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Huhm........ DE John and his 5 liters of Palm wine..... OK ooo (is anybody seeing wat am seeing....)


Anyways weldone soul more grace

SurestG:
My sincere apology to my readers for not updating. Its due to school palava, studying for tests and exams and so on. Forgive me of my laziness, I promise to post soon.

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Queenitee
Akinwale14
Adesina12
Toyin223

And others

Eyah Pele.... Goodluck in ur exams.... And please update soon fa

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[quote author=gracile post=59830102][/quote]Gracile I don land.....

souloho19:
Lol..I'm really missing the characters from this story..thanks for the complement..I'm planning on reading one of your stories myself I'm sure it'd he dope. And thanks for the nomination too..Jah bless

God bless u too bro.... U deserve it

souloho19:
I entered the office for the second time and found Ada standing beside her mother..they were staring excitedly at the laptop screen which the mother was operating. When I stepped in Benita looked up and smiled in a genuine way she hadn't before. I glanced at the daughter and caught her studying me intently..I looked held out my hand to her.."its really nice to finally meet such a promising talent..I don't know if your mom has filled you in but-"
She interrupted me while shaking my hand vigorously "yes yes..I'm so happy..we were just browsing on your magazine and it is really nice..and very classy"
I had been admiring her yards of fresh legs with one eye and her cleavage which threatened to jump out of her little dress with the other..what she said stopped my roving eyes i looked at her face and noticed she had on blue contacts and a tongue ring as well "okaay...our website..." Website?? I nodded going with the flow.."im glad you liked it"
"Oh mum he is soo cute!!...im soo happy..a magazine just for me!!..come let me show you around..i have a lot of designs on display"
She was already pulling my hand towards the door. I looked at her mother.."you wanted to see the mag-"
"Don't worry about that for now go and look around.. You are our guest now..I'd just busy myself with the website...voltage trends.." She smiled at her screen " what an electrifying name!"
I didn't know what kind of magic strange eyes had performed but I was glad and my respect for him had gone up another notch.
Ada was a chatter box..it took a matter of minutes and she was flirting with me..I actually enjoyed her company and freed myself a little bit. By the time we had finished touring the entire two story boutique I had learnt that she was 19(which I already knew), was single and 'not really searching but maybe just for fun',loved dogs and had 3 back at home.
I almost forgot about the chief entirely until I asked her.."so what's your plan for the immediate future?"
We had been heading towards the escalator she had turned to me "I just want to do what I love..I love fashion design..I don't see why I have to go to school..its my father that is pushing me..seriously. We struck a deal that he'd give me a year to practice what I love..that's why its like you're a God send"
For a minute I felt guilty..for all her appealing outlook and slutty vibes..there was an innocence about her..
"I think parents should listen more to their children..especially about the future of the child"
Her eyes widened "right?..that's how I feel..you're so easy to talk to Rex".(yup first name basis so fast).
She spun around suddenly.."let's go to lunch..you need to tell me about you and besides I haven't eaten anything"
The heavy beans since morning was still guaged in my stomach "I'd love that..but your mother would be expecting me back I'm sure"
"Are you always this polite?" She asked with a smile "that's not a problem" she took out her phone dialed a number "mum Rex and I are going to lunch..we'll be back a little later" a pause "OK..yes im with my keys..alryt"
She looked at me and smiled sweetly that I almost forgot about Fome' "case solved..now let's go I'm starving and I guess you are too"
Babe you want to suffer your toilet ooo....But I nodded in agreement and smiled as she hooked her arm in mine and we headed to the exit. This time I gave Bisi the finger and her face got red in anger

I was about to lead her to my car..and was thinking of how I would pump the clutch so as not to fall my hand when she pressed the remote on the car keys she held..a shiny black two door Mercedes convertible blinked in response.."wow" I admired the car "sweet ride" I ran my fingers lovingly along the body as she was opened the drivers door. She looked at me over the car "this is my baby..I call him Bruce..I just love batman soon much..I only let dear people to me drive him..." She paused then "maybe you might drive him back" she laughed a care free laugh and got in. I looked at the clouds before entering and wondered how a tortoise like Chief could birth someone so simple and uncalculating and free.
She backed into the road and I was observing her driving skills when my phone rang I checked the I.d and almost sighed out loud when I saw strange eyes name. I was about to put it on silent but then I felt her glance questioningly in my direction. I swore in my mind as I picked the call. "Hello"
"Say mum good afternoon"
"Ehn?"
"I'm following you,now say mum good afternoon"
"Mum..good afternoon"
"Good" I could hear the laughter in his voice and wondered how he was following us..probably in one of the many cars behind us "now..everything is working according to plan..so far so good"
"Yes mom I know"
"But we need something to push you into the house..you need to be welcome by the entire family..they need to be free with you"
"I thought of that mom..but I won't be free to visit you" I glanced at Ada..she was focusing on the road but smiling softly
"Now pay attention...a gala seller would approach you..when you get down from the car..are you following?"
"Yes mom..how about next Saturday?"
"Good.fool" he laughed softly "now he would grab her purse and everything handy..but that's your chance to be the hero..you would take him down and give him a beating...and save the day."
"That would be perfect mom"
"Not soo fast..in the process you would break something...in order to have sympathy on your side?"
"What? I'm not sure that would work mom..maybe another time"
"Remember a gala seller..he is a trained agent so just remember that..he won't hurt you to much..now bye my son" I could hear him laughing as the line went dead..
"No wait! Mom! Mom!...." I put down the phone and scratched my head..what kind of problem was this..break something? Strange eyes thought this was play station abi what??
"Hope you are okay" Ada said glancing at me
"Yes I'm fine." Had to think of something fast....."my mom just booked a family dinner with my elder brother and we don't see eye to eye"
"Eeyah..thank God my own elder bro's are really close with me..we hardly fight..but when we do..its deadly.."
I said nothing just staring at the open road watching for any gala hawker
"Cheer up now" she placed a hand on mine.."we'd be there soon..in about ten minutes tops..I bet some good food will put you in a better mood"
I nodded gloomly...ten minutes? Chai...

