TemitopeDaniel's Posts
Nairaland Forum › TemitopeDaniel's Profile › TemitopeDaniel's Posts
1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 ... 83 84 85 86 87 88 89 90 91 (of 100 pages)
 Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 3:18pm On Nov 29, 2013 |
-65- Raymond walked up to the girls smiling. He was cute, tall and handsome. Smelling nice and without his father's guards. "Hi." He waved as he moved closer and smiling. 'The prince.' Funke tapped her friend and smiled. They looked at each other and stared at him without replying. "What is he doing here?" Gloria uttered silently. 'I'm greeting you ladies.' He said and walked closer. He walked closer and continued smiling at them. "How are you?" He stretched his hand forward for handshake. 'Fine.' They replied at once. 'I love your outfit, you are looking beautiful.' He pointed at Funke. 'Argh.. Thanks your Ma..' 'Don't complete it!' He interrupted quickly. "I'm Ray, don't call me majesty. Majesty bawo?" He laughed. "Ooh boy, be fast oh!" Tony shouted from where he was. Ray looked at the back and smiled. He stretched his hand demonstrating to him to wait. 'Let me help you with the water.' He uttered, stretching his helping hand. 'No.. You are a prince!' Funke stopped him. "Em.. The Prince, don't bother about that. We can do it ourselves." Gloria added. 'Noo.. I can help you. Do you live together?' He asked smiling. 'Em..' Gloria stammered staring at Funke with the face "should I tell him?" 'Ray, I'm waiting oh. We aren't with the guards oh!' Tony shouted. He shunned him. "Please talk." He quickly talked. 'Okay, around the village, beside the pap seller's place.' Gloria said. 'Ehnehn.. Em.. That place around the market?' "Exactly." Funke replied, bending to carry the pot. Raymond quickly bent to assist her with the pot. ... |
| Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 2:54pm On Nov 29, 2013 |
Florblu: #Still following#Aiit boss.... #typing... |
| Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 2:32pm On Nov 29, 2013 |
Ozymog: Chi oooooo abeg try make am veri long. Well done sweet storiLol.... I dey come oh... mb P, mk I solve am... |
| Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 5:13am On Nov 29, 2013 |
-64- 'You are a thief then!' The King uttered from the back. They all turned to the back and was terrified. 'Is it because she now gave birth to a set of twins?' The King smiled. Seun kept staring at him. How did he know, "we are in soup" she thought. 'Now, before all of you knew she gave birth to a set of twins, I've known. The medical doctor had told me he did a scan and saw them. I knew you'd plan it this way, such is life.' The king smiled. "Y..you kn..know?" She Queen shivered. 'Yes. Now to you Mr money collector, if I hear this anywhere, I'll assume you said it even if not you! The other child will be living here so that no one will suspect.' The King uttered. "Y... Yyy.. Ye.. Yes your h...highneess." She automatically stammered, shivering. 'Yes, no problem. I've been tracing all of you and I've been present in all your meetings, just to know if you want to eliminate one of my children.' He smiled. "Haa.. Never!" Seun shouted. The Queen was relieved and smiled. 'The one with us will bear Raymond, this one that will start living with you will be Tony. We'll gv names when the time comes but these are the names I want for them.' He uttered and left. The Queen and Seun laughed seriously at Segun. "I can now tell you to go and bring me my 1M." The Queen mimicked and laughed. «Twenty years later» Tony and his twin brother, Raymond gad grown up to twenty years. The King is already weakened by his sickness. The lives of the babies born twenty years back started. Tony had been introduced to Raymond as a friend and not his brother. They were best of friends. Loved each other like brothers that they were and but didn't know. Raymond was living in the palace while Tony was still living with Seun and was told Seun was his mother. The two "jolly friends" do go hunt and watch females by the stream everyday when they were less busy. •••• Funke and Gloria were by the river playing before they wanted to carry their clay-pot and go home. The two friends arrived there and met the girls. "See beauty!" Raymond tapped Tony and pointed to Funke. 'Na you sabi, you know Damilola musnt see me looking at girls.' He laughed. 'Shey that Dami, the daughter of women leader?' He asked, his eyes were focused on Funke. 'Yes now.' He replied. "This is serious!" Raymond exclaimed. 'My friend, take am easy oh.' He replied smiling. 'Honestly, wait here. I'm coming.' Raymond smiled and left him. ... |
| Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 5:12am On Nov 29, 2013 |
Ozymog:Lol.. I go upd8 naw.. Ba3 low tho! |
| Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 4:26am On Nov 29, 2013 |
WizyJ88: .......dis thread wey no get Needle....lolzzzzz........it's indeed a nice story u'v got........dis thread wey no get Needle....lolzzzzz........it's indeed a nice story u'v got........dis thread wey no get Needle....lolzzzzz........it's indeed a nice story u'v got.[color=#006600][/color]Fenx bro... Lol  |
| Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 4:25am On Nov 29, 2013 |
[quote author=heywhy.kum]More upd8z man, feed m MORE[/quote]"Feed me more" make John Cena catch u  |
| Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 6:42pm On Nov 28, 2013 |
-63- They heard the voice from nowhere. It was the King who spoke, they all faced the back and saw him and was terrified. •••• It was on a sunny afternoon. Lolade, a young woman who also just gave birth to a daughter and named her Gloria. She didn't know the meaning of the name and didn't know it was a christian name, she just loved it. She was walking by the road side and met Feyi there with a new born baby, weeping. She walked closer to her when she heard the baby crying and her mother didn't attend to her. "Madam, the baby is... Why are you crying?" She changed her topic on seeing her face when she rose her head. Feyi raised up her head and continued crying. Lolade walked closer to her, 'why now?' She asked wearily again. 'Your baby is handsome.' She uttered. "Handsome? She's a female, and that's not what we are talking about now. Why are you crying?" She insisted. 'Urgh, may God not let you a quater of my problem. I've just been sent out of my house.' She uttered. 'Your house? You rented it?' She continued her questions. 'Yes, my husband died when I got pregnant and his family sent me out of his house. Since then..' She wept. 'No, stop crying. Its not good if your tears drop on this girl. You don't need this. I wish to help you, I'll have to suspend where I'm going to. Let's go my place.' She said. "Ehn? D... Do you me.. Mean.." She stammered. 'Yes, don't bother. My husband is nice, you don't need to bother. If you just wish.' She uttered. Feyi wiped her tears and took her stand. "Bother? I'm ready." She uttered. Lolade smiled and helped her with the one bag she was with. " Where are the remaining luggages?" She asked. 'That's all I have.' She replied. Feyi got to Lolade's place and started living with her and her husband, she did follow Feyi to her shop and work together. ... |
| Literature › Re: TEENAGE LOVE Naivety¤¤¤¤part 1 & 2 by TemitopeDaniel(m): 4:31pm On Nov 28, 2013 |
----oooO--- ----(----)----! -----\--(-- ------\_) -----------Oooo -----------(--- -)--- ------------)-- /---- ------------(_/ -... Just passing by, u no upd8 abi! |
| Literature › Re: The Silent Lover by TemitopeDaniel(m): 4:29pm On Nov 28, 2013 |
----oooO--- ----(----)----! -----\--(-- ------\_) -----------Oooo -----------(--- -)--- ------------)-- /---- ------------(_/ -... Just passing by sis.. 9c work here, really impressed. *silent reader* |
| Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 4:22pm On Nov 28, 2013 |
-62- Omisola and the Children examiner came into the palace with a set of twins. The Queen and her friend was with the King, all gisting. They interrupted their discussion, the King instantly understood that someone just gave birth to a set of twins. 'Your highness a woman..' One of the examiners was saying while the King cut in. 