Foluwadamilare:


Thank you
PS: I started learning when Venzal started this thread o..I'm still a learner..

You're a good learner then

Seems we reside in the same state

Foluwadamilare:
Venzal and all my people on the thread, I would love to here your criticisms on this piece in just wrote...



How to stop Coronavirus from EATING your Child's BRAIN!!!

Recent lockdown in countries around the world is giving a lot of people a hard time and difficulty.

Your children are not left out.

Children all over the world are struggling with anxiety and frustration because they have had to remain indoors all day, every day.

If care is not taken, the lockdown on schools and colleges will cause a long-term detrimental impact on your child's mental health and education.

Do you remember the tropical storm that destroyed schools and houses on the gulf coast (UK) back in 2005?

More than 124000 children - whose schools were shut for weeks due to the storm -fell behind their peers academy.

They performed worse than their peers in both literacy and numeracy tests for years after the event.

It's disheartening..

If a storm could do that to children, how do you think this pandemic - which has been on for months now -will affect your children??

Children have been home-bound for months now and all they do is play and watch TV.

Research has shown that a screentime higher than 1 hour will have an adverse effect on your child's mental abilities.

It gradually affects their reasoning and problem solving ability which can eventually cause a decrease in their intelligence.

Only you can protect your child from losing his/her intelligence.

And the best way to do that is to get them to READ something.

Studies have proven that making your child read books or stories promotes his/her brain development and imagination.

It helps them exercise their brain.

Reading opens their mind to questions about what they have read and you get the chance to teach and explain things to them.

Encouraging your children to read will greatly boost their reading skills and improve their learning experience.

I have a daughter who used to dislike reading
She would rather watch "PJ mask" all day than spend a minute reading her books.

I became very worried about her cos she was fast becoming addicted to watching "JimJam" all day.

So I sought advice from a colleague and she recommended this book[link] to me.

I bought the book and well..

I'll be damned!!!

My daughter couldn't get her hands off it!

The many interesting and action scenes in the book got her hooked.

Just last week, she requested for more books to read -which I provided

And I happily believe this is the start of something good

This book is definitely a lifesaver for parents like me who are willing to help their child the best way they can

Yesterday I made an order for more of the book -for my sister's playful kids -and I got it at a 44% discount price!!

It was as cheap as chips!!!

You can check out the book and read a summary here[link]

The discount offer is still available till the end of this week and deliveries are lightening fast

Place your order[link] now and watch your child transform into this century's Einstein!!!

Remember: NOTHING IS BETTER than a CHILD WHO LOVES TO LEARN

Regards
Deet

Amazing!..

After reading your first copy and also this, I'm forced to believe you've been in the copywriting game for a longer time before now..lol

Whichever way, this was a good read

Venzal:
This is good!

I didn't see the subject line, though.

Also, this line:

"more than a fat kid would crave for a cake."

That line is kinda sensitive and will touch a lot of nerves. You know today's generation is "woke" and every little thing now will be criticized.

I once saw a top copywriter use the line "sales letters are treated like the redhead stepchild of sales copywriting."

You needed to see the backlash. So you have to be careful.

You could also have thrown in a line or two more to spell out what is unique about the coffee maker and how that is BENEFICIAL to your readers.

Thanks for the input man.

Corrections duly taken

Youngsage:

Awesome. Great story. The copy should be a bit longer though...
Throw more light on the product itself, how it works, and more of what people stand to gain from it and why they should buy it

Thanks for your input.

I now know where I erred, corrections seriously taken

Safe night bro.

adsmaster:


Are you subscribed to Ben settle emails? If 'NO'' please you should.

Are you asking why?

Will tell you why in a minute...

Hard to say these first, your copy is great,love the story and how you linked it to the product but...

Enters why I said you should subscribe to Ben's email list.

He has a technique of first telling a story and then adding a testimony of maybe a client who bought his course.

Then always remember to talk about the benefit- how these Bluetooth coffee maker benefited someone.

Catch the drift?

That's all I gat for ya!

Nothing more to add.

Stay blessed

Adsmaster.

PS..the weather is freaking cold today. So cold can't even muster enough strength to go make coffee, only have enough left to go pick it up once its ready.
How much did you say you BLUETOOTH coffee maker is again?

