Oga Felnino come and update, it's already morning.

Felnino come update!d suspense is killing me....

Oga Felnino, abeg weting nah I dey wait oooooo, even if nah seasonal film I go don finish to watch am finish teytey. Oya ooooooo nah morning b dis though well done for d past work.

Felnino dis suspense no good for my body

Felnino am afraid to tell u this, ur story has gone viral. I read them on several facebook pages and blogs.. Remember i told u about plagiarists. Now someone else is taking the credit for your sweat. Well it's not your fault. Plagiarism is difficult to control these days.

amedino: Felnino am afraid to tell u this, ur story has gone viral. I read them on several facebook pages and blogs.. Remember i told u about plagiarists. Now someone else is taking the credit for your sweat. Well it's not your fault. Plagiarism is difficult to control these days.

which side u c am for fcbk?abeg tell me mek i go thr go complete d reading..fel dey do guy cos say we dey hail am!

why is d update taking too long nah? Felnino why d delay, suspense is killing me...............

Please guys take it easy with felnino, in fact he( felnino ) is having a terrible time with his phone's battery. Pls do persevere the adventure continues

Felnino I'm still waitin. Pls do d needful

Update ds tn quick nah

felnino: Nelson swallowed his spit, he was face to face with death……………

i hope he will survive this...

amedino: Felnino am afraid to tell u this, ur story has gone viral. I read them on several facebook pages and blogs.. Remember i told u about plagiarists. Now someone else is taking the credit for your sweat. Well it's not your fault. Plagiarism is difficult to control these days.

How we take sure say d Tori na felnino own sef. #Juzataught

Suddenly three bullets pierced the kidnapper’s chest before he could pull the trigger, Nelson managed to look back and saw Promise with a gun, Nelson felt relieved, Promise had just saved his life, Promise advanced to where Nelson was and dragged him to safety with one hand like soldiers do while he held the gun in his other hand, when they reached a safe place, Nelson tried to stand up, he looked into Promise’s eyes and said thank you, I hope John didn’t come with you? Nelson asked, the poor boy couldn’t just sit and watch Promise answered him, Promise was right but Nelson didn’t want John getting into trouble……………………………………………………. TJ was not used to handling guns but he knew that once he pulled the trigger bullets would come out of the gun, he remembered how he used to play COD (Call Of Duty), an action video game, he lay on the floor and aimed, he took his first shot at a kidnapper and missed, then he took two more and he got a kidnapper in the arm, suddenly a soldier jumped over him followed by more soldiers, soon up to 20 soldiers arrived at the scene and took control of the situation, Nelson was impressed from where he stood, he had told one of his men to go back and tell the soldiers that they had an emergency before they even started the attack on the kidnappers, and within 30 minutes the soldiers had arrived, the soldiers came with more sophisticated weapons, the enemy were falling like bowling pins, Nelson looked on in amazement, the soldiers had better strategies than the police, within 10 minutes they had already got very close to the building, they rounded up 5 kidnappers and marched them out, the soldiers also came out with the hostages, one of them wore only boxers, they still had chains dangling from their hands and feet, the soldiers had used their guns to break the chains, Nelson counted five people but he could not see Peter among them, he waited in anticipation for Peter to come out from the building, suddenly he saw a man wearing only trousers jumping through the window, the man stood up and ran with his hands up towards where the soldiers were, Nelson did not need to ask Google who it was, still feeling pains in his chest, Nelson ran towards Peter as if Peter was a goal keeper who had saved the last penalty in a penalty shoot-out, Peter was scared at first when he saw a police officer running towards him, he raised up his hands the more and said please o! please! I’m not among them o! He took a closer look at the person running towards him, Nelsonnnnnnnnn! Peter shouted he ran towards Nelson, the two friends hugged themselves as everybody looked on……………………………………………….. John had been running after Bison for 7 minutes, Bison had no idea anyone was after him, John started getting tired, he went down on his knees and aimed, boom! The first shot got Bison in his left buttocks, Bison fell to the ground and tried to stand up again, as he stood up John gave it another shot, this time he got Bison’s right lap, Nelson walked tiredly to where bison was and knocked him out with the end of his gun, John didn’t know where the strength came from, he pulled Bison by the leg back the way they came………………………………………… Nelson and Peter were under a tree, Nelson told Peter that John was alive, but he doesn’t know his whereabout, Nelson feared that John had been shot among the police officers, they started searching among the dead police and kidnappers on the ground, Peter’s heart was heavy, TJ knew John was not among the dead people on the floor because he saw him go after a man dressed in police uniform, as TJ opened his mouth to speak, he sighted John coming out of the woods with a man on his shoulder, there TJ said as Nelson and Peter looked in the direction where TJ pointed, they all ran towards John as he dropped they man he was carrying on the floor, John ran and hugged his father, Nelson inspected the man John dropped, it was Chike Uche also known as Bison, he was wanted for the murder of his wife………………………………………. 15 police officers and 17 kidnappers were killed, 5 police officers were injured and 3 kidnappers were injured, a police officer read out the stats for Nelson as they were going back to where their cars were parked, they walked for 1500 metres before they finally reached where their cars were parked, John could not wait to see Joy, he walked elegantly like a soldier who had come back from war triumphant, Nelson looked forward, he could not believe his eyes, his car windshield was broken and blood had splattered on the front seat, the driver, lifeless, had his head on the horn as the horn sounded continuously, John immediately ran to check on Joy, nooooo! He shouted, Joy had been shot in the chest, he looked at her face and said don't leave me, It's gonna be alright, Nelson looked away, one of the kidnappers who probably escaped had shot Joy and his driver, Joy managed to look at John, I love you, she said slowly and she died, John cried like he had never cried before, TJ came to console him, it was then John remembered, he immediately reached into his empty wallet and brought the Pearl out, it was around the size of his thumb, and transparent, he looked at it desperately, he remembered the instruction the mermaid gave him, it was his only hope …………………………………………

