kobo coin,he dropped it on the table and stroded out of the restraunt,slamming the door behind him.

Madam Oby heaved a sigh of relief and turned to face Aisha.

"I dont know what to say to you."

"I'm sorry ma." Aisha pleaded.

"Sorry for yourself" Madam Oby retorted."What were you thinking?...do you want me to loose my customers?....you have to careful next time.I dont this kind of drama to repeat itself.Have i made myself clear?"

She glanced at the broken peices of glass on the floor and hissed in disgust.

"Clean this mess" she mumbled and turned to leave.

Madam Oby took a few steps and stopped abruptly.

"When you're done cleaning the mess,i think you should go."

"Are you sacking me?" Aisha retorted.

"I'm not sacking you,just go away for a while.You're done for the day" Madam Oby replied.

Aisha went into the kitchen and came out with a mop.She was going to clean the mess but Bina interrupted her.

"I'll clean it for you" she said."Come on,give me the mop."
Aisha handed the mop over to Bina.

"You should start going" Bina said.
Aisha picked up her purse,opened the door and walked out of the restraunt.

As she stepped out,she thought about what had transpired.It was an accident and she didn't mean for it to happen.She was angry and sad at the same time.
She was glad that Madam Oby was not too angry.She knew she would get over the incident and everything would be back to normal.


The sun was setting.It was getting dark.Aisha walked faster,she was hoping to catch a bus before darkness set in.She had resolved to go back to that bungalow where she used to live and book a space to lay her head for the night.
She clutched her purse as she approached the motor park.There were not too many passengers and most of the buses were almost empty.It would take approximately 30 minutes for one bus to get filled up with passengers.

Aisha weighed her chances and decided to go home on foot instead.She would get to her destination in 45 minutes and thereby save some money.
She had only a few meters away from the motor park when a Pegout 504 pulled up close to her lane.
The driver tried to speak to her but Aisha ignored him.
She didn't like taking lift from strangers.She did not know anyone in Lagos apart from Bina and Madam Oby.
She trusts no one.
Aisha increased her pace and tried to discourage the driver but the man wasn't giving up.
He drove his car slowly to catch up with her but Aisha ignored him,she wouldn't turn to look at him.
The driver increased his car speed and pulled up in front of Aisha.
The door swung open and the driver stepped out.
Aisha was taken aback.She was standing face to face with man at the restraunt.The one she spilled wine on.
"Hello young lady,get into my car,let me give you a ride home" he said.
LiteratureRe: Damaged Butterfly by SaviTar(op): 10:32pm On Jul 14, 2017
DAMAGED BUTTERFLY CHAPTER TWENTY-EIGHT
Aisha was happy,her life was moving on normally again.She had worked tirelessly for Madam Oby for three days.The woman was impressed.Aishawas a diligent worker,she was honest,humble and talented in the art of cooking.Before she came to Lagos,she could only cook Fulani meals.It was stumbling block for her but she subjected herself to learning how to cook other meals and after three days,she had learnt a lot.

Another stumbling block she faced was the proximity of her residence to the restraunt.
Getting to the restraunt on time was an everyday battle.It wasn't easy and she knew that lateness to work would affect her.She begged Madam Oby to allow her stay in restraunt.It took a lot of persuassion but the woman finally agreed.Aisha moved her belongings away from her hellish residence and into the restraunt.
Madam Oby gave her access to the store house and that was where she slept.

Living in the restraunt also gave her new responsibilities.Madam Oby had given her the keys and every morning she would wake up very early and clean the restraunt.The work was not easy but she was able to pull through.
Madam was proud of her and made her a permanent worker.
Aisha earned approximately 2 naira every week and that was more than enough for her.



"Aisha i cant believe that Madam Oby allowed you to stay here,you wont be contending with the morning rush and all those things that makes me late for work.How did you convince Madam?" Bina asked her one day at the restraunt.

"I had to beg her,it wasn't easy but she finally obliged." Aisha replied and chuckled.

"You're very lucky.Sometimesi get the feeling that you're using a goodluck charm"

It was a typical saturday and the restraunt was booming with activities.

More customers were coming in.

"We have more customers" Bina said."Get back to the kitchen while i take their orders"

Aisha headed to kitchen.She warmed the rice on the stove and brought out plates.
Bina was not yet back with the orders.Aisha stroded out to confront her.She found the girl chatting with a customer,a middle aged man in white kaftan.Aisha monitored Bina for a while.The man in kaftan seemed to be flirting with her.They giggled and smiled as they talked in low tunes.Aisha was baffled,she couldn't believe that Bina was flirting with customers.The girl was going astray.

"Bina" Aisha called her.
Bina jogged to kitchen to answer the call.

"What is it?" she asked.

"You were supposed to take their orders not chat with them" Aisha replied.

Bina chuckled.
"You mean the customers?" she asked.

"Yes" Aisha replied."Who is that man you were talking to?"

"Which man?" Bina asked.

"The one in white.I saw the way he was talking to you.I think he was flirting with you" Aisha said.
Bina scoffed and stood with hands akinbo.

"So,you were spying on me?" she asked."By the way,i dont know the man.We're just chatting,there's nothing serious between us"

"I think he was flirting with you and that is not right.That man is old enough to be your father" Aisha said.

Bina hissed and glared at Aisha.
"You cant tell me how to live my life" she replied."So,i cannot flirt with my customer again...who makes the rules?...you?
Last time i checked it was Madam Oby that sets the rules.I have been flirting with customers even before you came here and Madam Oby did not complain.You cant tell me how to live my life."

Aisha heaved a sigh and shook her head.
"Look,Bina i'm your friend and i'm just trying to look out for you" she said.

"Look out for me?" Bina asked."I dont need a babysiter."

"Bina take it easy.Some men are dangerous,they can decieve you just to taste the apple between your legs.When you get pregnant,they will dump you and run away.You dont want to be a victim of unwanted pregnancy,do you?" Aisha asked.

Bina gazed at Aisha and scoffed.

"You talk like you've expirienced it" she said.

"Expirienced what?" Aisha asked.

"Unwanted pregnancy" Bina replied.

Aisha froze.She tried to speak but the imaginary lump in her throat wouldn't let her.

"One day you are going to tell me why you really left Kano" Bina said.

The conversation resurrected memories of Kano.The pregnancy,the abortion pills.Memories that she has been trying to bury.Aisha was lost in the sea of thoughts until a customer called her attention.

"Hey" the customer bellowed."I need a glass of wine."

Aisha scampered into the bar and fished out a bottle of wine.She opened it and poured the contents into a small glass.
She placed it on a small tray and carried it to the customer.
As she approached the customer,she looked at his face.
He had an attractive goatee and he caressed it with a pride.
Aisha was distracted by the man's face.Something about him felt odd.
Their gazes locked for a couple of seconds.Aisha averted her gaze immediately.
She didn't know what hit her but suddenly she lost her balance and fell.The tray slipped off her hand and the contents of the wine glass landed on the man's white shirt.
CelebritiesRe: Toke Makinwa Enchanting In White Swimsuit (Photos) by SaviTar(m): 5:03pm On Jul 13, 2017
undecided

i cannot see the breast.

All i see is 2 flats on her chest.
She must a real estate developer.

Someone should find me glasses.
There is no breast here.

