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I know it's difficult to trust a person who couldn't finish her first story But I hope y'all check it out later

genius43:
Why not finish one before starting another? How sure are you, you won't abandon it half way like this one?

Anyway the decision is yours to make.

The reason I couldn't finish this one was because I made a lot of grammatical errors from the start, but my new story has already been written halfway all I gotta do is post it, I also had some of my buddies review it, I hope y'all check it out the title is "Rebirth", honestly speaking I haven't gone half way in this "chronicles of Tracy".

Chidorx60:
You are extremely talented
Infact you are a true literarily wonder,a masterpiece of creativity.


I only hope that this is a fiction and not reality,cause its sad to imagine what Tracy is going through.

You are thoughtful but I am planning on leaving the story unto another one though

sisilimart622:
Tracy Pls finish dis story once we beg u... dis suspense is Jst too much.. I understand u busy with sch but find time dis weekend.. can't wait for d rest episode

It stopped because of school and a lot of errors i made in the beginning, please forgive me.

Continuation



They all entered their car and drove to Unilag, when they got into the school people's attention was caught by their style of driving and the way they moved in accord. They drove into the school and parked their car in order, they made their way to the department of mass com while students gave way for them, one of Nikki's girl spotted them and alert the others, they beauty, mode of dressing and style of working caught a lot of crowd to gather at the mass com department as the girls went in they went to sit in the back seat, when they saw it was already occupied, Scorpion personally went to there and told them to stand up for them to sit, no one could refuse after seeing Vera in the midst of the girls, rumors went round the school that they were all leaders of the Supreme mafias which made some of the students afraid to come to school, at first the lecturer hesitated to come in but he summoned some courage and went in to. The leaders each came with their assistant who stood in their back like armies preparing for war, They leaders of the Supreme mafias were all students from various institutions in Nigeria but most of them came from abroad, actually five of the leaders were schooling in abroad though they were Nigerian but were half cast, Having noticed the tension in the hall due to their presence the following conversation took place.


Scorpion - You seem to have everything in control Vera, who would have taught our presence would cause such commotion in school.

One of the half cast schooling abroad whose name was Lilly, she was a nerd, though her father was a car dealer, he owned a lot of companies in Nigeria and abroad, she was pampared by her parents but she stoic and fiend, she was schooling in one of the top universities in UK and she controlled the school, Due to her father's wealth she was rude and ruthless.

Lilly - I think this school is weak, I heard about the rebels and the reason why you took that Tracy girl in, seems like she is the only one that can save you from those inferior bitches.
Scorpion - (laughs) now now Lilly you need to calm down, we wouldn't want the leaders of the mafias clashing in this hall but Vera is this true? Cause I heard about it to.
Vera - Not to worry about it, there are just little peasants, I will take care of them, i alone run this school.
Lilly - I hope so, if such ever occur in my school, I will deal with them and have them expelled, I can't stand low lives.
Leader 4 - That girl has beautiful eyes.
Vera - Who?
Leader 4 - Tracy!!! I look forward to her initiation, the mafias has never initiated a low life with no financial status before (smirks) but she looks promising.
Lilly - if her attitude irritates me, I will Forget baba's word and kill her on the spot.
Scorpion - (she laughs out loud) Vera make sure she is prepared, I doubt if she will survive the first night but who knows, I love surprises.


Tracy was in her department studying when she heard the people close to her discussing about Vera and the other leaders, When Tracy heard the leaders were in school she felt confident that Nikki and her girls won't attack her, she wanted to meet them but didn't know their whereabouts while she was thinking about the girls, she heard her name.

