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maestrob: This update is hmmmmmmm weh.

we are following
u bumper-to-bumper.

tnks...I hope nt 2 disappoint

maestrob: For not commenting,
Its becox ur story is on point.
The storyline is nice but a lil bit complex for non Literature students like me

We wanna know what happened to Fola, Sandra and Femi(d main actor)

Nice work.
We are at your back always

tnks maestrob...complex? Wow...am lost, I'm not a literature student as well...maybe u shld shed more light on wat u mean...

On Fola, Sandra and Femi... The story has been telling us things about them you know and besides Fola n Sandra are not d main acts...Femi and somebody else is...

Or are you confused about Fola and Osagie? Wel dey r d same person..

As usual I find myself talking too much...

Tnks

-13-

Dami had heard stories about lesbian lovers but had not expected to see them in the act of love-making with her eyes.

Seeing Evelyn's mother and her lover stark naked, Dami ran out of the apartment. She had sworn never to step her foot there again, a promise she kept to.

The following monday at school, Evelyn had apologised to her on behalf of her mum, it had taken her few weeks but afterwards she had forgiven Evelyn when she claimed she was not involved in the same act as her mother.

The visits had then taken a twist as Evelyn visited Dami's home, it had then seemed as if all was well again till Dami confronted Emeka.

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Sandra paced around her bedroom, she was late for work already but she was in no mood to prepare for work.
The last time she spoke to him was when he was in the bus, ever since she had not been able to reach him.

She had not prayed in a while but yesternight and this morning she had taken it upon herself to pray for her love and his sick mother.

She took her phone from beneath her pillow and called him again, she did not realise she was jumping on her mattress, the phone was ringing.
"Please Fola pick up," she muttered to herself.

Her smile disappeared when he did not pick the call, she tried to stay positive by convincing herself that he was busy. She dialled his number two more times but yet there was no response from his angle.

She typed a text and sent to him, he ought to reply her when he got the message at least.

*Hey Baby, wats goin on? I've bin tryn to reach u since yesterday. Pls call me
I luv u *kisses*

There was no point staying at home doing nothing, she went to the bathroom to get ready, she had to be at work.

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"Daddy, the sweet has finished, shebi you will buy another one for me?" his son asked while hitting him to get his attention.
"Yes, I'll buy another one, go and change your uniform first," he said to the boy who quickly ran out of the room to go change his cloth.

She hugged him and gave him a kiss,
"I was getting impatient of Victor's disturbance," she frowned.
"We are alone now," he replied, the frown had changed the shape of her lips giving it a funny look but that did not stop his desire to want to kiss her again.

He had missed her, searched for her and here she was right in front of him. He really deserved to receive an award as the world's luckiest man.
"Victor can return any moment," she broke into his thoughts and turned away walking from him.

Osagie looked at Omoye retreating from him while she took calculated steps, was she trying to seduce him? If that was her plan, it was working.
Why was she even using Victor as an excuse? They had made love several times while tricking their son to sleep in the corridor or bribing him with sweets and biscuits to play with outside their compound.

He pulled her back to himself and started using his hands to work out his magic, when he looked at her face her eyes were closed. She wanted him as much as he wanted her, they had missed each other so what was all the fuss about?

He moved her to the chair, his mouth joined his hands in providing the magical sensations on her body.
"Osagie, how was Lagos?" she asked in a voice that was almost inaudible.
"Lagos was good." he replied, this discussion could come up later.

He was unbuttoning his shirt when he said, "You realise you nearly gave me a heart attack while searching for you, right?" why did he even mention that? He ought to be killing the discussion and here he just triggered it.

Omoye lips met his in raw passion, they left each other when they had to catch a breath of air,
"You left me no choice, Osagie." she replied with tears in her eyes.

"What happened sweetheart?" he kissed her nose and tears away, she never really mentioned what happened.

"Please, tell me" he pleaded, he felt her sorrow as her tears meant she had been hurt, but he really wanted to know who hurt her and why she was hurt, being in the dark was killing him softly.

"Omoye please talk to me," He begged again.
Rather than her explanation, the words that came out of her lips were two words that took their passion to another level.

"Kiss me," a request that said every other thing could wait, all that mattered was the woman he loved was right in front of him.

They had been enveloped in their own world when the ringtone of his phone interrupted, both parties had ignored it until Omoye spoke, "Just pick it now,"
"No, let it be. It will probably not ring again."

The noisy blast of KC's limpopo came again and Osagie cursed, why would anyone choose this hour to call him?
"Just pick it Osagie or better still switch it off."

"Okay," he walked up to the table and picked the phone, on sighting the caller he wore a frown.

He dropped it angrily and was about to return to Omoye on the couch but she was nowhere to be found, the phone was ringing again.

That was when it dawned on him, everything had been a dream except the phone call.

*to be continued*

I'm sorry I got here late today, just got 2 recharge my fone...
Update in a bit...

PrinceAdepoju: carry on, my dear...You're Great!

tnks Sir

KingzPen: Keep The Good Work Up... Learning Patiently From Your Story And Your Writing Style... You Are The Best...

tnks 4 waiting patiently...
Best Hmmm...4give my unbelief bt hmmm...lips sealed.