Joy dont leave us o

lol... c story... full of suspence

Angel0: which side u c am for fcbk?abeg tell me mek i go thr go complete d reading..fel dey do guy cos say we dey hail am!

no be so my padi , Na my battery fault, I was very frustrated, and any other site apart from nairaland that you find this story means it was copied

don kross: How we take sure say d Tori na felnino own sef. #Juzataught

I feel a little bit insulted, but It's not your fault, it's the fault of the never do well copy cats.

amedino: Felnino am afraid to tell u this, ur story has gone viral. I read them on several facebook pages and blogs.. Remember i told u about plagiarists. Now someone else is taking the credit for your sweat. Well it's not your fault. Plagiarism is difficult to control these days.

Thank you, people like them don't end up well, I weep for the future of Nigeria

Since father & son have met and Joy is dead, what next?

am waiting till day break here

Felnino, well done and keep it up. That means Joy go wake up be dat? Well it is still better for a seasonal film like these.

Felino careful with the rough play ooo....nor dey change am..joy nor suppose die oo

#cant stop crying....
Joy dnt leave us

felnino: no be so my padi , Na my battery fault, I was very frustrated, and any other site apart from nairaland that you find this story means it was copied

den complete d story..stop dis ur suspense stuff...i dnt rily lyk it!plzzzzz love...

;Ddude u gat my respect. Thumbs up

Let's see what miracle john will perform on joy.....

Joy don't kill my joy abeg!!!!

felnino: I feel a little bit insulted, but It's not your fault, it's the fault of the never do well copy cats.

paddy mii no vex, I juz wan ginger u make you update ni.

felnino, what a shifting cultivation of trouble. Thumbs up Bro!

If Joy die, hw John wan take get joy? Still waiting 4 d final part of d story and wot finally happend 2 dat chief. Two thumbs up bro

Can't update yet guys, Saturday chores are killing me.

I know Joy wɪ̣̝̇ℓℓ be revived with what the mermaid gave †̥φ John