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THE POET by kagari: 12:40pm On Jun 27, 2013 |
hy, house, remain inspired as u read. D'alu |
Re: THE POET by kagari: 12:42pm On Jun 27, 2013 |
JESAM I called, yes! I called not once Not twice, not today, not sure My state, she measured in ounce And behold I called her my anchor She is black, she is Africa, and she is beautiful She is dark, she is Amara, and she is adorable I call her not today, definitely not tomorrow I call her when I feel love and sorrow She is a cumin, she is a dove It is she I would call love. KAJO’S LIB |
Re: THE POET by kagari: 12:43pm On Jun 27, 2013 |
KAJO Life is a great mystery That metamorphoses in three’s The first an endearing part With lots of admiration and pacts The second, always on a move Seconded by reasoning and prove The third is a sweet-sour taste of life Vindicated by only those that strived 1 Like |
Re: THE POET by kagari: 12:44pm On Jun 27, 2013 |
THE TWIN RIVERS I met a river in labour Heavy from the stomach to the mouth She asked me for a little a favour If she could flow to the north or south. I asked her if she flowed at ease To decide if she flows west or to the east But she said she wasn’t a nurse But she knew she bore in her twin rivers. I didn’t comprehend her words or thoughts But felt pity because she had fever. She said she shall name one river Niger To the other, she would name river Benue. All these she did to impress her hubby, Niger-area Who friends and foes preferred to call Nigeria 1 Like |
Re: THE POET by kagari: 12:17am On Oct 06, 2013 |
Please comment oooo, what did i do wrong? |
Re: THE POET by kagari: 1:25am On Oct 28, 2013 |
Looks like i did poorly on this poems. No comment at all |
Re: THE POET by Justiceenams(m): 10:03am On Oct 31, 2013 |
Nice one Kagari you did well the problem is that you have not yet opened up your mind.Keep writting,the day you start learning from your write up know dat you've opened up your mind.More so,read the works of Badmusce,Princessa,Jodekess,Firestar and Texanomaly.Theres alot for you to learn.I do learn from them but know this 'EVERY WRITTER IS UNIQUE IN HIS/HER OWN WAY. |
Re: THE POET by Piresg24(m): 5:51pm On Nov 02, 2013 |
Please anyone there to appraise a poem I'm about uploading? |
Re: THE POET by Piresg24(m): 6:05pm On Nov 02, 2013 |
Any one there? |
Re: THE POET by kagari: 9:51am On Nov 08, 2013 |
Kk, roll it @pires24 |
Re: THE POET by kagari: 9:54am On Nov 08, 2013 |
Justiceenams: Nice one Kagari you did well the problem is that you have not yet opened up your mind.Keep writting,the day you start learning from your write up know dat you've opened up your mind.More so,read the works of Badmusce,Princessa,Jodekess,Firestar and Texanomaly.Theres alot for you to learn.I do learn from them but know this 'EVERY WRITTER IS UNIQUE IN HIS/HER OWN WAY. thanks for the comments but i dont think i need to look up to anybody at my writing stage go through my poems on my profile. Only if you know me |
Re: THE POET by Piresg24(m): 11:42am On Nov 08, 2013 |
To My Bee's Knee Game not with my heart By your stonewalling art That we may ourselves have a glee Of a lasting wet dream Which shall endure Like a bristlecone pine. How your yea made me gay Having reached our bloom Should we not enjoy our may? Bereave me not of this boon Anon to the partterre let's ooze. Neither did I had a clue Nor was I given a cue That you are as the honey suckle Could made me missed my orgeat and sherbet Oh! How your caress imbued on me a salve. Shall I compare you to the altair? Cruising into my life in beams and rays Glossy like a sun bird causing a stare Sleek to my feel cutesy and fey. You are the bird of paradise Finely curved like the cypress vine You smell so sweet like a fragrant pine Even sweeter fragrance than the moon flower. The moon and sun may fail to shine it light! The ocean may fail to afford us water! But my love for you shall always glow. By Piresg24 1 Like |
Re: THE POET by Piresg24(m): 7:45am On Nov 09, 2013 |
Please! anyone there to comment on my poem. |
Re: THE POET by kagari: 11:21am On Nov 19, 2013 |
Nice one @pirez but u need to create a writing niche what are ur strongest topics when writing on .work on them you can drop another |
Re: THE POET by Piresg24(m): 9:56pm On Nov 19, 2013 |
@Kagari.....Thanks 4 ur comment. You can check more works on my profile! |
Re: THE POET by agbododoaforke(m): 1:55pm On Aug 01, 2014 |
kagari: you're good but you can always gain more from others works |
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