James419:
Episode 10
It was my turn next and I came up with a proposition. I told him that I would give him my turn if he drank from the whiskey. He agreed, his apparent lust was so obvious. It was as subtle as an M-16 without a silencer. He agreed and drank again. Then he had my turn. He spun and it landed on Diana again. Personally I think he manipulated it so that it would land on her. He dared her to sleep with him. So predictable, she was reluctant at first until I personally convinced her to do it, after all it was just sex. She agreed only on one condition, they wouldn’t do it in front of me. I opted to leave but James refused. He said they had many rooms and they’d just use one of them. I shrugged it off nonchalantly and started playing games on my phone. They stood up and left. Thirty minutes later, James came out sweating profusely, he had achieved his aim. I was pretty sure that he was feeling incredibly smug and self fulfilled. It never ceased to amaze me the kind of things people derived utmost pleasure from. For James, it was probably whoring around and sleeping with any and every girl that he could get his hands on.
He found me sipping something from one of those golden goblets and he flopped down beside me.
“How was it?” I asked him
“It was okay, I guess. She’s fallen asleep”
It was finally time to make my move, I passed him what I was sipping and he took a big gulp from it.
“Easy, it has a really wicked kick to it”
“Yeah right” he replied.
I’m serious” I continued. “You shouldn’t drink too much, I couldn’t even finish an entire cup”
To prove how macho he was, he dragged the bottle from me and took a really big swig. The slowpoke had taken the bait; there was no going back now.
“You know James” I began “I really admire you. Your influence, the money, the attention, everything about you. I’d like to be like you”
Maybe I was laying it on too thick but by now he was probably to intoxicated to notice what I was saying. That was the problem with alcohol; it messed with your brain cells making you lose vital control of important parts like logical reasoning thus impairing your ability to deliver sound judgment. And I bet he wasn’t reasoning well.
“Really?” he slurred a little” Thanks man, I love you too”
“So” I asked “what’s the deal with you and Laura?”
“Oh, nothing much, just a bet.’
“A bet? What’s that all about?”
“ Me and some of the guys had a bet about whether or not I could get her to sleep with me. I’m supposed to provide video evidence”
“If I understand this correctly, you’re supposed to make a sex tape of you and her, to show to your guys, and after that you’ve won the bet?”
“Pretty much” he replied
“Wow, that’s so cool. Have you done this kinda stuff before?” I asked
“Lots of times, with most of the girls on the cheerleading team”
“But almost every cheerleader is dating a jock”
“And so what? It’s not my fault if their girlfriends find me irresistible”
At this point I was ready to snap his neck, I wanted to kill him in the most painful way imaginable. This guy was a total douche, he had even been sleeping with the girls of the people that called him friend, it was unforgivable.
“How exactly do you get them to agree to sleep with you?”
“Any way I can. Whether it is by blackmail, by money or just plain seduction, as long as I can get them in my bed, it doesn’t really matter how I do it now, does it?”
“I guess it doesn’t”
With every second that passed, I was beginning to resent him even more. So that was all Laura was to him, just another notch on his belt. It was infuriating that people like this existed, people willing to use other people just so that they could fulfill their selfish desires. It made me really sad for him. I started contemplating what kind of home training that he had been given that made him turn out this way. His parents must have really screwed something up. Or was it society? Had society played a role in his life? Had it been its influence that had turned an otherwise gentle kid into this monster that sat beside me? A monster that held no regard for the feelings of other individuals with which it occupied the same habitat, a monster that trampled upon other people just so that he could climb and stand atop a self-constructed pinnacle and revel in his misguided triumph. Wasn’t it lonely at the top? Didn’t his numerous victories feel shallow with nobody there to celebrate them with him? Even the lone ranger had Toto. We all needed somebody. But I couldn’t feel sorry for him. I had a plan to execute and those feelings would just get in the way of the job that I needed to get done. And so I continued with my inquiry. I talked with James all through the night till the wee hours of the morning when I quietly slipped away from his room after garnering as much information as I needed. I headed back home to process everything and put the finishing touches on my plan. I had nowhere to go anyway, it was a weekend and I had the whole time to finish up. I contemplated calling Laura but chickened out at the last moment, I hoped that she would understand everything at the end and find a way to forgive me.
School was boring as usual and it looked like it would remain that way. Laura didn’t look at me throughout all the classes we had together. I guess I deserved that. I met James in the hallway when classes dismissed for long break, he looked as smug as ever, he had no idea that I was about to wipe that smug grin off his face.
“Hey James” I called out to him “How’s it going?”
“Hey, just because we partied together last night doesn’t mean we’re buddy buddy” he relied condescendingly
“I guess it doesn’t, but I hope you enjoy the show”
“What do you mean, what show….?”
“I’ve slept with Thelma, Linda, Jane; I even slept with Maisy in Michael’s house while he was passed out after a night of partying”
That was James’ voice and it seemed to be coming out from the general PA system. With eyes wide, he turned to me and uttered the four most fulfilling words that I had ever heard him say.
“What have you done?”
Game over man…
To be continued…

Great stroryline, I look forward to the next episode

rukidanty:
you are pardon and thanks for the update..can't wait for the fight and when are we expecting the next update,please?

Heheheh.... I don't know but i will try to update early

I made a few typo errors because I was trying to type fast, please pardon me

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Tracy showed up with her mouth filled with beans, she couldn't talk so she stood there starring at Scorpion when a hot slap landed on her cheek hard, she stumbled back a little, after some seconds, she raised her head and saw a girl in low cut starring at her with a frowned face. She brought out a gun and pointed it at Tracy, Vera didn't react, she sat on the couch watching to see what happens next. The name of Scorpion's assistant was alex but she was called wire, she was average in height, dark and a little curvy, she had a big tattoo on her back with her name on it, wire pointed her gun and the following conversation took place.


