need your review on both design,  this was done this afternoon.for a client. so decide to upload for critics

@Smartsoft,

Nice CONCEPT for your designs,

Of the two, I prefer the first one, with the white background. The issue with BOTH designs, in my humble opinion, is that the colours you have used, green and black particularly, do not seem
to blend well together - an issue which is more obvious on the second design. And so the phrase 'Josh & Kelly' does not stand out clearly.

I'd choose the first design - but I'd edit it. If you are stuck with those colours (because the client insists, for example), then I'd make the text stand out, especially where the black text overlaps the green circle by giving the 'Josh & Kelly' text a WHITE outline. I don't know what graphic software you have used, but with fireworks, for example you could give that particular phrase a GLOW effect, using the color white, and using a width of 1 and softness of 2. I think that will make your design stand out more clearly and boldly.

Hope that helps - well done.

i used 3 Adobe software but the point is that he insisted on that colours

I am in total support of xanadu's comments

And then wat is that text that comes after d Josh & kelly? I mean to say the font u used there is not visible (wat is the word now?) enough.

wears

Smartsoft,

U have done a realy great job here, but no matter how creative u are, if what you write is not readable, it makes whole beauty to turn ugly.

Great job bro. I'd say, use a rather visible font for the WEARS

@bug24, good talk bro, will do just that

was actually thinking it was weqrs

due 2 the font type

I understand. Once u change d font, dat will b solved

och where u at when u go come my side make i grab all the adobe graphic software , being quite long i did good graphics

o boy, jmx when you join nairaland huh? o boy tell me when make i come now,  maybe i go just spend the weekend abi you know every jare

my complain is with the two head inset, they look too cartoonish, it could be better with a thin outline instead of thick, and it could also be better if the second head is that of a female or a different head shape

hmm, great observation