Tnks again

miss.terious:
Steph, I'm still here. I still love the story.

tnks dear

walewunmi: Ah d9ty7,LOGOWHIZ and stef...xo dis kind tin dey appen and una no inform me walai iyaf binu 4u all...abah una no try oh I just dey para scatter all d chairs around *fuming in rage hmmph hmmph*
Hmmmn started reading from page 0 2day by 7:00pm naw its almost 9:30 stef u got me glued I lyk d twist n turn of evrytin in dis storyline....I like d way u put each character in his/her own story line with different settings...
As for constructive criticism tin its because u aint updating regularly sum people mite av lost interest I know its not easy 2write a story as complicated as dis bt try ur best 2update regularly,just lyk magic u wud c people's comment coming tru **cliche** bt nevadless great work my dear I'm surely following dis thread...**like oliver twist** I nid more...still I follow!

ah! Bouncer of life...#I'm sorry...
I didn't knw u were nt aware.
*kneels down lyk a yoruba woman of 1823*...ejor Sir, e da ri ji mi

tnks 4 following

walewunmi: Tarrh we don settle my ogami,LOGOWHIZ na my boy him just dey form macho man **logo cum ova here (gives him a friendship hug n pat his head n he chuckled)* u c we don settle @stefkal I dey vex 4 u n d9ty7 (go n chek ur thread on d story meant to be)& even logo sef bt I don 4give logo sha bt u n d9ty7 una dey my detention lol...

abeg no vex for me oooo...but i go lyk dey dt detention till tomorrow...shey AC, bed and pillow dey d rum shaaa? make I chillex

Ghen ghen

LogoDWhiz: Okay then.. More ink to your pen..

Tnks

kingphilip: Hey stef em gudpm seems i've been somehw influenced these days....sometimes its network dat stops me frm reading and other tyms the network only allows me to read and den will not allow me comment
u are doing a gr8 job here probably because i'm not an english student dats y i cant see any mistakes...
Jst keep it up u'll surely get there

tnks kingphilip, make dt network behave oooooo or else na Tinu I go call for am

LogoDWhiz: Lol.. I was actually laughing due to your sarcasm...
You are not being silly.. Just being your normal self...
Maybe, they are actually busy.. We all have diff life schedule...
I hope I can keep up my attendance on NL when ASUU finally calls off.....

Just continue to strive to be better and things will turn out better...

okay, "I tink dey r busy" is a gud explanation...bt d no of views moving frm 3000sth to 4k plus today...hmmmm

I hope to be consistent too when skl resumes fully january oooo

D9ty7: Update suspended until the bouncer and the secretary settle their differences.
Don't forget to get the peacemaker.

suspended? Logo n Wale oya settle am sharply b4 I call DChiefPriest 4 una

D9ty7: 'Boss' ke?

Yes BOSS

LogoDWhiz: Lol.. Your story has being interesting.. I wish I could keep saying something after each updates, but I don't want my words to lose its value..

ha Logo, d fact dt u started ur comment with 'lol' means I'm sounding silly, right?
I gez I get ur pt, if sum1 kips commenting, d words would lose value...hmmmm
bt asides frm pple lyk urself, kingphilip, ella, cheriepet (4give me if I didn't include your name)...in d start of dz thread, dere were pple who dropped comments...I was just wondering if dey got tired of my story.

4give my being silly n talkativeness... Thank you.

P.S. What i just wrote, does it even make sense? I think I need a nap

D9ty7: Stef i must confess, there is nothing to criticize in work.
The story is just too....... Even tho its not perfect but am sure its moving closer to perfection.
Am still ur boy, D9ty7.

tnks D9ty7, please kindly modify d bolded to 'Boss'

LogoDWhiz: I've been busy bro... My work as a secretary is really stressful, so many things to be done.. Yours is to stay by the gate and carry out your duties...
Lol.. Don't worry, she's safe.. Our policy here doesn't allow the existence of love affairs between two staffs...



You are highly welcome on board... Nice to have you around.. . Congrats..


Lol.. Mr bouncer, no make i treat your Bleep up o.. No try am again ooo... There are many ways I can make you suffer.

chai! *fastens seat belt*, make I watch action film part 2

Fonydear: Great

tnks Fony

The rock5555: Chai Una good evening ooo.

Ella u don make me laf tire today, thanks babe.

Ehen back to our followers make una no vex, na just now i even fit see my fone sef, the things wey do me today fit full excercise book.

Ranging from electrocution to automobile accident, baba God i dey hail. Abeg make i reach house i go sammer una one long one.