Those boys wey live for her street don use mouth suck everything. lipsrsealed

issa pity cry
CelebritiesRe: "Jesus Don't Like Ugly" Tboss And Miyonse Pictured With Nataniel Bassey by SaviTar(m): 4:59pm On Jul 13, 2017
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shuooo....this girl should shut up ASAP.
She has uttered a punishable and unprintable blasphemy.

Jesus loves everybody...both fat,slim,ugly,fine,transgender
gay,lesbian.

He loves us all....we are equal in his sight.

What is Tboss feeling like sef....
That she better than other girls because she is beautiful?

Beauty without brain is useless.

I would pick Adichie over Tboss on any day.

Brain fall on you Tboss.
CelebritiesRe: "If TBOSS Strips Unclad In Front Of Me , My D*ck Won't Stand" Says Briz Bryan by SaviTar(m): 4:46pm On Jul 13, 2017
grin
I like Tboss....she is a role model.
She is fuckable and lovable at the same time.

But i concur with the guy's super story...it could be real.

Me sef...i have a telepathic control over my D.

If i say stand,e go stand gidigbam.

If i say sit,e go sit.

It is very easy to control...it's just like moving any part of my body with ease.
LiteratureRe: Damaged Butterfly by SaviTar(op): 1:12am On Jul 13, 2017
Sorry for the late update lipsrsealed
i had a bout with the dreaded writer's block shocked cry
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LiteratureRe: Damaged Butterfly by SaviTar(op):
DAMAGED BUTTERFLY
CHAPTER TWENTY-SEVEN
"Good morning madam" Aisha greeted.
Madam Oby was a big woman,she looked sophisticated in the white and golden gown she wore,with expensive jewelries and a face that had too much make up.She looked like a spoilt paintwork.

"You're late...again" she bellowed.

"I'm sorry madam,i'm really sorry" Bina apologized but Madam Oby was having none of it.
"What is your excuse this time?" she asked with fiery eyes and hands akinbo.
"Is it the traffic jam or the wicked landlord?...do you have a new excuse?"

"No madam,i'm very sorry.It wont happen again.I promise." Bina said.

"You say that every time.Perhaps i should sack you."
Bina dropped to her knees and started pleading.

"Please madam,you cannot sack me.I have no other place to go.I have no place to stay.Please have mercy on me,give me another chance."

Madam Oby heaved a sigh and hissed in displeasure.

"Get up" she said.
Bina leapt to her feet and started thanking Madam Oby.
Madam Oby glanced at Aisha.

"Who is this?" she asked.

"This is my friend Aisha.She is looking for work"

"And you brought her here?"

"Yes madam.I thought there is vacancy somewhere in the kitchen"
Madam Oby sighed and took a cursory look at Aisha.
"Young lady,can you cook?" she asked.

"Yes madam,i can cook very well" Aisha replied.

"Where are you from?" Madam Oby asked.

"I'm from Kano" Aisha replied.

Madam Oby narrowed her eyes and gazed at Aisha.
"You must be new in Lagos" she said.

"Yes madam,i'm new."

"In that case,giving you a job could be very hard for me."
Aisha was dumbfounded and bewildered.

"I dont understand ma.What do you mean?" she asked.

"Look here young lady,i run a big restraunt and this business can be very demanding.I have vacancies but i'm wary of all these new people in Lagos.I need someone with expirience,someone who understands Lagos very well.Have you ever worked in a restraunt before?"

"Erm...no madam."
Madam Oby heaved a sigh and shook her head.

"That just makes things more complicated.If you dont know much about the job you want,then you're not going to do it well."

Aisha was dissapointed and crestfallen.If she didn't get a job that day,she would find herself in tight position.She only had two naira and it wasn't enough to get her through a week in Lagos.She had arrived Lagos with more money but much of it got stolen by pick pockets.She had anticipated this job,she couldn't loose it just like that.

"Please madam,i will try my best.My friend Bina will help me adapt." Aisha pleaded.

"Sorry young lady but i dont employ inexpirienced people.The last time i employed one,it was village girl from Katsina.She lied to me about her cooking abilities.I gave her the job and she messed everything up for me.I lost many of my regular customers.I dont want to make the same mistake again.If you are going to work for me,you need expirience." Madam Oby said.
She turned and stroded off to the kitchen.Aisha wished she could teleport back to Kano immediately.Shehad no idea that finding a good job could be difficult.

"I'm sorry Aisha,i wish i could help you but i'm the last person Madam Oby will listen to." Bina whispered.

"What do you suggest i do?" Aisha asked.

"How much do you have?"

"Two naira,twenty-five kobo."
Bina hissed in frustration and shook her head.

Aisha's eyes widened with delight.
"I think i have an idea." she said.

"What are you going to do?" Bina asked.

"What if i work for free?"

"Work for free?"

"Yes,but it's going to be temporary."
Bina chuckled.

"You never cease to amaze me Aisha.I'll call Madam Oby."
Bina went into the kitchen and came out with The Madam.

"What do mean by 'work for free' .
"Madam Oby asked.

"I can work without pay for a few days.It will afford me the oppourtunity to show you what i'm capable of.If you're satisfied,you will give the job." Aisha said.

Madam Oby gazed at Aisha with uncertainty and burst out laughing.

"You are a clever girl and i like clever girls" she said.

"Does than mean i get to work here." Aisha asked.

"Yes but you have only three days to impress me.If you do,i'll make you a permanent worker and i'll pay you handsomely.If you fail to impress me,i will kick you out and you will get nothing.Is that clear?" Madam Oby asked.

"Yes madam" Aisha replied.


