the pic ad continues from here...

third part here...

4th part here

5th part here...

The last part from here, i pretty much gave it my all on this contest, hope Mr.Seun will like some of my ads.

Best Regards,
William Cee.
www.BestWebNigeria.com (Professional Website Design & Development)
Info@BestWebNigeria.com | 081 348 887 05

Still waiting for Mr.Seun?

Without a deadline, u might probably wait longer and even open a graphic design school in d process. , what I fink.

@seun please how many entries have been ACCEPTED(not entered o) so far

Seun just lock up... na wa o

yorme: Sir, i have made replacements of the ones you asked me to... Please review:

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Well done! I think the border can afford to be a bit darker, though.

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You've improved the text. That's great. You need to do something about the image, though. I don't know what it's supposed to be!

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Some of your text has been improved. That's nice. But some text is still too tiny, and your border seems too light. You can do better.

@lil pervert: it's almost as if you can't be bothered to read the existing reviews. that's a shame.
- Some of your borders are not single pixel and some are too light.
- Your text is generally fuzzy, especially at small sizes. That's not acceptable. Text must be razor-sharp. I have already explained how to get sharp text using GIMP or Photoshop.
- Your NDA ad includes only the logo, but the problem is that the logo is only meaningful to people who have already joined the NDA. Since the goal of the ad is to attract people to join the NDA, the logo does not do the job. I have said this before.
- The concept for your Tonto Dike Ad is decent, but the execution is poor. The color chosen is not legible and the layout isn't perfect.
- The Nigeria vs Liberia ad has a unique concept, but it's marred by poorly rendered text and poor composition.
- The Programmer Ad is also marred by poorly rendered text. In addition to that, you did not include any image to draw more attention to it.
- 50% Your GUS ad is lifted from the official website. I cannot give you points for that. The border is also too light.

Hey Seun, am still waiting for your review on my ads from page 7 - 8

@sisqology: Your images are deformed (wrong aspect ratio). Borders are too light or non-existent. Text is poorly rendered and deformed. Poor effort!

@rubion:
- Your tonto dikeh ad is better, but the border is still too light. I think you should think about making Tonto Dikeh's face more natural.
- I do not appreciate your refusal to improve the programming ad by including an image or photo to attract people to it.
- Your entry cannot be accepted since you submitted only two ads out of the required 5.

@Kagawa:
I notice that you have only one technique for rendering text. That won't do. A professional should have more than one tool in his cabinet.

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Not bad, but the lady doesn't look like Tonto Dike and I wish you could include visual elements that show that the ad is about music.

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Too many unnecessary words and no images. The words do not appeal to people who don't know anything about programming. No image or picture.

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Your decision to use pictures of actual players was a smart one. However, your execution of the idea was poor. Since the ad is meant to appeal to Nigerians, I don't understand why we can't see the face of the Nigerian player. It would be ideal to use pictures of Nigerian Players whose faces can be recognized by most Nigerians, and who will actually play in the Liberia match.

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What does "be part of a great thing" even mean? That's not how to convince people to join the army! The US marine picture is not appropriate because this is not a US marine recruitment ad. And I think you need to learn new text rendering methods to complement this border trick that you're using everywhere.

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Not bad, but I think you can do better!

@Johnthentic: Your banners are not good-looking. You just have to keep learning until you're able to design good-looking banners. Your AFCON banner is a good idea, but the way you designed it just doesn't appeal to me aesthetically. It looks like something I could design myself!!

@WilliamCee: You were required to submit 5 ads but you submitted more than that, which is unacceptable. Fortunately, I've deleted the duplicated ads for you.

REVIEWS:
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Not bad, but some of the text is blurry/illegible and no reason is given why someone who isn't already familiar with the show should be interested in watching it.

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Why should a random job-seeker be interested in this vacancy?

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Technically, it's acceptable, but I'm sure you can do better.

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"Expand your career" is a vague reason to learn programming. Can you improve on this and make your design less boring?

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I think it's beautiful, but it's not clear that one can listen to the song by clicking on the ad.

awesome all of them

i wish i was clever enough....my design skills suck !

Seun ....Seun..

This one na like Job interviews oooooo, nice concept by the way. A great contest so far, I will say,it will help the contestants boost and polish their creative and design skills.

@Contestants: Kudos to you all, I wish you all the very best...

Nigerians get skilz ooooo.
Good contest.

Mr Seun must be very hard to please. He'll do well as a quality assurance personnel.

freecocoa: Excuse me o, why should people be encouraged to listen to Tonto dikeh's useless songs? Isn't that punishment?
I don't understand o, abi she pay you ni?

hahahahahahahahahahahhahaha i wan laff enter army convoy o

wait seun are u still supposed to be the judge too, i thought atlease we should have say in this asin, open vote....... just like d one i did for waje's album, its was an open vote on her facebook fanpage, and its favoured me, becos if i say make i join this show now, i non no hw e go be.

folahann: Mr Seun must be very hard to please. He'll do well as a quality assurance personnel.

WALAI

No forget e no easy to chop awoof money for Naija with freestyle, you gaz work hard for it menhn...

I suppose fit win this competition but my system no tight

Damn, see awoof rabba,

I WANNA HAVE FUN

noob-saibot:
I WANNA HAVE FUN

nice ones, especially the NDA one.

#youtry

Chai, see as seun diminish my 2 hours of hard work to 'not acceptable'. For me to put up better designs will take my time and man must read so I no go fail my exams.
I don try

Oga Seun here is my entry please review

Jesse Yusufu
08124380516
My Prices are Negotiable
Software Used: Adobe Photoshop CS6

Oga Seun here is my entry please review

Jesse Yusufu
08124380516
My Prices are Negotiable
Software Used: Adobe Photoshop CS6

yusufu16: Oga Seun here is my entry please review

Jesse Yusufu
08124380516
My Prices are Negotiable
Software Used: Adobe Photoshop CS6

I love your ads. They are the only inspiring ones in terms of design so far.