mulan21: senbonzakura kageyoshi dude trust me if i say i loooooooove your work its an understatement! U are gooood. but dont let it get to you view criticism with an open mind. Take the good and watch out for those that are just bad mouths. Thumbs up!

thanks a lot. Thankfully, i've come to find people i can depend on to tell me the way it is right here on this board and they deserve credit for much of the improvements in my writing.

Ishilove:
Avicky ma loooove! Comment ca va?

ok, Ishi you have succeeded na. thanks to you now i frequent the literature section like no man's bizness. free stories everywhere. chai!!!
@OP: very good story. i dont mind you stretching reality a little bit but my own little contribution is that you should not force the humour. just let it come naturally. i like your username and i go begin de follow you from now on. . .

brokoto: ok, Ishi you have succeeded na. thanks to you now i frequent the literature section like no man's bizness. free stories everywhere. chai!!!

Are you sure you aren't stalking me, my love?

brokoto:
@OP: very good story. i dont mind you stretching reality a little bit but my own little contribution is that you should not force the humour. just let it come naturally. i like your username and i go begin de follow you from now on. . .

Have you read 'hurtful pleasures'? It reads a lot better than his previous works. The humour therein didn't feel forced,rather it felt a whole lot more natural than others I've read from him. Aside 'Cow conondrum', 'Hurtful pleasures' is my new favourite yet.

Ishilove:
Are you sure you aren't stalking me, my love?

of course i'm stalking you. is that not what following somebody on NL meant?

Ishilove: Have you read 'hurtful pleasures'? It reads a lot better than his previous works. The humour therein didn't feel forced,rather it felt a whole lot more natural than others I've read from him. Aside 'Cow conondrum', 'Hurtful pleasures' is my new favourite yet.

yea. that was what made me check him out. it was on the front page. who wrote cow conundrum?

^^^ sorry o. took me a while to get it. the OP wrote it too. lemme check it out. . .

brokoto: ^^^ sorry o. took me a while to get it. the OP wrote it too. lemme check it out. . .

Yes o, sheckirrout

brokoto: of course i'm stalking you. is that not what following somebody on NL meant?

I batteth my silky eyelashes

Gracious me, I meant "the battle of the bowels".

Ishilove:
Avicky ma loooove! Comment ca va?

Ma cherie coco, je vais bien et toi?
Sil te plait, try & update 'continue the Lola story' and 'wasimi tales'. Merci.

avicky:
Ma cherie coco, je vais bien et toi?
Sil te plait, try & update 'continue the Lola story' and 'wasimi tales'. Merci.

Chei, I have forgotten all about Lola!

Ishilove: Gracious me, I meant "the battle of the bowels".

ok. i've actualy read both. i think the guy/girl got better with each succeeding story.

Ishilove:
Chei, I have forgotten all about Lola!

i think i need you to tell me if that story got interesting. i tried reading only for one poster, Adebayo i think to just mess it up. i gave up after the 1st page. tell me Ishi, is it worth continuing?

Nice one bro. The literature/writing section is looking good thanks to guys like you. Keep it up