'Yeah.. Twins abi?' He asked. "Yes your highness. She gave birth to a set of twins." He concluded. Omisola was somehow smiling to the Queen and her friend. "Go and do the necessary thing for them!" He exclaimed. The Queen's mood changed instantly. She thought to herself that if the King should know that she gave birth to a set of twins, he would kill them right away. •••• The Queen handed over the money to Segun. Her account became almost empty after she gave him the money. He smiled and collected the money. He walked inside and kept the money, he had in his mind that that's how he'd collect the money everytime from the Queen till he gets satisfied. Seun was really annoyed and disappointed in her husband. They all sat down and started their discussion again. "Well, after this, there is nothing more." The Queen uttered. 'Well, I can't assure you of that. We can't tell, I can ask for more.' He uttered. 'Mr Segun! What do you mean, we are okay, this is what they refer to as blackmail!' Seun shouted. 'That's what you call it, that's what I want!' He shouted. "THEN YOU ARE A THIEF" A voice uttered from nowhere. To be continued ds evening... ... |
| Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 4:05pm On Nov 28, 2013 |
-61- 'A contract....' He uttered. "I thought as much, he's just unfor... Don't let me complete it, he won't be unfortunate sha." She said silently. 'Em.. What contract?' She asked. 'Okay, the Queen will be present when I'll say it. I'm going to have some palm wine over there.' He uttered. 'Don't get yourself drunk oh. If you get drunk now, you can start uttering what you ought not to. And... Don't go sef.' She complained. 'No, I've promised. Once we strike the deal, nothing more.' He said. "Alright, later." She waved and turned back. •••• The Queen and Segun started the contract. Seun was also present there, looking very annoyed. "Em.. Your highness, its not that I want to be like this but situation warrants it. Let's start from 1M" he uttered. '1 M? What do you mean?' The Queen asked. 'One Million.' He uttered. 'Haha, one million? Wetin!' Seun shouted. The Queen smiled, and stared at him. "I'm not joking, I'm serious. Deal or no deal?" He insisted. 'Do you mean this that you've just said?' The Queen asked again. 'I'm serious. That's it.' He replied. 'Haha.. Segun, what's the meaning of this?' Seun shouted. "You better don't shout, it won't cost me anything to tell the King!" He shouted. 'No problem, I'll do just that. I'll get it for you tomorrow.' The Queen promised. Segun smiled. "That's all." He replied. ... |
| Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 4:00pm On Nov 28, 2013 |
Zombi2: Temitope daniel...i see u...ur story rocks wellaLol.. Fenkx boss, na ur encouragement I nid oh and full support... LØVÊ Û ÃLL |
| Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 12:27pm On Nov 28, 2013 |
Florblu: Ar u sure u all dis short upadate arent intentional?#oga mynd self show face#I'm sorry, it isn't intentional. At least day b4 yesterday, I gave 6 upd8s. Ma ba3 z drained.. No electricity #charging# |
| Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 11:11am On Nov 28, 2013 |
-60- DEDICATED TO ZOMBI & HAMEENAT 4 APOLOGY SAKE... "THEY MUST BE KILLED!" He shouted. 'Why will they be. You've helped and we are thankful, they shouldn't.' She shouted back. 'So you can still shout back at me. Let's wait and see.' He replied and picked his shirt. He left the house immediately. •••• The midwife and her daughter were just in their home, discussing about the King's family and about the delivery of the Queen. Omitola was just smiling. "Mother, why is there is useless rule about twins?" She asked 'Its a long story my daughter. Let me explain. There was a family, long time ago. They had no child, and were very rich. Their richness was nothing to show off because they had no child. They later give birth to a set of twins then and immediately they were given birth to, the community turned into commotion. The King gave up a ghost and different things started happening, they would be the first set of twins that would be given birth to in this Kingdom. From then, giving birth to a set of twins was prohibited, they term them as evil children." 'Urgh, so who told them its because of those children that all that happened?' "It was their belief." Omisola replied. Tola sighed. •••• Segun left the house angrily, Seun was disturbed and angry. "Who knows where he's off to now." She asked herself and ran after him. "Oko mi!" She shouted, but Segun didn't answer her. She caught up with him and apologized to him. "Then, we have to seal a promise. You, Queen and I." He uttered. "PROMISE?" She repeated. 'Yeah.' He replied. 'What promise?' "A contract......." ... To be continued.. Ba3 drained dtz y na. M deeply sowie oh.. |
| Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 10:53am On Nov 28, 2013 |
Zombi2: Hmmm....when there is 2much suspence in a story it gonna surely sucks!!!..never knew it gonna end up like dis i woudn't av wasted my time and energy to read it.....its sucks!!!Okay... M sowie ni.. Ma ba3 z low and d typn will be somehow. Alright, already typn oh.. Apology accepted  |
| Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 9:55am On Nov 28, 2013 |
Hameenat94: T.DAN U NO C ME ND U NO ASK AFTER ME.NA WA OH.U DON START D NEW STORY?Ha no b lyk dt oh.. Oda, I'm sowie plz.. Sogbo? New story wo? |
| Literature › Re: ¤¤The Trio¤¤ by TemitopeDaniel(m): 5:34am On Nov 28, 2013 |
The rock5555: So u wrote 'typing' till sleep nack u apkaco, chai Laff no go kill me. Now u know how stressful it is to type after a long day. Shebi na me and u Dey NL, Segun or no Segun i still dey stalk you like GhostAbi na, u wise gan oh |
| Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 5:27am On Nov 28, 2013 |
[quote author=Mynd_44]More!!!![/quote]My able moderator! Okay oh, I go give you more. Akinpelumi01: abi na Oga mynd tell am oh!Lol... |
| Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 5:24am On Nov 28, 2013 |
Ozymog: @Winnie me I no know of others, I no hear Ur wisper I ..........Make I no start am? Your wish is my command Boss. I even wan2 finish ds b4 startn another.... Did u c d link?? |
| Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 5:22am On Nov 28, 2013 |
Winnie1950: chai na wa for u sef. Whispers into his ear 'na why u dey expose me like this na?' i hope nobody else heard my whispers.Lmao... Nobody heard oh, I never expose u na, I just dey greet you ni. Lol |
| Literature › Re: TEENAGE LOVE Naivety¤¤¤¤part 1 & 2 by TemitopeDaniel(m): 9:01pm On Nov 27, 2013 |
D9ty7: Lets rub minds together.Boss mhi... I guess Segun's mother called because of Jummy's matter or she heard about the issue that happened in school. Mary too.. Ko ni fe te naw, she can't tell. |
| Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 8:58pm On Nov 27, 2013 |
-59- 'Sister?' Segun asked thoughtfully. He faced Seun to see her reaction to what the King just said. Seun started winking and blinking at him. "I pray he gets." She thought to herself. 'Yes now.' The King replied facing him. The Queen started sweating, not in her right mood any longer. "Ooh.. Its true your highness. Her sister died, its a pity your highness." He uttered setting one eyes on the King and the other on Seun. She breathed normally and was somehow relieved. "... And congratulations about this new born baby your highness." He quickly uttered to change the topic. 'Yes, we thank the Gods of our land. And the son she gave birth to will be living with us till he's above the breastfeeding stage.' The King uttered. 'So after the breastfeeding stage, where will you take the prince to?' He asked. 'Not the prince, I mean the child she gave birth to in labour.' The king relied. 'Labour? Alright your highness.' He replied smiling and somehow looking at his wife. •••• Seun got back home and met Segun seated angrily. He had been waiting for her to arrive from the palace so he could fire her. "What's the meaning of that nonsense!" He shouted. 'Oko mi, I'm very sorry for all that. Let me explain everything to you.' She replied and took her seat. 'I'm all ears, explain fast fast so that I can know what to do. Maybe I'll go back to the King or something else.' He exclaimed. "Em.. The Queen.. Em.. She was in.. Em." She parabulated. 'Won't you talk. When did "Em" enter into your own dictionary. My friend *o je soro!*' he shouted. 'The Queen.. Em... She was in labour the other time.' She concluded and paused. 'Story, my business with that is now what? Talk jare!' He shouted at her again. "She gave birth to a.. She paused 'A? Twins?' He quickly predicted and clicked. 'Yes, so we planned it that way so that they won't be killed.' She said sadly. "THEY MUST BE KILLED!" He shouted. *oko mi- my husband, in yoruba language. *o je soro*- u beta talk "" "" "" "" "" "" "" To be continued tomao... ... |
| Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 8:21pm On Nov 27, 2013 |
