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Re: Charmed! by Inik(m): 1:33pm On May 03, 2013 |
Nice piece. When i read the title of this thread i thought it was all about a nairalander declaring his love for Shugamania . . Nigerians do not really appreciate poetry as a genre of literature, we place much emphasis on drama and prose. |
Re: Charmed! by Nobody: 1:45pm On May 03, 2013 |
No rhyme and little or no spicing-figures of speech. Good all the same. |
Re: Charmed! by mymz(f): 1:45pm On May 03, 2013 |
'Charmed' was what the clergy called it ask penance he said pray, for thy soul has been fowled seek forgiveness or face holy inquisition i stood, wretched on two feet quavering with might as feeble as the lock of my hair my heart, soaring higher beyond known yonders as my mind writhed with restlessness in my weakness i felt the bud of desire tasted sweet nothings of gentle nudgings the only thought that guarantees a shudder to my cracked lips jetblack eyes belonging only to you as sinking as the sea thrilling cascades in lofty mounds, filling my entire being lurched with a vermin to lend voice to tongue and tell the world of my longing to wait for you Yes, i said to the clergy i am with sickness t'is this sickness that compels me to wait wait for you till the end of time itself from whence really, cometh this ailment? what alchemist doth wrought a potion so fierce? i want nothing more but to be charmed, smitten, afire for no one else but you Shuga 6 Likes |
Re: Charmed! by Nobody: 1:58pm On May 03, 2013 |
Witty & engrossing. |
Re: Charmed! by Shugamania(f): 1:58pm On May 03, 2013 |
Front pageee!!! Now d bubble's about to burst.. Thanks guys. |
Re: Charmed! by Shugamania(f): 1:59pm On May 03, 2013 |
mymz: 'Charmed' was what the clergy called it Thank u! |
Re: Charmed! by Shugamania(f): 2:02pm On May 03, 2013 |
blink182: No rhyme and little or no spicing-figures of speech. Good all the same. Corrections Noted. I wasnt striving for rhymes though, jst wanted each verse to give their own msg. Thanks. |
Re: Charmed! by Nobody: 2:03pm On May 03, 2013 |
I'm guessing the key word is charmed. |
Re: Charmed! by Shugamania(f): 2:14pm On May 03, 2013 |
CHESSBOARD: Hehehehe.. Bros, na u o. ItsModella: I'm guessing the key word is charmed. Well, it's a review. What's ur opinion? |
Re: Charmed! by vizboy(m): 2:20pm On May 03, 2013 |
mymz: 'Charmed' was what the clergy called itdamn!!!!! You nailed it. Love ur flow. |
Re: Charmed! by sKeetz(m): 2:29pm On May 03, 2013 |
The word is charmed How do I start? What do I say? I love you and you take my breath away? Do I say hold me tight, keep me warm all through the night? So how do I start? I start like this hold me, love me, teach me, move me, motivate me to do something great. Now that I've started how do I end? I end like this I LOVE YOU!!!.......... 1 Like |
Re: Charmed! by Pedagogue: 3:13pm On May 03, 2013 |
Her name is sugar Named not because of an addition to garri Ijebu Named not because of what a tea likes But named because she is life's very own sweetener Hey,her description is incomplete ! You can also call her a maniac!! But this life's precious jewel is not that mad woman on your street She's a sugar mania- a cacoethes lover!!! Tis sugarmania has withal been charmed Charmed by one of life's Princes But the charmer prince Is only but my forerunner! 2 Likes |
Re: Charmed! by Nobody: 3:14pm On May 03, 2013 |
Friday night cumms, you do the deed You're fit to burst with so much seed Its been 1 week without release! Damn, this babe, she aims to please Now she swallows it all and you are charmed. 1 Like |
Re: Charmed! by Cupidkc(m): 3:31pm On May 03, 2013 |
Shuga ure good...kudos!!! |
Re: Charmed! by Mynd44: 3:38pm On May 03, 2013 |
Shuga, great work. I am sure a lot of people will love to see more of your scribbling. Keep this up |
Re: Charmed! by straneur(m): 4:26pm On May 03, 2013 |
Charmed by your words The heart, the hand from which it flows Wake the world to a new song The kings to a new poem Shuga, the poet is alive Beat the Iya-Ilu Drink and dance For joy cometh to all Print and print The history The hope The future |
Re: Charmed! by eklassical(m): 4:49pm On May 03, 2013 |
pardon mi to use pidgin oboi see charming, e just dey do me seriri wherere, as if i smoke gbana, my face no fit hide my smile, i don enter cloud9 see me see my fanta baby, d thing wey she use, na ogbonge, e dey drive me crazy, my money for bank, i don spend and i no just send i bin dey form hard guy, as if i no fit fall lai lai, i jabo yakata wen she troway her love com my side, see me see love! oboi! see charming 6 Likes 3 Shares |
Re: Charmed! by mymz(f): 5:22pm On May 03, 2013 |
Shugamania: ure welcome Sugar. keep it up |
Re: Charmed! by mymz(f): 5:23pm On May 03, 2013 |
vizboy: damn!!!!! You nailed it. Love ur flow. awww! thanks hun. glad you loved it |
Re: Charmed! by Shugamania(f): 5:49pm On May 03, 2013 |
BoboYekini: Friday night cumms, you do the deed Smh.. |
Re: Charmed! by Shugamania(f): 5:51pm On May 03, 2013 |
eklassical: pardon mi to use pidgin Na so.. The pidgin even make am sweet sef. Welldone. 2 Likes |
Re: Charmed! by Shugamania(f): 5:52pm On May 03, 2013 |
straneur: Charmed by your words All these for me? Jumpingg!!! Lol...thanks dear. |
Re: Charmed! by Shugamania(f): 5:54pm On May 03, 2013 |
mymz: Sure will ma'am. Cupidkc: Shuga ure good...kudos!!! Thank u sir. |
Re: Charmed! by Shugamania(f): 6:20pm On May 03, 2013 |
Pedagogue: Her name is sugar Lol.. I do luv ijb garri though.. Thanks. |
Re: Charmed! by Shugamania(f): 6:24pm On May 03, 2013 |
sKeetz: The word is charmed Mynd_44: Shuga, great work. I am sure a lot of people will love to see more of your scribbling. Keep this up Thank u slavedriver.. For d push and evrything. Thanks really. |
Re: Charmed! by Mynd44: 7:27pm On May 03, 2013 |
Shugamania:Na me be slave friver abi? |
Re: Charmed! by Shugamania(f): 7:55pm On May 03, 2013 |
Hidden post? Well.. @mynd, of course not... no be you oo. |
Re: Charmed! by Nobody: 8:45pm On May 03, 2013 |
Incredible.......loving it.....#thumbz up# |
Re: Charmed! by Nobody: 9:06pm On May 03, 2013 |
Very nice Shuga! |
Re: Charmed! by Shugamania(f): 9:40pm On May 03, 2013 |
Thanks candies. talina: Very nice Shuga! I Hate 9ja: Incredible.......loving it.....#thumbz up# |
Re: Charmed! by jakesund(m): 11:19pm On May 03, 2013 |
shuga I'm gonna get diabetic if i keep reading this. love it. but wait oh i just sent it to my babe ,and it was so intoxicating that she sent it to her other 6 boyfriends back to square one |
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