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In one corner of the restraunt,a man was sipping from a glass of wine.He stroked his goatee and smiled mischieviously.
His phone rang and he fished it out from him pocket.
He glanced at the caller's identity and chuckled.
He put the phone to his left ear to answer the caller.
"Hello D.P.O....yes....i'm there right now......yes........i have goodnews for you."
The man stood up and lifted the glass of wine,he downed the content with one gulp and belched.
He beamed a satisfactory smile and put the phone back on his ear.
"I found her...i finally found her" he said.
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LiteratureRe: Damaged Butterfly by SaviTar(op):
DAMAGED BUTTERFLY
CHAPTER TWENTY-SIX
"I will help you find a job" Bina replied.
"Thank you" Aisha said.
"I'll take you to my workplace,my boss might consider you but first we need to fight our way into the bathroom" Bina said and hissed.
"There is only one bathroom in the entire compound and all the tenants makes use of it.It is first come first serve and if one does not get up early to fetch water and use the bathroom,you'llbe left waiting for almost an hour."
"Is it like this everyday?" Aisha asked.
"It is like this every work day.That is why i wake up early but that foolish landlord wasted my time" Bina replied.
The bathroom was an old wooden shaft with a rickety door.A small pit toilet was built near it.
"Is that a public toilet? Aisha asked."All the tenants use the same toilet?"
"Yes ofcourse.Dont worry,you'll get used to it." Bina replied when she noticed Aisha displeasure.
"It seems you came from a well-to-do family."
"Yes i do."
"Well...like i said,i needed a fresh start."
Bina shrugged her shoulders in resignation.
Aisha counted nineteen persons waiting to use the bathroom.Many of them were growing impatient and an occupant in the bathroom did not hurry,the frustrated tenants would bang on the rickety door.
"Oga,do fast fast make anoda pesin use baffroom."
They spent close to an hour waiting and finally Aisha finally got her turn.She only had five minutes to wash up else the tenants would bang on her door.
She quickly poured the cold water on her body and started washing with her sponge.She was almost through until she turned around and saw the disgusting thing.
A pile of faeces lay on the bathroom floor.It was black and covered with maggots.It was an eyesore.Aisha nearly threw up.
"Why would someone shit in the bathroom?" she asked herself.
The tenants were unruly and many of them could be uncivilized.
Bina had mentioned something about village people coming to Lagos.
It's less than sixteen hours in Lagos and Aisha was starting to regret leaving Kano.
She started thinking about her father's clean house with the nice bedrooms and nice bathroom with the shower running.
But it was only a matter of time before a frustrated tenant banged on the rickety door and drove her away from the sea of thoughts.
"Madam...you never finish?"
"One moment please" Aisha replied.
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The morning hustle was over and Aisha stroded to motor park with Bina.
She was going to help Aisha find a job.Aisha had fantasized about a nice job that would pay her well but her expectations had reduced significantly.She was ready to take any small job as long as the wages is enough to feed her and pay her rent.
Aisha boarded a danfo bus with Bina.The bus was over loaded and the driver had to stop at police checkpoints to pay the daily dues to rouge cops.The fat lady that sat close to the Aisha's window took all the fresh air while Bina and Aisha wiped beads of sweats on their face and managed the little fresh air available to them.It was a nightmare for Aisha and she was glad when the bus finally reached their destination.
They alighted and Bina led her through a busy street and a few roads hit with heavy traffic jam.
"That is where i work" Bina announced.
Aisha chuckled as she did a quick scrutiny of the local restraunt that stood in front of her.
"Seriously?...alocal restraunt?" Aisha asked with a mock tone.
"Hey..this is Lagos and you have to work hard.By the way what were you expecting?....abig office or a company?......i'm just a below average Nigerian,i couldn't afford the luxury of seeing the the four walls of a higher institution" Bina replied.
"Look Bina, i understand.It'sa nice restraunt anyway" Aisha said.
"It's not just any restraunt.It's actually one the biggest local restraunts in Ajegunle" Bina said with a tinge of pride.
"So how much money do you make?" Aisha asked.
"You have not started work yet and you already want to know how much money you're going to get.You must be very greedy oo"
"I'm not greedy.I just want to know how lucrative this job is"
"Let just say the pay depends on the kind of work you'll do for the madam but i will assure you,it's enough to take care of your rent and feeding" Bina said and patted Aisha on the back.
"That is not an issue anyway.I'm a little worried because the madam is going to be angry with me for coming late to work" Bina mumbled as they went into the restraunt.
The restraunt was a big one.It served assorted drinks and food and it had many customers.It was unlike the ones in Kano.
Aisha was a impressed.
Bina led her down a corridor and stopped abruptly when they got to a door.
"Madam Oby's office" Bina whispered and heaved a sigh.
Aisha tried to imagine what this 'madam' would look like.
Bina was about to knock but the door gave way and Madam Oby stepped out.
"Good morning madam" Bina greeted with a voice compounded with fear and uncertainty.
LiteratureRe: HBO: Nnedi Okorafor's ‘Who Fears Death’ Turned Into TV Series by SaviTar(m): 9:39am On Jul 11, 2017
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LiteratureRe: Damaged Butterfly by SaviTar(op): 7:06pm On Jul 10, 2017
Sit tight and get ready....the major part of the story is just getting started....no more breaks...
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LiteratureRe: Damaged Butterfly by SaviTar(op): 6:14pm On Jul 10, 2017
DAMAGED BUTTERFLY
CHAPTER TWENTY-FIVE
"Watch your step!" Bina exclaimed with a voice that sounded more like a whisper.
Aisha looked down and froze at the sight of pile of sleeping bodies on the floor.She counted about nineteen persons in the room.She could have counted more save for the old curtains that divided the room into different sections,more like sleeping spaces.
The occupants of the room were mostly men followed by women,teenagersand little children.The room was overcrowded and unkempt.Aisha nearly threw up.She was glad that the windows were left wide open else someone would suffocate in there.
Bina noticed Aisha's displeasure and chuckled.
"Welcome to Lagos" she whispered.
"What is the name of this neighbourhood?"Aisha asked.
"It's called Ajegunle" Bina replied.
"This living room is no good for you.Come with me."
Bina led Aisha to kitchen.She freaked out at the sight of a cockroach on the dirty wall.Bina grabbed a broom.The insect flew to another corner of the kitchen but Bina finally killed it.
"What kind of cockroach flies?" Aisha asked.
"The kind that is sent by witches and wizards" Bina replied.
Aisha stopped abruptly and gaped at Bina in suprise.
"Dont worry,you'll be safe here" Bina said and chuckled.
She bent down near the sink and pulled out an old mat.She spread it on the floor and beamed a satisfactory smile.
"Is it always like this every night?" Aisha asked.
"No...if you're lucky you'll get a better sleeping space.Many people come to this house to sleep at night.They are not regular tenants though,they'll pay 10 kobo,sleep here for the night and they go away in the morning.These people are mostly street children and hustlers who cant afford to pay normal rent.Lagos is a difficult place."
Aisha hissed and placed her luggage under the sink.
"What is your business in Lagos" Bina asked."Do you have any relatives here or....?"
"I came to Lagos to look for work" Aisha quickly replied.
"Work?" Bina scoffed. "Many people come here looking for work.Lagos is always painted as land flowing with milk and honey but it is not always like that.Where did you come from?"
"Kano"
"Kano?!" Bina exclaimed."I heard the place is nice but why did you leave?"
"I just..erm..uhh"Aisha stammered."I needed a fresh start."
Bina smiled and patted Aisha on the back.
"Dont worry,luck will smile on you" she said.
"But you have to pay 10 kobo for accomodation."
Aisha fished out 10 kobo from her purse and gave it to Bina.
"Now sleep.I will help you settle down properly tomorrow" she whispered and left the kitchen.
Aisha heaved a sigh of relief.She lay on the mat and prayed to Allah.Lagos was a new challenge for her.All she had to do was get a job and then every other thing would fall into place.
She closed her eyes and tried to sleep.
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Aisha woke up to noise in the house.The landlord,a big man with pot belly,stood at the door collecting money.He had barred everyone from leaving until they had paid for spending the night in his house.
He carried a horse whip and bellowed in his pidgin english plastered with yoruba accent.
"Oya make una pay your accomodation money...nobody dey go anywhere...all of una go pay" he growled.
It was then it dawned on Aisha.
She had paid money to Bina-the wrong person.The girl had exploited her.Aisha looked around but Bina was nowhere to be seen,she must have used the 10 kobo to bail herself.
The house was noisy as the 'temporary tenants' complained about the landlord wasting their time.
"Oya all of una form a line..form a line" the landlord screamed.
The process went very quickly and the house which had had many occupants became empty.
Aisha stood outside searching for Bina.
The early morning cold made her shiver.She opened the gate and stepped out on the street.The street was a beehive of activities.
It was not yet seven am but people had gone about their businesses.The busy street reminded her of Kano.She missed her home.
Aisha was taken aback at sight of people crowded near a water tap with their gallons and buckets arguing and bickering over who came first.It was unlike Kano where water supply was no big issue.
Aisha finally found Bina in the midst of the people.She carried two buckets of water and stroded towards Aisha.
"Goodmorning Aisha" Bina greeted.
Aisha had no time for greetings,she was bothered by the fact that Bina made away with her 10 kobo accomodation fee.She tried to reprimand Bina but the girl carried her buckets into the compound like she was in a hurry.
"We have to hurry,there is no time" Bina mumbled.
"Where are we going?" Aisha asked as she followed Bina.
The girl carried her buckets to the backyard and stood frustrated at the sight of the long line of people waiting to use the makeshift bathroom.
"Oh no...it's just as i feared" Bina mumbled and scowled her face.
"How am i going to get to work early today?"
Aisha turned and looked at Bina.
"Bina can you help me find a job?"
LiteratureRe: Damaged Butterfly by SaviTar(op): 6:11pm On Jul 10, 2017
DAMAGED BUTTERFLY
CHAPTER TWENTY-FOUR
Aisha gently dropped her luggage and gasped for breath.She had been trekking for hours looking a place to stay and spend the night.Many of the landlords she met had no reservations.The houses were not eye catching at all.
She opened her purse, fumbled in it and fished out a handkerchief.
She was sweating profusely.
The sun was setting,sooner or later darkness would envelop the land.A gusty wind was blowing.
The trees swayed and people ran helter skelter.Dark clouds dominated the sky.It was going to rain and by the looks of it,it's definitely going to be a heavy downpour.Only few danfo buses were in sight and the conductors had inflated the fares.
Aisha was stranded.A few hours in Lagos and nothing was looking good for her.The rain seemed like a bad omen.
She sighted a building and ran to it.The gates were open,it looked like a tenant house.She approached the front door and tried to knock but her hands wouldn't.She concluded that maybe it was better not to knock.The occupants of the house may not be friendly.The verandah was enough shelter for her.
Aisha opened her luggage and brought out a blanket.She found a nice spot on the cold floor and covered herself with the blanket.
She was shivering with cold,she rubbed her palms together and tried to warm herself.
It was raining cat and dogs.It seemed like the gates of heaven had been left wide open and rain poured freely into the world of men.The rain was badluck for most people as street hawkers and shop owners suspended their little business.
However,a small group of children came out to play.Dancing in the rain and splashing dirty water on themselves.Theylaughed with glee like nothing else mattered and everything was free.
The scene brought tears to Aisha's eyes.It reminded her of her baby.
The poor infant was without a mother figure in her life.Aisha took consolation in the fact that Obinna could be out of coma and Nneoma would,at least,have a father to look up to.
Aisha could have stayed back in Kano but she was not ready to be a mother yet.Her life had gone turpsy turvy and no matter how she tried to salvage the situation,things would never get back to normal.
Sometimes when things get broken,it cant be fixed.
She opened her purse and fished a photo of Obinna.He had left it for her when he came to hospital.
The photo was the last strand of her connection to Obinna.She swore an oath that she would never return to Kano until she puts her life back on track.
Deep down in her heart,she really missed Obinna.His undying love was something one does not see everytime.Theirrelationship was special.Aisha had hopes that one day she would see Obinna and her father.Alhaji would be torn apart by her absence but she had confidence in Obinna and his ability to pick up the peices and forge ahead.
Aisha prayed to Almighty Allah,kissed the photo and drifted off to sleep.
Aisha couldn't figure out how long she had been asleep.She woke up to see a figure standing above her with a kerosene lantern.The light of the lantern was too bright for her eyes.She looked closely at the figure standing above her.It looked like Obinna.
Aisha scampered to her feet and rubbed her eyes.It wasn't Obinna.
It was a young girl.
"Excuse me...wetin you dey do here?" the girl asked.Her pidgin english sounded solid and forceful.
"Erm...my name is Aisha...i'm new...here in Lagos..i was looking for a place to stay but the rain started and i had to find shelter" Aisha replied.
The girl in front of her seemed unmoved by her explanation.
Aisha scratched her head and thought of something better to say.
"Look i'm very sorry for bothering you.I will leave right away..."
The girl cut her short.
"No...it's okay" she said.
Aisha turned around and looked at the young girl.
"Erm...what did you say?" she asked.
"You can stay...it's the middle of the night and there's no place for you to go" the girl replied.
Aisha was a bit suprised.She had encountered a few grumpy folks on the streets of Lagos.She had braced up for a hostile treatment from the young girl in front of her but she seemed nice.
"Are you sure you want me to stay?" Aisha asked.
"Yes you can stay" the girl replied.
"Erm...thank you very much" Aisha mumbled.
"My name is Ibinabo but you can call me Bina for short" Bina stretched out her hand for handshake.
Aisha heaved a sigh of relief and shook hands with Bina.
She seized the oppurtunity to take a qiuck cross-examination of Bina.
The girl was lightskinned,she had a well rounded body.She looked a bit older than Aisha.
"Come with me" Bina said as she opened the door and led Aisha into the house.
Aisha followed Bina into a room that was supposed to be the living room but it had been turned into a big living quater with old curtains dividing the room into different sections.
"Be careful...watchyour step" Bina whispered.
Aisha looked at the floor and froze at the sight of a pile of sleeping bodies.
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RomanceRe: Rob Kardashian Shares More Nude Photos Of Blac Chyna (18+ by SaviTar(m): 7:13pm On Jul 05, 2017
I must be honest with you

