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Larry-Sun:
Rough review.

You're really improving. Keep it up.

Thank you sir, please about 'proximity', is 'closeness' a good replacement?

Lwkmd...

Dis Junior ehn na character...

Ella, ke kwanu?

dammygoody: Welldone Stef;;hmm............#team Femi#

tnks Dharmy... Femi leading

walewunmi: stefkal no b so u b my boss n I must 2honor u oya take dis bihg turkey n cold capri sonne take step down

tnks jawee...why una just dey tlk Boss, I'm still a small gal ooooo

Snowangel4: Nice story

tnks dear

DVM_tuppence: no prob buh dat consistency is d koko, I pray 4 it tho

same here

@Wale: I don dey wonder where u dey, so u chop d turkey finish cum dey gist us bah...na wa...
Abt we gals no mind us ooo, our emotional hearts is happily married to our eyes, dey can cry...
U sef be team Femi, why no team Gbenga now?

DVM_tuppence: wen is d next update mawen is d next update mawen is d next update ma

Hello Sir, for now updates comes every morning.
But when school resumes, it would change to night things and I hope to be consistent then.

Thanks for following

*picks microphone and shouts into it*

'Clemzy16 show your face ooo...I wan give u ur own kiss, I neva see ur comment here b4 and yet u...awww, tnks '

KingzPen: *covers face* The power of a writer and a Boss... Stefikal and her rapid way of thinking... Hmmmm, anywayz chilling for Nepa...

lwtmb...*no comment 4 now*

U don make me hate d name 'Banji'

Senator_Pope: #Teamprincess ni oooooo


Stef u rem wen I met up wit u guyz, u jst promise me say u go deliver my mssg ni....I no see or hear anything again ooo.

lolzzz... D delivery na coded tinz oooo

He dey possible sef make he be say na anoda tin happen, everybody just dey guess phone and cheque... D power of suspense... Kingzpen na u fit enlighten us ooo

waiting patiently 4 d next update

D9ty7: Senators/politicians in the house. Did i get the senate sitting procedures?"

I don't know anytin bout dz things...I was even abt 2 ask if you are a government student, but take notes of d point Muniho mentioned...
Well done

I talk am say dt girl no be Beryl...
Grandma don land...na dese grandmas dey add flavour to d soup ooooo...

The Rock carry go, we tanda gidigba right behind u and Ella

Hameenat94: Dnt knw my team 4 nw.btw ure doin a gud job @stefikal

tnks dear...I'm honoured

pope shemoo:
**in justin bieber's melodious voice**: I know yu like me, I know yu care, just give me one kiss,no one would hear......collects some salt nd holy water, preparing myself to hear princess's story......gud work babe.

lolzzz... U got me dere ooooo
we'll get 2 know abt Princess in due time

Ziziola: #Team Femi#

Femi get fans ooo chai!

Ziziola: @ Stefikal if he does, that serves him right. Isnt his pocket safe?

I was thinking d same tin ooo...dz Banji boy ehn...he be lyk say u go need to drink brain tonic...

Which kind tin be dis naa?

please don't tell me he misplaced the cheque

Okay ooo...I dey note d scores
Femi 1, Princess 1

miss.terious:
Omoye & Femi's ministry


I'm proudly #TeamPrincess.
I've forgotten Gbenga

Princess leading by one...

Gbenga== Femi's cousin who was his flatmate before...remember now?

Skyda_D_Great: abi! dem nor sabi english yet dem still dey form patrick obahiagbon...
I dey ur back second OP!
Nd original OP! Continue ur story joor dont mynd those critics! I dey ur back no worry continue

smh... I wonder when constructive criticism became equivalent to wickedness...
The fact that people are pointing out corrections does not warrant any insult from you sky da great.

If the op decides to ignore the corrections, no problem. But don't forget that the corrections will help you to become a better writer. The choice is yours.
#CaseClosed

Shalom.

Ehen, another discuss don land... 4give my gbagaun

d last time na Omoye get fans pass, now I wanna know whose team you are on...

As for me na #TeamGbenga (we remember him, right?)

oyaaa make una tell me your teams

Endorsing Separate worlds https://www.nairaland.com/1540337/separate-worlds-featthe-rock5555 written by two wonderful people D.Ella.luv and The Rock5555

miss.terious:

The ministry is moving forward

lwkmd...which ministry?

DVM_tuppence: av bin reading 4rm d 0page since yesterday, now am finally here good work,kip it up stef

thanks tuppence...your name got me smiling...I just like the little creativity I see in pseudonames among Nigerians...

Tuppence as in 2 pence

thanks 4 following my story

-17-

His leg kicked an object, he shone the torchlight at the object.
"Stupid battery," he muttered to himself, he quickly inserted the battery into the phone while still kneeling on the floor.

