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Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by tmx21(m): 3:57pm On Aug 28, 2014
Am not much of a poet but to me the best gift i could ever give is 'sitting to compose a poem for anyone'.
This would be my first poem here on NL and it was instigated by a damsel(bholutife18) that i was oppurtuned to meet out of Nairaland.
She is one person I couldn't fathom. Almost attaining perfectness.


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A giant soul of grace
Gifted to her like a myriad existence
No word could express, neither sentence
How she sprung past beauty with pace
.
With a smile that encamps the soul
Melodious voice like a mockingbird
Beauty that enchants the nights head
A complete damsel, she is, in a whole
.
What further words could jot her cuteness?
Which pen dare ink her awesomeness?
What price holds her? Cent or pence?.
Who dare behold her love amidst the highnesses?
.
Her competitor only would be nothing
For only nothing could be compare to her
To her beloved only she answers
For only her beloved could dare her calling
.
Who am I to dwell in thy bosom?
To behold thy face and eat at thy table?
Who am i to ride alongside thee on thy cattle?
To hold thee close and to cure thy lonesome
.

I still believe having you is a fairy tale
A complete dream and a funny factual fiction
And if it’s a nightmare like I mentioned
I wish never to wake till my last breath, I exhale.


.


tags: lanicky, charijee, cheriepet, missyhorlah, xtaxhyne, blockus, onstelly, jefferyjamez, snadguy007, davep, frankben1 laurinadavid, rozzay, nedu2000, chukwuma101, amiskurie, 5naira, kaffytopd, teeowl, dygeasy, temigracie, irishkez

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Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by amiskurie(m): 4:01pm On Aug 28, 2014
Ogaju
tmx21: Am not much of a poet but to me the best gift i could ever give is 'sitting to compose a poem for anyone'.
This would be my first poem here on NL and it was instigated by a damsel(bholutife18) that i was oppurtuned to meet out of Nairaland.
She is one person I couldn't fathom. Almost attaining perfectness.


.


A giant soul of grace
Gifted to her like a myriad existence
No word could express, neither sentence
How she sprung past beauty with pace
.
With a smile that encamps the soul
Melodious voice like a mockingbird
Beauty that enchants the nights head
A complete damsel, she is, in a whole
.
What further words could jot her cuteness?
Which pen dare ink her awesomeness?
What price holds her? Cent or pence?.
Who dare behold her love amidst the highnesses?

.Her competitor only would be nothing
For only nothing could be compare to her
To her beloved only she answers
For only her beloved could dare her calling
.
Who am I to dwell in thy bosom?
To behold thy face and eat at thy table?
Who am i to ride alongside thee on thy cattle?
To hold thee close and to cure thy lonesome
.

I still believe having you is a fairy tale
A complete dream and a funny factual fiction
And if it’s a nightmare like I mentioned
I wish never to wake till my last breath, I exhale.


tags: lanicky, charijee, cheriepet, missyhorlah, xtaxhyne, blockus, onstelly, jefferyjamez, snadguy007, davep, frankben1 laurinadavid, rozzay, nedu2000, chukwuma101, amiskurie, 5naira, kaffytopd, teeowl, dygeasy, temigracie, irishkez
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by Nobody: 4:05pm On Aug 28, 2014
tmx21: Am not much of a poet but to me the best gift i could ever give is 'sitting to compose a poem for anyone'.
This would be my first poem here on NL and it was instigated by a damsel(bholutife18) that i was oppurtuned to meet out of Nairaland.
She is one person I couldn't fathom. Almost attaining perfectness.


.


A giant soul of grace
Gifted to her like a myriad existence
No word could express, neither sentence
How she sprung past beauty with pace
.
With a smile that encamps the soul
Melodious voice like a mockingbird
Beauty that enchants the nights head
A complete damsel, she is, in a whole
.
What further words could jot her cuteness?
Which pen dare ink her awesomeness?
What price holds her? Cent or pence?.
Who dare behold her love amidst the highnesses?
.
Her competitor only would be nothing
For only nothing could be compare to her
To her beloved only she answers
For only her beloved could dare her calling
.
Who am I to dwell in thy bosom?
To behold thy face and eat at thy table?
Who am i to ride alongside thee on thy cattle?
To hold thee close and to cure thy lonesome
.