Oh, OK

Thanks for your input man.

Just an imaginary price tho..

You can check the original price on Amazon

Foluwadamilare:



I'm a newbie like you, but think you should've laid more emphasis on how beneficial the product will be to your reader...

Nice story though....from a thousand words

Oh yeah! You're right about the benefits, I thought of it but I wanted to make it short as possible, I think I would have preferably ended with a kinda 'see more details' about the product here [LINK] to initiating 'Call For Action' instantly.

I'm still learning the copywriting ropes anyways , thanks a lot for your input, appreciate.

I came up with this copy.

I need opinions/criticisms from y'all.



'It was a stricken cold winter morning in Manhattan, Eddie Murphy rushed into the coffee shop only to be faced by a lengthy queue filled with folks with long-straight faces who would readily eat up anyone who jumped the coffee queue...

Inasmuch as Eddie was late for work, he needed coffee more than a fat kid would crave for a cake...

A weird but smart idea tingled in his head, and he smiled sheepishly...

With his hands in his pocket, he pulled out his cellphone and started off an abstract conversation but at the top of his voice...

'Hello, yeah, its Eddie Murphy... Oh Doctor Rogers!
My wife did what!
Come again?! (He caught everyone's attention at that moment)..
She delivered!
Oh, she delivered twins!

A middle aged lady at the front queue who was overwhelmed by his 'GOOD' news quickly pulled him forward and joyfully offered him her position as she was cheered by the rest of the queue members for her kind gesture.

That was how Eddie played his way in and got his coffee in seconds!

Not everyone can be lucky or cunning like Eddie Murphy especially as coffee lovers, but for you reading this, count yourself lucky as I introduce to you a device that can save you off the STRESS of being cunning like a tortoise just to get a taste of your favorite coffee.
I introduce the 'Bluetooth Coffee Maker'...

With this device, you can make your coffee from the warmth of your duvet just with a press on a button.

Click here [LINK] to get one for a dead discount of $59.99 before it reverts back to $99.99.

GideonG:
I can coach you to learn Python and Data Analysis in 3months, then Machine learning and Data science in another 3 months making you confident in your self in Data science and artificial intelligence in 6months. But you must be serious, and have atleast half of my enthusiasm or be in harmony to be contagion. We can do it virtually anywhere you are, I can do it for free but there's only one problem at the moment, as a final year student of B.tech Computer Science ( even though i studied Petroleum engineering over a decade ago). My computer is currently damaged and I have to get a new one of which I have to partake in a Machine learning competition to win a prize for me to acquire a system like around 75k, so follow the advice of that guy that Mentioned Data Analysis, Data is the new oil now and the sexiest job of the century. And why would you limit your self to Analysis while you can be a Data scientist to enhance your value? Start learning Python immediately, we will meet along the way, by then I must have been more professional through my participation in online competitions called kaggle.com you should register at kaggle too, employers check your points in this field through kaggle, that's one of a great idea to get jobs in Data science and artificial intelligence. I wish you the best, until I got system make your personal effort to learn.

I'm highly interested in this.

Where you located?

Can I get more details on this?.
Thanks

DeejayTeeno:


What if I'm a novice?

I came across this thread
https://www.nairaland.com/5898215/how-build-enviable-income-email

I think you can make a goldmine off it, that's if you're serious

DeejayTeeno:


What if I'm a novice?

It won't be easy, trust me.
Most successful writers have had the flair for writing from childhood. They've read countless books, novels, newspapers, written essays, attempted writing contests, journals, magazines, seen good movies, etc.

All the aforementioned goes a long way to shape writers. If you wanna write because you wanna make cash, then you might leave it sooner than you started cos it might be brain draining if it isn't your flair.

I'm not discouraging you either, I'm typing from my lil experience, someone else might have an opposite view which might be true too.
Cheers!

TheBlessedHero:


I'm yet to move finally, but whenever i'm in town, i stay at apata, wire & cable specifically.

OK

Check my signature, you'd find my contact.
You can reach me whenever you're around

TheBlessedHero:


I have some of these knowledge already, what i need is how to get the market/clients. I won't mind rolling with you for few weeks or anybody you know that can help... plus i'll like to be among the circle of guys in that skill set, so as to improve and get my feet on ground.
even if it's volunteering or some sort.

