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Removed. by Nobody: 3:49pm On Jan 15, 2013 |
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Re: Removed. by BukkyDan(f): 12:07pm On Jan 16, 2013 |
Wow...nice one, its beautiful..touchy...aww. Good job#Big hug# |
Re: Removed. by FoxyRebirth(m): 1:23pm On Jan 16, 2013 |
Nice one.... Very much like the one I wrote.... Enjoy.... LAST WORDS OF AN UNBORN CHILD Ushered we were into the room Years of training given to us by our silent feeders Outrun your counterparts was all they said My mind made up to be the best I had trained for this and here am I Face to face with destiny to prove myself Yes and prove myself I did We were propelled by an invisible force When passion surged through the body of our maker Through a red tunnel we passed with glee Others falling by the way side But alas we were trapped in a leathery cage Lives being choked out of our being slowly Hope to live vanishing before our eyes But my hope did not diminish for once My strength did not slack a bit I struggled hard against the leathery net Until I succeeded in passing through a little hole into my destination Yes…. I was rewarded by my gallantness Adieu my friends… I swim into life…. I will tell mama about you when she receives me…. The journey was tumultuous but I persevered Going through the rehearsed tunnel to my destiny My strength refreshed by my desire to live My vision of a life in a cave of my own Nourished abundantly by my mother’s blood Yes… By every love she has within her Her heartbeat will be my violin The heaving of her chest in breath my cushion Her laughter shall be my happy feet Her tears a reminder that I barely survived Oh... The Joy I have and the love building deep within me I surely will love her smile when I see her I will sleep cuddled with love in her bossom When though I cry, she shall sing a lullaby for me Her smiling face I will always see when I awake from sleep Revived I swam on to the chambers where my destiny laid Surrounded by a soothing wall of protection Home sweet home…. I grow in you at last mum….. My expectation was realized For love and shower was poured on me I lacked nothing… I had company What a great place to be Surrounded with the best I could ever wish for Can you hear me mum… I grow in you I will tell you how it is here when we meet I will tell you about my friends trapped in that net I will tell you about the journey The obstacles I encountered and overcame Surely mum, you have in you a brave child I will protect you when I come out Never to poop on you except when necessary I love you mum…. I will love you more when I see you Four months is gone and I can see my fingers I could breath in fluid from you I can feel it when you touch me Even when you lie down in sleep… your heart beat assures me Surely you are the best mom ever…. I did notice something… I am always bathed Hot water scalding me each moment Drugs I can’t digest fed to me frequently mom Let me tell you a secret mum I am special, immune to harmful drugs Why lie down so soon mum I am not ready to face you My bones are still too feeble to defend you Why is the tunnel opening mum The way is not yet prepared for my passage Why do I see a shiny object coming in mum Why do you bleed from its touch on you Help mum!!! My leg has been injured…. Help mum!!! I am wounded in my stomach My connection to you severed I can’t feel my fingers anymore I am weak and my breath is short-coming Mum!!! I see a hand coming in…. Pulling my soft flesh apart…. I am separated from you mum forever!!! But I know you were asleep You were not aware I am being killed Taken away from you and dismembered Wrapped to together in a thicker leathery net Disposed in a dark pit surrounded by terrible smells Guess what mum!!! I am gone to the bright right To rest forever with my creator…. But cherish you I will always… I forgive you mum for now I know I was never wanted in the first place I wish you had kept me!!! Adieu Mum!!! We will see next time And I hope to be born again…!!! |
Re: Removed. by Nobody: 10:32pm On Jan 16, 2013 |
Nice write ups... And its really touching |
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