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Austin & Caleb : hi nice to meet you, they exchange pleasantries.

Austin: max told us about you, why re you avoiding him honey isn't he cute enough for you or do you need us to introduce you to the love doctor

Tracy: (laughs) no thanks

Caleb: you re a tough girl, you didn't scream when we put you inside the car, if it had been some girls they would cry and scream like they were being butchered (they all laughs)
August was the one driving the car but they got to a junction and the twins came down leaving tracy and max alone while they entered into another car which seems like it has been waiting for them.

Tracy: woa this was a planned work

Max: (laughs) yes it was but.they were the master.planner of it, i owe them, so where do you us to go, don't you dare say ur hostel cause if you do, i will take you to my apartment

Tracy loved it when he smiles it reveals his dimple and his eyes become smaller, max finally stopped at a place which looked like a love garden, he quickly opened the door for tracy, when she came down she realised they were the only ones there with the set of waiters who greeted them.

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Tracy : max..........what the butt is going on here and where re you taking me to

Max: tracy calm down and allow me to to explain

Tracy: you have got two minutes before i stop the car

Max: ok, the truth i wanted to talk to you but you were alway avoiding me even when i sat beside you wouldn't talk to me and i hardly see you after lectures so i decided to kidnap you so we could go to somewhere cool and talk, you know as in a date

Tracy: are you okay, you kidnap me to go out with you

max: am sorry, but this was the only way i could get you to go out with me since you have been avoiding me

Tracy: then who re them (pointing at the two other guyz in the car who were still wearing their mask)

Max: oh there re my friends, come on guyz remove the mask and stop scaring her (they removed their mask and tracy saw of the cutest set of twins she has ever seen) they re Austin and caleb.

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Tracy was forced into the car and the ar speedily drove off, some of the people who saw what happened in the scene saw away to avoid stories that made obansajo smile while some guyz and girls ran after the car chanting kidnappers, ole oshi.

guy 1: isn't it weird that a sweet ride like spider was used to kidnap a student who couldn't afford the car tire.

guy 2: bro a car stopped and masked men kidnapped a girl just now and all you can say is that she couldn't afford the tire, abeg receive sense

girl 1: but i think he is right, if the kidnappers could afford such a car then why kidnap the girl

guy 2: babe if i may ask, where were you when God was distributing sense to people

guy 4: she was busy forming slay queen(they all laughed)
(they chase the car for a while but stopped because the speed of the car gave them a long gap so.they all retreated.to their destination.)

Tracy was so scared that she was sweating even when the Ac was on and a cool song was playing, she thought of her family and the fort coming moot court competition between unilag and international students which she has been preparing for a long time, tracy closed her eyes and prayed silently for God to help her, while praying her lips was 'moving but nothing could be heard suddenly the guyz burst into laughter which made tracy open her eyes, she was confused by their behavior when one of the guyz went closer to her and removed his mask, tracy opened her mouth in shock for some secs before saying

tracy : max....

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it been three weeks since the incident between tracy and the cultist girls, she felt her troubles re finally over so she tried to act like every college student will act by attending classes, making notes and excelling in her studies but she lacked a funful social life, if grades could be given for social life, tracy would definitely be given an f9, she was alway indoor even when there was a lot of event and parties to attend, she only went out if she is going for lectures or to get something. Tracy tried to avoid having a conversation with max because she wasn't ready to go out with a guy so on thursday evening (4:57pm), tracy dressed casual and went out to buy food items she needed to use to cook , after her little shopping while going back to her hostel a toyota spider quickly drove to where she was, two guyz came out of the car masked, they grabbed her and use a handerchief to cover her mouth while they put her inside the car and drove off.

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it been three weeks since the incident between tracy and the cultist girls, she felt her troubles re finally over so she tried to act like every college student will act by attending classes, making notes and excelling in her studies but she lacked a funful social life, if grades could be given for social life, tracy would definitely be given an f9, she was alway indoor even when there was a lot of event and parties to attend, she only went out if she is going for lectures or to get something. Tracy tried to avoid having a conversation with max because she wasn't ready to go out with a guy so on thursday evening (4:57pm), tracy dressed casual and went out to buy food items she needed to use to cook , after her little shopping while going back to her hostel a toyota spider quickly drove to where she was, two guyz came out of the car masked, they grabbed her and use a handerchief to cover her mouth while they put her inside the car and drove off.

