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Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by tmx21(m): 3:57pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
Am not much of a poet but to me the best gift i could ever give is 'sitting to compose a poem for anyone'. This would be my first poem here on NL and it was instigated by a damsel(bholutife18) that i was oppurtuned to meet out of Nairaland. She is one person I couldn't fathom. Almost attaining perfectness. . A giant soul of grace Gifted to her like a myriad existence No word could express, neither sentence How she sprung past beauty with pace . With a smile that encamps the soul Melodious voice like a mockingbird Beauty that enchants the nights head A complete damsel, she is, in a whole . What further words could jot her cuteness? Which pen dare ink her awesomeness? What price holds her? Cent or pence?. Who dare behold her love amidst the highnesses? . Her competitor only would be nothing For only nothing could be compare to her To her beloved only she answers For only her beloved could dare her calling . Who am I to dwell in thy bosom? To behold thy face and eat at thy table? Who am i to ride alongside thee on thy cattle? To hold thee close and to cure thy lonesome . I still believe having you is a fairy tale A complete dream and a funny factual fiction And if it’s a nightmare like I mentioned I wish never to wake till my last breath, I exhale. . tags: lanicky, charijee, cheriepet, missyhorlah, xtaxhyne, blockus, onstelly, jefferyjamez, snadguy007, davep, frankben1 laurinadavid, rozzay, nedu2000, chukwuma101, amiskurie, 5naira, kaffytopd, teeowl, dygeasy, temigracie, irishkez 5 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by amiskurie(m): 4:01pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
Ogaju tmx21: Am not much of a poet but to me the best gift i could ever give is 'sitting to compose a poem for anyone'. |
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by Nobody: 4:05pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
tmx21: Am not much of a poet but to me the best gift i could ever give is 'sitting to compose a poem for anyone'. Awwwwwww soo sweet, gal u lucky to have a sweet dude, welcome to d club. Reminds me of wen I had a poem dedicated to me on nland by my eva loving oga @ d top sir jonse. I felt on top of d world. Kudos bro |
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by amiskurie(m): 4:06pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
Actually,u are a great writer.the imagery is perfect. Some pple do not knw that poem is arguably the best gift for love ones. |
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by onstelly(f): 4:07pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
tmx21: Am not much of a poet but to me the best gift i could ever give is 'sitting to compose a poem for anyone'.Omg this is simply beautiful, can someone please write me a peom |
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by Blockus: 4:16pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
Nna Men!!! This one is Strong... **Onipke Eleyi Gidi Gan..** |
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by Bholutife18(f): 4:20pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
Wait! Someone should just tell me yes! Was this writeup dedicated to me? |
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by tmx21(m): 4:25pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
onstelly:lol. Thanks. I can write you one. |
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by tmx21(m): 4:26pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
Bholutife18: Wait! Someone should just tell me yes! Was this writeup dedicated to me?sure! Why not? Aint you worth more than this? |
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by Nobody: 4:26pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
hmmmmmmmm |
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by Bholutife18(f): 4:29pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
tmx21: sure! Why not? Aint you worth more than this?wooooow! *hug and kiss him deeply* thanks sweetie. |
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by ERCROSS(m): 4:34pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
onstelly:dont worry.. V bin composing one for u ... I will drop it as soon as i fall asleep.. |
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by Nobody: 4:38pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
bholutife18... r u in abk? |
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by Nobody: 4:38pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
Bholutife18: wooooow! *hug and kiss him deeply* thanks sweetie.clears throat.. |
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by amiskurie(m): 4:38pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
onstelly:Go and ask Houseofglam7 You ladies don't know when true love come knocking.for a man to write a woman a poem is not a joke matter. 1 Like |
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by onstelly(f): 4:38pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
ERCROSS:Go joor you are just mean |
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by onstelly(f): 4:40pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
tmx21: lol. Thanks. I can write you one.You are welcome 1 Like |
