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1689 - 1709 by ositadima1(m): 10:00am On Feb 28, 2013 |
Yeah, 1709 was the day I became what I have endured for centuries. Let me introduce my self, I am your worst hazard, an erroneus creation, I am nothing. I carry the gift or curse, you choose, I have leaved so long, saw kindoms spring up and fall. Cuddlemi I want to recount my story, only if you'd listen. I want to tell you what happened that faithfull night, an event that was going to pivot my being and turn me into a monster. |
Re: 1689 - 1709 by Cuddlemii: 10:58am On Feb 28, 2013 |
Ok! Recount the story.. |
Re: 1689 - 1709 by ositadima1(m): 10:58am On Feb 28, 2013 |
Io voglio raccontare questa mia storia a te, perche ti amo. |
Re: 1689 - 1709 by ositadima1(m): 11:32am On Feb 28, 2013 |
1709, though I was not to know for a century and half, I was happy, a promising young man who was about to marry. We lived by the river side, a small village in what is presently asaba. This was before the benin kindom, before the sokoto caliphate, this was a time when subsaharan africa was pristine and unpolluted. Palm was our king tree, almost everything was made out of it, my clan was skilful. The huts were crafted with great care, painted in lively colours, contrary to what you might have heard and read from the west we knew beauty, we made beautiful artifacts, paintings and murals. It makes me sad that all this beauty was lost for ever... |
Re: 1689 - 1709 by ositadima1(m): 11:37am On Feb 28, 2013 |
This is emotional, and I often have mixed thoughts, my writing will read unconventional, I never had an education. |
Re: 1689 - 1709 by ositadima1(m): 1:34pm On Feb 28, 2013 |
I have been smoking, I can barely focus, I will continue later. |
Re: 1689 - 1709 by ositadima1(m): 6:16pm On Feb 28, 2013 |
This was ancient times when food had to be hunted. Hunting was a way of life, on that day I was out hunting in the Odu, a great expanse of tropical rain forest, home of infinitely many animals and plants most of which have gone into extinction by the nineteen hundreads. 1 Like |
Re: 1689 - 1709 by Cuddlemii: 6:22pm On Feb 28, 2013 |
What exactly is this? Are you writing a story? Are you immortal? Fill me in |
Re: 1689 - 1709 by ositadima1(m): 6:29pm On Feb 28, 2013 |
The point is that I don't know what I am, you see. During the hunting I was taken captive by a distant tribe, I was slaughtered like an animal at the foot of their shrine. I died. |
Re: 1689 - 1709 by Emyo(m): 7:05pm On Feb 28, 2013 |
guy i d feel ur prowesss. raid on 1 Like |
Re: 1689 - 1709 by ositadima1(m): 8:44am On Mar 01, 2013 |
Sheol, a place of darkness to which all the dead go, both the righteous and the unrighteous, regardless of the moral choices made in life, a place of stillness and darkness cut off from God. This is where I found my self, let me tell you this is a cold place. |
Re: 1689 - 1709 by ositadima1(m): 9:36am On Mar 01, 2013 |
I am not going to dwell on sheol for it awaits all. The tribe that took me had attacked my village, there was looting and plunder, men did all they could to fend off the assailants. War was not our way of life, we were a peaceful lot, hunters, fishermen, artists. And so the whole villlage was razed, women and children were taken captive. Amongs was her, my luv, Adamma. I have to pause and describe her, she was perfection... |
Re: 1689 - 1709 by ositadima1(m): 10:12am On Mar 01, 2013 |
hahaha, look at all this crystals,lol. Cuddlemii, you are the one. I have watched you comeback and go over the centuries, I can tell you what you look like now and in your previous existence. We have always been connected, you don't know how glad you made me when ever you resurfaced on this earth. I watched your birth countless times. |
Re: 1689 - 1709 by ositadima1(m): 6:06pm On Mar 01, 2013 |