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Dad: this foolish girl had the guts to bring a boy into my room and unto my bed, i will deal with you later, now you stand up you foolish boy(dami quickly stood, he was too scared to feel shy about being naked, tracy's Dad brought out his belt and instructed dami to lie down on the floor, that moment he said so, dami began to cry like a baby but tracy's dad caredless about his tear, he flogged him until he was injured)

Tracy mom, feeling so ashamed of her daughter used her own cane to deal with her. the pain didn't hurt as much as the shame she brought upon her family because the neigbors found out later and used it against her parents, from that day tracy avoid having friends or being close to boys until she entered unilag where she has to overcome a lot of challenges.

hidhrhis:
I was trying to talk to u the best way I can but it seems ur stupidity won't let u learn
I don't blame u sha na bcoz ur stupid foolish parent gave u a phone that why u feel u can just come on nl and insult people who try to talk to u
d way u talk shows how much ur parent spoilt u until u lose them u won't know the right way to talk to people
u meet different ppl but just believe their are some ppl that can show u hell in this world

pls stop the insults pls no more insults

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Tracy held his hands and directed him to her parents bed where they lay naked while she instructed him on what to do, back then tracy was in jss 2, and all those time she was using the phone dami gave her, she kept it a secret from her parents. she directed dami's hands to her boos and told him to rub them, while she moans, she held his d**k and was about to put it in her mouth when a torch was flashed on them.

Dad: Tracy what re you both doing while naked in my bed (in a loud voice that attracted the attention of their neigbors and tracy's mom quickly came in when one of their neigbors informed her that her husband was shouting at someone inside their room)

mom: Honey what's wrong(before she could finish her statement what she saw before made her gasp for air, while she quickly lock their door to avoid the neigbors from entering their room)

Dad: woman what do you have to say about this prostitute you call a daughter, (by then tracy was crying while dami was too scared to cry or move) this foolish girl.

Neoteny:
And how are you acting different from what you're accusing me?
Stupid Nigerians.
Can't stand criticism and opinions.
Fukk off.

pls it okay, no more insults

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it was pretty dark everywhere and the only lights that could be seen was the light coming from their who was using generator,it was 09:08 everywhere was cool but noisy, it was the dry season so people came outside to receive fresh air while the married.women sat aside gossiping with the young girls and boys playing naughtily and among them was tracy and dami, tracy mother called unto tracy to fetch her wrapper inside the house and when tracy entered their house dami went with her and since it was pretty dark inside they decided to do it before going back outside to play, the only source of Light in tracy's house apart from nepa light was a torch which was always held by the father.


tracy family live in a "face me, i face you apartment, although the house isn't big and it has ten room in it, it is a crowded house with families of five or six living in a room, tracy and her family had a room and parlour of their own but share toilet and bathroom with others.

Tracy: dami oya pull ur trouser let's do fast
Dami: i already did, remove ur gown
Tracy: ok i have removed it, let's do the one i watched yesterday, whatever i tell you to do just do it fast to avoid being caught.

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*Tracy's past*

Tracy is a girl who.is always attracted to guyz mostly because she is curvy and pretty but her parents failed to notice when tracy was getting naughty, she hardly makes friends but the one she.had who was a guy really cared for her that people thought they were.dating, at first tracy had no bad intention in mind for her male friend but the dude really wanted to sleep with her, he bought an android phone for her so he could always talk to her but the phone spoiled tracy, when she was alone she would watch erotic films, read erotic story and keep the nude of her fellow girl.in her phone, tracy back then was bisexual she lust to Bleep both males and females, the name of her male friend was dami. so one day she decided to practice all she has been watching on dami, they talked about it and dami saw it as an opportunity to fulfill his heart desire. so they planned on having sex in tracy's house because tracy parent wouldn't allow her go out at night and the house where tracy and her family lived had beside them an abandoned house so they planned to have sex in that house.

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When.tracy was getting close to her hostel she.saw max.

Tracy: hey dude what's up
max: am great, i was actually looking for you
Tracy: is it because of the tomorro's test (max became confuse and when he tried to talk tracy cut him short) why didn't you show up, when you told me to meet you in the lagoon park ( as max tried to say something tracy didn't let him speak) you just scheduled a time and location for us but didn't show up

max: tracy pls slow down, i didn't call you, we aren't having any test tomorro and i have no idea what ur talking about

Tracy: if you didn't call me then who did

max: i have no idea

Tracy: then why re you looking for me

max: you have been abcence in class for a while so i came to check if ur okay

Tracy: am great as you see, sooo.......

max: if ur not busy i would love to take you out for a drink and maybe we could talk

Tracy: well it been a long day for me, how about another time we talk about this bye.

