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texanomaly: Untitled for now

Could we call it blight on this country fair?
Mans cruelty to Man centuries bygone,
Such disease this country to become heir.
Monsters and demons the practice did spawn.


Throughout those years, a darkness did descend.
Man bought and sold without any recourse.
To wound and molest without recompend.
Tearing mother from Child, held no remorse.


Though progress was made in the years that passed,
Some continued to spread the infection.
But into the pond, a small stone was cast,
By he who brought peaceful resolution.


When will we re'lize from whence we ALL come.
From then to now, we must tally the sum. ~Tex

texanomaly:
7. YOUR NAME FOR MINE

E ntreaty from afar.
V ibrations that stir this "heart in a jar".
E mboldened, by the touch of your breath.
R ecognized and appreciated till death.
E nabling our hearts, like bells to ring.
S uch sweet songs, together we'll sing.
T easing words pass in the mist,
D eepening affection,
E victing thoughts of predilection.
B eguiling eyes in a cherubic face.
L oving little boy in our embrace.
I nstilled in him your fathers and mine.
U nbreakable bond, His design.
~Tex

FrancisTony:
Okay. Thanks,

I'm about to do it.

EverestdeBliu:
"If we could see what blind men see"
la lik'ah

EverestdeBliu:
That's my gurl (winks)

FrancisTony:
Pele tie.

You guys should come and mark my homework nau

cc- laykorn
Leki10

FrancisTony:
A Dream

I laid down on the bed, waiting for mother nature to take its cause,
Like a twilight, a wind blew me in a Planet where I couldn't figure whatsover;

I wandered in the darkness,
a cave--I took the route and my head spinned and tickled that I had to take a rest.

I met so many fairies,
from snow-white to goblin, little birds whilstling and frogs croaking;

Oh!, a bell rung and I woke up from the dreamland and ready to school.

laykorn:
Miss Veralaw. Your theme is awesome.
Just that,

Every line of a poem starts with a block letter.
And, always remember to punctuate your poem just like you'd punctuate an essay.

You made some mistakes in the punctuation.

But overall, this is a good poem.
Make sure you read more and more poems.
Ciao
Ayamlaykorn

leki10:
kudos dear.....
since the first line is a question, you should punctuate wit a question mark.
Line 4 was not punctuated at the end.....keep it up
The sky is ur starting point

laykorn:
Wow! Great acrostic!
You forgot your period in line 4
Ayamlaykorn

Buqqui:
Thanks @ Texanomaly.
Hope I'm becoming more resourceful with the ink?

Buqqui:
I was trying out with an acrostic type of poem.


@ Texanomaly

Buqqui:
SHADOW


Silently and swiftly
He follows without a wimp
Abuts his owner through thick and thin
Dedicated and faithful,Oh! What a friend.
On-board the train even in death,
Whatever befalls he sticks around.



Silently He observes
He sees but says naught
Abide by the good and the bad
Denies no one the pleasure of their devise
Oblivious though he seems
Wine not,he's always there.


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Leki10
Texanomaly
Laykorn
Pappyrose