I still believe having you is a fairy tale
A complete dream and a funny factual fiction
And if it’s a nightmare like I mentioned
I wish never to wake till my last breath, I exhale.


.


tags: lanicky, charijee, cheriepet, missyhorlah, xtaxhyne, blockus, onstelly, jefferyjamez, snadguy007, davep, frankben1 laurinadavid, rozzay, nedu2000, chukwuma101, amiskurie, 5naira, kaffytopd, teeowl, dygeasy, temigracie, irishkez

Awwwwwww soo sweet, gal u lucky to have a sweet dude, welcome to d club. Reminds me of wen I had a poem dedicated to me on nland by my eva loving oga @ d top sir jonse. I felt on top of d world. Kudos bro
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by amiskurie(m): 4:06pm On Aug 28, 2014
Actually,u are a great writer.the imagery is perfect.





Some pple do not knw that poem is arguably the best gift for love ones.
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by onstelly(f): 4:07pm On Aug 28, 2014
tmx21: Am not much of a poet but to me the best gift i could ever give is 'sitting to compose a poem for anyone'.
This would be my first poem here on NL and it was instigated by a damsel(bholutife18) that i was oppurtuned to meet out of Nairaland.
She is one person I couldn't fathom. Almost attaining perfectness.


.


A giant soul of grace
Gifted to her like a myriad existence
No word could express, neither sentence
How she sprung past beauty with pace
.
With a smile that encamps the soul
Melodious voice like a mockingbird
Beauty that enchants the nights head
A complete damsel, she is, in a whole
.
What further words could jot her cuteness?
Which pen dare ink her awesomeness?
What price holds her? Cent or pence?.
Who dare behold her love amidst the highnesses?
.
Her competitor only would be nothing
For only nothing could be compare to her
To her beloved only she answers
For only her beloved could dare her calling
.
Who am I to dwell in thy bosom?
To behold thy face and eat at thy table?
Who am i to ride alongside thee on thy cattle?
To hold thee close and to cure thy lonesome
.

I still believe having you is a fairy tale
A complete dream and a funny factual fiction
And if it’s a nightmare like I mentioned
I wish never to wake till my last breath, I exhale.


.


tags: lanicky, charijee, cheriepet, missyhorlah, xtaxhyne, blockus, onstelly, jefferyjamez, snadguy007, davep, frankben1 laurinadavid, rozzay, nedu2000, chukwuma101, amiskurie, 5naira, kaffytopd, teeowl, dygeasy, temigracie, irishkez
Omg this is simply beautiful, can someone please write me a peom
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by Blockus: 4:16pm On Aug 28, 2014
Nna Men!!! This one is Strong...



**Onipke Eleyi Gidi Gan..**
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by Bholutife18(f): 4:20pm On Aug 28, 2014
Wait! Someone should just tell me yes! Was this writeup dedicated to me?
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by tmx21(m): 4:25pm On Aug 28, 2014
onstelly:
Omg this is simply beautiful, can someone please write me a peom
lol. Thanks. I can write you one.
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by tmx21(m): 4:26pm On Aug 28, 2014
Bholutife18: Wait! Someone should just tell me yes! Was this writeup dedicated to me?
sure! Why not? Aint you worth more than this?
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by Nobody: 4:26pm On Aug 28, 2014
hmmmmmmmm
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by Bholutife18(f): 4:29pm On Aug 28, 2014
tmx21: sure! Why not? Aint you worth more than this?
wooooow! *hug and kiss him deeply* thanks sweetie.
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by ERCROSS(m): 4:34pm On Aug 28, 2014
onstelly:
Omg this is simply beautiful, can someone please write me a peom
dont worry..
V bin composing one for u ...
I will drop it as soon as i fall asleep..
wink
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by Nobody: 4:38pm On Aug 28, 2014
bholutife18... r u in abk?
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by Nobody: 4:38pm On Aug 28, 2014
Bholutife18: wooooow! *hug and kiss him deeply* thanks sweetie.
clears throat..grin
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by amiskurie(m): 4:38pm On Aug 28, 2014
onstelly:
Omg this is simply beautiful, can someone please write me a peom
Go and ask Houseofglam7

You ladies don't know when true love come knocking.for a man to write a woman a poem is not a joke matter.