this booty no dey reach me chaa chaa....

undecided

na only shit full there cry
PoliticsRe: "Aisha Buhari's Hurried Trip To London Confirms My Claim" - Fayose by SaviTar(m): 8:31am On Jul 04, 2017
Oladimejyy:
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According to the Bible Jacob dont have an hairy body while Esau has an hairy body..
Igbos are not Isrealite but Edomite because you(igbos) all have an hairy skin.
I heard that the Isrealite did blood test on over 100 igbos why is the result not out even though Isrealite are technology suru.
You may be deceiving your fellow igbos, as long as the Bible is concern you igbos are decendant of ESAU..You are all EDOMITE AND NOT ISREALITE
go and study the history of the igbos...we migrated from isreal..we are the descendants of Eri son Gad from Jacob....you cant use hairy to place our origin....over 1000 years has passed since we came to Africa...we came and we found people here,we mixed with them,inter married with them for many years and you still talk of hairy and non hairy as evidence.The evidence of our origin is there for all to see...the Obu Gad in Umueri...the shrine of Eri which has jewish writing and statues,the writting have been there for many years until acheaologist deciphered it as Jewish,We have been praticing the culture that looks like that of the jews,our language also resembles Hebrew a little bit,Go and study our origin well...an Afonja will not dictate our origin for us...you have Google..study the origin and stop posting lies to make yourself feel better.
PoliticsRe: Does Secession From A Country Make an Individual Lose His Personal Property? by SaviTar(m): 11:32pm On Jul 03, 2017
DoTheNeedful:
Some of you are just ignorant. Igbos are mainly traders and they have the current Nigerian space as their Market because they are citizens. If Biafra become materialized their market space will shrink by at least 70%.
I don't know how they will make their wealth back in 5 years. You will sell mainly among yourself which is like selling an ice-block to a Canadian. Your so-called wealth is made from profit you make from trading with over 170 million Nigerians.
Mind you almost all developing countries don't tolerate foreigners opening small and medium scale businesses in their countries. This area of business is what is employing millions of Igbos.
Kindly recall the trade rift Nigeria had with Ghana, Zambia and some African countries. It bordered on the small and medium scale businesses our Igbo brothers wanted to start in those countries. They refused and insisted that any foreigner must have a business that is worth at least 500,000 dollars and must employ like 10 indigenes or so.
When you call other people parasites, know that we all benefit from ourselves. The Nigerian population has benefited the Igbos more.

