Winnie1950: Omg. @ jumizie: i knew you could write. You are doing a great job here. Keep it up. I dey come make i bring my machine gun.

Jumizie13: Winnie, u don dey chase my fans away abi.

Jumizie13: Winnie, u don dey chase my fans away abi.

Larry-Sun:
Rough review.

kingphilip: Seems u double posted jst go and remove one

chade: Hey babe,I know am gonna love dis.....
#following wit love#

Jumizie13: Dedicated to Prof. Larry Sun.
Chapter 2
11 years ago........
Oladimeji and his wife Josephine with their little girl of 6 years old were having a nice time in their sitting room. Darling, pls get me a chilled glass of water, Oladimeji said.

"No no, mummy stay. Daddy, let me get it for you". Dats my baby girl, Dimeji said while he started singing 4 her. Ola, Ola, Olami.

The little girl was always happy whenever any of her parents sing with her name. She replied her dad,
"Daddy daddy daddy mi".

Josephine was laughing heartly at their childish play. Hmmmmmm, what a happy family. Ola went to the kitchen to get the water.

Suddenly, a masked intruder barged into the room. The couple was afraid, fear and shock was written all over their faces because, the intruder was pointing two guns at them.

The rock5555:
I dey behind u dearie.

Signed-Ur e-love. Thank God Segun no dey NL

The rock5555:

Try spacing it makes ur work longer and make good use of ur "" signs cus it helps in differentiating the characters statement. I know suspense is good but biko try to make ur updates longer.

And B4 i 4get, stop abbreviating words except na pidgin u wan write. And also since u are starting newly try to reply all ur commentors, it would make them feel good and also increase ur page size, maybe when u nack FP den u fit form big babe.

I dey behind u dearie.

Signed-Ur e-love. Thank God Segun no dey NL

D.Ella.luv:
I'l b bak,make una wait 4 me o

The rock5555: *scratches head* my Jumizie don also learn the word suspense.

Oya dis one short oo, come do long one jare, na u sabi disturb me pass, i go haunt you tire

The rock5555:

Try spacing it makes ur work longer and make good use of ur "" signs cus it helps in differentiating the characters statement. I know suspense is good but biko try to make ur updates longer.

And B4 i 4get, stop abbreviating words except na pidgin u wan write. And also since u are starting newly try to reply all ur commentors, it would make them feel good and also increase ur page size, maybe when u nack FP den u fit form big babe.

I dey behind u dearie.

Signed-Ur e-love. Thank God Segun no dey NL

Ormorlehwah: u dey fly... Wu tel u say Segun no dey N.l?

Clemzy16: seconded! Thank God say segun no dey nl oo, i hear say dem dey always dey aggressive. *in d9yt7's voice*

D9ty7: @Miss Jumizie- i am not advicing and neither am i telling you what to do or how to do your thing. But i think the only way you can attract more readers is when you update consistently. I was suprised when i checked the thread and found a few number of views. For someone of your calibre(who have participated on great threads most importantly The preachers son)immediately u post you link people ought to have viewed and commented on your story.
Please don't get me wrong i didn't say you are not trying and i know its not easy to think, write and type. But try and update consistently.
I am a loyal follower of urs, and you can always count on me cos i gat your back.
#PEACE#

Jumizie13:
let him katch u

Ormorlehwah: u dey fly... Wu tel u say Segun no dey N.l?

The rock5555: So u wrote 'typing' till sleep nack u apkaco, chai Laff no go kill me. Now u know how stressful it is to type after a long day. Shebi na me and u Dey NL, Segun or no Segun i still dey stalk you like Ghost