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Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by onstelly(f): 4:38pm On Aug 28, 2014
ERCROSS:
dont worry..
V bin composing one for u ...
I will drop it as soon as i fall asleep..
wink
Go joor you are just mean cry
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by onstelly(f): 4:40pm On Aug 28, 2014
tmx21: lol. Thanks. I can write you one.
You are welcome

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Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by Bholutife18(f): 4:42pm On Aug 28, 2014
Xtarxhyne: bholutife18... r u in abk?
no.
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by onstelly(f): 4:42pm On Aug 28, 2014
amiskurie:
Go and ask Houseofglam7

You ladies don't know when true love come knocking.for a man to write a woman a poem is not a joke matter.
And who told you I don't know is true love, biko don't spoil my evening for me
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by onstelly(f): 4:44pm On Aug 28, 2014
Bholutife18: wooooow! *hug and kiss him deeply* thanks sweetie.
Clears throat, am happy for you sweetie

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Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by Nobody: 4:59pm On Aug 28, 2014
Bholutife18: no.
Aiit
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by Nobody: 5:30pm On Aug 28, 2014
tmx21: Am not much of a poet but to me the best gift i could ever give is 'sitting to compose a poem for anyone'.
This would be my first poem here on NL and it was instigated by a damsel(bholutife18) that i was oppurtuned to meet out of Nairaland.
She is one person I couldn't fathom. Almost attaining perfectness.


.


A giant soul of grace
Gifted to her like a myriad existence
No word could express, neither sentence
How she sprung past beauty with pace
.
With a smile that encamps the soul
Melodious voice like a mockingbird
Beauty that enchants the nights head
A complete damsel, she is, in a whole
.
What further words could jot her cuteness?
Which pen dare ink her awesomeness?
What price holds her? Cent or pence?.
Who dare behold her love amidst the highnesses?
.
Her competitor only would be nothing
For only nothing could be compare to her
To her beloved only she answers
For only her beloved could dare her calling
.
Who am I to dwell in thy bosom?
To behold thy face and eat at thy table?
Who am i to ride alongside thee on thy cattle?
To hold thee close and to cure thy lonesome
.

I still believe having you is a fairy tale
A complete dream and a funny factual fiction
And if it’s a nightmare like I mentioned
I wish never to wake till my last breath, I exhale.


.

choi!!! shocked shocked shocked shocked shocked

This is what I call real LOVE cheesy
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by daveP(m): 5:35pm On Aug 28, 2014
tmx21: Am not much of a poet but to me the best gift i could ever give is 'sitting to compose a poem for anyone'.
This would be my first poem here on NL and it was instigated by a damsel(bholutife18) that i was oppurtuned to meet out of Nairaland.
She is one person I couldn't fathom. Almost attaining perfectness.


.


A giant soul of grace
Gifted to her like a myriad existence
No word could express, neither sentence
How she sprung past beauty with pace
.
With a smile that encamps the soul
Melodious voice like a mockingbird
Beauty that enchants the nights head
A complete damsel, she is, in a whole
.
What further words could jot her cuteness?
Which pen dare ink her awesomeness?
What price holds her? Cent or pence?.
Who dare behold her love amidst the highnesses?
.
Her competitor only would be nothing
For only nothing could be compare to her
To her beloved only she answers
For only her beloved could dare her calling
.
Who am I to dwell in thy bosom?
To behold thy face and eat at thy table?
Who am i to ride alongside thee on thy cattle?
To hold thee close and to cure thy lonesome
.

I still believe having you is a fairy tale
A complete dream and a funny factual fiction
And if it’s a nightmare like I mentioned
I wish never to wake till my last breath, I exhale.


.


tags: lanicky, charijee, cheriepet, missyhorlah, xtaxhyne, blockus, onstelly, jefferyjamez, snadguy007, davep, frankben1 laurinadavid, rozzay, nedu2000, chukwuma101, amiskurie, 5naira, kaffytopd, teeowl, dygeasy, temigracie, irishkez
(in arnold schwarzennegger's baritonic accent) Somebady's heavily drunk!! im sorry there isnt an ANTIDOTE!
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by nedu2000(m): 6:21pm On Aug 28, 2014
Bholutife18: no.
a poem is from the heart,I think he may actually be into you,that's if he composed it himself
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by snadguy007(m): 6:46pm On Aug 28, 2014
tmx21: Am not much of a poet but to me the best gift i could ever give is 'sitting to compose a poem for anyone'.
This would be my first poem here on NL and it was instigated by a damsel(bholutife18) that i was oppurtuned to meet out of Nairaland.
She is one person I couldn't fathom. Almost attaining perfectness.