http://independent.ng/2014/09/association-says-ghana-will-regret-sacking-nigerian-traders-markets/
bla bla bla....i'm very sure people said the same thing about Singapore when they secceeded from Malaysia..and Czech after breaking from Slovakia,and also all the states that broke away from USSR....go and study them.
Most of these countries had to leave their properties behind but today they are smiling because they were able to turn nothing into something.
Are we not Igbos...the people that were given 20 pounds after civil war....we now own estates and properties everywhere in Nigeria.
Give an igbo man a bush filled with nothing but grass....he will cut the grass and sell it to cattle rearers and livestock keepers...by the time you come back...the igboman already has a house and he is building another one.
Igbos are the best survivors.
We know how to turn something out of nothing.
During the war USA,UK,USSR and major world powers sided with Nigeria.....Biafra mined crude oil and built their own weapons....they held Nigeria to war and it lasted 3 years even tho Nigeria had so much support from world powers.
Igbos have potential....it's in our blood but Nigeria is holding us back.
During the war Biafra was called Japan of Africa because of our technogical advancements.
Never doubt the capalities of an Igbo.....throw him out on the street with nothing and later you'll find him driving a car.
PoliticsRe: Igbos Won’t Vote In Favour Of Biafra In Referendum ―kokori by SaviTar(m): 8:52pm On Jul 03, 2017
burkingx:
angry
send me the link and video abeg
you cant create memes to spread lies and bullshit.
LiteratureRe: Damaged Butterfly by SaviTar(op): 6:54pm On Jul 03, 2017
DAMAGED BUTTERFLY
CHAPTER TWENTY-THREE


"What happened?" Obinna asked.
His uncle sighed and looked his nephew in the eyes.He couldn't decipher what he felt.Perhaps it was fear or confusion or both.
"Uncle what happened to Aisha?"
His uncle scratched his head,looking for the right words.Obinna just got out of coma and he didn't want to break his heart with bad news.
"Aisha...um...she..."
Obinna was getting hysterical and restless.
"She did what?" he asked.
"Look,Obinna i think it is better you see for yourself.This is not something i can tell you now."
His uncle patted him on the back and untied the nylon he came with,he brought out some clothes and handed it to Obinna.
"You need to wear these clothes.We're leaving now" he said.
"Leaving now?...but the doctor hasn't discharged me." Obinna said.
"I thought you want to know what happened to Aisha?...change into those clothes i gave you...we're going to Alhaji Abubakar's house" his uncle said.
Obinna wore the clothes and followed his uncle as they quietly left the hospital.
They boarded a taxi and made straight for Aisha's place.


Alhaji Abubakar was flabbergasted and crestfallen.He sat in front of his house,lost in thoughts.
"Why did Aisha do something like this?" he soliloquized.
There was only one explanation...him.
The hate she had for him must have drove her to take such action.
Alhaji was awoken from his deep thoughts when Obinna and his uncle barged into the compound.
"Where is she?...Obinna asked.
Alhaji stood up and tried to calm him down.
"Look son,you need to calm down.I will explain everything" Alhaji replied.
Obinna glared at him,anger was written all over his face.
"Dont you dare call me 'son'.I have not forgotten what you did to me and my uncle.The coma may have affected me but my memory is still intact.Now tell me where she is." Obinna bellowed.
He didn't wait for Alhaji to talk,he stroded into the house and searched for Aisha.
"Aisha,Aisha where are you?" he called out but Aisha was nowhere to found.
The moment he barged into her room,he sighted the newborn baby and stopped abruptly.
His anger and restlessness dissipated as he carried the baby in his arms and came out to face Alhaji.
"Is this?..."
Alhaji cut him short.
"Yes Obinna,that is your daughter"
Obinna's heart was melted.The baby looked so cute,she held a striking resemblance with Aisha.

"What is her name" Obinna asked.

"Her name is Nneoma" Alhaji replied.

Obinna smiled as he caressed Nneoma's smooth cheeks.His pain and anger had totally disappeard.He was relaxed.

"She is beautiful,just like her mother." Obinna said.

"Yes she is" his uncle concured.

Alhaji heaved a sigh and shook his head.

"If only Aisha was here,things wouldn't be more complicated than it already is." he said.

Obinna raised his head and turned his gaze on Alhaji.
"Now tell me,where is Aisha?" he spoke softly with a voice devoid of anger.

Alhaji walked into the house and came out holding a sheet of paper.
He handed the paper to Obinna and collected the baby from him.
"I need you to read this" he said.

Obinna opened the letter and started reading:

Dear Obinna
If you're reading this letter,it means that i'm gone and you're out of coma.My heart cannot bear the pain and suffering we passed through.I cannot imagine what my father did to you but i would want you to forgive him.Nobody expected that pregnancy and now we must forgive one another and move on.
I have passed through hell these past nine months.From the abortion pills to having my father sent to prison and watching you sleep in coma.I had to contend with being stigmatised by people because i'm a pregnant teenager.I was hurt and i spent my days in agony and loneliness.
I was able to pull through after the birth of our daughter but i cannot stay in Kano anymore.I have caused so much damage and my concience will not let me.
I want you to take care of our daughter Nneoma.She doesn't have to know about me,i just want her to grow up to become the woman i could have been.
I need you to take care of my father.He can be emotionally unstable and i dont want my absence to drive him into doing something crazy.
I love you Obinna,i really do but i have deliberated on my next move and i've decided it's the best for me.
Dont try to look for me,i'm long gone and you cant find me.
Your lovely butterfly,
Aisha.

Obinna dropped the letter and sank to his knees,sobbing.





Aisha alighted from the danfo bus and paid the conductor.She carried her lugage and stopped near a sign post.She inhaled deeply and exhaled.It was a new dawn for her,a new begining.A second chance at life.
She looked around her and sighed.
She felt confident and optimistic.
This was the best decision for her,there was no going back now.
She approached the nearby signpost.
The signpost had the inscriptions:
WELCOME TO LAGOS





TO BE CONTINUED...
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LiteratureRe: Damaged Butterfly by SaviTar(op): 2:28pm On Jul 03, 2017
DAMAGED BUTTERFLY
CHAPTER TWENTY-TWO