Thanks for all the support...

electrocution? tnk God u're safe...we go dey wait

Hmmmm
1. Why do I hv a feeling Douglas will be 'kpai-ed'
2. Eric probably overheard Oriol's conversation n wants 2 inform his dad or maybe not #shrugs

D.Ella.luv:
Stef,na kidnap I go kidnap u,u go cme my house finish dt ur story

Rock dey come

tnx Uthman

buoye we go soon knw

abeg, no kidnap me oooo...we go finish am now...bt na small small

D.Ella.luv:
Na God save u,had it bn u cntinued keepn us in d dark abt evelyn I 4 flog u,trust me na

I no knw say I dey put u in d dark oooo...I'm sorry

Ms Spaqs: Trust me if there's anything 2 criticize you'll know

keeping my fingers crossed den

PrinceAdepoju: i guess it's cos of the irregular updates, was forced to comment tho.
*following*

irregular? But I promised 2 update everyday and I've bin doing so now #Confused...plz enlighten me more

tnks 4 following

Initially when dz thread started so many pple use 2 drop comments, bt recently I dunno d comments hv ceased to come...wen I say comments, not just praises...it includes constructive criticism, observations, corrections...plzzz guys I want 2 be beta, and I need ur help in achieving that.

Or is it dt d story is now boring or has it lost its touch? I really need to know

make una see wetin I see ooo

Viewing this topic: Seun(m), D9ty7(m)

Even the boss dey here, D9ty7 ride on

*continued*

Aminat looked at Dami with surprise, "girl, chill its just a pen."
Dami realised she must have yelled, "I'm sorry but I don't use black biros." she apologised.

Aminat brought a blue biro and gave to Dami who solved the question while explaining it to her.
"Oh, I see the mistake I made before, I failed to convert the temperature to kelvin, thank you." Aminat replied while going through the solution.

Dami bade the girls goodbye and returned to her room, she felt bad that she had yelled at Aminat over a black pen, the girl would think she was a psycho.

Why was she even taking her anger out on a mere object? If there was anyone who deserved her anger it was Evelyn and her wicked mother.

When she got to her room, the girl she left behind was busy on a magazine and did not notice her enter. She sat on her bed and was about to rest her head on the bed when her visitor spoke,
"Hey you're back, your phone was ringing earlier"

She turned to the girl, "thank you, does Chinaza know you're waiting for her?" she asked, the girl had been waiting for long.
"Yes, I'm her cousin, I might sleep over today sef," the girl replied.

"Okay." Dami picked up her phone, three missed calls from a private number. Why was Evelyn calling her again, the girl had sent her a facebook request which she had ignored, but that did not stop Evelyn from bombarding her inbox with messages and now she was calling her again.

She would have to apologise to Aminat again, just because of a mere biro she was being rude to people who had nothing to do with her problems.

Back when she was in SS2, the biology teacher was explaining the circulatory system to the class. He had then drawn the human heart on the left part of the board while he wrote the note on the remaining part of the board.

Her biro had chosen that moment to stop writing, she had asked her colleagues sitting beside her for a spare pen but nobody had. Mr Bolaji had then queried her on why she was disturbing the entire class.

She had then explained to the teacher who asked the students to help out their classmate. That was when Evelyn walked up to her and gave her a black pen, Dami had never noticed the girl before maybe she was a newly transferred student.

She had however collected the pen and used it for the class, after the class she had returned the pen to Evelyn who had told Dami she could use it for the whole day.

Dami had gladly taken the pen back to her seat, the pen was beautifully designed and she secretly wished she could keep it.

Alas after school Evelyn was nowhere to be found, inasmuch as Dami liked the pen she wanted to return it. Evelyn was absent the next day as well, the third day when she came to school, Dami could not find the pen in her bag.

She had searched her bag thoroughly but the pen was missing, what would she tell the new girl? She was still racking her brain for a sensible excuse when Evelyn walked to her seat.

"Hey Dami," Evelyn greeted, Dami stared at her in surprise, she did not tell her name the other day, did she?

Evelyn laughed, "I know your name now, everyone does too, I'm Evelyn."
Dami smiled, "Oh, sorry Evelyn good morning" how would she tell her that she had misplaced her fine biro, "Errm, Evelyn please the pen you gave me..."

"Just keep it don't worry" Evelyn interrupted.
"Thank you," she replied, how would somebody give out a very fine pen like that?

Ever since that day, she and Evelyn had mysteriously become close, she had no idea they were even close until some of her classmates joked saying that they were BFF.

Then came the day Evelyn had invited Dami over to her place, she had refused but the girl had kept on insisting, when they got to Evelyn's home Dami had sat on the sofa and Evelyn had quickly given her a peck on the cheeks.

Dami had not seen that coming, but she had ignored it Evelyn was a girl afterall and she was a girl too. One visit had there and then transformed to many visits.

Emeka who had been asking Dami out ever since they were in SS1 had suddenly started avoiding her, she liked him but she turned down his offers, she had told him they were still young for it but the guy had kept on persisting insisting that other classmates were dating.

She was sad that Emeka avoided her, she never knew the reason behind him avoiding her and she was shy to ask him about it. Evelyn had advised her to forget him and focus on other things like school, their friendship and her family.

She had felt blessed to have such a caring friend who was giving her a wonderful advice.

The day her regard for Evelyn and her mother changed was the last day she went to Evelyn's house.

The bodies she saw on the settee in a compromising position was what did the magic.

Dis ur body way dey work hand in hand...lolzzz...Beryl FM carry go
*make I run, b4 she fight me*