.


A giant soul of grace
Gifted to her like a myriad existence
No word could express, neither sentence
How she sprung past beauty with pace
.
With a smile that encamps the soul
Melodious voice like a mockingbird
Beauty that enchants the nights head
A complete damsel, she is, in a whole
.
What further words could jot her cuteness?
Which pen dare ink her awesomeness?
What price holds her? Cent or pence?.
Who dare behold her love amidst the highnesses?
.
Her competitor only would be nothing
For only nothing could be compare to her
To her beloved only she answers
For only her beloved could dare her calling
.
Who am I to dwell in thy bosom?
To behold thy face and eat at thy table?
Who am i to ride alongside thee on thy cattle?
To hold thee close and to cure thy lonesome
.

I still believe having you is a fairy tale
A complete dream and a funny factual fiction
And if it’s a nightmare like I mentioned
I wish never to wake till my last breath, I exhale.


Mehn, this is so cute, wish i were a lady ryt now. Congrats man. Wish you a lasting love life cool

@Bholutife18....two love birds are easy to discern wink
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by tmx21(m): 6:47pm On Aug 28, 2014
snadguy007: [color=#000099]Mehn, this is so cute, wish i were a lady ryt now. Congrats man. Wish you a lasting love life cool

@Bholutife18....two love birds are easy to discern wink
thanks man.

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Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by LaurinaDavid(f): 8:19pm On Aug 28, 2014
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author=tmx21]Am not much of a poet but to me the best gift i could ever
give is 'sitting to compose a poem for anyone'.
This would be my first poem here on NL and it was instigated by a
damsel(bholutife18) that i was oppurtuned to meet out of Nairaland.
She is one person I couldn't fathom. Almost attaining perfectness.


.


A giant soul of grace
Gifted to her like a myriad existence
No word could express, neither sentence
How she sprung past beauty with pace
.
With a smile that encamps the soul
Melodious voice like a mockingbird
Beauty that enchants the nights head
A complete damsel, she is, in a whole
.
What further words could jot her cuteness?
Which pen dare ink her awesomeness?
What price holds her? Cent or pence?.
Who dare behold her love amidst the highnesses?
.
Her competitor only would be nothing
For only nothing could be compare to her
To her beloved only she answers
For only her beloved could dare her calling
.
Who am I to dwell in thy bosom?
To behold thy face and eat at thy table?
Who am i to ride alongside thee on thy cattle?
To hold thee close and to cure thy lonesome
.

I still believe having you is a fairy tale
A complete dream and a funny factual fiction
And if it’s a nightmare like I mentioned
I wish never to wake till my last breath, I exhale.


.


tags: lanicky, charijee, cheriepet, missyhorlah, xtaxhyne, blockus,
onstelly, jefferyjamez, snadguy007, davep, frankben1 laurinadavid,
rozzay, nedu2000, chukwuma101, amiskurie, 5naira, kaffytopd, teeowl,
dygeasy, temigracie, irishkez[/quote]



Oga see fine girl, e run come nairaland con set boundaries, abeg make una nor thief i'm babe ooooooo

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Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by Nobody: 8:40pm On Aug 28, 2014
All this for bolutife.nawa oo

Who I go come write my own for nowthinks deeply
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by Vikky014(f): 8:51pm On Aug 28, 2014
*clears throat*Love in d air!seriously following dis movie till it ends on d day of their wedding,#spreads mat#
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by Nobody: 9:03pm On Aug 28, 2014
Oh tmx21 you're good!

Pls be faithful to your words and I wish both of you a lasting and healthy relationship cool
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by Nobody: 9:04pm On Aug 28, 2014
frankben1: choi!!! shocked shocked shocked shocked shocked

This is what I call real LOVE cheesy


When are you going to write for Seunfavor? cool
Re: Unexpressable Beauty - bholutife18 by Bholutife18(f): 9:04pm On Aug 28, 2014
Vikky014: *clears throat*Love in d air!seriously following dis movie till it ends on d day of their wedding,#spreads mat#
take popcorn *hands her a boquet of popcorn*

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