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POEM: Awake And Dreaming / Romantic Poem - "dreaming Out Loud" (2) (3) (4)
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Dreaming In Braille by eldee(m): 10:50am On Jan 05, 2008 |
Dreaming In Braille I crossed the thin line between love and hate my thoughts i still try so hard to equate from tis day i live the hermit's lone life Through the dots i feel to stand all the sweet strife To Cain my Abel breeds heavens wrath but why must I in this trap be caught a moment ago my plans were straight but ever after she refused to wait A Braille for my dreams i plead from you blindness of my soul i zeal to cure clouds over my bed i failed to clear the last laugh i pleaded a wish too hard For grace i prayed to vault this pit hung at ten yards high now buried six feet too late too bent to straighten this lane the ends are the alpha I killed my Cain This is my first ever posted poem and it's definitely nohing near good. It's just me representing heartbreak in a Shakesparean-mode monologue. I'll really appreciate criticism of any kind cus I'm tryin to improve in my floetry. |
Re: Dreaming In Braille by TheSly: 11:01am On Jan 05, 2008 |
Nice one. . . at least me no fit recite a line but if them say make we write poem on how we go kill xmas turkey, and how we go full our stomach with ijekuje! of all kind!. . i fit recite that one. . . . . . . |
Re: Dreaming In Braille by eldee(m): 11:22am On Jan 05, 2008 |
lol. . .thanks man, me self dey try learn that part. |
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