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Beautiful art piece not a poem but prose narrated.Keep writing.

Is Mr Paul a blackmailer or what?He shouldnt have earned the position through such a means.Remember what goes around comes around.

Pastor Bisi and Sister Chinyere should get married to each other and we would blot out their sins.Mr Paul is not better because he is 'an arije ni idi ibaje'[opportunist].

Ladman if the post is to test your ability in writing,u did well and you could still do better.Dont stop writing the next post may draw attention of a literary agent or a publisher.Prove to them in your writing that you got the pen and the skill.

Thanks Dyt and Ladman, not all the stories of love that end with happy end…that’s the reality of life different from the literature that strives to satisfy the audience.

The persona of the poem is truly in love and he had been faithful all year long but life experience is more complex than life itself. If only the heroine could understand that when we are truly in love we should trust in love because temptation would always come to put our love to test its only the trust that could see them through.

I Cee the Bases for your want me to be yours
It could make Dyt fall for you
But not for me without a pause
The pause to heal my pains
The pause to look before I leap
The pause …
Maybe to look elsewhere or
take you for your words
Because once bitten twice shy
I learnt from you how to listen to words rather than beats,
So the rhythm of your artistic outpour
Won’t make me fall
Without a surgery on each of your words
Do not let me do this
Telling the world about him, you and me
Because you know
If you truly deserve me
You know what to do
It’s between me and you
My pen of love was broken by him
I couldn’t write love
My ink of love wasn’t spilt
I could still flow with ink of love
I could paint you love
But….
If I were truly the she
I would take my time
To know if this is the kind of love my mama warns me about
So that I won’t be in trouble again

Dont tell me you thought that out, then you must be THE LEGEND of mathematics and if it's not you must be THE SEEKER of TRUTH and the truth is YOU ARE THE CONFESSOR OF TRUTH.

but wait a minute!
THE REAL TRUTH is NOT IN ALL LANGUAGES your theory could work but semantically and universally u've said the truth.Kudos

oh no!Few words with lot of message.The story, the message well woven.THANKS for d good work.Art is not just for the art sake but a vehicle through which we transport our message, because we have something we want to teach

Those tears you saw me with

tear me down

because she left me down
Done with you was what she said to me
sad indeed I became.

She came to my world with lots of love
but left without love left in her heart for me,

For me,that is the greatest shock I ever received

deceived by deceit!

Sit down please I would explain

she is right for leaving me
but she is wrong for not trusting me

Maybe tomorrow shall tell her that
she shouldnt have left me
for the reason everyone would approve
for that reason no one would believe
except the heart truely dipped deep in love

OH!I CRIED
For I did it for her love to last
last thing anyman would do for love
sacrificing in pains, battling the temptations all alone
not to eat any of these forbiding fruits hanging down on my shoulders

drenched I was but the energy to stay strong
her love provided me with
Although distance we were for years

Yes I stayed for nine years yearning for this year to come
only to hear that it has come to a dead end
for a plotted crime committed 5years back

I stuck my flesh into another for the first time not even before with her
This apple I ate I told her
was the reason for leaving me today

This I did for her love
when the pressure was much on me
'the she's' was weaker to have hold on me
so I put her apple in my mouth for the others whose apples I truely want to stay away from me
although she was far away from me
but I would never give my heart away
so I plotted a crime
it worked!
It sends them away
but she went away with them

not trusting my artistic damn scheme
So damn the scheme that caused me the tear
damn the inarticulate words of mine
that carry no conviction of truth
For deep down my heart I did it for her love
Tell her I'm crying
carrying my cross alone.

Those words of yours

if I were she
pat me at my back
give me hope

that someonelse appreciates me
but wait a minute!
he wasnt like that before
but grew to become what he is today
after he had had enough of me

For you shall do the same
because beneath your words
I see the quick passion to make me groan
groan in pains of another

pain is pain!

Please you all should let me be!

For I know my mistake
letting him have me
without the ring yet in my finger

I shall wait and let you prove your love

at the altar
then I shall believe that

It should have been me and you

Se efe wo pata fefon ni abi sefe maa fi ideri oti pon mi si kan ga ni
that's una wan wear mosquito trouser or nna wan fill d well wt corkful of water, IMPOSSIBLE, yarn me another slang

Wole Soyinka speaks English but Partric adds new trend to English Language.I think Patrick is great speaking what has never been spoken before.Kudos bros pls produce a dictionary for Wole Soyinka and the rest of us to learn