Soul, dis particular episode got me cracking my ribs.... Seriously I wish I could write as well as u do... Kip it up sir

https://www.nairaland.com/3946214/devil-wears-okrika/
By souloho19
Young maidens are being raped and gruesomely murdered in the little town of amaife. The devil behind always leaves a souvenir: a torn piece of okirika. The gods of the land seems powerless to stop the raging menace , the masses are provoked, families are scared.....the killer is a member of the community, but who? Beautiful Amara is the next target . Will the God whom the missionaries preach about come to her help? Will the young Pastor unravel the mystery? Find out in this religious thriller.


Y'all need to read this.... Trust me it's worth it.

Nyc work Kim k.... More ink to ur ever flowing pen....
Meanwhile.... More updates Plsss

.... It is not Stevenson or Paul.. It could be pastor Bartholomew or one of d De's may be De John...



Meanwhile u are a wonderful writer sir more ink to ur pen... Was just picturing each and every event in my head.... Kip it up sir

gracile:
Welcome to our newbies, nautybride, marchborn123, sofiaelvis, skimpledawg, 123456dr, mokiks please sit tight and join the family. Crislyn, dupsai, swankmee, I see you.
Thanks for your lovely comments.
I decided we take a peek into Meggy's escapades, next chapter is on Rain and her new found brother; lots of action and secret to be revealed so do sit tight and remember to tell me what you think. Your comments mean a lot.

Am sorry for nt leaving a comment gracile.... Buh dis piece is interesting and each time I read an episode I still leave hungry for more.

Rain really had many secrets (which she doesn't know about) kinda feel for her.

And as for meggy.... Mmmmmmm I reserve my comment. Gr8 work ma'am

Wow.... Weldone ma... Waiting for moreeee

emmaadigun:
May you be endow With all the knowledge you need for more Godly story. Jesus is the answer to all life issue. I love you smankee.

Amen dearie I luv u too.. Am glad u found it interesting

queenitee:
It's really a great storym well done swankmee, invite me to your next

Thks dearie.... Will definitely invite you... Welcum bck.

God bless you Mr Silensa..... Am grateful

emmaadigun:
pls I've missed some part of the story, pls kip me informed on how to get the full story. Thanks.

Where did you miss

richiearmany14:
May God never allow your bank � of knowledge ever run � dry

Amen dear and urz too

Kimkardashain:
its small i knw, i will try to drop anoda. still recovering

Alryt kip it up..... More strength to you dear

OP, DO YOU ATTEND MFM..... #aclosedmouthisacloseddestiny#

I really feel for Tomiwa sha

Don't tell me it has ended abi u are just beginning

Darkcrisp:
So, finally my exams are over and I spiced up my night with Tasha.
Rick's rejection has got to sting a lot, but I don't feel sorry for Eva. What she did back then wasn't nice at all.
Please, when is Linda dying? I'm tired of skipping her adult scenes.

Chaiiii babe u harsh ooo...

spixytinxy:
lol, na hausa tongue I tk write am fa

Hehehehe... And fast 2 is what I will give you

.... Serious suspense

SurestG:
I definitely won't miss this for anything Adesina12 your attention is needed here queenitee you are invited swankmee dearie you've got to check this out

Thks for the invite.... am here by d way and am nt leaving.... Nyc work OP

rachealfst:
Meant to be by marianeeda https://www.nairaland.com/3760470/meant to be

At 30 by Swankmee http//www.nairaland.com//3883626/at-30s

Tradition by Chumzypinky. https://www.nairaland.com/3667472/tradition-story

Hidden Diamonds by EvaJael https://www.nairaland.com/3769912/hidden-diamonds

Wow thks alot ma'am, am honored God bless you

Ahhh!!

I knew it, I knew he had feelings for Thelma
More ink to ur pen ma'am,... Wonderful story by the way

SurestG:
I'm grateful everyone, I thought the write up is a boring one when the feedbacks were not enough. I will continue the story tomorrow. Once again thank you all.

Am glad..... Hallelujah

More ink to ur ever flowing pen

tyeenigga:
Pls bring part 2, so sad the story just ended. Great piece, more power to your elbow.

OK thks dear

Tiffbuxas:
First time here, Really enjoyed d piece... Great work swamkmee

Thks dear

Ekemeze:
Very nice and well written story.. You're wonderful

Thks alot dear

dimssy:
I really love this story. The acts,events, it's simplicity and your update.
I'm personally waiting for a part 2

Hehehehe thks alot..... Ohh alryt (even though the Part2 is going to take time)

Yampotatocarrot:
Loooooooooooooooooooooooooool, this got me

Really nice story.... Though d end was hurried kind of...

Abeg, mention me for your next Tory o.... Else eh, na lekki flood go pour on u

Lol abeg oooo I don't want flood o