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Who Am I? by vini(m): 10:35pm On Oct 01, 2008 |
The world is a stage, I am told. You come, play ur part and leave. Sometimes u r applauded sometimes u r booed. I wonder what part I have to play. Will I be booed or applauded? Will I affect lives? Or will I just be an extra? Just passing through, Sometimes I wonder, Who I really am. My emotions run deep like the ocean waves, Exploding against a rock. It threatens to explode inside me. Some day, I hope, I'll find out who I trully am. |
Re: Who Am I? by Sisikill: 11:02pm On Oct 01, 2008 |
Wooo! Nice! Me Likey!!! Reminds me of the song Take a Bow by Madonna, especially this part All the world is a stage [world is a stage] And everyone has their part [has their part] But how was I to know which way the story'd go |
Re: Who Am I? by Nobody: 12:20am On Oct 02, 2008 |
I wish you well in your discovery of self. |
Re: Who Am I? by Cristalz(f): 8:44pm On Oct 02, 2008 |
Nice concept, but the presentation's kinda ordinary |
Re: Who Am I? by Nobody: 10:07pm On Oct 02, 2008 |
nice 1 Like |
Re: Who Am I? by cbase: 8:35pm On Oct 03, 2008 |
I know who I am, I am CBase |
Re: Who Am I? by kay9(m): 3:43pm On Oct 04, 2008 |
cbase:Very funny. @ vini: The poem could use a little "literarizing". On the whole, though, it's a good one. |
Re: Who Am I? by vini(m): 9:43am On Oct 07, 2008 |
[quote author=kay9 link=topic=178021.msg2893841# @ vini: The poem could use a little "literarizing". On the whole, though, it's a good one. [quote][/quote] maybe u can do d literarizing. i won't call it plagiarism |
Re: Who Am I? by kay9(m): 3:22pm On Oct 07, 2008 |
@ vini: Sure about that? Alright, gimme a couple of days. |
Re: Who Am I? by cbase: 8:21pm On Oct 07, 2008 |
alrite couple of days given |
Re: Who Am I? by vini(m): 11:52am On Oct 08, 2008 |
@ kay9 sure. u gat ur couple of days. maybe I can learn from u @ cbase get of my case |
Re: Who Am I? by cbase: 3:01pm On Oct 08, 2008 |
ok, nothing do you, Wey the lid of the case may I comot |
Re: Who Am I? by vini(m): 5:42pm On Oct 08, 2008 |
u r sitting on it not in it. capiche |
Re: Who Am I? by princesa(f): 8:27pm On Oct 08, 2008 |
cbase: cbase: cbase: dude you are meant to be serious and make sense in this forum it is not jokes forum for crying out loud @topic the poem is nice and kinda of reminds me of skakespeare but if there was a little rhyme i think it would have made it better thumbs up |
Re: Who Am I? by firestar(f): 9:19pm On Oct 08, 2008 |
@vini Good speech, A little file, A little polish, And violĂ ! A Masterpiece! |
Re: Who Am I? by cbase: 9:36pm On Oct 08, 2008 |
princesa: and who said I wasn't serious, I just made ma Comment to the Poem, whts wrong with that? @vini alrite am off the case, so I'll standby and just watch, wish you luck as u discover who u really are. |
Re: Who Am I? by vini(m): 12:23am On Oct 09, 2008 |
@ princesa & firestar tks u guys. i think i'll add a little bit of polish and don't worry about cbase he's just clowning |
Re: Who Am I? by spicy007(f): 2:13pm On Oct 09, 2008 |
nice piece, hope u dont mind if i critique it, tho: i must admit it sounds kinda simple, basic, like rhapsody from a naive innocent mind, utterances from someone who is yet to even take the first step towards self-discovery. a liitle polish tho and it becomes a masterpiece ok, lets see wot kay9 will make of it |
Re: Who Am I? by vini(m): 8:12pm On Oct 09, 2008 |
@ spicy007 i think dat's d idea behind d poem. sm1 trying 2 taking dat first step towards discovery. If I change that, then it wouldn't b "who am i?" it will be something like "I am" |
Re: Who Am I? by kay9(m): 9:02am On Oct 10, 2008 |
Hi Vini, sorry it took so long. My desk job had me occupied. Anyway, here it is (the remixed version, that is ): The world is just a stage Enter at your scene - read your lines - And exit at your life's end. Mayhap you'll be applauded; Mayhap, unapplauded. Pray, tell, thou that seeth tomorrow What part I shall have to play. Shall I, at the curtain's fall Get the old gladiator's thumbs-up Or the deadly boo? Will Time's indelible sands Remember my name, or shall I fall An extra in the Iliad: An unknown, un-mourned Trojan soldier? Who am I, I wonder Who am I? My emotions run deep, so deep Like the waves of the Atlantic. . . Exploding against a rock. It threatens to explode inside me. Some day, I hope, I'll find out who I trully am. I left the last three lines untouched - thought you might wanna do those ones yourself. @ spicy007: I hope I didn't botch the assingment. |
Re: Who Am I? by vini(m): 10:00am On Oct 10, 2008 |
thanks kay9. let's c what i can come up with |
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