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LarrySun:
A very nice and brilliant innovation. I agree.

herald9:
suggestion...you can just give us a topic to write on...that will improve our skill...writing on random topic sucks

EverestdeBliu:
(Structure,choice of diction,meter and punctuation)...work on this four,and your poem will go beyond the helm.

HumbledbYGrace:
Texanomaly has to come and confirm please?

Thanks laykorn

Ghostlady:
MISSING YOU

You have been gone for a year now.
Why don't you remember the vow
We shared Together?
You don't even bother.

That night you vowed to come back.
Now I have to pack.
I cannot wait again.
I cannot bear the pain.

I know am losing You,
But my heart is hurt, cos I'm missing You.

Cc:Laykorn
Texanomaly

Am just a beginner,please

laykorn:
*clears throat
Ayamlaykorn

Buqqui:
It's strictly the work of a beginner.
But I'll do My best to make it look great.
Thanks to My Tutors, I can finally achieve one of My wishes, 'become a Poet'.


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Laykon
Texanomaly

Buqqui:
Each time I awake
I hear the thoughts resound
In the innermost part of My belly
But when I make the efforts
To put the ink to paper
I tend to ask Myself
Where all the thoughts have gone.

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Laykorn
Texanomaly

Buqqui:
As I lay down to sleep
I finally glide into deep sleep
As the fabric of reality gets pulled aside
I'm finally freed from the anxieties and worries
Of the day that seems endless
And as I embrace the tranquility of the night
I can finally put my head to rest.

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Laykorn
Texanomaly

Buqqui:
Where did we miss it?
How did it go wrong?
The natural way
Of a man with a woman
We left the ancient path
We derailed from what
It's meant to be
And pursued this madness called 'gay
But I hear it re-echoed again
Man and woman he made them
It's Adam and Eve
Not Adam and Steve


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Laykorn
Texanomaly

Ghostlady:
MISSING YOU

You have been gone for a year now
Why don't you remember the vow
We shared Together
You don't even bother

That night,you vowed to come back
Now I have to pack
I cannot wait again
I cannot bear the pain

I know am losing You
But my heart is hurt,cos I'm missing You

Cc:Laykorn
Texanomaly

Am just a beginner,please

FrancisTony:
Cc- Texanomaly, laykorn

The One Who Abandoned Me

I was in total dis-satisfaction when you said it was over,
Get over it, I didn't.

I wandered in the wilderness--cying out loud,
My cry could be heard far away.

I held my breathe when I couldn't take it any longer, as a voice trickled in my heart.

Far and wide, it blew away the feelings, and I could see as it vanished in a twinkle of an eye.

Oh! It came to an abrupt end, and my heart consoled myself as I looked into the thin air with tears.

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Shey, I try

harrysterol:
:Dam prepared now, I came to class late today, am copying the notes, since you where in class you will answer some questions meant for the lecturer then

harrysterol:
we r here, I lost my pen, so I went to buy another pen