Wire - Who are you? What are you? What do you think of yourself? Na who dey work you? You are yet to be initiated yet you mere brat dare look at Da boss in the eye, my respect for The terror (Vera) is the reason why you are still alive, I would have waste you that moment you disrespected my Boss but it isn't up to me to make the decision.

She turns to Vera and Scorpion, seeking their opinion of what to do with her, before Vera could speak, scorpion told wire to let Tracy go. It came as a shock to both Vera and wire, she kept her gun back and went to seat while Tracy stood there dumbfounded of what just happened, she felt she was a different word where power is absolute, she didn't take it personal as she already a little about cultist but she never knew the rich and influential could engage in such activities, nevertheless she apologized to scorpion even though she knew not her crime. Scorpion stood up from the couch and walked slowly in Tracy's direction, she raised Tracy's chin up and stared at her eyes then she touched her lips.


Scorpion - You have a beautiful lips Tracy, your boyfriend is lucky to have you. (Tracy didn't say anything) Why do you wanna join the Supreme mafias?

Before Tracy could answered Vera stopped her from saying anything and told scorpion to leave it till the day of the initiation, after then Night came and Vera took scorpion to the hotel owned by her dad, it was one of the biggest hotel in lagos and it was expensive, Having invited the leaders of the Supreme mafias in every school, they didn't pay for anything.

The next day more of the leaders arrived and showed up in Vera's house, before they are taken to the hotel, the third day they all arrived and were taken to the hotel to the rooms prepared for them, each leader of the mafias was rich and influential, this was one of the thing which balanced the power of the leaders, their influencial status helped them in running the institution where they School, initially the mafias sought out for power, wealth and fame in order to rule the campus, most of them were brutal in their school while some were nice. They were 24 in numbers and Vera included made it 25, most of them came from abroad, the aim of the mafias is the rule the school and keep it in order, but most of them abused their power and others couldn't intervene since it was their rule. Most of the leaders came to see Tracy who was the reason for their gathering became the mafias do not allow just anyone into their gang unless they are rich, powerful, brilliant and daring.

The third day after all the leaders were present, they all went to Vera's house, each with her own car, they entered the compound only to see Vera on her way to her car.


Leader 1: where are you heading to Vera? Can't you see we came to meet you?
Vera - my apologies, I was going to campus for lectures but since you are all here i might as well skip class for today.
Scorpion - Don't!!! Your presence is boring, let's all go to school.
Vera - What!!!
Leader 2: That's a good idea, let's go see how things are going in unilag.
Vera - Why stress yourselves when you can relax here
Ledear 3 - No! Let's go

They all entered their car and drove to school.

Yo everyone what's good?
I will drop an update tonight

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Vera made her way to the parlor and found a lady with long red hair sitting in the couch, she recognized her as Scorpion, Scorpion's real name was Nancy but she was called Scorpion by the leaders of the Supreme mafias while the gang called her Da boss, she was tall, fair and curvy, Close to Scorpion there was a girl sitting next to her, Each Leader of the Supreme mafias came with an assistant, Scorpion's assistant was a shallow looking girl, she was in low cut with her hair dyed well, she had piercing everywhere. Vera went to meet them while Tracy hurried to the kitchen to look for food, having woken up early to meet Baba they haven't eaten anything and it was 2:30pm in the afternoon. Vera met with them, they greeted themselves and the following conversation took place.

Vera - I will be lying if I'm not surprised to meet you here, seems like you have nothing doing this week.
Scorpion - (laughs) Are you trying to be sarcastic? Anyway my schedule is pretty tight this week but I came for a reason.
Vera - I hope there's no problem?
Scorpion - Not at all, having explained things to us, I wanted to meet the girl, before coming here mother of the rivers said something about a girl who would become a great light to be supreme mafias, I was curious so I came on my own. (mother of the rivers was a powerful woman, a seer who works with supreme mafias in uniben, she was known for her powerful charms).

Vera stood up in shocked, having known the mother of the rivers, her words were always true and she knew Scorpion was not the type to mess around. Vera was getting uncomfortable with the talk and praises about Tracy, she made to excuse herself but Scorpion called her back and requested to see Tracy.

Scorpion - Where's the girl?
Vera - uhm here she is...... *she turned her back but couldn't find Tracy, she called out to her and Tracy showed up with her mouth filled with beans, she couldn't say a word, she stood there starring at Scorpion when suddenly a hit slap landed on her cheek.