Zombi2: Continue the story nah..its beter not to av started it dan not finishing it..Yeah boss.. B patient, I'll start typn |
| Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 8:20pm On Nov 27, 2013 |
Florblu: Hmmmm.....@Dan is dis an update or summary?plsssssss cum give d real update sharpaly or else..............#TeamTotallove#Sowie jare, I went 4 revival ni, I'll start typn naw |
| Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 3:49pm On Nov 27, 2013 |
Winnie1950: Wow!! I can't believe that you guys remembered me. I'm now a local celebrity on this thread. *blushing seriously*. Erm.............i will not predict this one.Lol, c ds Winnie sef, u don come back abi. Welcome sha, we don miss u *winks* u willn't predict or u aren't sure of ds? LOL |
| Literature › Re: ¤¤The Trio¤¤ by TemitopeDaniel(m): 3:46pm On Nov 27, 2013 |
Jumizie13: Winnie, u don dey chase my fans away abi.Lol... No mind her, I don return with boko haram bomb, walahi, she no go wait. |
| Literature › Re: ¤¤The Trio¤¤ by TemitopeDaniel(m): 3:29pm On Nov 27, 2013 |
Winnie1950: Omg. @ jumizie: i knew you could write. You are doing a great job here. Keep it up. I dey come make i bring my machine gun.Enter the thread to c if u've upd8ed, saw Winnie searching 4 machine gun.... *run out thread straight!* |
| Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 2:04pm On Nov 27, 2013 |
D tale continues later...... |
| Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 2:01pm On Nov 27, 2013 |
-58- The Queen and Seun were in the living room, the king left them there to continue there talks. Seun was worried about her husband, if par adventure the baby is given back to her, where will she take him to? She and the Queen started thinking of a way out of their problem. Not farther than then, the King came downstairs. "Tell your husband to see me. I have to sympathize concerning the loss of your sister." The King said. 'Urgh?.. Ooh... Y..yes your highness.' She stammered. The King went back upstairs. Seun was totally confused, she knew the kind of husband she had, he could come and scatter everything that has been arranged before the King. 'We have no choice than to tell him.' The Queen hesitated, staring at the twin brother. 'I know my husband. He's a talkative, he can use that as a threat when we aren't on good terms or when he wants me do something I don't want to.' She replied. 'I'll beg him personally and even give him money.' The Queen uttered. 'He can use this as a medium of black mailing again. If he has money, he spends lavishly. Once the money finishes, he'll ask for more. He can drain you.' She added. "Urgh! I'm fed up now oh! Which kind hubby be yours now." They laughed. •••• Feyi, she gave birth all along to a femlae child. It was the midwife and her daughter that eventually took the delivery and it was successful. She took the baby back home, no one to celebrate together, to eat is a great problem. She named her "Olufunke". •••• Segun, Seun's husband got to the palace, well dressed. He bowed and greeted the King. Seun and the Queen were together, seated in the Palace when he arrived. Seun was surprised at his arrival. "Who told this man to come?" She thought to herself with fear rocking her heart. Segun was offered seat, his mouth was never closed. "You sent your guards to get me, your highness." He uttered. 'What! The guards? Is this man not going to destroy the plan bayi!' The Queen said silently with fear and curiosity written all over her. "As if I can behead him. Why did the King send the guards without letting me and the Queen know about it." Seun also thought said silently. "Yeah, I heard your wife's sister died. That's why I've sent my guards to get you since your wife has been here since, I don't want her to be roaming around when her sister just died when labouring." The King said. SISTER? LABOUR?*** .... |
| Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 1:22pm On Nov 27, 2013 |
Florblu: Abegiii....cum nd update.U don write sef, ma personal person.. Na 2pm oh.. |
| Literature › Re: ***total Love*** by TemitopeDaniel(op): 1:21pm On Nov 27, 2013 |
Queen xstar: Nice workThanks sis! The Queen herself, no b like the Queen 4 ds stowie oh.. Lol... |
1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 ... 83 84 85 86 87 88 89 90 91 (of 100 pages)