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Think about it !! by hola2ng(m): 6:45pm On Jun 21, 2006
Think about it
the stars as they collide
the moon sleeping on the belly ( of the clouds)
If we love and we are not loved ?
does it mean we are insane ?

I'm here standing in the rain
the water runnning down the drain
what if we have just one day to live?
arms spread to heaven to receive

would you say sorry to those you hurt
would you. would you ?
Re: Think about it !! by hola2ng(m): 11:46am On Jun 23, 2006
-II-

Think about it

Somedays
I tend to feel
the very deep sun rays
it puts a smile on my face
i can't sleep for many days

Your love
your life
It all must continue always.
Re: Think about it !! by hola2ng(m): 9:44am On Jul 03, 2006
Think about it

If the world didnt exist
there would be no you
and there would be no me
no life and no friends to keep
no love and no relationship

If the world didnt exist
I wonder what we would have been
I wonder where we would have gone
and if we would be born
no ocean and no sun to shine
just an endless void in time

I thank God for the world
and all that is in it
Re: Think about it !! by xtougo(m): 10:41am On Jul 04, 2006
em not too bad, but i think somethings are missing,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,but u have it going toooooo.
meanwhile ur emphasis was on love, living and dieing, have u eer loved and yet it wasnt given bak to you in return?, but u have a good one going.keep it up,,meanwhile u be guy or chik,,,em let me know.byeeeeeeee
Re: Think about it !! by hola2ng(m): 12:25pm On Jul 04, 2006
Errr thanx.

xtougo:

em not too bad, but i think somethings are missing,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,but u have it going toooooo.
meanwhile your emphasis was on love, living and dieing, have u eer loved and yet it wasnt given bak to you in return?, but u have a good one going.keep it up,,meanwhile u be guy or chik,,,em let me know.byeeeeeeee

Whatever could be missing ?

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