Hey, don't you like my story? |
Re: 1689 - 1709 by mfm04622: 9:08am On Mar 02, 2013 |
It is too early to judge, pls continue. Can each post be longer? Thanks |
Re: 1689 - 1709 by Emyo(m): 2:06pm On Mar 02, 2013 |
ositadima1: Hey, don't you like my story?this no different from my kind of writing. I love flowing with total appreciation of literature. I like what you re doing, refixing history into perfected moment |
Re: 1689 - 1709 by ositadima1(m): 3:14pm On Mar 02, 2013 |
mfm04622: It is too early to judge, pls continue. Can each post be longer? That question was for Cuddlemii, Adammas doppelganger, the one that brought me back. I will be more articulate for this story must be told. |
Re: 1689 - 1709 by ositadima1(m): 8:41am On Mar 05, 2013 |
Question is how I made it back? I have ruminated how could this be, and realized that my last thoughts were about her, and when it was time those thoughts created a link, for the physical world is only a subset of the spiritual. When they spilled the blood and I was drained off my life slowly, I held on to her, the good times we had, her smile, she gave me strenght. |
Re: 1689 - 1709 by ositadima1(m): 9:23am On Mar 05, 2013 |
The other question is what makes me dangerous, you will come to an understanding as the story unwinds. |
Re: 1689 - 1709 by ositadima1(m): 3:20pm On Mar 19, 2013 |
lol, just trying to work my wrinkles |
Re: 1689 - 1709 by ositadima1(m): 12:06pm On Mar 20, 2013 |
I have no heart for I am doomed to take sojourn In the bodies of the living I live through them but for a short while I feel passion for you, quite inexplicable like the sun it will never dim my love... Cuddlemii |
Re: 1689 - 1709 by repogirl(f): 12:14pm On Mar 20, 2013 |
So how do you take over peoples bodies? This story will take forever at this rate. |
Re: 1689 - 1709 by fruiteeiy(f): 12:43pm On Mar 20, 2013 |
You don dey cuddle cuddlemii leave the tory ne? |
Re: 1689 - 1709 by FoxyUltimate(m): 12:52pm On Mar 20, 2013 |
Are you a clown? |
Re: 1689 - 1709 by ositadima1(m): 3:22pm On Mar 20, 2013 |
repogirl: So how do you take over peoples bodies? This story will take forever at this rate. It's deafening, It's scary. You humans emit complex sounds, and to infiltrate I have to endure a life time of pain and pleasures for these sounds are a reflection of your burden. But what do I give in return? The ultimate death: death of the soul. You don't want me looking through your eyes, no you don't. |
Re: 1689 - 1709 by ositadima1(m): 7:37pm On Mar 20, 2013 |
never should have interfered but I live on and I'm lonely and if you'd have me like I am so hitching to have you, well, I'd give up this madness. I'd see to it that the rest of our lifes fared well I am looking in on a good life I might be doomed never to find. Hope you understand when you die, old and bony. Hater may you cut your thumb, and bleed till you pass out. |
Re: 1689 - 1709 by ositadima1(m): 1:04pm On Jun 16, 2013 |
there is no safe approach for living, we each know our own fate, we know from our youth how we shall end, this things don't change. |
Re: 1689 - 1709 by luvmijeje(f): 3:30pm On Jun 16, 2013 |
Oga o. |
Re: 1689 - 1709 by ositadima1(m): 7:05pm On Jun 16, 2013 |
My Adamma, if you change your mind I am the first in line,if you need me let me know and I will be around. I don't think you know that I can't let go Cuddlemii, through the darkness and strife I sail on. Your luv fills up my soul and drowns my eternal solitude. It's all I got . |
Re: 1689 - 1709 by Cuddlemii: 2:41am On Jun 17, 2013 |
^lol! So you're still writing this bizarre love story? |
Re: 1689 - 1709 by Emyo(m): 6:31pm On Jun 17, 2013 |
Cuddlemii: ^lol!MISSED U . |
Re: 1689 - 1709 by ositadima1(m): 9:58pm On Jun 17, 2013 |
Emyo: MISSED U . Emyo,'re you ready to die? |
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