Aisha was discharged from the hospital.When she got home she met her father in the house.He was the man of the house and it didn't really matter to her but the sight of him made her angry.She ignored him and went into the kitchen to prepare pap for her baby.
Alhaji Abubakar was heartbroken and for once he understood how his daughter felt.Their heated conversation at the hospital was still fresh in his mind.He went into his bedroom and tried to sleep it off.
Aisha couldn't share the same house with her father anymore.She was tired of him but where would she go?....she had to stay with him and work things out.The more she thought about it,the more she rejected the idea.
She went into the bathroom,locked the door and sat on the tiled floor,lost in thoughts.
She thought about her future and that of her baby.She had to take a decision and figure out what to do next.
An idea came to her mind.She analyzed it and weighed the consequences,it seemed okay to her.She went into her bedroom and started packing her belongings into a suitcase.Her father was asleep and there was no time to waste.She opened the box in which she kept her savings and counted the money.
She had only seventy five naira fity kobo.The unfavourable Shehu Shagari economy could complicate things but she had to manage.
She stopped abruptly when Obinna came to mind.She thought he was still in coma.It would be harsh to leave him but she had no choice.She still loved him.
She decided to drop a letter for him,she picked up and a pen and paper scribbled words that made her sad.
She remembered her baby?...could she take the baby along or maybe leave her behind?
She had come to crossroads and she had to make a decision fast.
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"You need to calm down,all your questions will be answered" the doctor said.
Obinna was a bit hysterical and restless.
"Where am i?...what am i doing here?....the house,the fire,my uncle,Aisha.....where is Aisha?" he asked.
He tried to get up but the doctor held him down.
"You are in the hospital,you need to stay calm" the doctor said.
He opened a box and fished out a syringe.
Obinna was afraid.
"What are you doing?....what is that?" he asked.
He couldn't get up,the doctor and nurses held him down firmly.
He watched helplessly as the syringe's needle sank into his arm and the doctor pulled it out.
"We just injected a sleeping drug into your system,you just got out from coma and your brain needs to settle..."
The doctor's voice faded as Obinna fell asleep.

When he woke up he saw his uncle smiling at him.
"Uncle is that you or am i dreaming?" he asked.
"It's me Obinna and this is not a dream.You are finally awake,i'm so happy" his uncle replied.
His uncle pulled out a chair and sat close to him.
"Obinna you need to relax" he said.
"I'm relaxed" Obinna replied.
"Good,now what is the last thing you remember?"

"I...um..i remember the fire..Aisha's father and his thugs carried me away.They took me to a warehouse,they beat me up,they totured me...one of the thugs drove a blade into my abdomen...it was terrible"

"It's okay,everything is fine now"

"What about Alhaji?"

"He was arrested by the police,he went to prison."

Obinna sighed.His uncle did not say it all but using the word 'went' made it obvious that Alhaji is no longer in prison.

"How long was i out?" he asked.

"seven months and two weeks" his uncle replied.

Obinna's eyes widened in suprise.He couldn't believe he was in coma for a long time.

"I spent seven months in coma?...wow...what changed?...is Nigeria back under military government?" he asked.

"No..Shehu Shagari is still the president" his uncle said and chuckled.

"What about Aisha?" Obinna finally asked.

His uncle bowed his head and sighed.

Obinna got tensed up and stared at his uncle with suspicion.

"What happened to her?....is she......dead?" he asked.

"What?...no no dont think like that.Aisha is alive and well" his uncle replied.

"Last time i checked she was in a terrible state...she took abortion pills and it affected her badly.What happened next?"

"Um...i dont know how to say this but...erm....Obinna...brace yourself..you're a father now"

Obinna froze in suprise.He tried to speak but the words wouldn't come out.He accepted the news with mixed feelings but he was happy that Aisha is alive.
He got up from the bed.He was a little light-headed but he could walk without staggering.

"I need to see her.I need to see Aisha" he muttered.

"The doctor hasn't discharged you yet." his uncle said.

"It doesn't matter.I'm perfectly fine,i dont need a doctor to tell me."
Obinna opened the door to leave but his uncle stood in his way.

"Obinna you need to rest.You have not eaten any food,dont you feel hungry?" his uncle asked.

"That's not a problem,we can buy food on the way and..."

Obinna's uncle cut him short.

"Obinna there is something i need to tell you....erm...Aisha...erm...she did something you're not going to like."

"What is it?"
CelebritiesRe: Toke Makinwa Flaunts Her New Shoes Closet - See How Plenty Her Shoes Are by SaviTar(m): 12:58pm On Jul 03, 2017
Papiikush:
Watin she rub for leg?

Why has her legs been shinning recently? Aunty see if you get skin cancer we (Nigerians) no go contribute one kobo. You might die of that cancer alone in a stinking room. undecided
average Nigerians and their hatred for the rich is something strange grin
CrimeRe: Why I Will Never Support Jungle Justice - OlowoB by SaviTar(m): 11:30am On Jul 03, 2017
TheLordIsGr8:
You see ya life. You too na animal? Where you don hear say animal dey talk?? So shut up if u no get better thing to talk jor



Bwahahahaha. Really? This guy no go kee mee weet laff ooo.

So you go build your own prison and when police come u go tell them say na ur prisoner.....So what wee u cor dah one? Desert justice....
Bwahahahaha
white people call us animals and we also behave like like animals to prove them right.
Talking like an animal is not an evidence you behave like one....but killing people without justice and burning them in public goes a long way to show our animalistic tendencies.
Or have you not seen animals of the same species who kill each other?
I hate to admit it but many Africans either behave like animals or possess animalistic tendencies.
The white man was right!

Killing has limitations...there is a good kill and bad kill.
There is manslaughter and murder.
The law has made everything clear to us and killing outside the law automatically makes you a killer.


If the police cant do their work....why not put them in makeshift prison until the matter is resolved like it should be and they are charged to court.
When there is a will,there's a way.
Two wrongs dont make a right.
The perpetrators of the killing had a dozen choices to make but they chose to kill.
Even if the badoo member killed hundreds,that doesn't give you impetus to kill him outside the law.
The bible itself respects the law and adviced us to do the same.
Do you think God will pardon those pple who kill badoo members?....NO....they are all the same in his sight and they commited the same sin...killing.
Any killing outside the law is sin in the eyes of God.

You have not made any good contribution all you know is to criticize....give your opinions and a solution.....if you cant do that,then shut up.
CrimeRe: Why I Will Never Support Jungle Justice - OlowoB by SaviTar(m): 10:30am On Jul 03, 2017
kingthreatz:
They asked him questions. He answered. I support jungle justice on caught red-handed armed robbers, kidnappers or ritualists. These human elements dont value life and are better off dead.
Satan is rejoicing over your comment.
White people have more reasons to call us animals.
Two wrongs dont make a right.
Change your attitude.
CrimeRe: Why I Will Never Support Jungle Justice - OlowoB by SaviTar(m): 10:04am On Jul 03, 2017
After the series of Badoo news were posted on Nairaland,my heart was bleeding because 90% of the comments i read,not just on Nairaland but on facebook too,were in support of the killing.

Commenters were typing kill them all,good for them and things like that and when i quoted them and ask them to stop it.They simply replied that the police were not helping matters and so the people should go on with the killing.

I was flabbergasted and deeply touched.
White people were right all along!
Africans are animals!

Jungle justice is not the way
just because police dont do their work doesn't give us the right to kill.
Two wrongs dont make a right!!!
If we continue killing and burning people,Badoo or not,we are no better than them.
We have successfully reduced ourselves to their level.
And Satan is jubilating in hell and laughing at his victory.
Yes he has won!...and he will continue winning until we do the right thing and shun jungle justice.

I also blame the police for this
our security and justice system is a mess.

I think it is better to capture the badoo guys,build a makeshift prison and lock them up ourselves rather than burning them.

