Whizpeter: This aint a short story na

missyhorlah: really,m sorry tot it would be one short story but inspiration kept coming

Pr0ton: Here I come again.. Op do u skul at u.i?

Pr0ton: Here I come again.. Op do u skul at u.i?

ifex370:




ohhhhhhhhhh here we go again...

missyhorlah:
Eversince the sad love story ended,I've remained single and happy. Regardless of the ending,that first meeting in real life was a special moment.If cyber love is as real as the more traditional kind,then doesn't it follow that there might be an equal measure of pain and insecurity? Early dawn,the mists were swirling,twirling,damp and gray;preventing me from seeing the other side. Like the waves from the shore,rolling away from someone you love is the best. The ones that love us never really leave us-you can always find them deep down in your heart.Our life is like a thorny rose,not perfect but always beautiful provided you're on the right track. Ever since,i ve worn a mask that always smiled to hide my feelings. My goal is golden,for can never be a slave to my emotions;NEVERMORE! Thank you all for reading. Note:- this is just a fiction

Pr0ton: wow that's cool.. An interesting life story


And we will have it at the back of our mind that it's a fiction

Keep it up

missyhorlah: r U̶̲̥̅̊ just quoting me for fun

missyhorlah: thank u

Aipete2: Thats why am scared to fall in love

missyhorlah: you don't have to be just make sure you look verywell before U̶̲̥̅̊ leap

TheCode: @ op, Hmmm.

Well, from on writer to the other, ur plot is intriguing though well beaten by romance fiction writers, but ur diction is mawkish.

Also, your characters should be better developed (I know its a short story). Your objective is to make us feel the pains of Donald, and u really tried at that but there were some leaks in the story that should have been artistically plugged.

It is even not necessary to hide the social site he went to find love since it is a work of fiction. To be honest, the entire writeup sounded (to me, at least) more like a surrealistic reconstruction of what happened to u or a close pal of urs.

You have got talent and creativity though, else I would not have read up to 80% of the story (I am quite a selective reader). You just need more and more practice. Keep writing - thats the only way to become a guru in this art. I am still learning too.

You mentioned being in 200l. Thats great. By the time u graduate, u may be a bestseller or have a great blog, who knows? I am a graduate myself, and due for youth service come this August. Modestly speaking, I am also an Author, a Poet, a Programmer and a Songwriter (seems i write anything writable, lolzzz), but as I said earlier, I am still learning.

Persevere and one day media headlines may scream about the emergence of a cute young writer... [yeah, I checked out your profile pix ]

More kerosine to ur Jet. Cheers!

kingphilip: missyhorlah
come back hia nw or else

missyhorlah: yes sir,m here.Or else what?

kingphilip:
just wanted to c ur face

BTW wen r u writing another gud piece nw

missyhorlah: lol,atleast m here now.Only God knows when

kingphilip:
Hw about this weekend

missyhorlah: ok,probably.

missyhorlah: This will be the first story I will post here!so I want it to be criticized