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texanomaly: yes I can understand why, I guess I just thought he knew about it.

texanomaly: Is Flow upset?

Salore4real: After about two minute she came towards where i was washing my cloth.
"thanks, i really appreciate" she said with a smile on her face.
"you're welcome" i replied her and started washing my cloths again.
she adjusted her skirt and left for the back door of her cousin salon.
After some few seconds she came out from the backdoor that lead to the backyard and started coughing towards my direction until she finally got to where i was.
I couldn't help that i wish i could disappear into thin air.
As she bent down beside me, immediately i felt a great cold as if an iceberg was put right beside me.
She complained to me that something like an insect entered her mouth which lead to the cough.
i quickly gave her the water i bought to surpase myself when i feel thirsty for her to drink inorder to relief her of the cough which she deliberately did.
then all of a sudden her cousin joe who expected her to have been back from the backyard opened the back door and called on her which she responded but at that point in-time i was through with what i was doing and later retired to bed.

Salore4real: @oruchechuks,thanks it is just that am using a mobile phone that is why it looked that way,it would have been different if i have used a system.u re welcome

oruchechuks: Your story funny die, bt lets do some construction here #grabs chiesel and hammer#.
1. Learn to use paragraphs, how? Each statement said by you or anothe person should be started on a new paragraph.
2. Use quotation mark effectively, how? Quotation mark should be used on words said and not on what you are thinking.
3. #flips through pages of literature writing guide#. . .uhmm. . . I think thats all for now

Mynd_44: Yes

Mynd_44: Titles are unimportant. The title will come to you naturally trust me

Mynd_44: Titles are unimportant. The title will come to you naturally trust me

madone: let him finish naw