The speed with which he fixed the battery could probably beat the speed of light only if that were possible. The problem however was the phone decided to spend forever in booting.
He waited in silence, the silence in the room was overwhelming, he could hear his heart beats. Was he nervous or scared? How could someone's heartbeat sound in this manner?

The phonebook was the next source of worry, why did phones have to be designed like this? After much ado he dialled Omoye's number, she picked at the second ring. Thank God.

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She held the phone while still crying, why was he humiliating her in this manner? As her tears flowed it made her see how much she missed him, how much she wanted to hear his voice, she wanted to hug him, kiss him and tell him everything was alright.

But her confused mind stood in the way, she still found it strange that he switched his phone off after she had called him. He could have just picked it to tell her off rather than switch off the phone.

The phone started vibrating, she cleaned her wet face with her hands and looked at the phone screen, was Osagie in the right frame of mind? Why was he calling her all of a sudden?

She could not tell what emotion she was feeling presently? Was it joy that he was finally calling? Or could it be anger and pain that he was toying with her feelings.

"What? What? Osagie what's all this?"

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"What? What? Osagie what's all this?" she yelled over the phone.
He figured she had been crying, he wanted to say something but he was scared to say the wrong thing.

The only words that fell from his mouth was, "I'm sorry Omoye,"
he truly was sorry, he needed to see her and talk to her face to face. He did not want it to be a phone affair.
"Sweetheart, I'm truly sorry. What was I thinking? I was stupid, but I've learnt and I just want to make this right." he kept on saying.

He could hear her crying, "Please say something," he begged. It would be better for her to unleash her anger, hurt and pain on him rather than keep quiet, "Please Omoye, please," he begged again, he was still on his knees, the pain he was feeling from kneeling for long was nothing compared to the pain he felt in his heart. A pain he brought upon himself.

"I don't know what to say, you hurt me Osas, you shattered the trust I had for you, you treated the love I had for you as trash. You hurt me, you really did." she replied, her words were not really clear as she kept on sniffing at intervals.

"I'm sorry baby, please come home. Let's talk about this, let's settle this. You are the only woman for me, she does not matter. Its you I want, please."

"Osagie just call me back, my head is going to explode." she said to him with sadness laced in her tone.
"Baby, I will. But please come over and lets talk, I love you baby."

She ended the call from her end while he still held the phone to his ear, he had really spoken to her, her voice was still as sweet as ever despite the fact that the tears were present.

He wanted to hear that voice again but this time he wanted to see her lips do the talking.
Thoughts of Sandra came knocking on his mind, he felt guilty. How could he have been so heartless to the innocent girl thereby placing his relationship on the line.

He had learnt a lesson, he would never make such a mistake, not even in his second life.

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Princess signed out of the library, Chuks had left earlier claiming he had an appointment at Ikoyi.
She wore her backpack and was approaching the gate when she heard a familiar voice,

"Aunty Princess,"
"How are you?" she smiled while embracing Kike.
"I'm fine, I saw you and your brother reading but I didn't want to disturb. Its been a while oh." Kike replied while pulling away from the embrace.

"Yes oh, I've not been in Lagos in say two years." Princess nodded as though she wanted to be sure of the duration she was away from Lagos.
"Why now? I don't have your number sef?" Kikelomo replied while passing her phone to Princess, "I gained admission into Uniben, I'm studing biochemistry."

"Wow! congrats, thats what you always wanted, right?"
"Yeah!"
Princess inputted her number into the phone and gave it to Kike, "Just flash me so I can save yours. But why Uniben now? I thought you wanted to join your sister in Lag"

"No way, I don't want Lagos ooh, with the way she is always at home. Its annoying and you know how she can be. That reminds me what happened to both of you?"
"Nothing much, out of sight is out of mind," Princess replied.

"Alright then, I'll see you later." Kike waved and went back into the library.
Princess walked, she was happy she saw Kike, how would she tell Kike that her sister was a backstabber.

If there was anybody she wanted to avoid, Kenny topped that list.

*to be continued*

Zellie: [color=crimson]Very Biased.[/color]

thanks Zellie for still following a small girl like me

Jumizie13: Stefikal where are you o

Jumi I'm here ooo...make una no vex

pope shemoo: btw btwn me nd yu I really enjoyed it ooo, I want some more
STEPHANIE

#singing#...Lagbaja nothing for you

D.Ella.luv:
True tlk,FP shud cme chasing u(pants down)

stef my gudmrnin na update o

thanks Ella, I go update now

Hey guyz I'm back,

I'm sorry I kept you waiting. If una wan flog me, make una take suffery do am...

Update in a bit

Hey beautiful people,

my apologies...I ought to update now but I can't, I'm running some errands for my mum...

Make una no vex do!

I'll reply una comments later