We are humans not apes...we have a sense of reasoning.We cannot reduce ourselves to the level of criminals.We dont have to kill to get justice.

If we continue with jungle justice....Satan will keep jubilating and white people will continue mocking us.

Lots of buildings have iron doors + burglary proofs....it can be used as a makeshift prison.
CelebritiesRe: Mikel Obi’s Girlfriend Accuses Nigerian Man Of Racism by SaviTar(m): 7:34am On Jul 03, 2017
Many of us are racist
we blacks complain of racist chants and abuses we get from whites but many of us are guilty too.
How many Nigerian parents are perfectly okay with their son having a foreign wife?....maybe just 10%.
The other 90% will want you to come home and marry.
We as africans are not always in support of inter tribal marriage...its not everyday you see that one...talkless of marrying from a different race.
I wonder what the world will be like if there was nothing like different skin colour?
If everyone was white or black?
People would still find another absurd reason to stigmatise and discriminate against fellow humans.
No one is born racist....we need to start judging people by their chracter not by race,sexuality,status or tribe.

Being a white does not make you automatic racist....and being black should not make you look down on yourself and abuse whites just to feel better......that is exactly what this man did.


My dream is to marry an oyinbo chick......naija girls don tire me sef.
LiteratureRe: Damaged Butterfly by SaviTar(op): 11:37pm On Jul 02, 2017
DAMAGED BUTTERFLY
CHAPTER TWENTY-ONE


Aisha glared at her father with eyes of steel.The hatred she had for him was insurmontable and incomparable.She was fuming with rage as beads of sweat trickled down her face.If angry eyes were bullets,she would have fired a hundred into him.
Obinna's uncle sensed the tension in the room and quietly left.
Standing there in front of her was the man who caused so much pain and agony to her.The man who abducted Obinna,tortured him and rendered him comatose.The man who was inconsiderate to her condition,always ranting about his dissapointment and anger.The man who turned his back on his only daughter when she needed him the most.The man who was supposed to be a father and act like one but he chose thuggery to make himself feel better.
Aisha's rage was intensified by the fact that he stood there smiling like everything is okay.
He had become irrelevant to her,she didn't need him anymore.Their once blissful father/daughter relationship had long collapsed.All she saw was an empty shell not a father.
"What are you doing here?" she asked.
"I came to see my precious daughter and my grandchild" he replied grinning from ear to ear like a school boy.
Aisha scoffed and tried to speak but she couldn't think of the best possible words to spill her anger on him.
Alhaji Abubakar walked briskly to the mattress on which the baby lay.He caressed her face and gave her a peck on her infant cheek.
"What is her name?" he asked.
"Nneoma" Aisha replied.
"Your mother's name." he whispered and chuckled.
"When i heard about your delivery,i knew i had to come see you"
He turned his gaze on Aisha,anger was written all over her face.
"Look,if you have something to say,you better say it now" he said.
"Why?" Aisha asked.
"Why what?" her father feigned confusion.
"Why now?" Aisha blurted out."Why did you come here?...after all we've been through...after you left me alone.You turned your back on me when i needed you most,you made me feel neglected and abandoned.I carried my burden on my own without your help and now here you are.Why are you here?" she snapped.

"Listen Aisha,i came to reconcile with you,reconnect with you.You are still my daughter,my flesh and blood.We need to put the past behind us and move on."

"Move on?...not a single day passes without me thinking about the pain you caused.The havoc you wreaked.the damages..."
Alhaji cut her short.
"Yes i made some mistakes but that doesn't change the way i feel about you.I love you Aisha,you are my only daughter"

"You love me but you left me to suffer.You need to understand that love is about sacrifice and endurance.But you are simply selfish,you only care about yourself.You abducted Obinna and tortured him so that you can feel better.Isn't that what you did?" she asked.

"What do you want me to say.That i'm sorry?...fine....i'm sorry.Are you happy now."

"If you want us to forgive each other and move on,maybe you can try bringing back Obinna from coma."

"Come on Aisha,you know that is not possible"

"Yes...just like it's not possible for me to forgive you"

"Aisha please reconsider.I'm still your father"

"You most certainly dont act like it,you turned your back on me and now it's my turn to return the favour."

"Aisha please,your mother wouldn't have wanted this."

Aisha was furious.

"Are you seriously using my mother as an excuse to ask my forgiveness?....that is the last straw.You need to leave now!"

"Aisha you cant push me away.I'm your father and i love you"

"I dont need your love and i dont need you!"
Alhaji Abubakar sank to his knees and begged Aisha.

"Aisha we can still work it out.I'm sorry for all the pain i caused you.These past few months have been really depressing for me.I have realized my folly and i'm sorry,please forgive me."

Aisha clenched her fists and tightened her grip on the mattress.Tears trickled down her cheeks.The sight of her father on his knees hurt her so much.She couldn't take it anymore.

"Get out" she whispered.

"What did you say?" Alhaji asked.

"I said get out" Aisha screamed in anger.

Alhaji stood up and quietly left the room.
Aisha covered her face with her hands and sobbed.
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The monitor beebed repeatedly and the clock which hung on the wall continued ticking.
The nurse went about her business while humming one of her favourite Onyeka Onwenu song's.She dipped the mop into the bucket,squeezed it with her hands and resumed scrubbing the floor.
The room had changed much save for the comatose patient that lay on the bed like a stone.
He had been like that for seven months and counting.His present state had become a normal thing,it was like waking up in the morning to watch the sun rise.
The only difference is;no one expected this patient to rise.
But suddenly he did.He jerked awake looking very much alive and free from the coma.The nurse was taken aback and she ran out of the room,calling the doctor.
"doctor he's awake!"
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LiteratureRe: Damaged Butterfly by SaviTar(op): 11:51pm On Jul 01, 2017
DAMAGED BUTTERFLY
CHAPTER TWENTY


Aisha held the baby in her arms.The joy she felt was unimaginable.
"She is a girl" the doctor announced with a smile on his face."a beautiful baby girl indeed"
"What is her name?" one of the nurses asked.
"I will call her Nneoma" Aisha replied.
"That is a beautiful name but you are Hausa-Fulani and the name sounds different" the doctor said.
"My mother is Igbo.I named her after my mother.Nneoma means 'good mother' ." she replied.
"Oh such a beautiful name for a beautiful baby girl.She looks so much like you" the nurse commented.
The baby girl resembled Aisha even though she had Obinna's eyes.
"Naguode Allah" Aisha said as she lifted her eyes unto heavens in thanksgiving to Almighty Allah.
"Indeed, the Almighty Allah has been good to us.I didn't think the delivery would be easy but by Allah's grace,everything worked out well" the doctor said.
Her pain was over.That heavy burden she carried everyday for nine months was finally out.The baby was termed a mistake at the begining,a frustration.The reason she took the abortion pills,the same thing that caused so much anger and pain to her father,driving him to madness and landing him in prison.This was the reason why Obinna is in coma and his uncle's house was burnt.This little baby may have caused so much trouble but now the more Aisha looked at her baby,the more she saw the bigger picture.The pregnancy or the baby did not cause all that pain and agony,rather it was the choices she made,the decisions her father took that brought forth the frustration.
If she had the chance to go back in time,she could alter some of her actions but never would she take out her frustration and anger on this innocent baby.
Aisha wondered how her angry father would feel if he saw the baby.Would he continue blaming her and Obinna...certainly not!
The time for that was long gone and she could only hope for better days ahead.Things were indeed looking up for her.
Aisha wished Obinna was there to witness the birth of their child.He had lasted seven months in coma,just as the doctors said he would.If their predictions were anything to go by,he would wake up anytime soon.
Obinna's uncle has been very supportive as of late.He bought clothes,cosmetics and other provisions for the newborn.The baby girl,Nneoma is part of his family too and by the time Obinna woke up,he would be proud.
Aisha spent the next six days at the hospital recuperating.She thought she was ready to leave the hospital and return home but the doctor insisted on her staying back till she was officially discharged.