Tracy didn't wait for his reply and she walked away while max who was confuse.of her behavior went to where he parked his car, entered.it and drove off. tracy quickly entered her room and tried not to think of max because of what happened in the past.

@everyone am sorry for.the short update, battery low and my phone dey hang. i will update later

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vera intervene on viper's behalf but by then she had a sore eyes and a bleeding.nose.

Vera-d-terror: nice one tracy, you won the fightt you had escaped death today so you can go.

Tracy was breathing fast as was her heart but when vera said she can go, tracy felt a huge relief by then it was 4:45pm and the sun had gone home leaving the clouds in charge of the sky,.the cool breeze and calmness of the lagoon park excited tracy while she walked to her hostel, when she was miles away from the girls vera faced viper.

vera-d-terror: i go reason ur mata lara, make una finish the drinking, i don vex (the girls all drank and smoked quietly because they felt bitter that an outsider defeated one of their own and walked away alive, vera felt confuse why she couldn't kill tracy, she felt there was a connection but she was also angry at herself for being soft on tracy which the girls will later question but she cared less about what they think).

Tracy was getting close to her hostel when she saw max.

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vera shouted "fight" and the girls were chanting viper's name and encouraging her.

girl 1: viper blow her eyes make she no see road to her ancestors grave
girl 2: viper draw her hair na her weak point
girl 3: babe no let her touch you oooo, just blow her for belle, she go weak

Tracy knew fully well that whenever girls re fighting they like tearing clothes and drawing of hair so she had to make sure to avoid viper touching her hair. when the fight started viper tried to draw tracy's clothes but tracy caught her hand quickly and blow her on her belly, she kept blowing every part of her body which her hands could trace, trace used the word which the girls told viper against her, she blowed her eyes twice, draw her hair so hard that viper cried out loud and pushed tracy away from her but tracy had lost her self control because she thought of all she had been through since she came to the school and released all her anger on viper, she attacked viper with a slap on her back, blowed her tummy which landed her on the ground while she groan of the pain but tracy didn't stop, she went and sat on her tummy and kept blowing until vera told her to stop.

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Tracy's heart started beating fast the moment she said yes, she thought of how it all started till the moment she had to fight for her life from people she didn't know but it really doesn't matter because she was tired of people treating her like a piece of trash, she thought "if i lose and am killed maybe it for the best, she closed her eyes and thought of her parents and sibling and all the plans she had planned to give her family a better life and she said "losing isn't a choice.


the place was set for them to fight but before they started fighting, vera shot a gun twice in the air as a warning for intruders to stay away, when she pulled the shot tracy was scared thinking she wanted to kill her but vera eyes said otherwise to calm her. the girl.whom tracy wanted to fight was called angel but her gang call her viper, she was one of the strongest girl in the gang which really assured the girls that tracy will lose, the girls gathered in a circle with tracy and angel in the middle while Vera-d-terror was sitted in the front of the circle while the girls gave tracy enough space to fight.

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Vera d terror: wait

they all looked at her in surprise and waited to hear hear her judgment,by then the lagoon park was silent and calm the only sound that could be heard was the girls argument.Vera was a 300level student of unilag studying mass com, she hardly made friends outside her gang because she was a silent killer that was why she was called vera-d-terror, she is tall and fair in complexion and she could pass for a model but she wasn't curvy.

Vera-d-terror: girl come here (tracy left the midst of the girls that were ready for destroy her with beating and went in front of vera-d -terror), so you dey my caban dey form jagaban ok here is the deal you re both gonna fight, who ever reaches the ground first loses, by the way what's ur name (tracy looked her at her in the eyes and said "my name is tracy".

Girl 1: (they all laughed at her) i go trace you go give ur ancestors shebi, na my O.G you dey look face to face.

Vera continued her speech
tracy if you lose the fight you die here right now but if you win i will let you walk away for now so are you ready(vera maintained eye contact with tracy and tracy replied her yes).

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One of the girls slapped tracy's ass which annoyed her, she stopped dancing and face the girl who slapped her.

