Mobsync: I don't think so. Besides, it looks like we are the only people reading it. Me, the writer and you. I may post a story some other time though. Maybe after i get a laptop, itz stressful typing with a phone.

Hmmmmm!!! See! it is only when u want to give up that the true likers of your story will come up. I am not really of fan of stories, Hell! That was why I decided to write mine. But ermmm....see as guys don dey step say dem like your story. Cuddles doesnt really care if she likes the story or not( I can bet she didnt like mine, she never viewed or commented, but when she saw the fans she moved it), its ur fans that decide, If you have up to 3 fans that are with you all the way and you yourself are consistent, then you will see frontpage and ummmmmm....It is better u write to please ur fans not for frontpage, ur fans are the key.
*****Disappears away like an angel****

avicky: Wow! More power to ur elbow. I enjoyd evry bit of d story. Dnt be bothered dt pple are nt commenting, a lot are reading and i knw u won't want to disappoint them.
This Joe guy is really cheating death oh.

And to u Mod Cuddlemii, this story is Frontpage worthy. Let others read dis instead of d poo dt one sees there. Thanks.

Redmosquito: Hmmmmm!!! See! it is only when u want to give up that the true likers of your story will come up. I am not really of fan of stories, Hell! That was why I decided to write mine. But ermmm....see as guys don dey step say dem like your story. Cuddles doesnt really care if she likes the story or not( Ican bet she didnt like mine, she never viewed or commented, but when she saw the fans she moved it), its ur fans that decide, If you have up to 3 fans that are with you all the way and you yourself are consistent, then you will see frontpage and ummmmmm....It is better u write to please ur fans not for frontpage, ur fans are the key.
*****Disappears away like an angel****

oluwafunmilayo95: A Very Beautiful Piece

olashas: Interesting piece. Please continue

2bey: Brov, U ARE AS GOOD AS ORIGINAL!!!
Thumbs upper Dude.

khattab008: More Grease to your elbow bro nice write up
But hope dis story will not have a totally negative ending kinda hate such stories
Keep it Up

avicky: More paraffin to ur typing fingers.

ekaromail: So far so good, I've enjoyed your story. thumbs up bro, you are good.

avicky: Thanks for d job so far.
Pls continue.

Adinije: interesting write up, more power to ur elbow.

Oluwafunmilayo95: Saying 'thanks' is not enough...we want more updates

Oluwafunmilayo95: Saying 'thanks' is not enough...we want more updates

azeezlateefah: ;DAnother talented nigeria......nice work......drop ur FB account !!!!!!!!!!a

2bey: Mob, How's 91%?
Storyline(Narrative) > 18
Sentence structure > 17
Sequencing & presentation > 18
Diction > 19
Suspence > 19

2bey: Mob, How's 91%?
Storyline(Narrative) > 18
Sentence structure > 17
Sequencing & presentation > 18
Diction > 19
Suspence > 19

khattab008: seconded

khattab008:
Seconded

Oluwafunmilayo95:
Thirded

oyestephen: Nice job bro, loving this...