Four days after her delivery ,Obinna's uncle barged into her ward looking worried and ill at ease.
Aisha greeted him and braced up for the unknown.Obinna's uncle had been going to court because of Alhaji Abubakar.The man was charged for arson and attempted murder but things dont always turn out like it should.
"How is baby Nneoma?" he asked.
"She is asleep now" Aisha replied.
Obinna's uncle approached the newborn baby and caressed her face.She looked so innocent and beautiful.The doctors say she seldom cried.It was amazing,perhaps she knew of her mother's struggle and decided not to bother her with crying.
"I need to tell you something Aisha" Obinna's uncle said.
"Yes,what is it?" Aisha asked.
"He won the case" Obinna's uncle muttered under his breath as he paced the room to and fro.
"What do you mean?" Aisha asked.
"The judge granted him bail.....i dont know how he did it but i think he must have bribed his way through" he replied.
"That's not possible.The charges against him were very strong.He was supposed to stay in prison for a while longer" she said.
"Nothing is impossible in a corrupt country like Nigeria.The judges are neck deep into this vicious cycle of corruption.It is very difficult to find justice in a corrupt system" he said fuming under his breath.
"Are you saying he bribed the judge to turn the case around" she asked.
"Yes, the judge definitely collected bribe from your father so that he could be granted bail" he replied.
Aisha froze in fear.If her father was granted bail then he would be at the hospital to see her anytime soon.Seeing him was the last thing she wanted.After the incident with Obinna,she hated her father with every venom inside her body.She couldn't blame him for everything,afterall the problem started with her but the way he handled it made everything worse.She wished he could stay longer in prison.
"When is he getting released" Aisha asked.
"Today,maybe tomorrow" Obinna's uncle replied.
Aisha heaved a sigh and covered her face with her hands in frustration.
There was a knock on the door.
"Yes,come in" Aisha said.She thought it was the doctor but as the visitor walked in,her eyes were full of hate and she regretted the last thing she said.
"Father!" she exclaimed.
Alhaji Abubakar grinned.
"Hello my daughter,long time no see"
LiteratureRe: Damaged Butterfly by SaviTar(op): 2:45pm On Jul 01, 2017
More updates coming up... cool
LiteratureRe: Damaged Butterfly by SaviTar(op): 2:43pm On Jul 01, 2017
DAMAGED BUTTERFLY
CHAPTER NINETEEN

Aisha closed her eyes and tried to focus her mind on something else.She was tense and the ceiling fan in the theater didn't make her present situation any better.The doctor muttered some encouraging words and tried to keep her calm.Her heart seemed to pound against her rib cages.An awkward silence enveloped the room,her heartbeat could be heard in the interlude.The nurses and doctors looked awkward in their surgical mask,the mask did a very good job of covering the uncertainty that was written on their faces.Or so she thought.She wished Obinna was there to encourage her.Every woman passes through this expirience but unlike her's there was little emotional support.She felt alone.secluded in her her own shell like a snail.Fighting her own battles like a gladiator in the ring.She tried to think of the past.Each step she took,since Obinna arrived Kano,has led to this exact same moment.Every event was connected like a chain,with one thing leading to another,one decision leading to mistake and then there she was in the maternity ward,about to give birth.To complete the cycle of the reproductive process she began with Obinna on that night,at the christmas party.

It's been seven months.Seven months since she took the abortion pills and blew the big secret.Seven months since she faced a near-death encounter.Seven months since her father got arrested.Seven months since Obinna...went into coma.
Those seven months has been depressing for her.Her father was in prison,Obinna was comatose and she was alone.She managed the pregnancy on her own.Obinna's uncle offered to help but she declined his offer.She has caused enough damages already and she didn't want to be a burden to anyone.She went about her daily business on her own.She continued going to market where she sold meat.Her belly was getting bigger but that didn't stop her.She would go the well to fetch water,carry heavy gallons even with her pregnancy.She did her chores and did menial jobs for people to earn extra cash.
But that didn't help her reputation one bit.She had become famous on the street.'Aisha the pregnant teenager'...that was what people called her.Many people avoided her like a leper.Mothers used her as an example to warn their own teenage girls.People gossiped and called her names behind her back.Nobody wanted to be close to her.She had no friends.The discrimination,stigmatisation and ridicule she faced everyday didn't deter her.She wasn't suprised at all.People were like that.When a man falls,he is trampled by society.Nobody wants to have anything to do with failure.
It was like seeing a dying girl on the street and instead of offering help,people would turn around and walk away.The world had changed,it was every man for himself.
Seven months passed and Aisha didn't bother to visit her father in prison.Detective Yakubu had given her a free pass,to see her father whenever she wanted to but she didn't.Her father was nothing but a constant reminder of her own mistakes and now as she lay on the hospital bed,she could think of nothing less.

Aisha gritted her teeth and bit her lower lip in agony.The doctors tried to hold her down.The baby was almost out.
"I'm scared,i cant do this" she cried.
"Yes you can.All you have to do is push.Push with all your strength." The doctor said.
Aisha wasn't listening.She was getting tired.She doubted if she could push again.
"I'm getting tired" she moaned.
"This is not the time to get tired,you have to push.It's now or never" the doctor replied.
Aisha closed her eyes and prayed silently to Almighty Allah.She shook her head and cried out in agony.If she wasn't delivered now,she would have to go through cesarean operation.She was afraid of that as well.
Her vision was blurred as tears welled in her eyes.She was sweating profusely.
"Come on young lady,you have to do this.You just have to believe in yourself" the doctor said.
"But i cant do it.I dont have strength." she whispered.
"Yes you do.Just take time to relax for a moment" the doctor encouraged her"....now breathe in,breathe out,...breathe in...breathe out.."
Aisha inhalled and exhalled slowly.She tried to relax.She couldn't do it while worrying about her condition.She tried to focus on something else.
She thought of Obinna,the good times they spent together.The smile on his face.The security she felt whenever she was around him.The love in his eyes.If he was beside her now,all he would do is encourage her.Would she dissapoint him and give up?....NO!

Aisha tightened her grip on the matrasse and bit her lower lip.She breathed in and pushed with the last ounce of strength in her body.

The baby slipped out and she was left gasping for breath.The doctor and his nurses smiled and congratulated her.
One of the nurses wrapped the baby in a napkin and carried it to its mother.
Aisha stared at her baby.The bundle of frustration has become a bundle of joy.
LiteratureRe: Damaged Butterfly by SaviTar(op): 11:46pm On Jun 29, 2017
abefe99:
unhmnn nawahoo tribes wahala
grin The inter tribal issue is just a tool to advance the story to the main plot...Aisha's adventure is just getting started. cool lipsrsealed

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