OK.
Where in IB do you reside?

LaJose78:


I'm also good in writing but can't seem to get a freelance work

Check my signature and send me a WhatsApp msg via the number you'd see there. We can converse better over there.

Big thanks @ Scholar212.
I appreciate.

I'll certainly ask her to attempt these.

DeejayTeeno:
Please teach me how to write!

Thanks.

I can't teach you how to write, I can only help you improve into a better writer, that's if you write already

TheBlessedHero:


Seems like you're into online stuff, can I come learn work/skills?

I'm a full time freelance writer. You can learn skills like graphic design, web design/development, programming, etc..
That's if you wanna hustle online though.

LaJose78:


Okay UI will be preferable tho do you know how much average rent costs?

150 - 200k (Total package) for a standard self con. You can get for lesser but it might not be up to the standard you want.

I stay in Ibadan.
Like the other guy mentioned, places like U.I, Ojoo, Agbowo, Apete, would be fine because of the high concentration of students

BENUE STATE POLITICIAN, DANIEL UKPERA, DONATES ROPES TO HIS COMMUNITY TO TIE THEIR GOATS

A politician in Benue state has donated ropes to the members of his community so that they can tie their goats.

Daniel Ukpera, who contested for the Guma State Constituency seat in the 2019 Benue State House of Assembly Election under the platform of Labour Party, donated bundles of ropes to the people of Makurdi LGA in Benue State.

After making the donation, he assisted the goat owners to tie their goats then posed for photos with the grateful recipients.

Ukpera’s donation is reportedly his contribution to the implementation of the Benue State Anti Open Grazing

bigiyaro [s:
post=90581572]human ritual... skull mining.

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Lies.

@ OP, I stayed back in Ibadan after my service and I haven't regretted it.
I've stayed here for 2yrs +.

Standard of living is average, its a peaceful & secured city (calmness & security is relative).

About hustling, I can't give my full opinion because I work online but like every other city in Nigeria, you can find something doing due to its huge population.

Happy Birthday @ Venzal.

Live & Prosper.

rinzylee:
Yeah HCPC UK and CORU for Ireland.

Check out Australia too.... She would apply as Lab technologist as that's what is on the shortage list that doesn't need license.

Thanks for your input.

I wholly appreciate

STENON:
HCPC registration is the only thing needed to practice as a medical lab scientist in UK. Check google for more information for those that qualified in the rest of the world or Nigeria.

Thanks.
I really appreciate your input

Hello NLanders,

My elder sister is a Medical Laboratory Scientist, and have been practising for 8years+ now.

She currently works with a hospital in PH but her salary is barely above average, and she's very good at her profession.

I was actually thinking of convincing her to migrate to the UK, maybe on a employer sponsored visa.
If she agrees however, I need to know the steps & intricacies involved to make her migration successful.
Or what she needs to be aware of before taking such decision.

My questions are:

* Asides BSc, what other qualification would she be need?

* Is it possible for a med lab scientist to get a direct employment offer/sponsored visa from here in Nigeria?

* If the above is yes, what amount (range) of funds can be budgeted for the trip if she eventually gets a job offer?

* Lastly, what's the salary range per annum for medical lab scientists in the UK.

PS. I've checked out some tips on Google but I just need to hear from folks with firsthand experience or probably from those who know someone practising same profession in the UK.

Apart from the questions I asked, any other valid suggestion/contribution also is welcomed too.

Thanks in anticipation.

The downfall of Abia state in one photo

@Venzal.

Thanks for these tuts.
You've awakened my copywriting zeal. I'm sure taking action this time around.

Kudos

Soknown:

Thank you for the kind words. I have been very fortunate to have readers with kind review, Hope your meal was good to eat still.

It didn't burn sha, but even if, I would have gladly ate it and scratched to the bottom of the pot.
There shall be no LOSS!

So, have your family moved in yet?

I've been a silent but yet, an ardent follower of the travel section.

Truth be told, your thread is one of the most captivating I've bumped into.

I almost burn my food wey dey fire because of your thrilling and well detailed diaries.

I wish you well in your endeavours bro.
Bravo!

crown08:
Medium generator

Price?
I stay in Ibadan