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by Bholutife18(f): 4:42pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
Xtarxhyne: bholutife18... r u in abk?no. |
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by onstelly(f): 4:42pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
amiskurie:And who told you I don't know is true love, biko don't spoil my evening for me |
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by onstelly(f): 4:44pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
Bholutife18: wooooow! *hug and kiss him deeply* thanks sweetie.Clears throat, am happy for you sweetie 1 Like |
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by Nobody: 4:59pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
Bholutife18: no.Aiit |
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by Nobody: 5:30pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
tmx21: Am not much of a poet but to me the best gift i could ever give is 'sitting to compose a poem for anyone'.choi!!! This is what I call real LOVE |
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by daveP(m): 5:35pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
tmx21: Am not much of a poet but to me the best gift i could ever give is 'sitting to compose a poem for anyone'.(in arnold schwarzennegger's baritonic accent) Somebady's heavily drunk!! im sorry there isnt an ANTIDOTE! |
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by nedu2000(m): 6:21pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
Bholutife18: no.a poem is from the heart,I think he may actually be into you,that's if he composed it himself |
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by snadguy007(m): 6:46pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
tmx21: Am not much of a poet but to me the best gift i could ever give is 'sitting to compose a poem for anyone'.Mehn, this is so cute, wish i were a lady ryt now. Congrats man. Wish you a lasting love life @Bholutife18....two love birds are easy to discern |
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by tmx21(m): 6:47pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
snadguy007: [color=#000099]Mehn, this is so cute, wish i were a lady ryt now. Congrats man. Wish you a lasting love lifethanks man. 1 Like |
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by LaurinaDavid(f): 8:19pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
[quote author=tmx21]Am not much of a poet but to me the best gift i could ever give is 'sitting to compose a poem for anyone'. This would be my first poem here on NL and it was instigated by a damsel(bholutife18) that i was oppurtuned to meet out of Nairaland. She is one person I couldn't fathom. Almost attaining perfectness. . A giant soul of grace Gifted to her like a myriad existence No word could express, neither sentence How she sprung past beauty with pace . With a smile that encamps the soul Melodious voice like a mockingbird Beauty that enchants the nights head A complete damsel, she is, in a whole . What further words could jot her cuteness? Which pen dare ink her awesomeness? What price holds her? Cent or pence?. Who dare behold her love amidst the highnesses? . Her competitor only would be nothing For only nothing could be compare to her To her beloved only she answers For only her beloved could dare her calling . Who am I to dwell in thy bosom? To behold thy face and eat at thy table? Who am i to ride alongside thee on thy cattle? To hold thee close and to cure thy lonesome . I still believe having you is a fairy tale A complete dream and a funny factual fiction And if it’s a nightmare like I mentioned I wish never to wake till my last breath, I exhale. . tags: lanicky, charijee, cheriepet, missyhorlah, xtaxhyne, blockus, onstelly, jefferyjamez, snadguy007, davep, frankben1 laurinadavid, rozzay, nedu2000, chukwuma101, amiskurie, 5naira, kaffytopd, teeowl, dygeasy, temigracie, irishkez[/quote] Oga see fine girl, e run come nairaland con set boundaries, abeg make una nor thief i'm babe ooooooo 1 Like |
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by Nobody: 8:40pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
All this for bolutife.nawa oo Who I go come write my own for nowthinks deeply |
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by Vikky014(f): 8:51pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
*clears throat*Love in d air!seriously following dis movie till it ends on d day of their wedding,#spreads mat# |
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by Nobody: 9:03pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
Oh tmx21 you're good! Pls be faithful to your words and I wish both of you a lasting and healthy relationship |
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by Nobody: 9:04pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
frankben1: choi!!! When are you going to write for Seunfavor? |
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by Bholutife18(f): 9:04pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
Vikky014: *clears throat*Love in d air!seriously following dis movie till it ends on d day of their wedding,#spreads mat#take popcorn *hands her a boquet of popcorn* |
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