Tracy: i been keep my cool because i no want trouble but no try touch my ass

All the girls just watched silently for ten sec before they all laughed.

Girl 1: hahaha.... see this caton jew girl dey form jagaban oo, if i touched em wetin you go do( she pushed tracy on the chest while others laughed, as she tried to push her again, tracy held her hand)

Tracy: no push me (immediately tracy said these words the girl slapped her)

Girl 1: if you reply me again i go play you anyhow you dey memo,

Tracy: babe i dey respect you no mean say you go slap me oo, if we fight one on one you no fit beat me

Tracy's word annoyed all the girls, as they stood up to attack her, the girl who was wearing a mixture of red and black attire among their girls stopped them and her name was vera d terror, she was the leader of the girls, she is hardly seen with them but today was a special occasion for them so she came out with the girls.

Vera: wait

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The girls had with them an mp3 player so they changed the song to runtown titled bend pause and increased the volume while they continued smoking and drinking.

Girl 3: oya no vex me, start to dance follow the beat make you bend down pause
Girl 1: and make you twerk ooooo before i release another slap for ur face

Tracy felt weak and embarrass, tears kept falling from her eyes down her cheek while she danced, she silently prayed for God to rescue from this girls.

The girls were occultic girls, they were sitted in the place where a lot lovers usually sit in the lagoon park, they were eleven in numbers and from their colour and mode of dressing one could tell they belonged, they wore a mixture of red and yellow tops with bumshorts, some of them wore just red mini gown with yellow snicker and yellow barrect or handker tied to their head as a symbol of oness amongst them, they smoked weed like their life depended on it but there was who didn't say a word among the girls but listened kept starring at tracy, she was dressed in black crop top, black bum short, red snicker and red barrect.


Tracy is a fair girl with an average height, she is curvy and hardly smiles, she is from a poor home where they value education but could only sponsor one of their child. Tracy hardly speaks or make friends and she never allow anybody to step on her toes.

While tracy was dancing, the girls mocked her dancing steps.

Girl 1: na wetin you dey
Girl 2: come on shake that booty for us
Girl 3: if na ur bobo tell you to shake you for don over do

One of the girls slap her ass and tracy stopped dancing and faced her.

nnamdiosu:
Nice intro. Love it honey. However, if you must move from a good writer to a great writer, you must ensure the following in your write ups....which I didn't see...

1. Proof read your write ups for grammatical errors. (Surprisingly, this is best done (on this forum) by reading what you just posted...after posting it. Because of the short typing box on the phone , it might be hard to note the errors.

2. You appear to be in a hurry in your narrative of the story. Let me explain. Writing is like examining a science to a deaf friend. You need to out yourself in our shoes to know how to explain to us. E.g when

us about Tracy, (the main lead), you should have described her to us. Is she fair, dark, tall, chubby, tribal marks etc.

The car that splashed water on her: was it a Benz, black car, jeep, etc

The environment: was it cloudy, windy, rainy etc

Since you said unilag, you should have used a familiar place in unilag, maybe moremi hostel by the car park. This is a real place in unilag. If you had done this, it would ha e given us your readers a more real life feeling. All of us AT ONCE WOULD HAVE PICTURED MOREMI HOSTEL (for those of us that have been there). Also citing the place at the car park gives more credence and all. That's why writers even research on the story before writing. You ought to have visited unilag or even asked someone who has been there to describe popular places for you to infuse into your story.

A. You don't rush when giving a story. Let us imagine we are there.describe the buildings or road.

B. Also know we are blind when reading a story. Describe even little things for us. The gentle breeze blowing was swaying the tress, people were slowly strolling in twos or threes....Thats why great artist even look for sounds to use...
But this is a great start my dear. Look into my critiques up....you surely will make a fantastic writer. Kudos

Thanks a lot i will try my best

MhiztaRange:
your updates short pass mini Penn*s, and there are so much typographical error which you ought to correct, nice story though.

It cause my phone is a small phone with a lot of faults

Dakorr:
Well done bro but please try and finish the story

Am a girl

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When tracy heard the female voice she became weak and thought of the things she has been through ever since she came to the sch.

Tracy: ooooo lord now why am i being called, ever since i came to this sch, i have been jumping from one trouble to the other, why did i bother coming to this place maybe it was a prank, oooo when i find out who did this he or she will regret it, while tracy was still thinking she was brought back reality with ahot slap.

