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Picture Perfect by EyesWideOpen(m): 1:03pm On Dec 06, 2013 |
A poem I just wrote, inspired by a group of kids I passed returning from school. Enjoy, and please critique, I'm learning to write! *A personification of innocence, peace radiating 3 Likes |
Re: Picture Perfect by EyesWideOpen(m): 6:09pm On Dec 07, 2013 |
I ws hoping for remarks from the professionals here, pls drop a remark, correction, a referral, anything. |
Re: Picture Perfect by princesa(f): 8:31pm On Dec 07, 2013 |
Honey, there ain't no professional here, we are all learning. Ur poem is nice, it depicts innocence of children, though 'dirty' children. Err, i just think the verses are scattered, i.e. Not in a comprehensible line format. Its all good...weldone |
Re: Picture Perfect by EyesWideOpen(m): 8:46pm On Dec 07, 2013 |
I gerrit thanx |
Re: Picture Perfect by princesa(f): 8:54pm On Dec 07, 2013 |
You're welcome. monitoring spirit mynd, say something |
Re: Picture Perfect by Mynd44: 9:11pm On Dec 07, 2013 |
princesa: You're welcome.I dont come here remember |
Re: Picture Perfect by princesa(f): 10:02pm On Dec 07, 2013 |
Oh puleaseee spare me, just because you happened to pass tru here this night, you wanna beat ur chest? Not on me honey |
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