Girl 1: you dey mad abi na highness dey do you ( tracy wanted to retaliate but remembered her last experience with those cultist girls so she just stood still massaging her cheek)

Girl 2: carry her come this way make we treat her fuckup

Girl 3: yes carry the jouncin girl come make we reason her mata

The girl who slapped tracy pushed her to where the rest of the girls were.

Girl 2: wait oooo i know shema, na she slap micheal for class

Girl 1: so for ur mind now you dey popular, so you don thick liver wey make you slap the bobo

Girl 4: before i dey her for our gathering but she don Bleep up

Girl 3: make she entertain us small before we go know wetin to do with her

Girl 1: you head dey there, oya standing up make you dance for us she said to tracy

MhiztaRange:
your updates short pass mini Penn*s, and there are so much typographical error which you ought to correct, nice story though.

thanks i will try making the updates longer

Dazzle86:
Needs lots of improvement.

Thanks for telling me, i will try my best.

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Tracy skipped lectures for few days because of the whole drama with micheal and cause of the wound given to her by nikky girls. On thursday when she had gotten better and was cleaning her room when her phone rang when she checked who it is, she found out it was an unknown caller and the only people with her number was her parents and naomi so she decided to pick the call.

Unknown caller: hello tracy
tracy: hi,pls who am i speaking with
Unknown caller: it max, why have you been missing lectures,
Tracy: but how did you get my number
Unknown: that ain't important, we will have test on friday which is tomorrow and so come to lagoon park by 3:00 let's read together and i could you my notes on the area you missed (the unknown caller ended the call)

By 2:30 tracy was already in the lagoon park waiting for stranger who called her, while sitting there she admired the park and since she was there early she decided to troll around it, when trolling she noticed a large group of girl all smoking and drinking, when she was about to passed them she heard a female voice say
girl : hey come here

Neoteny:
Not everyone is born to be a writer.

This one most certainly isn't.

When i said criticism was allowed, i never meant what you typed above, if i made a mistake with my sentence contruction tell me don't judge me

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Micheal : if any lady come in here am gonna embarrass her(kelvin quickly called the nurse and told her not to come)

David : micheal so what's ur next plan

Micheal : chill hommies when the time arrive to execute my plan, am gonna let you all know,

Kelvin : woa that girl really slapped you hard, will you listen to urself you haven't even said what the plan is

Micheal didn't say thing, he just laid there thinking and smiling.


Meanwhile tracy felt too weak to walk to the hostel with the beating she got from nikky's girls so she took a bike to her hostel, when she got into her room she saw naomi sitting in her bed while checking the time and door, when tracy walked in naomi quickly ran and hugged her..

Naomi: are you okay, i heard the notorious nikky and her gang attacked you

Tracytracy just starred at her like she was insane before answering her) so you knew and ur still asking if am okay huh

Naomi: why re you starring at me like that, i was only being concerned, why not come live with me for a while

Tracy: no thanks i can handle the situation

naomi boiled a hot water to massage tracy's body, she bought food from a restaurant for tracy after which she left to her apartment.

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Meanwhile micheal's friends took him to their crib (micheal and his friends live outside the school), a little description about michael, he is the son of a senator although his father forced him to school abroad but he insisted on schooling in unilag and as daddy's boy his father decided to let him be but showered him with luxuries.Micheal is a tall, dark guy with a curly hair, he is the real definition of an african prince with a pink lips but he is a spoilt brat. A lot of girls folk around him but he only uses girls and dump them that moment. Micheal is a level two law student, he paid that lecturer to allow him be in tracy's group and the lecturer is a relative of his. He roll with the big boys on campus.

Micheal's friends laid him in the huge bed and kelvin called a female nurse while micheal just laid on the bed thinking and laughing when bob noticed it he called unto others.

Bob: hey guys what's up with micheal, ever since we brought him in he has been smiling

Kelvin: although i am angry with that but doesn't she remind you guys of someone

Kelly: yeah micheal's sis
They all laughed except for micheal

Micheal : will you guys just shut up it not funny

kelvin: are you kidding me, bro did you remember those time when she beats you up ( they all laughed again)

Micheal : quit annoying me but i think that girl tracy really likes me, didn't you all heard what she said about being single maybe she is indirectly telling me to court her

Kelvin : dude i think the effect of slap is still working in ur system, good thing i called a sexy nurse...